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Section Ⅳ Writing——描述体育场景
Step Ⅰ 文本研读
Ⅰ.框架建构：整体理解
1．This passage is about an exciting ______________．
2．When the writer describes the exciting moment, he describes it from different aspects, such as what he ________， what he ________ and how he ________. At the same time, we should pay attention to rhetorical device (修辞手法)．
sporting moment
sees
hears
feels
Ⅱ.文本剖析：特色表达
General introduction Time: Last 1.________ (周六)
Place: school playground
Event: the final of 4×100-meter relay
What you saw and heard Before the event: 2.___________ (安静，寂静); intense
During the event: went wild; stood up and started 3.________________ (欢呼和呐喊). It was like being hit by a huge wave of excitement.
After the event: everyone was on their feet, cheering...I thought my lungs would 4._______ (爆炸)．
How you felt It was so wonderful to be part of this sporting moment and enjoy its 5.______________ (速度和激情)．
Saturday
quiet and still
cheering and shouting
burst
speed and passion
Step Ⅱ 知识点
熟记下列重要知识点
①atmosphere 氛围
②set off 出发
③go wild 变得疯狂
④a huge wave of excitement 一股巨大的兴奋潮
⑤strain to do sth. 尽力去做某事
⑥on one's feet 站起来
⑦be caught up in the excitement 卷入兴奋之中
⑧intense adj. 紧张的，激烈的
⑨intense competition 激烈的竞争
⑩intense pain 剧痛
intense emotion 激情
Step Ⅲ Writing about a sporting moment
[文体介绍]
描述体育活动通常采用记叙文文体，应描述清楚事情的经过，还原所描述的情景，文中注意交代记叙文的六要素(时间，地点，人物，事件的起因、经过、结果)。描述体育活动通常以第一、三人称叙述，时态优选一般过去时，适当运用进行时态以突出生动性。
[篇章结构]
(1)对体育活动进行总体介绍，内容可包括时间、地点、人物等基本要素；
(2)详细描写自己的所见所闻，包括体育活动进行前、进行中以及进行后的场景，描写应生动、细致，突出重点；
(3)从情感角度升华，描写自己的感受并展现所表达的中心思想。
[常用表达]
(1)有关体育活动的词汇
applaud (鼓掌), audience (观众), reputation (名誉；名声), tournament (锦标赛), professional (职业的), championship (冠军地位), glory (荣耀), teamwork (团队合作), slam dunk (扣篮), fighting spirit (斗志), forward (前锋), guard (后卫), centre (中锋), referee (裁判), scorer (得分运动员), commentator (实况解说员), quarter (一节), half (半场), overtime (加时赛), interval (中场休息), commit a foul (犯规), suspension (暂停，中止), pass (传球), shoot (投球), goal (进球)
(2)常用表达
To provide an opportunity for us to get close to..., our school organised...
为了给我们提供接近……的机会，我们学校组织了……
A wonderful...will be held in...
一场精彩的……将在……举行。
I was attracted by their amazing skills of...
我被他们精湛的……技术所吸引。
It was the most exciting moment that I have ever seen.这是我见过的最激动人心的时刻。
By taking part in/watching this..., I developed a deep interest in...
通过参加/观看这个……，我对……产生了浓厚的兴趣。
I'm looking forward to watching more wonderful games like this.
我期待着能观看更多像这样精彩的比赛。
[实践应用]
假如你是《中国日报》的兼职小记者，2022奥运会组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的路线，请根据以下内容，为这一事件写一篇报道。
1．基本情况：10月1日，组委会公布了奥运火炬传递路线。
2．火炬传递者：大多数是普通群众，但也有可能有公众人物，如：运动员代表、感动中国十大人物、各界精英等。
3．详情：途经多个著名景点，覆盖十多个大城市；全国人民都能在电视上观看现场直播；届时将召集有能力的热心志愿者开展系列服务工作。
参考词汇：奥运组委会：Organizing Committee of the Olympics; 火炬传递： Torch Relay；感动中国十大人物： the Top Ten People Moving China
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
?完成句子
1．火炬传递将要途经中国的一些著名景点。
The Olympic Torch Relay will visit ______________________________.
