2023年高考全国卷英语甲卷讲评课件（98张ppt）
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2023全国甲卷讲评课件
Passage A
语篇类型：应用文
主题语境：人与社会
介绍了一些关于从哪里开始你的曼谷美食之旅的建议。
Where to Eat in Bangkok
Bangkok is a highly desirable destination for food lovers. It has a seemingly bottomless well of dining options. Here are some suggestions on where to start your Bangkok eating adventure.
Nahm
Offering Thai fine dining. Nahm provides the best of Bangkok culinary (烹饪的) experiences. It’s the only Thair restaurant that ranks among the top 10 of the word’s 50 best restaurants list. Head Chef David Thompson, who received a Michelin star for his London-based Thai restaurant of the same name, opened this branch in the Metropolitan Hotel in 2010.
Issays Stamese Club
Issaya Siamese Club is internationally known Thai chef lan Kittichai’s first flagship Bangkok restaurant. The menu in this beautiful colonial house includes traditional Thai cuisine combined with modern cooking methods.
Bo. tan
Bo. tan has been making waves in Bangkok’s culinary scene since it opened in 2009. Serving hard-to-find Thai dishes in an elegant atmosphere, the restaurant is true to Thai cuisine’s roots, yet still manages to add a special twist. This place is good for a candlelit dinner or a work meeting with colleagues who appreciate fine food. For those extremely hungry there’s a large set menu.
Gaggan
Earning first place on the latest “Asia’s 50 best restaurants” list, progressive Indian restaurant Gaggan is one of the most exciting venues(场所) to arrive in Bangkok in recent years. The best table in this two-story colonial Thai home offers a window right into the kitchen, where you can see chef Gaggan and his staff in action. Culinary theater at its best.
Para-1: 引出主题, 介绍曼谷是美食爱好者的天堂。
Para-2-5: 详细介绍, 详细介绍曼谷各大特色餐馆的特点。
1. What do Nahm and Issaya Siamese Club have in common
A. They adopt modern cooking methods. B. They have branches in London.
C. They have top-class chefs. D. They are based in hotels.
Nahm
...Head Chef David Thompson, who received a Michelin star for his London-based Thai restaurant of the same name, opened this branch in the Metropolitan Hotel in 2010.
Issays Stamese Club
Issaya Siamese Club is internationally known Thai chef lan Kittichai’s first flagship Bangkok restaurant.
a Michelin star & internationally known ≈ top-class
2. Which restaurant offers a large set menu
A. Gaggan. B. Bo. tan. C. Issaya Siamese Club. D. Nahm.
Bo.lan
Bo.lan has been making waves in Bangkok’s culinary scene since it opened in 2009. Serving hard-to-find Thai dishes in an elegant atmosphere, the restaurant is true to Thai cuisine's roots, yet still manages to add a special twist. This place is good for a candle-lit dinner or a work meeting with colleagues who appreciate fine food. For those extremely hungry, there's a large set menu.
同词复现
3. What is special about Gaggan
It hires staff from India.
It puts on a play every day.
C. It serves hard-to-find local dishes.
D. It shows the cooking process to guests.
where you can see chef Gaggan and his staff in action ≈ shows the cooking process
The best table in this two-story colonial Thai home offers a window right into the kitchen, where you can see chef Gaggan and his staff in action.
在工作，在运转
重要词汇
a highly desirable destination
A seemingly bottomless well of …
dining options
rank among
head chef
of the same name
Open this branch
Make waves
in an elegant atmosphere
True to Thai cuisine’s roots
add a special twist
progressive Indian restaurant
two-story Colonial house
in action
offers a window right into
一个令人向往的目的地
…深不见底
用餐选择
属于…之列
主厨
同名的
开分店/分支机构
把现状打乱/掀起风
在一种优雅的氛围中
忠于泰国菜的根源
增加一个特别的转变
进步的印度餐厅
两层殖民地住宅
在运转,在行动
提供了解…的窗口
语法填空
1 . It’s the only Thair restaurant that ranks _________the top 10 of the word’s 50 best restaurants list.
2 . Issaya Siamese Club is ______________(international) known Thai chef lan Kittichai’s first flagship Bangkok restaurant.
3 . Bo. tan _______________ (make) waves in Bangkok’s culinary scene since it opened in 2009 to this special place.
among
internationally
has been making/has made
Passage B
语篇类型：记叙文
主题语境：人与社会
文章主要讲述了一位 DIY高手Terri Boltonis的技能以及DIY项目可能会在女性群体中变成一种潮流趋势
Terri Boltonis a dab hand when it comes to DIY (do-it-yourself). Skilled at putting up shelves and piecing together furniture, she never pays someone else to do a job she can do herself.
She credits these skills to her late grandfather and builder Derek Lloyd. From the age of six, Terri, now 26, accompanied Derek to work during her school holidays. A day’s work was rewarded with 5 in pocket money. She says: “I’m sure I wasn’t much of a help to start with painting the rooms and putting down the flooring throughout the house. It took weeks and is was backbreaking work, but I know he was proud of my skills.”
Terri, who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth, South West London, says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy (租期) comes to an end. She adds: “I’ve moved house many times and I always like to personalise my room and put up pictures. So, it’s been useful to know how to cover up holes and repaint a room to avoid any charges when I’ve moved out.”
With millions of people likely to take on DIY projects over that coming weeks, new research shows that more than half of people are planning to make the most of the long, warm summer days to get jobs done. The average spend per project will be around 823. Two thirds of people aim to improve their comfort while at home. Two fifth wish to increase the value of their house. Though DIY has traditionally been seen as male hobby, the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
Para-4: 对于DIY的最新研究。
Para-1: 引出主题, 介绍Terri Boltonis擅长DIY。
Para-2: 介绍从小Terri Boltonis的爷爷教导她技能。
Para-3: Terri 喜欢DIY和DIY带给她的益处。
4 Which is closest in meaning to “a dab hand” in paragraph 1
A. An artist. B. A winner. C. A specialist. D. A pioneer.
Terri Boltonis a dab hand when it comes to DIY (do-it-yourself). Skilled at putting up shelves and piecing together furniture, she never pays someone else to do a job she can do herself.
同义替换：skilled at ≈ a dab hand
5. Why did Terri’s grandfather give her 5 a day
A. For a birthday gift. B. As a treat for her work.款待
C. To support her DIY projects. D. To encourage her to take up a hobby.
She credits these skills to her late grandfather and builder Derek Lloyd. From the age of six, Terri, now 26, accompanied Derek to work during her school holidays. A day’s work was rewarded with 5 in pocket money. She says:“ I'm sure I wasn't much of a help to start with, painting the rooms and putting down the flooring throughout the house. It took weeks and it was backbreaking work , but I know he was proud of my skills. ”
reward ≈ treat
6. How did Terri avoid losing the deposit on the house she rented
By making it look like before.
By furnishing it herself.
C. By splitting the rent with a roommate.分开，分摊
D. By cancelling the rental agreement.
Terri, who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth , South West London, says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy(租期) comes to an end. she adds:" I've moved house many times and I always like to personalize my room and put up pictures , so , it's been useful to know how to cover up holes and repaint a room to avoid any charges when I've moved out "
同义替换 avoid any charges ≈ saves her from losing any deposit ≈ avoid losing the deposit
7. What trend in DIY does the research show
It is becoming more costly.
It is getting more time-consuming.费时的
C. It is turning into a seasonal industry.
D. It is gaining popularity among females.
With millions of people likely to take on DIY projects over that coming weeks, new research shows that more than half of people are planning to make the most of the long, warm summer days to get jobs done. The average spend per project will be around 823. Two thirds of people aim to improve their comfort while at home. Two fifth wish to increase the value of their house. Though DIY has traditionally been seen as male hobby, the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
同义替换 women now leading the charge ≈ gaining popularity among females
打头阵;带头
重要词汇
1. put up shelves
2. piece together furniture
3. credits skills to sb.
