仁爱版九年级英语全一册Unit 1 Topic 1 Our country has developed rapidly. 作文指导课件(共12张PPT)

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模块一　第一章　作文指导　
请根据图示，用英语写一篇题为Changes in People's Life的短文，对比介绍过去的20年和现在人们生活的变化。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1．把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯，书写规范；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
第一步：审题谋篇
(一)审题
1．确定体裁：本文属于图片材料作文，是一篇对比过去和现在的生活变化的__________(体裁)。
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为_________人称。
3．确定时态：以_____________和_____________为主。
说明文
第三
一般过去时
一般现在时
(二)谋篇布局
Beginning：引出话题——人们在过去的20年里生活发生的巨大变化，运用__________(时态)；
Body：根据图示材料从_________、_____________、___________、__________四个方面来对比过去和现在的生活；
Ending：表达对未来生活的信心。
现在完成时
通信方式
获取信息方式
上学方式
居住条件
第二步：推敲词汇
1．巨大的变化_____________
2．发生_____________
3．在过去_____________
4．与某人保持联系______________________
5．过去常常做某事_________________
great changes
take place
in the past
keep in touch with sb.
used to do sth.
6．通过寄信_________________
7．足够富有_________________
8．听收音机_________________
9．在电视上看新闻_______________________
10．骑自行车去上学_______________________
11．乘公共汽车去上学_______________________
12．共享小房间_______________________
by sending letters
rich enough
listen to the radio
watch the news on TV
go to school by bike
go to school by bus
share small rooms
第三步：由词扩句
1．人们常与朋友们保持联系。
People often ______ ______ ______ ______ friends．
2．他们是听收音机来获取新闻的。
They ______ ______ ______ ______ for news．
3．孩子们过去常常骑自行车去上学。
Children ______ ______ go to school ______ ______．
keep in touch with
listen to the radio
used to
by bike
4．一大家人不得不共住小房间。
A big family ______ ______ ______ small rooms．
5．人们在家里就可以通过电话或互联网与别人交谈。
People can _____ ____ others _____ _________ or on the Internet at home．
6．孩子们现在通常乘公共汽车去上学。
Children usually go to school _____ ______ now．
had to share
talk to
by telephone
by bus
第四步：句式升级
1．在过去的20年里，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化。
______ _______ _____ ______ ______ in people's life in the past 20 years．
2．过去人们主要通过寄信与朋友们保持联系。
In the past, ________ ________ ______ ________ _______ friends mainly by ________ ________．
Great changes have taken place
people kept in touch with
sending letters
3．当他们有空时，他们将看电视上的新闻和其他节目。
When ______ ______ ______，they will ______ ______ ______ and other programs on TV．
4．一些家庭足够富有，可以住大公寓。
Some families _____ _____ _______ to live in big apartments．
5．我相信我们的生活将变得越来越好。
I'm sure our life ______ ________ ______ ______ ______．
they are free
watch the news
are rich enough
will become better and better
第五步：连句成篇
Changes in People's Life
Great changes have taken place in people's life in the past 20 years．
In the past, people kept in touch with friends mainly by sending letters．They listened to the radio for news and other information．Children used to go to school by bike．A big family had to share small rooms．
Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the Internet at home．When they are free, they will watch the news and other programs on TV．And children usually go to school by bus．Some families are rich enough to live in big apartments．
I'm sure our life will become better and better．