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Section Ⅳ
Writing——介绍你最喜欢的美食
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom上次来中国后，喜欢上了中国的美食，他写邮件询问你最喜欢的食物，请你给Tom回复一封邮件，要点如下：
(1)说明你最喜欢的食物是什么；
(2)提到食物的制作步骤；
(3)描述食物的特点，例如它的外观。
(2)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I'm honored that you like Chinese food. My favourite food is dumplings, whose pronunciation is jiao zi in Chinese.__________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Can you tell me what's your favourite food How do you cook it
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——一封电子邮件
主题：介绍你最喜欢的食物
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态为主
人称：以第三人称为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
①说明你最喜欢的食物是什么；
②提到食物的制作步骤；
③描述食物的特点，例如它的外观。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①发音__________________
②传统的__________________
③至关重要的__________________
④混合……与……__________________
⑤例如__________________
⑥(糕点等的)馅__________________
⑦搅拌__________________
⑧煮__________________
pronunciation
traditional
essential
mix...with...
such as
filling
stir
boil
(2)完成句子
①我最喜欢的食物是饺子，在汉语中它的发音是jiao zi。
a．My favourite food is dumplings，____________________ is jiao zi in Chinese.(whose引导非限制性定语从句)
b．My favourite food is dumplings __________ pronunciation is jiao zi in Chinese.(and)
③包饺子的第一步是用水和面做饺子皮。(mix...with...)
a．The first step to make dumplings is _______ the flour ______ water and make dumpling wrappers.(不定式作表语)
b.___________________，the first step is to mix the flour with water and make dumpling wrappers.(不定式作目的状语)
whose pronunciation
and their
to mix
with
To make the dumplings
③通常，我们用肉(如牛肉或羊肉)和一些蔬菜(如大白菜或胡萝卜)做馅。(such as)
Usually, we use meat ________ beef or mutton, and some vegetables such as Chinese cabbage or carrots for fillings.
④当在锅里煮的时候，饺子看起来就像海上航行的船只。(状语从句的省略)
___________ in the pan，the dumplings look like ships sailing in the sea.
⑤你觉得饺子怎么样？(插入语)
How ____________the dumplings are
such as
When boiled
do you think
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Tom，
I'm honored that you like Chinese food.My favourite food is dumplings，whose pronunciation is jiao zi in Chinese.It is a traditional Chinese food and essential during holidays in Northern China.The first step to make dumplings is to mix the flour with water and make dumpling wrappers.
Usually，we use meat such as beef or mutton, and some vegetables such as Chinese cabbage or carrots for fillings.Then put some salt，oil and other condiments into it，stirring it evenly.Fill the dumpling wrappers with the fillings and stick the edges.When boiled in the pan，the dumplings look like ships sailing in the sea.How do you think the dumplings are Can you tell me what's your favourite food How do you cook it
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris询问你和你的家人喜欢的食物，请你给他写一封邮件详细说明。内容包括：
①你家人喜欢吃的食物；
②你喜欢吃的食物以及喜欢的原因。
注意：①词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
Glad to receive your letter.I will tell you about my family's favourite food.________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I want to know more about your favourite food. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Chris，
Glad to receive your letter.I will tell you about my family's favourite food.My father likes to eat everything except it is not able to eat.My mother likes to eat vegetables and fruit，but she seldom eats meat.I like to eat meat and fruit，but I do not like to eat vegetables and the apple is my favourite fruit.
I like to eat the red ones because they look nicer than the green ones.Apples are very useful.Someone says apples can make people beautiful and strong.I don't think so.But I believe someone who always eats apples will be healthier than someone who does not like to eat them.
I want to know more about your favourite food.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的笔友Tony因为不健康的饮食习惯导致生病，请你给他写一封邮件说明如何做才能保持健康。内容包括：
①好的食物是什么；
②怎样的饮食习惯才是健康的。
注意：①词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony，
I'm sorry to hear that you're ill because of the bad diet habit.________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Tony，
I'm sorry to hear that you're ill because of the bad diet habit.Food offers us energy and we can't live without food. But not all food is good.We can eat some meat，bread，fruit and vegetables every day.If we eat meat too much，we will get fat and ill.We must eat all kinds of food.Don't eat one simple food.That is bad for our health.As a student，we must eat fruit，vegetables，meat and other food to keep us healthy.
I send my best wishes for your recovery.I hope you can have a healthy diet and a strong body.