4. Late grandfather
5. backbreaking work
6. Lose deposit
7. personalize my room
8. put up pictures
9. cover up holes
10.avoid charges
搭建架子
拼装家具
认为技巧是…的功劳
去世的爷爷
非常辛苦的工作
损失存款
让我的房间个性化
张贴照片
遮盖洞
避免收费
重要词汇
11.take on DIY projects
12. make the most of
13. lead the charge
14.Specialist
15. A treat
16. take up a hobby
17. split…with…
18. Get time-consuming
承担DIY项目
充分利用
打头阵
专家
款待
开始一种爱好
与平摊
耗时的
长难句分析
1. Skilled at putting up shelves and piecing together furniture, she never pays someone else to do a job she can do herself.
-ed分词做状语
定语从句，省略引导词that/which,修饰先行词job
句子主干： she never pays someone else
句子翻译：她擅长搭架子和拼装家具，她自己能做的工作从不付钱给别人做。
长难句分析
2. Terri, who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth, South West London, says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy (租期) comes to an end.
Who引导的定语从句,修饰先行词Terri
When引导的时间状语从句
句子主干： Terri says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit
句子主干： Terri says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit
翻译：特里现在和朋友在伦敦西南部的旺兹沃斯租了一套房子，她说DIY还能让她在租约到期时避免损失任何押金。
宾语从句
长难句分析
3. Though DIY has traditionally been seen as male hobby, the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
让步状语从句
句子主干: the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
翻译：尽管DIY传统上被认为是男性的爱好，但研究表明，现在是女性主导了这一潮流。
宾语从句
语法填空
1 . I’m sure I wasn’t much ____ a help to start with painting the rooms and putting down the flooring throughout the house. It took weeks and is was backbreaking work, but I know he was proud of my skills.
2 . So, it’s been useful to know ______ to cover up holes and repaint a room to avoid any charges when I’ve moved out.”
of
how
Passage C
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与社会
作者在13岁时开始喜欢哲学，随后Weiner的书The Socrates Express唤起了作者对哲学的热爱。文章通过介绍The Socrates Express这本书，倡导读者花时间去读这本书。
文章来源：https://www.npr.org/2020/08/27/906607702/the-socrates-express-takes-readers-on-a-ride-through-applied-philosophy#
1 I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder’s Sophie’s World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book. It spoke to me and brought me into a world of philosophy (哲学).
2That love for philosophy lasted until I got to college. Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Baudrillard, or Confucius better than you — and then try to explain them.
3Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express: In Search of Life Lessons from Dead Philosophers reawakened my love for philosophy. It is not an explanation, but an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
5He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experiences, and he does so with plenty of humor. Weiner enters into conversation with some of the most important philosophers in history, and he becomes part of that crowd in the process by decoding (解读) their messages and adding his own interpretation.
6The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging. The invitation is clear: Weiner wants you to pick up a coffee or tea and sit down with this book. I encourage you to take his offer. It’s worth your time, even if time is something we don’t have a lot of.
Para.1-2: 导入话题：13岁时，Sophie’s World带我进入哲学的世界，我对哲学的爱持续到上大学。
Para.3: 引入新事物：Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express重新唤醒我对哲学的爱。
Para.4:介绍：列举了几位哲学家来帮助读者理解Weiner的书。
Para.6: 评价：对The Socrates Express进行评价，呼吁读者阅读。
Para.5:介绍新事物：进一步介绍Weiner的书。
28. Who opened the door to philosophy for the author
A. Foucault. B. Eric Weiner.
C. Jostein Gaarder. D. A college teacher.
1I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder’s Sophie’s World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book. It spoke to me and brought me into a world of philosophy (哲学).
同义替换：
opened the door to philosophy ≈ brought me into a world of philosophy
细节理解题
29. Why does the author list great philosophers in paragraph 4
A. To compare Weiner with them.
B. To give examples of great works.
C. To praise their writing skills.
D. To help readers understand Weiners book.
3Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express: In Search of Life Lessons from Dead Philosophers reawakened my love for philosophy. It is not an explanation, but an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
推理判断题
作者在第四段开头描写了Weiner书的内容，接着作者通过列举了几位伟大的哲学家来描写读完这本书后我们能从中学到的东西，由此可推知，作者列举了几位伟大的哲学家是为了帮助读者理解Weiner的书。
30. What does the author like about The Socrates Express
A. Its views on history are well-presented.
B. Its ideas can be applied to daily life. 应用到
C. It includes comments from readers.
D. It leaves an open ending.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
细节理解题
同义替换
be applied to daily life ≈use philosophy to improve a life
31. What does the author think of Weiners book
A. Objective and plain.
B. Daring and ambitious.
C. Serious and hard to follow.
D. Humorous and straightforward.
6The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging. The invitation is clear: Weiner wants you to pick up a coffee or tea and sit down with this book. I encourage you to take his offer. It’s worth your time, even if time is something we don’t have a lot of.
5He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experiences, and he does so with plenty of humor.
推理判断题
幽默的
简单易懂的
勇敢的
有雄心壮志的
清楚的，简单的
1 I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder’s Sophie’s World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book. It spoke to me and brought me into a world of philosophy (哲学).
2That love for philosophy lasted until I got to college. Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Baudrillard, or Confucius better than you — and then try to explain them.
3Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express: In Search of Life Lessons from Dead Philosophers reawakened my love for philosophy. It is not an explanation, but an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
5He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experiences, and he does so with plenty of humor. Weiner enters into conversation with some of the most important philosophers in history, and he becomes part of that crowd in the process by decoding (解读) their messages and adding his own interpretation.
6The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging. The invitation is clear: Weiner wants you to pick up a coffee or tea and sit down with this book. I encourage you to take his offer. It’s worth your time, even if time is something we don’t have a lot of.
重要词汇
1.a copy of
2.with my head in and out of that book
3.frames each philosopher’s work
4.makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise
5.enter into conversation
6.add his own interpretation.
7.a sharp book
8.draw readers in
9.apparent simplicity
10. pull sb. in
一本
脑子里都在琢磨这本书
表达每个哲学家的作品
使哲学思想成为一个吸引人的练习
进入对话
加上他自己的解释
一本尖锐的书
吸引读者
明显的简单
吸引某人
重要词汇
11.pick up
12.be applied to
13.Objective and plain
14.Daring and ambitious
15.Humorous and straightforward
拿起；举起；提起
被应用于
客观的和清楚的/简单的
勇敢的和有雄心壮志的
幽默的和简单易懂的
长难句分析
1. Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Baudrillard, or Confucius better than you — and then try to explain them.
who引导的定语从句
句子主干： Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than
翻译：没有什么比那些自认为比你更了解福柯、鲍德里亚或孔子的人更能扼杀人们对哲学的热爱了，他们还试图解释这些哲学。
省略that的宾语从句
语法填空
1. It is not an explanation, an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
2. Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then
(frame) each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better.
3. The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging.
but
frames
that/which
Passage D
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与自然——
介绍灰熊在美国的现状及其问题
Grizzly bears, which may grow to about 2. 5m long and weigh over 400kg, occupy a conflicted corner of the American psyche-we revere(敬畏) them even as they give us frightening dreams. Ask the tourists from around the world that flood into Yellowstone National Park what they most hope to see, and their answer is often the same: a grizzly bear.
" Grizzly bears are re-occupying large areas of their former range," says bear biologist Chris Servheen. As grizzly bears expand their range into places where they haven't been seen in a century or more, they're interestingly being sighted by humans.
The western half of the U.S. was full of grizzlies when Europeans came, with a rough number of 50,000 or more living alongside Native Americans. By the early 1970s, after centuries of cruel and continuous hunting by settlers, 600 to 800 grizzlies remained on a mere 2 percent of their former range in the Northern Rockies. In 1975, grizzlies were listed under the Endangered Species Act.