2．它将覆盖十多个大城市。
It will ______________________.
3．国内外观众都能观看现场直播。
Audiences at home and abroad can ________________．
some of the well-known tourist spots in China
cover more than 10 big cities
watch the event live
4．激动人心的火炬传递由来自各行各业的人士进行。
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by
__________________________．
5．其中有优秀的教练和运动员等。
Among them are ____________________________.
6．除此之外，我们还需要许多热心和有能力的志愿者。
Furthermore, we will need __________________________________.
different people from various fields
excellent coaches, athletes, and so on
lots of enthusiastic and capable volunteers then
?句式升级
7．将1、2、3句改为复合句。
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
8．用including合并4、5句。
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
9．使用被动语态改写句6，使之更加简洁。
___________________________________________________________
The Olympic Torch Relay will visit some of the well-known tourist spots in China，covering more than 10 big cities，which audiences at home and abroad can watch live.
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by different people from various fields, including excellent coaches, athletes, and so on.
Furthermore, lots of enthusiastic and capable volunteers will be needed then.
第三步 完美成篇
Good morning dear viewers!
As is reported, the Organizing Committee of the 2022 Olympics released the route of the Torch Relay on October lst. The Olympic Torch Relay will visit some of the well-known tourist spots in China, covering more than 10 big cities, which audiences at home and abroad can watch live.
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by different people from various fields, including excellent coaches, athletes, and so on. It's amazing that some of the Top Ten People Moving China will be possibly seen then.
Furthermore, lots of enthusiastic and capable volunteers will be needed then. Would you like to have a try
China DailySection Ⅳ Writing——描述体育场景
Step Ⅰ 文本研读
Ⅰ.框架建构：整体理解
1．This passage is about an exciting ______________．
2．When the writer describes the exciting moment, he describes it from different aspects, such as what he ________， what he ________ and how he ________. At the same time, we should pay attention to rhetorical device (修辞手法)．
Ⅱ.文本剖析：特色表达
General introduction Time: Last 1.________ (周六) Place: school playground Event: the final of 4×100-meter relay
What you saw and heard Before the event: 2.________________ (安静，寂静); intense
During the event: went wild; stood up and started 3.________________ (欢呼和呐喊). It was like being hit by a huge wave of excitement.
After the event: everyone was on their feet, cheering...I thought my lungs would 4.________ (爆炸)．
How you felt It was so wonderful to be part of this sporting moment and enjoy its 5.________________ (速度和激情)．
Step Ⅱ 知识点
熟记下列重要知识点
①atmosphere 氛围
②set off 出发
③go wild 变得疯狂
④a huge wave of excitement 一股巨大的兴奋潮
⑤strain to do sth. 尽力去做某事
⑥on one's feet 站起来
⑦be caught up in the excitement 卷入兴奋之中
⑧intense adj. 紧张的，激烈的
⑨intense competition 激烈的竞争
⑩intense pain 剧痛
intense emotion 激情
Step Ⅲ Writing about a sporting moment
[文体介绍]
描述体育活动通常采用记叙文文体，应描述清楚事情的经过，还原所描述的情景，文中注意交代记叙文的六要素(时间，地点，人物，事件的起因、经过、结果)。描述体育活动通常以第一、三人称叙述，时态优选一般过去时，适当运用进行时态以突出生动性。
[篇章结构]
(1)对体育活动进行总体介绍，内容可包括时间、地点、人物等基本要素；
(2)详细描写自己的所见所闻，包括体育活动进行前、进行中以及进行后的场景，描写应生动、细致，突出重点；
(3)从情感角度升华，描写自己的感受并展现所表达的中心思想。
[常用表达]
(1)有关体育活动的词汇
applaud (鼓掌), audience (观众), reputation (名誉；名声), tournament (锦标赛), professional (职业的), championship (冠军地位), glory (荣耀), teamwork (团队合作), slam dunk (扣篮), fighting spirit (斗志), forward (前锋), guard (后卫), centre (中锋), referee (裁判), scorer (得分运动员), commentator (实况解说员), quarter (一节), half (半场), overtime (加时赛), interval (中场休息), commit a foul (犯规), suspension (暂停，中止), pass (传球), shoot (投球), goal (进球)
(2)常用表达
To provide an opportunity for us to get close to..., our school organised...
