(共12张PPT)
Section Ⅳ Writing
——写一封关于健康生活方式的信
文体感知
本单元的写作任务是写一封关于健康生活方式的信,内容包括健康生活方式的介绍及其意义等。其基本架构:
增分佳句
首段:点明写信的目的
1.Learning that you are worried about your health, I'd like to write to tell you something about how to keep healthy.
得知你担心自己的健康,我想写信告诉你关于如何保持健康的事情。
2.I'm writing to tell you how to live a healthy life.
我写信想告诉你如何过健康的生活。
中段:具体介绍如何过健康的生活
1.It would be a good idea if we could take meals regularly and slowly.
如果我们可以有规律地、慢慢地吃饭,这会是个好主意。
2.Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body.
多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果对我们的身体很有好处。
3.You can do some morning exercises or only take a short walk in the morning.
你可以进行晨练,或者只是在早晨散散步。
4.To keep healthy, we should try to be in good mood each day.
为了保持健康,我们应该尽量每天保持好心情。
5.Having a balanced diet is of great benefit to us.
均衡饮食对我们有很大益处。
6.Only by living a healthy lifestyle can you stay away from illnesses.
只有健康生活你才能远离疾病。
尾段:表达期望和祝愿
1.I hope that you can have a healthy body.
希望你拥有健康的身体。
2.I hope that my advice will be of help to you.
希望我的建议对你能有帮助。
典题演练
现在,全民倡导健康生活,请你以“Healthy Lifestyle”为题,用英文写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.你认为健康的生活方式;
2.你认为该生活方式健康的两点理由(如远离疾病等)。
注意:词数80左右。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.保持健康是一个热门话题,拥有健康的生活方式对我们非常重要。
____________________________________________ is very important for us.
2.旅行可以帮助我们强身健体并保持精力充沛,因此能帮助我们远离疾病。
Traveling around ___________________________________, and thus can help us keep away from diseases.
3.我们在现实世界里旅行的时候一定能从生动鲜活的大自然和社会中收获很多知识。
Certainly ___________________________________________ while we are traveling in a real world.
Keeping healthy is a hot topic and having a healthy lifestyle
can help us build up our body and keep energetic
we can gain much knowledge from vivid nature and society
第三步 句式升级
1.用非限制性定语从句升级第二步中的句2
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
2.用时间状语从句的省略升级第二步中的句3
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Traveling around can help us build up our body and keep energetic, which can help us keep away from diseases.
Certainly we can gain much knowledge from vivid nature and society while traveling in a real world.
第四步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇英语短文。
Healthy Lifestyle
Keeping healthy is a hot topic and having a healthy lifestyle is very important for us. So what is your healthy lifestyle
Generally speaking, keeping a balanced diet and taking exercise regularly are recognized as a healthy lifestyle. In my opinion, traveling around instead of staying at home and chatting with others online for a long time is a healthy lifestyle. Traveling around can help us build up our body and keep energetic, which can help us keep away from diseases. Certainly we can gain much knowledge from vivid nature and society while traveling in a real world.Section Ⅳ Writing——写一封关于健康生活方式的信
文体感知
本单元的写作任务是写一封关于健康生活方式的信,内容包括健康生活方式的介绍及其意义等。其基本架构:
增分佳句
首段:点明写信的目的
1.Learning that you are worried about your health, I'd like to write to tell you something about how to keep healthy.
得知你担心自己的健康,我想写信告诉你关于如何保持健康的事情。
2.I'm writing to tell you how to live a healthy life.
我写信想告诉你如何过健康的生活。
中段:具体介绍如何过健康的生活
1.It would be a good idea if we could take meals regularly and slowly.
如果我们可以有规律地、慢慢地吃饭,这会是个好主意。
2.Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body.
多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果对我们的身体很有好处。
3.You can do some morning exercises or only take a short walk in the morning.
你可以进行晨练,或者只是在早晨散散步。
4.To keep healthy, we should try to be in good mood each day.
为了保持健康,我们应该尽量每天保持好心情。
5.Having a balanced diet is of great benefit to us.
均衡饮食对我们有很大益处。
6.Only by living a healthy lifestyle can you stay away from illnesses.
只有健康生活你才能远离疾病。
尾段:表达期望和祝愿
1.I hope that you can have a healthy body.
希望你拥有健康的身体。
2.I hope that my advice will be of help to you.
希望我的建议对你能有帮助。
典题演练
现在,全民倡导健康生活,请你以“Healthy Lifestyle”为题,用英文写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.你认为健康的生活方式;
2.你认为该生活方式健康的两点理由(如远离疾病等)。
注意:词数80左右。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.保持健康是一个热门话题,拥有健康的生活方式对我们非常重要。
________________________________________________________________________
is very important for us.
2.旅行可以帮助我们强身健体并保持精力充沛,因此能帮助我们远离疾病。
Traveling around ________________________________________, and thus can help us keep away from diseases.
3.我们在现实世界里旅行的时候一定能从生动鲜活的大自然和社会中收获很多知识。
Certainly ________________________________________________ while we are traveling in a real world.
第三步 句式升级
1.用非限制性定语从句升级第二步中的句2
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
2.用时间状语从句的省略升级第二步中的句3
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第四步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇英语短文。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Section Ⅳ Writing——写一封关于健康生活方式的信
典题演练
第二步
1.Keeping healthy is a hot topic and having a healthy lifestyle
2.can help us build up our body and keep energetic
3.we can gain much knowledge from vivid nature and society
第三步
1.Traveling around can help us build up our body and keep energetic, which can help us keep away from diseases.
2.Certainly we can gain much knowledge from vivid nature and society while traveling in a real world.
第四步
Healthy Lifestyle
Keeping healthy is a hot topic and having a healthy lifestyle is very important for us. So what is your healthy lifestyle
Generally speaking, keeping a balanced diet and taking exercise regularly are recognized as a healthy lifestyle. In my opinion, traveling around instead of staying at home and chatting with others online for a long time is a healthy lifestyle. Traveling around can help us build up our body and keep energetic, which can help us keep away from diseases. Certainly we can gain much knowledge from vivid nature and society while traveling in a real world.