Today, there are about 2 ,000 or more grizzly bears in the U. S. Their recovery has been so successful that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to de-list grizzlies，which would loosen legal protections and allow them to be hunted. Both efforts were overturned due to lawsuits from conservation groups. For now, grizzlies remain listed.
Obviously, if precautions( 预防) aren't taken, grizzlies can become troublesome , sometimes killing farm animals or walking through yards in search of food. If people remove food and attractants from their yards and campsites, grizzlies will typically pass by without trouble. Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters is also highly effective at getting grizzlies away. “Our hope is to have a clean，attractant-free place where bears can pass through without learning bad habits," says James Jonkel, longtime biologist who manages bears in and around Missoula.
P1:灰熊对美国人的意义
P2:灰熊重新占据人们视线
P3:灰熊先前的数量情况
P4：灰熊现今的数量情况
P5：对灰熊采取保护措施的影响及意义
32. How do Americans look at grizzlies
They cause mixed feelings in people.
They should be kept in national parks.
They are of high scientific value.
They are a symbol of American culture.
Grizzly bears, which may grow to about 2. 5m long and weigh over 400kg, occupy a conflicted corner of the American psyche-we revere(敬畏) them even as they give us frightening dreams. Ask the tourists from around the world that flood into Yellowstone National Park what they most hope to see, and their answer is often the same: a grizzly bear.
33. What has helped the increase of the grizzly population
The European settlers' behavior.
The expansion of bears' range.
The protection by law since 1975.
The support of Native Americans.
The western half of the U.S. was full of grizzlies when Europeans came, with a rough number of 50,000 or more living alongside Native Americans. By the early 1970s, after centuries of cruel and continuous hunting by settlers, 600 to 800 grizzlies remained on a mere 2 percent of their former range in the Northern Rockies. In 1975, grizzlies were listed under the Endangered Species Act.
Today, there are about 2 ,000 or more grizzly bears in the U. S. Their recovery has been so successful that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to de-list grizzlies,which would loosen legal protections and allow them to be hunted…….
同义替换 act法案≈law
34. What has stopped the U. S. Fish and Wildlife Service from DE-listing grizzlies
A. The opposition of conservation groups.反对 保护
B. The successful comeback of grizzlies.
C. The voice of the biologists.
D. The local farmers' advocates.
Today, there are about 2 ,000 or more grizzly bears in the U. S. Their recovery has been so successful that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to de-list grizzlies，which would loosen legal protections and allow them to be hunted. Both efforts were overturned due to lawsuits from conservation groups. For now, grizzlies remain listed.
de-除掉；去掉；取消
推翻，撤销
同义替换 delist ≈ stop listing opposition ≈ overturn
35. What can be inferred from the last paragraph
A. Food should be provided for grizzlies.
B. People can live in harmony with grizzlies.
C. A special path should be built for grizzlies.
D. Technology can be introduced to protect grizzles.
…If people remove food and attractants from their yards and campsites, grizzlies will typically pass by without trouble. Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters is also highly effective at getting grizzlies away. “Our hope is to have a clean，attractant-free place where bears can pass through without learning bad habits," says James Jonkel, longtime biologist who manages bears in and around Missoula
与…和谐相处
重要词汇
1.Occupy a conflicted corner
2.American psyche
3.expand range
4.increasingly be sighted by
5.a rough number
6.de-list
7.loosen legal protections
8.efforts were overturned
9.lawsuits from conservation groups
10.become troublesome
11.in search of
12.attractant-free
占据冲突的角落
美国人的灵魂/心灵/内心
扩大范围
越来越多被看到
粗略的数字
脱离名单
放宽法律保护
努力被推翻
来自自然保护组织的诉讼
变得麻烦
寻找
无引诱物的
1. Grizzly bears, which may grow to about 2. 5m long and weigh over 400kg, occupy a conflicted corner of the American psyche-we revere(敬畏) them even as they give us frightening dreams.
长难句分析
翻译：灰熊，可能长到2.5米左右长，重达400公斤，占据了美国人内心的一个矛盾的角落---尽管它们给我们带来了可怕的梦，我们敬畏它们。
插入语中，由even as引导让步状语从句
which引导定语从句
主干: Grizzly bears occupy a conflicted corner
插入语中的主句
2. The western half of the U.S., was full of grizzlies when Europeans came, with a rough number of 50,000 or more living alongside Native Americans.
长难句分析
翻译：欧洲人来的时候，美国西半部到处都是灰熊，大约有5万只或更多的灰熊与美洲原住民生活在一起。
When引导时间状语从句
主干: The western half was full of grizzlies.
With+n+doing复合结构作状语，表伴随
1. Our hope is to have a clean，attractant-free place ______bears can pass through without learning bad habits
2. Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters _____ (be) also highly effective at getting grizzlies away.
3. By the early 1970s, after centuries of cruel and continuous hunting by settlers, 600 to 800 grizzlies_________ ( remain) on a mere 2 percent of their former range in the Northern Rockies
is
where
语法填空
(had)remained
七选五
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与自我——
文章介绍了成为一个有耐心的人的诀窍。
Tricks To Becoming A Patient Person
Here's a riddle: What do traffic jams, long lines and waiting for a vacation to start all have in common There's one answer. 36 .
In the Digital Age, we're used to having what we need immediately and right at our fingertips.
However, research suggests that if we practiced patience, we'd be a whole lot better off. Here are several tricks.
● Practice gratitude(感激）
Thankfulness has a lot of benefits: Research shows it makes us happier, less steressed and even more optimistic. 37 ." Showing thankfulness can foster self-control," said Ye Li, researcher at the University of California.
● Make yourself wait
Instant gratification(满足)may seem like the most "feel good" option at the time, but psychology research suggests waiting for things actually makes us happier in the long run. And the only way for us to get into the habit of waiting is to practice. 38 . Put off watching your favorite show until the weekend or wait 10 extra minutes before going for that cake. You'll soon find that the more patience you practice,the more you start to apply it to other, more annoying situations.
● 39
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone, we get impatient about the circumstances. You should learn to say to yourself," 40 ."You'll then gradually become more patient.
总分结构
P1: 引出主题，耐心的通性
P2: 在数字时代,耐心的重要性
P3：感恩的好处
P4：等待的好处。
P5:走出舒适区。
3个变耐心的技巧
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable, not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
观察选项特点，圈画逻辑词定逻辑，圈画核心词定主题
.
Here's a riddle: What do traffic jams, long lines and waiting for a vacation to start all have in common There's one answer. ___36___
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
G选项all是原词复现，they指代上文中的“traffic jams, long lines and waiting for a vacation to start”三件事。
段尾句，考查句间顺承关系。
.
●Practice gratitude(感激)
Thankfulness has a lot of benefits:Research shows it makes us happier,less stressed and even more optimistic. ___37___ "Showing thankfulness can foster self-control," said Ye Li,researcher at the University of California.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
本段为总分结构，主旨句为Thankfulness has a lot of benefits, 后面详细说明感恩的好处。E选项中also表示并列关系，help us practice more patience是好处的表现，故E项从逻辑及内容上都符合要求。
段中句，考查句间并列关系。
总分结构
● Make yourself wait
Instant gratification(满足)may seem like the most "feel good" option at the time, but psychology research suggests waiting for things actually makes us happier in the long run. And the only way for us to get into the habit of waiting is to practice. ___38___ Put off watching your favorite show until the weekend or wait 10 extra minutes before going for that cake.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
根据前文“the only way for us to get into the habit of waiting is to practice”及后文“Put off ... going for that cake可知中间空内容应该是如何练习耐心的动作描写，B项祈使句与后面并列，small tasks呼应后面的 “Put off watching your favorite show” 和 “wait 10 extra minutes” 。
段中句，考查句间顺承关系。
● ___39___
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone, we get impatient about the circumstances. You should learn to say to yourself," 40 ."You'll then gradually become more patient.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable, not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
考察小标题，根据其他小标题动词短语的特点，缩小范围到ABC。下文首先从反面指出走出舒适区让人不适，后面从正面说明应该如何做，而且C选项的uncomfortable与前文的 “comfort”是同源词复现，故选C作为标题.