Yours，
Li HuaSection Ⅳ Writing——介绍你最喜欢的美食
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom上次来中国后，喜欢上了中国的美食，他写邮件询问你最喜欢的食物，请你给Tom回复一封邮件，要点如下：
(1)说明你最喜欢的食物是什么；
(2)提到食物的制作步骤；
(3)描述食物的特点，例如它的外观。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I'm honored that you like Chinese food. My favourite food is dumplings, whose pronunciation is jiaozi in Chinese.____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Can you tell me what's your favourite food How do you cook it
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——一封电子邮件
主题：介绍你最喜欢的食物
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态为主
人称：以第三人称为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
①说明你最喜欢的食物是什么；
②提到食物的制作步骤；
③描述食物的特点，例如它的外观。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①发音__________________
②传统的__________________
③至关重要的__________________
④混合……与……__________________
⑤例如__________________
⑥(糕点等的)馅__________________
⑦搅拌__________________
⑧煮__________________
(2)完成句子
①我最喜欢的食物是饺子，在汉语中它的发音是jiaozi。
a．My favourite food is dumplings，____________________ is jiaozi in Chinese.(whose引导非限制性定语从句)
b．My favourite food is dumplings ____________________ pronunciation is jiaozi in Chinese.(and)
③包饺子的第一步是用水和面做饺子皮。(mix...with...)
a．The first step to make dumplings is ____________________ the flour ____________ water and make dumpling wrappers.(不定式作表语)
b.____________________________________，the first step is to mix the flour with water and make dumpling wrappers.(不定式作目的状语)
③通常，我们用肉(如牛肉或羊肉)和一些蔬菜(如大白菜或胡萝卜)做馅。(such as)
Usually, we use meat ________________________ beef or mutton, and some vegetables such as Chinese cabbage or carrots for fillings.
④当在锅里煮的时候，饺子看起来就像海上航行的船只。(状语从句的省略)
________________________ in the pan，the dumplings look like ships sailing in the sea.
⑤你觉得饺子怎么样？(插入语)
How ____________________________________ the dumplings are
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Tom，
I'm honored that you like Chinese food.My favourite food is dumplings，whose pronunciation is jiaozi in Chinese.It is a traditional Chinese food and essential during holidays in Northern China.The first step to make dumplings is to mix the flour with water and make dumpling wrappers.
Usually，we use meat such as beef or mutton, and some vegetables such as Chinese cabbage or carrots for fillings.Then put some salt，oil and other condiments into it，stirring it evenly.Fill the dumpling wrappers with the fillings and stick the edges.When boiled in the pan，the dumplings look like ships sailing in the sea.How do you think the dumplings are Can you tell me what's your favourite food How do you cook it
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris询问你和你的家人喜欢的食物，请你给他写一封邮件详细说明。内容包括：
①你家人喜欢吃的食物；
②你喜欢吃的食物以及喜欢的原因。
注意：①词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
Glad to receive your letter.I will tell you about my family's favourite food.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
I want to know more about your favourite food. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的笔友Tony因为不健康的饮食习惯导致生病，请你给他写一封邮件说明如何做才能保持健康。内容包括：
①好的食物是什么；
②怎样的饮食习惯才是健康的。
注意：①词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony，
I'm sorry to hear that you're ill because of the bad diet habit.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
Section Ⅳ Writing——介绍你最喜欢的美食
3．(1)①pronunciation ②traditional ③essential ④mix...with...
⑤such as ⑥filling ⑦stir ⑧boil
(2)①a.whose pronunciation b．and their ②a.to mix with b．To make the dumplings ③such as ④When boiled ⑤do you think
5．(1)参考范文：
DearChris，
Gladtoreceiveyourletter.Iwilltellyouaboutmyfamily'sfavouritefood.My father likes to eat everything except it is not able to eat.My mother likes to eat vegetables and fruit，but she seldom eats meat.I like to eat meat and fruit，but I do not like to eat vegetables and the apple is my favourite fruit.
I like to eat the red ones because they look nicer than the green ones.Apples are very useful.Someone says apples can make people beautiful and strong.I don't think so.But I believe someone who always eats apples will be healthier than someone who does not like to eat them.
Iwanttoknowmoreaboutyourfavouritefood.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours，
LiHua
(2)参考范文：
DearTony，
I'msorrytohearthatyou'reillbecauseofthebaddiethabit.Food offers us energy and we can't live without food. But not all food is good.We can eat some meat，bread，fruit and vegetables every day.If we eat meat too much，we will get fat and ill.We must eat all kinds of food.Don't eat one simple food.That is bad for our health.As a student，we must eat fruit，vegetables，meat and other food to keep us healthy.
I send my best wishes for your recovery.I hope you can have a healthy diet and a strong body.
Yours，
LiHua