为了给我们提供接近……的机会，我们学校组织了……
A wonderful...will be held in...
一场精彩的……将在……举行。
I was attracted by their amazing skills of...
我被他们精湛的……技术所吸引。
It was the most exciting moment that I have ever seen.这是我见过的最激动人心的时刻。
By taking part in/watching this..., I developed a deep interest in...
通过参加/观看这个……，我对……产生了浓厚的兴趣。
I'm looking forward to watching more wonderful games like this.
我期待着能观看更多像这样精彩的比赛。
[实践应用]
假如你是《中国日报》的兼职小记者，2022奥运会组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的路线，请根据以下内容，为这一事件写一篇报道。
1．基本情况：10月1日，组委会公布了奥运火炬传递路线。
2．火炬传递者：大多数是普通群众，但也有可能有公众人物，如：运动员代表、感动中国十大人物、各界精英等。
3．详情：途经多个著名景点，覆盖十多个大城市；全国人民都能在电视上观看现场直播；届时将召集有能力的热心志愿者开展系列服务工作。
参考词汇：奥运组委会：Organizing Committee of the Olympics; 火炬传递： Torch Relay；感动中国十大人物： the Top Ten People Moving China
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
?完成句子
1．火炬传递将要途经中国的一些著名景点。
The Olympic Torch Relay will visit ________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
2．它将覆盖十多个大城市。
It will ________________________________________________________________________.
3．国内外观众都能观看现场直播。
Audiences at home and abroad can ________________________．
4．激动人心的火炬传递由来自各行各业的人士进行。
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by ________________________________．
5．其中有优秀的教练和运动员等。
Among them are ________________________________________________________________________.
6．除此之外，我们还需要许多热心和有能力的志愿者。
Furthermore, we will need ________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
?句式升级
7．将1、2、3句改为复合句。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
8．用including合并4、5句。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
9．使用被动语态改写句6，使之更加简洁。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第三步 完美成篇
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Section Ⅳ Writing——描述体育场景
写作精析·技能提升
Step Ⅰ 文本研读
Ⅰ.框架建构：整体理解
1．sporting moment 2.sees; hears; feels
Ⅱ.文本剖析：特色表达
1．Saturday 2.quiet and still 3.cheering and shouting
4．burst 5.speed and passion
Step Ⅲ Writing about a sporting moment
第二步
1．some of the well-known tourist spots in China
2．cover more than 10 big cities
3．watch the event live
4．different people from various fields
5．excellent coaches, athletes, and so on
6．lots of enthusiastic and capable volunteers then
7．The Olympic Torch Relay will visit some of the well-known tourist spots in China，covering more than 10 big cities，which audiences at home and abroad can watch live.
8．The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by different people from various fields, including excellent coaches, athletes, and so on.
9．Furthermore, lots of enthusiastic and capable volunteers will be needed then.
第三步
Good morning dear viewers!
As is reported, the Organizing Committee of the 2022 Olympics released the route of the Torch Relay on October lst. The Olympic Torch Relay will visit some of the well-known tourist spots in China, covering more than 10 big cities, which audiences at home and abroad can watch live.
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by different people from various fields, including excellent coaches, athletes, and so on. It's amazing that some of the Top Ten People Moving China will be possibly seen then.
Furthermore, lots of enthusiastic and capable volunteers will be needed then. Would you like to have a try
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