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone,we get impatient about the circumstances. You should learn to say to yourself," ___40___." You’ll then gradually become more patient.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
空前首先从反面指出走出舒适区让人不适，后面从正面说明应该如何做，而且F选项的uncomfortable与前文的 “comfort”是同源词复现,F选项的this指代前文“experience something outside of our comfort zone”， 且F与空后句构成顺承的逻辑关系，故选F.
段中句，考查句间顺承关系。
重要词汇
1. trick
2. in the Digital Age
3.have sth at your fingertips
4.be a whole better off
5.foster self-control
6.comfort zone
7. Find your causes
8. adds up to a state of hurry
n.诡计，骗局; 技巧&v.欺骗,欺诈;
在数字化时代
熟悉，精通
更幸福，更满意
培养自制力
舒适区
找到你的原因
结果是匆忙的状态
长难句分析
However,research suggests that if we practiced patience we’d be a whole lot better off.
翻译：然而，研究表明，如果我们有耐心，我们会过得更好。
主干：research suggests
宾语从句
if引导的条件状语从句
长难句分析
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone,we get impatient about the circumstances.
翻译：我们很多人都相信舒适是我们唯一能容忍的状态，当我们经历舒适区之外的事情时，我们会对环境变得不耐烦。
主干：So many of us have the belief
同位语从句，修饰belief
when引导的时间状语从句
省略that的定语从句,修饰先行词state
语法填空
1. However,research suggests _____ if we practiced patience we’d be a whole lot better off.
2. Thankfulness has a lot of benefits:Research shows it makes us happier,less _______ (stress) and even more optimistic.
3. So many of us have the _______ (believe) that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone,we get _________ (patient) about the circumstances.
that
stressed
belief
impatient
2023年全国甲卷完型填空
完形填空的设定规律
（一）从文章结构看
1. 首句通常不设空，以便考生对短文前提和背景有个较清楚的了解，从而使考生尽快熟悉语境、推测文章大意。
2. 短文设空平均密度为25个单词一个空。
（二）从语言层次看
考点设计对把握语段的要求在提高。我们可以把考点分为三个层次，即句子层次、句群层次和语篇层次.
1. 句子层次的设空
指那些只需读懂设空所在句便可选出答案的题目。
2. 句群层次的设空
指根据上下文的内容，经过推理判断可以得到答案的题目
3. 语篇性设空
指那些需要联系全文的情境、内容才能确定正确答案的设空。
文段细读，语篇连贯
话题一致性
语义连贯性
全篇思读，宏观把握
思维导图，理清架构
抓住主线，挖掘暗线
梳理结构，语篇衔接
语篇系统思维
综合逻辑分析
完形填空的解题策略
1
上下文逻辑关系
2
词法及词义辨析
4
语法知识
3
固定短语搭配
5
文化背景及生活常识
完形填空的微技能
① 表示并列：and，as well as，or，likewise(同样地)，similarly，in the meanwhile，meanwhile，neither...nor，either.or，not only.but also等；
② 表示列举：for example，for instance，such as等：
③ 表示递进furthermore，in addition，moreover，besides，what＇s more，worse still，to make things worse，even等：
④ 表示顺承：then等；
⑤ 表示转折：however，but，nevertheless，yet，while，on the contrary等；
⑥ 表示让步：although，.though，even though/.if，despite，in spite of，anyhow/anyway(口语、常作干扰项)，as（倒装），while(虽然、尽管、即使)，still(尽管如此)等：
⑦ 表示因果目的：because，since，for，as，so，therefore，thus，in order to，consequently等：
⑧ 表示条件：if，unless，.once，on condition that等；
⑨ 表示时间：before，after，while，until等：
⑩ 表示对比：instead of，instead等，
逻辑关系
主题语境 人与社会
体裁类型 记叙文
内容导读
文章讲述了本篇讲述了“我”住在Garfagnana时邻居送来了自家的食品-畸形的西红柿和浑浊的酒，起初感觉不是很好，但是尝试过后，发现比超市的好，从而引发了我对这件事情的思考和感悟。
主题 体现了不要以貌取人，要树立正确的人生观，价值观，世界观。
真题完形填空分析
考点分布
词性 题号
动词（8个） 41，42，44，50，54，56，59，60
名词（4个） 43，45，52，53
形容词（6个） 46，47，48，51，55，57
短语（2个） 49，58
Many years ago, I bought a house in the Garfagnana, where we still go every summer. The first time we 41 there, we heard the chug chug-chug of a motorbike 42 its way down the hill toward us. It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tomatoes and a bottle of wine. It was a very nice 45 for him to make. But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen: not at all like the nice, round, 47 things you get in a supermarket. And the wine was cloudy, in a funny old bottle with no label(标签) on it. These can’t be any 48 , we thought. But we were 49 his kindness, so we 50 them.
What we discovered is that it’s 51 to judge what you can’t only by its 52 . Those tomatoes had 53 that reminded me of the ones my uncle used to grow when I was a child. Nowadays supermarket tomatoes 54 perfect but taste of water. Nobody’s going to have a
55 memory of those. It’s a surprise they haven’t managed to grow square ones so that they can 56 them easily. Mario’s wine may have been cloudy and come out of an old bottle, but it was 57 .
It’s good to eat things at the correct time, when they’re 58 and as close as possible to where they were 59 . What Mario had 60 us was the taste of the Garfagnana.
Para 1：beginning刚搬来时，邻居给我了奇形怪状的土豆和包装老旧的红酒，不好婉拒只能接受了。
Para 2: development
→ending
但是尝试过后，我意识到自己的错误，发现这些东西比超市的好。
Para3: conclusion
在正确的时间，任由植物发展，不在乎其外貌，人也亦如此。
Many years ago, I bought a house in the Garfagnana, where we still go every summer. The first time we 41 there, we heard the chug chug-chug of a motorbike 42 its way down the hill toward us. It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tomatoes and a bottle of wine.
41 A.waited B. met C. camped D. stayed
v.
42 A. making B. searching C. squeezing D. feeling
v.
43 A.customer B.neighbor C. relative D. passenger
n.
44 A.lend B. send C. bring D. show
v.
上下语境
等待
露营
停留
固定搭配
挤压
顾客
亲戚
邻居
乘客
上下语境
make one’s way 前进，前往
What Mario had 20 us was the taste of the Garfagnana.
It was a very nice 45 for him to make. But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen: not at all like the nice, round, 47 things you get in a supermarket.
45 A.choice B. comment C. promise D.gesture
n.
46 A. worried B. moved C.thrilled D. bored
v.
47 A. simple B. real C. shiny D. fun
adj.
承诺
姿势
感动的
激动的
无聊的
选择
评论
上下语境
情感态度
简单的
闪光的
语义场
担忧的
It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tomatoes and a bottle of wine.
And the wine was cloudy, in a funny old bottle with no label(标签) on it. These can’t be any 48 , we thought. But we were 49 his kindness, so we 50 them.
48 A.more B. good C. new D. easy
adj.
49 A.sympathetic to B. thankful for C. cautious about D. interested in
50 A. tried B. sold C. retured D. mixed
v.
上下语境
逻辑推理
逻辑推理
对…有好感
对…感激
对…谨慎
be no good | not be any/much good没用处/好处
What we discovered is that it’s 51 to judge what you can’t only by its 52 . Those tomatoes had 53 that reminded me of the ones my uncle used to grow when I was a child.
51 A. unnecessary B. uncertain C.unwise D. unusual
adj.
52 A. appearance B. quality C.origin D. price
n.
53 A. size B. shape C.color D. taste
n.
上下语境
上下语境
不明智的
不平常的
没有必要的
不确定的
长相
But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen:
Nowadays super-market tomatoes 54 perfect but taste of water.
质量
起源
同词复现
Nowadays super-market tomatoes 54 perfect but taste of water. Nobody’s going to have 55 memory of those. It’s a surprise they haven’t managed to grow square ones so that they can 56 them easily. Mario’s wine may have been cloudy and come out of an old bottle, but it was 57 .
54 A. smell B. look C. become D.work
v.
55 A. happy B. vivid C.short D. vague
adj.
56 A. clean B.check C. count D. pack
adj.
57 A. perfect B. useful C.convenient D. familiar
adj.
逻辑推理
上下语境
生动的
模糊的
打包
数数
逻辑推理
反义复现
熟悉的
It’s good to eat things at the correct time, when they’re 58 and as close as possible to where they were 59 .What Mario had 60 us was the taste of the Garfagnana.
58 A.on view B. on sale C. in season D. in need
59 A. finished B. stored C. found D. grown
v.
60 A. cooked B. given C. bought D. told
v.
上下语境
生活常识
当季的
需求中
在展览
出售
But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen:
It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tormatoes and a bottle of wine.”
词汇积累
make one’s way
make a nice gesture
misshapen
shiny
Cloudy
not be any/much good
be sympathetic to
judge by appearance
Squeeze
Vague
on view
in season
前进,前往
做出友好的表示
adj. 畸形的；奇形怪状的
发亮的；闪光的
【熟词生义】浑浊的
没用处/好处
对…同情的
以貌取人
挤压
模糊的
在展览
当季
◆解题前 单纯求快,忽略语篇理解。
◆解题中 ①对文意分析不透,忽视特定语境下知识的运用。
②缺乏必要的语言知识。
③时间安排不当
④存在畏惧心理。
◆解题后 没有重新通读全文,修改答案的习惯
完形填空时我们存在的问题
语法填空
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与社会
文章介绍了寓言的形式在今天仍然具有价值。主要介绍了雷切尔·卡森的《明日寓言》与传统寓言的不同。
For thousands of years, people have told fables (寓言) ___61___ (teach) a lesson or to pass on wisdom. Fables were part of the oral tradition of many early cultures, and the well-known Aesop’s fables date to the ___62___ (six) century, B. C. Yet, the form of the fable still has values today, ___63___ Rachel Carson says in “A Fable for Tomorrow”
Carson uses a simple, direct style common to fable. In fact, her style and tone (口吻) are seemingly directed at children. “There was once a town in the heart of America, ___64___ all life seemed to enjoy peaceful existence with is surroundings,” her fable begins, ___65___ (borrow) some familiar words from many age-old fables. Behind the simple style, however, is a serious message ___66___ (intend) for everyone.
___67___ (difference) from traditional fables, Carson’s story ends with an accusation instead of a moral. She warns of the environmental dangers facing society, and she teaches that people must take responsibility ___68___ saving their environment.
The themes of traditional fables often deal with simple truths about everyday life. However, Cason’s theme is a more weighty ___69___ (warn) about environmental destruction. Carson proves that a simple lyric form that has been passed down through the ages can still ____70____ (employ) today to draw attention to important truths.
to teach
sixth
as
where
borrowing
intended
Different
for
warning
be employed
题号 考点
61 非谓语动词
62 数词
63 定语从句
64 定语从句
65 非谓语动词
66 非谓语动词
67 形容词
68 介词
69 名词
70 动词语态
63. 考查as引导非限制性定语从句。句意:然而，寓言的形式在今天仍有价值，正如雷切尔卡森在《明天的寓言》中所说的那样。“as”意为“正如，就像”。
64. 考查where引导的定语从句。句意:在美国的中心地带曾经有一个小镇,那里的所有生命似乎都在享受着与周围环境的和平共处。此处用where引导的定语从句修饰先行词a town,表明“在这个小镇上”。
66. 考查非谓语动词。句意：然而，在简洁的风格背后，是每个人都想要传达的严肃信息。be intended for打算为……所用，在句中作定语，所以用过去分词形式。
69.考查名词。句意：然而，卡森的主题是对环境破坏的更严重警告。形容词weighty后接名词形式。根据句中不定冠词a可知，用可数名词的单数形式。
重要词汇
pass on wisdom
oral tradition
Be directed at
intend for
ends with an accusation
take responsibility for
environmental destruction
passed down
draw attention to
传递智慧
口头传统
被引导到
打算用于
以指控结束
承担责任
环境破坏
传承下来
注意
1. Carson proves that a simple lyric form that has been passed down through the ages can still be employed today to draw attention to important truths.
长难句分析
翻译：卡森证明，一种流传多年的简单抒情形式今天仍然可以用来引起人们对重要真理的关注。
To do非谓语，表目的
that引导宾语从句
主干: Carson proves
That引导定语从句,修饰先行词a simple lyric form
投稿
2023全国甲卷 应用文
介绍中国历史人物
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。
审 题
文体：
主题：
要点：
1.人物简介
2. 人物主要事迹
3.人物带来的启示或意义
投稿
中国历史人物
时态：
人称：
一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅；
第三人称
Para 1. 引出历史人物+历史人物简介
框架构思
框架构思
Para 2. 历史人物主要事迹
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。
Para 3. 历史人物带来的启示或意义
学生可能存在的问题
描写的人物不是历史人物
1.内容
启示或意义与该人物主要事迹不相关
审题
语言
1. 事迹描写逻辑不清晰，表达不准确，中式英语频现。
2. 词性混乱，逗号连接2句话，从句引导词错误，长句中
主句没有谓语等
卷面
1.书写潦草，卷面不整洁
2.字数不够或太多
Brainstorm 10个历史人物及简介
1.孔子:中国古代伟大的哲学家、教育家和政治家，儒家思想的创始人。
Confucius: A great ancient Chinese philosopher, educator, and politician, the founder of Confucianism.
2.秦始皇:第一个统一了中国，建立了封建制度的皇帝。
Qin Shi Huang: The first emperor who unified China and established the feudal system.
3.汉武帝：中国历史上最有影响力的皇帝之一，他创造了汉朝的黄金时代。
Emperor Wu of Han: One of the most influential emperors in Chinese history, who created the golden age of the Han Dynasty.
Brainstorm 10个历史人物及简介
4.刘备:三国时期蜀汉的创始人，俗称仁爱绅士。”
Liu Bei: The founder of Shu Han during the Three Kingdoms period, known as a "gentleman of benevolence”.
5.曹操:三国时期魏国的创始人，为一位杰出的战略家和中国历史上有争议的人物。
Cao Cao: The founder of Wei during the Three Kingdoms period, known as a brilliant strategist and a controversial figure in Chinese history.
6. 孙中山：中国现代民主革命的先驱者，被称为“民主革命之父”。” Sun Yat-sen: The pioneer of China's modern democratic revolution, known as the "father of the democratic revolution.
Brainstorm 10个历史人物
7.毛泽东：中华人民共和国的创始人之一，中国现代历史上最有影响力的政治家之一。
Mao Zedong: one of the founders of the People's Republic of China and one of the most influential politicians in modern Chinese history.
8. 李世民:唐朝的开国皇帝，他是贞观王朝的创始人。
Li Shimin: The founding emperor of the Tang Dynasty, known as the creator of the “Zhenguan Reign”.
9.玄奘:唐代著名的佛教僧人，以他去印度获取佛经而闻名。
Xuanzang: A famous Buddhist monk during the Tang Dynasty, known for his journey to India to obtain Buddhist scriptures.
10.韩愈:唐代著名的作家、思想家、政治家，是著名的唐、宋八大家之一
Han Yu: A famous writer, thinker, and politician during the Tang Dynasty, known as one of the "Eight Great Prose Masters of the Tang and Song Dynasties."
Brainstorm 毛主席主要事迹与意义
Mao Zedong was a Chinese revolutionary and politician who led the Communist Party of China to victory in the Chinese Civil War. He established the People's Republic of China in 1949 and served as its Chairman until his death in 1976. Mao's contributions to Marxist theory, socialist policies, and modernization of China's economy and society are significant. However, his policies also led to disastrous consequences like the Great Leap Forward and the Cultural Revolution. Mao's legacy remains controversial, but his leadership and vision have left a lasting impact on China and the world. His emphasis on self-reliance, mass mobilization, and continuous revolution inspired many revolutionary movements around the world. Mao's life teaches us the importance of leadership, and vision, and the need to balance ideology with practicality.
毛泽东是中国的革命家和政治家，他曾领导中国共产党在中国内战中取得胜利。他于1949年成立了中华人民共和国，并一直担任其主席，直到1976年去世。毛对马克思主义理论、社会主义政策和中国经济和社会现代化的贡献是重要的。然而，他的政策也导致了灾难性的后果，如大跃进和文化大革命。毛的遗产仍然存在争议，但他的领导能力和愿景已经对中国和世界留下了持久的影响。他对自力更生、大规模动员和持续革命的强调激发了世界各地的许多革命运动。毛的生活告诉我们，领导能力、愿景的重要性，以及平衡意识形态和实用性的必要性。
Brainstorm 孙中山主要事迹与意义
Sun Yat-sen was a Chinese revolutionary and politician who played a crucial role in the overthrow of the Qing dynasty and the establishment of the Republic of China. He founded the Kuomintang party and served as its first provisional president. Sun's Three Principles of the People, which emphasized nationalism, democracy, and people's livelihood, became the foundation of the Republic of China's political philosophy. Sun's legacy remains significant in modern China, as his ideas continue to influence political discourse. His life teaches us the importance of perseverance, leadership, and the need to balance ideology with practicality. Sun's vision of a modern, democratic China continues to inspire generations of Chinese people to strive for a better future.
孙中山是中国的革命者和政治家，他在推翻清朝和中华民国的建立过程中发挥了关键作用。他创立了国民党，并担任了国民党的第一任临时主席。孙提出的强调民族主义、民主和民生的《人民三大原则》，成为中华民国政治哲学的基础。孙的遗产在现代中国仍然很重要，因为他的思想继续影响着政治话语。他的生活教会了我们毅力、领导能力的重要性，以及平衡意识形态和实用性的必要性。孙的现代民主中国的愿景继续激励着一代代中国人为更美好的未来而奋斗。
Brainstorm 孔子主要事迹与意义
As a great philosopher and educator in ancient China, Confucius has left a profound impact on Chinese culture and society. Born in 551 BC, Confucius devoted his life to teaching and spreading his philosophy, which emphasized the importance of morality, education, and social order. His teachings have influenced generations of Chinese people and have become an integral part of Chinese culture. Confucius believed that education was the key to a harmonious society and that individuals should strive to become better people through self-cultivation. His teachings have inspired many to pursue knowledge and wisdom, and his legacy continues to shape Chinese society today. Confucius' life and teachings remind us of the importance of education, morality, and social harmony, and his wisdom continues to inspire people around the world.
孔子作为中国古代伟大的哲学家和教育家，对中国文化和社会产生了深远的影响。孔子出生于公元前551年，他的一生都致力于教学和传播他的哲学，其中强调了道德、教育和社会秩序的重要性。他的教导影响了几代中国人，并成为中国文化不可分割的一部分。孔子认为，教育是建立一个和谐社会的关键，个人应该通过自我修养来努力成为更好的人。他的教导激发了许多人去追求知识和智慧，他的遗产继续塑造着今天的中国社会。孔子的生活和教导提醒我们，教育、道德和社会和谐的重要性，他的智慧继续激励着世界各地的人们。
Brainstorm 汉武帝主要事迹与意义
Emperor Wu of Han, also known as Han Wudi, is one of the most significant emperors in Chinese history. He expanded the Han Dynasty's territory through military conquests, established a centralized government, and implemented policies to benefit the people, such as the promotion of Confucianism and the establishment of a state monopoly on iron and salt. He also sent envoys to explore and establish diplomatic relations with neighboring countries, which helped to spread Chinese culture and influence. His legacy serves as a reminder of the importance of strong leadership, cultural exchange, and innovation. His achievements laid the foundation for a prosperous and stable Han Dynasty, and his influence can still be seen in modern China today.
汉武帝，又称汉武帝，是中国历史上最重要的皇帝之一。他通过军事征服扩大了汉朝的领土，建立了中央集权政府，并实施了有利于人民的政策，如促进儒家思想和建立了国家的铁和盐垄断。他还派特使探索并与邻国建立外交关系，帮助传播中国文化和影响力。他的遗产提醒着人们，强大的领导力、文化交流和创新的重要性。他的成就为汉朝的繁荣和稳定奠定了基础，他的影响至今仍在现代中国可见。
Brainstorm 李世民主要事迹与意义
Li Shimin, also known as Emperor Taizong of Tang, is one of the most respected and admired emperors in Chinese history. He was a military strategist, a wise ruler, and a patron of the arts. He expanded the Tang Dynasty's territory through military conquests, established a merit-based system for government officials, and implemented policies to benefit the people. He also encouraged the development of literature, art, and music, which led to a flourishing of culture during his reign. His legacy serves as a reminder of the importance of good governance, leadership, and cultural patronage. His achievements laid the foundation for a golden age of Chinese civilization, and his influence can still be felt in modern China today.
李世民，又称唐太宗，是中国历史上最受人尊敬的皇帝之一。他是一位军事战略家，一位明智的统治者和艺术的赞助人。他通过军事征服扩大了唐朝的领土，为政府官员建立了基于功绩的制度，并实施了造福人民的政策。他还鼓励文学、艺术和音乐的发展，这导致了他统治期间文化的繁荣。他的遗产提醒着人们，良好的治理、领导能力和文化赞助的重要性。他的成就为中华文明的黄金时代奠定了基础，他的影响至今仍能在现代中国感受到。
Brainstorm 秦始皇主要事迹与意义
Qin Shi Huang, the first emperor of China, is a legendary figure in Chinese history. He is known for his military conquests, unification of China, and construction of the Great Wall and the Terracotta Army. He also standardized the writing system, weights and measures, and currency. However, his reign was also marked by the burning of books and the burying of scholars, which limited intellectual freedom. His legacy serves as a reminder of the importance of strong leadership and centralized government, but also the dangers of authoritarianism and suppression of dissent. His achievements laid the foundation for a unified China and influenced Chinese political and cultural development for centuries.
秦始皇是中国的第一位皇帝，是中国历史上的一个传奇人物。他以军事征服、统一中国、建造长城和兵马俑而闻名。他还标准化了书写系统、度量表和货币。然而，他的统治也以烧毁书籍和埋葬学者为标志，这限制了知识自由。他的遗产提醒人们，强大的领导和中央集权政府的重要性，也提醒人们，威权主义和镇压异见的危险。他的成就为统一的中国奠定了基础，影响了中国几个世纪以来的政治文化发展。
Brainstorm 岳飞主要事迹与意义
Yue Fei was a famous Chinese general and national hero during the Southern Song Dynasty. He was known for his loyalty, bravery, and patriotism. Yue Fei led his army to defeat the invading enemies several times and made great contributions to the defense of the country. He also advocated for the education of the common people and the promotion of Confucianism. His spirit of loyalty and patriotism has been admired by generations of Chinese people. The story of Yue Fei teaches us the importance of national defense and the spirit of patriotism. It also reminds us that we should always be loyal to our country and people, and strive to make contributions to the development and prosperity of our nation.
岳飞是南宋时期中国著名的将军和民族英雄。他以其忠诚、勇敢和爱国主义而闻名。岳飞带领他的军队多次击败了入侵的敌人，为保卫国家做出了巨大的贡献。他还提倡教育平民百姓和推广儒家思想。他的忠诚和爱国精神受到几代中国人民的钦佩。岳飞的故事告诉我们国防的重要性和爱国精神的精神。它还提醒我们，我们应该始终忠于我们的国家和人民，并努力为我们国家的发展和繁荣作出贡献。
1.我们在生活中可以做无数的事情。随着时间的推移，其中一些可能很容易被遗忘，而另一些总是能给我们留下深刻印象。我打算分享一下我做过的最有意义的事情。
We may do countless things in our life. With time going by, some of them may be easily forgotten, while others can always impress themselves on our hearts. I intend to share the most meaningful thing I did.
2.读到“最好的朋友”这个词，我的脑海里出现了一个人影——她是我的高中同学张叶。在高中的三年里，我们分享了无数时刻的欢笑、泪水、欢乐和悲伤。
Upon reading the expression “best friend”, a figure jumps into my mind-Zhang Ye, my schoolmate in senior high school. During the three years in senior high school, we shared countless moments of laughter and tears, joy and sorrow.
语言积累---写人写事类开头高频句式
3.如果有人问我“谁是我一生中最令人难忘/最能干的人”，我的回答就是我的中文老师，陈女士。是她的特质给我留下了深刻的印象和影响。
If I am asked “who is the most unforgettable/respectable person in my life”, my answer would be my Chinese teacher, Mrs. Chen. It is her special quality that has impressed and affected me deeply.
4. 我们周围有很多值得尊敬的人。他们可能是我们的老师、父母或我们的长辈之一。至于我，我的英语老师李女士是我最尊敬的人。正是她的乐于助人和善良使她在学生中大受欢迎。
We have plenty of respectable people around us. They are possibly our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, Mrs. Li, my English teacher, is the person I respect most. It is her helpfulness and kindness that win her great popularity among students.
语言积累---写人写事类开头高频句式
1.游学结束了，但它有深远的 影响。多亏了这次旅行，我们不仅提高了我们的沟通能力，而且我们对英国文化有了更好的了解，这扩大了我的知识，拓宽了我的视野。
The study tour came to an end, but it has a far -reaching influence. Thanks to the tour, not only have we improved our communicational skills, but we've also got a better understanding of British culture, which enlarge my knowledge and broaden my horizons.
2.只有通过这次经历，我才意识到，小事可以对我们的生活产生很大的影响。我会不遗余力地帮助那些有需要的人。多么有意义和富有成效的经历啊。
Only through this experience did I realize that small things could make a big difference in our life. I will spare no effort to offer my help to those in need. What a meaningful and fruitful experience.
3.总之，这种经历让我能够体验到帮助他人的快乐。同时,它给了我一个学习的机会。正是这种活动进一步加深了师生之间的关系。
In a word, this experience enables me to experience the happiness of helping others. Meanwhile，it offers me a chance to learn. It was this activity that further deepened the relationship between the teacher and students.
语言积累---写人写事类结尾高频句式
应用文高考评分标准
分值 评分标准说明
第一档： 13-15分 完全完成时试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多样丰富的地道和得体的句式与词汇；语法和用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富内容所致；体现了较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语句间连接成分，逻辑清晰合理，所写内容连贯、紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档： 10-12分 完全完成时试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用的句式与词汇能满足任务要求；语法和用词方面基本准确、有少许错误，为尽可能表达丰富内容所致；使用了简单句间的连接成分，逻辑清晰合理，所写内容连贯，达到预期的写作目的。
第三档： 7-9分 覆盖了主要内容要点；运用的句式与词汇基本能满足任务要求；语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解；基本达到预期的写作目的。
第四档： 4-6分 未恰当完成试题规定的任务，漏掉或未清楚描述主要内容，所用句式和词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，未能清楚地传达信息。
第五档： 1-3分 未完成试题规定的任务，明显遗漏主要内容。句式单调、词汇贫乏。语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解
0分档 未能传达任何信息：所写内容与要求无关。
评分标准
档次 给分 比例 评分标准
第五档 13-15 20% 语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚，有亮点表达
第四档 10-12 50% 语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚
第三档 7-9 24% 语言有一些错误，尚能表达
第二档 4-6 5% 语言错误较多，影响表达
第一档 0-3 1% 只能写出与要求内容有关的一些单词
应用文高考考核的能力
TA: Task Achievement(任务完成)--1
TR: Task Response(任务回应)--2
CC: Coherence & Cohesion
（内容连贯与篇章衔接）
GRA:
Grammatical
Range and Accuracy
（语法范围与精确性)
LR:Lexical Resource
（词汇资源)
语言能力
思维能力
As a history lover, many influential historic figures are engraved in my mind. But what comes to my mind first is Sun Yat-sen. Sun Yat-sen was a Chinese revolutionary and politician who played a crucial role in overthrowing the Qing dynasty and founding the Republic of China.
Born in 1866 in Guangdong province, Sun was educated in Hawaii and Hong Kong, where he was exposed to Western ideas and political systems. Sun founded the Revive China Society in 1894, which aimed to establish a democratic government in China. Despite facing numerous setbacks and challenges, Sun never gave up on his dream and finally succeeded in 1911, when the Republic of China was established.
Sun Yat-sen's life and achievements serve as a reminder of the importance of perseverance and determination in the face of adversity. Additionally, his vision and leadership inspired countless others to fight for democracy, freedom, and equality. and eventually strive for a better future.
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As a history lover, (很多历史人物刻在我的脑海里). But what comes to my mind first is Sun Yat-sen. Sun Yat-sen was a Chinese revolutionary and politician ___________________
______(起着关键角色)overthrowing the Qing dynasty and founding the Republic of China.
Born in 1866 in Guangdong province, Sun was educated in Hawaii and Hong Kong,______________________ (在那里，他接触了西方思想与政治体系). Sun founded the Revive China Society in 1894, which________________________(为了建立民主政府)in China. _________________________________________(尽管面对无数的挫折与挑战), Sun never gave up on his dream and finally succeeded in 1911, _________________________________(那时中华民国成立).
Sun Yat-sen‘s life and achievements ___________________________________ (提醒面对逆境时坚持与决心的重要性). Additionally, his vision and leadership inspired countless others to fight for democracy, freedom, and equality. and ____________________________（最终为更好的未来而努力）.
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人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
类似体裁拓展--- （2020全国I卷）
There are many respectable people around us. As far as I'm concerned, the one who I respect most is my father, an ordinary but great doctor in his forties working in a hospital.
What touches me most is his full devotion to his work(主语从句). Not only is he patient with his patients but also he makes efforts to conduct medical research(倒装), hoping to find better cure(现在分词作伴随状语). Due to his brilliant contributions, he was titled as the Best Doctor in his hospital last year. Besides, as a responsible father, he always encourages me to overcome difficulties bravely and instructs me how to be a kind, generous and helpful man.
My father is setting a good example to me, which will have a lasting effect on my life.
参考范文
2023全国甲卷讲评课件
Passage A
语篇类型：应用文
主题语境：人与社会
介绍了一些关于从哪里开始你的曼谷美食之旅的建议。
Where to Eat in Bangkok
Bangkok is a highly desirable destination for food lovers. It has a seemingly bottomless well of dining options. Here are some suggestions on where to start your Bangkok eating adventure.
Nahm
Offering Thai fine dining. Nahm provides the best of Bangkok culinary (烹饪的) experiences. It’s the only Thair restaurant that ranks among the top 10 of the word’s 50 best restaurants list. Head Chef David Thompson, who received a Michelin star for his London-based Thai restaurant of the same name, opened this branch in the Metropolitan Hotel in 2010.
Issays Stamese Club
Issaya Siamese Club is internationally known Thai chef lan Kittichai’s first flagship Bangkok restaurant. The menu in this beautiful colonial house includes traditional Thai cuisine combined with modern cooking methods.
Bo. tan
Bo. tan has been making waves in Bangkok’s culinary scene since it opened in 2009. Serving hard-to-find Thai dishes in an elegant atmosphere, the restaurant is true to Thai cuisine’s roots, yet still manages to add a special twist. This place is good for a candlelit dinner or a work meeting with colleagues who appreciate fine food. For those extremely hungry there’s a large set menu.
Gaggan
Earning first place on the latest “Asia’s 50 best restaurants” list, progressive Indian restaurant Gaggan is one of the most exciting venues(场所) to arrive in Bangkok in recent years. The best table in this two-story colonial Thai home offers a window right into the kitchen, where you can see chef Gaggan and his staff in action. Culinary theater at its best.
Para-1: 引出主题, 介绍曼谷是美食爱好者的天堂。
Para-2-5: 详细介绍, 详细介绍曼谷各大特色餐馆的特点。
1. What do Nahm and Issaya Siamese Club have in common
A. They adopt modern cooking methods. B. They have branches in London.
C. They have top-class chefs. D. They are based in hotels.
Nahm
...Head Chef David Thompson, who received a Michelin star for his London-based Thai restaurant of the same name, opened this branch in the Metropolitan Hotel in 2010.
Issays Stamese Club
Issaya Siamese Club is internationally known Thai chef lan Kittichai’s first flagship Bangkok restaurant.
a Michelin star & internationally known ≈ top-class
2. Which restaurant offers a large set menu
A. Gaggan. B. Bo. tan. C. Issaya Siamese Club. D. Nahm.
Bo.lan
Bo.lan has been making waves in Bangkok’s culinary scene since it opened in 2009. Serving hard-to-find Thai dishes in an elegant atmosphere, the restaurant is true to Thai cuisine's roots, yet still manages to add a special twist. This place is good for a candle-lit dinner or a work meeting with colleagues who appreciate fine food. For those extremely hungry, there's a large set menu.
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3. What is special about Gaggan
It hires staff from India.
It puts on a play every day.
C. It serves hard-to-find local dishes.
D. It shows the cooking process to guests.
where you can see chef Gaggan and his staff in action ≈ shows the cooking process
The best table in this two-story colonial Thai home offers a window right into the kitchen, where you can see chef Gaggan and his staff in action.
在工作，在运转
重要词汇
a highly desirable destination
A seemingly bottomless well of …
dining options
rank among
head chef
of the same name
Open this branch
Make waves
in an elegant atmosphere
True to Thai cuisine’s roots
add a special twist
progressive Indian restaurant
two-story Colonial house
in action
offers a window right into
一个令人向往的目的地
…深不见底
用餐选择
属于…之列
主厨
同名的
开分店/分支机构
把现状打乱/掀起风
在一种优雅的氛围中
忠于泰国菜的根源
增加一个特别的转变
进步的印度餐厅
两层殖民地住宅
在运转,在行动
提供了解…的窗口
语法填空
1 . It’s the only Thair restaurant that ranks _________the top 10 of the word’s 50 best restaurants list.
2 . Issaya Siamese Club is ______________(international) known Thai chef lan Kittichai’s first flagship Bangkok restaurant.
3 . Bo. tan _______________ (make) waves in Bangkok’s culinary scene since it opened in 2009 to this special place.
among
internationally
has been making/has made
Passage B
语篇类型：记叙文
主题语境：人与社会
文章主要讲述了一位 DIY高手Terri Boltonis的技能以及DIY项目可能会在女性群体中变成一种潮流趋势
Terri Boltonis a dab hand when it comes to DIY (do-it-yourself). Skilled at putting up shelves and piecing together furniture, she never pays someone else to do a job she can do herself.
She credits these skills to her late grandfather and builder Derek Lloyd. From the age of six, Terri, now 26, accompanied Derek to work during her school holidays. A day’s work was rewarded with 5 in pocket money. She says: “I’m sure I wasn’t much of a help to start with painting the rooms and putting down the flooring throughout the house. It took weeks and is was backbreaking work, but I know he was proud of my skills.”
Terri, who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth, South West London, says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy (租期) comes to an end. She adds: “I’ve moved house many times and I always like to personalise my room and put up pictures. So, it’s been useful to know how to cover up holes and repaint a room to avoid any charges when I’ve moved out.”
With millions of people likely to take on DIY projects over that coming weeks, new research shows that more than half of people are planning to make the most of the long, warm summer days to get jobs done. The average spend per project will be around 823. Two thirds of people aim to improve their comfort while at home. Two fifth wish to increase the value of their house. Though DIY has traditionally been seen as male hobby, the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
Para-4: 对于DIY的最新研究。
Para-1: 引出主题, 介绍Terri Boltonis擅长DIY。
Para-2: 介绍从小Terri Boltonis的爷爷教导她技能。
Para-3: Terri 喜欢DIY和DIY带给她的益处。
4 Which is closest in meaning to “a dab hand” in paragraph 1
A. An artist. B. A winner. C. A specialist. D. A pioneer.
Terri Boltonis a dab hand when it comes to DIY (do-it-yourself). Skilled at putting up shelves and piecing together furniture, she never pays someone else to do a job she can do herself.
同义替换：skilled at ≈ a dab hand
5. Why did Terri’s grandfather give her 5 a day
A. For a birthday gift. B. As a treat for her work.款待
C. To support her DIY projects. D. To encourage her to take up a hobby.
She credits these skills to her late grandfather and builder Derek Lloyd. From the age of six, Terri, now 26, accompanied Derek to work during her school holidays. A day’s work was rewarded with 5 in pocket money. She says:“ I'm sure I wasn't much of a help to start with, painting the rooms and putting down the flooring throughout the house. It took weeks and it was backbreaking work , but I know he was proud of my skills. ”
reward ≈ treat
6. How did Terri avoid losing the deposit on the house she rented
By making it look like before.
By furnishing it herself.
C. By splitting the rent with a roommate.分开，分摊
D. By cancelling the rental agreement.
Terri, who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth , South West London, says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy(租期) comes to an end. she adds:" I've moved house many times and I always like to personalize my room and put up pictures , so , it's been useful to know how to cover up holes and repaint a room to avoid any charges when I've moved out "
同义替换 avoid any charges ≈ saves her from losing any deposit ≈ avoid losing the deposit
7. What trend in DIY does the research show
It is becoming more costly.
It is getting more time-consuming.费时的
C. It is turning into a seasonal industry.
D. It is gaining popularity among females.
With millions of people likely to take on DIY projects over that coming weeks, new research shows that more than half of people are planning to make the most of the long, warm summer days to get jobs done. The average spend per project will be around 823. Two thirds of people aim to improve their comfort while at home. Two fifth wish to increase the value of their house. Though DIY has traditionally been seen as male hobby, the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
同义替换 women now leading the charge ≈ gaining popularity among females
打头阵;带头
重要词汇
1. put up shelves
2. piece together furniture
3. credits skills to sb.
4. Late grandfather
5. backbreaking work
6. Lose deposit
7. personalize my room
8. put up pictures
9. cover up holes
10.avoid charges
搭建架子
拼装家具
认为技巧是…的功劳
去世的爷爷
非常辛苦的工作
损失存款
让我的房间个性化
张贴照片
遮盖洞
避免收费
重要词汇
11.take on DIY projects
12. make the most of
13. lead the charge
14.Specialist
15. A treat
16. take up a hobby
17. split…with…
18. Get time-consuming
承担DIY项目
充分利用
打头阵
专家
款待
开始一种爱好
与平摊
耗时的
长难句分析
1. Skilled at putting up shelves and piecing together furniture, she never pays someone else to do a job she can do herself.
-ed分词做状语
定语从句，省略引导词that/which,修饰先行词job
句子主干： she never pays someone else
句子翻译：她擅长搭架子和拼装家具，她自己能做的工作从不付钱给别人做。
长难句分析
2. Terri, who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth, South West London, says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy (租期) comes to an end.
Who引导的定语从句,修饰先行词Terri
When引导的时间状语从句
句子主干： Terri says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit
句子主干： Terri says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit
翻译：特里现在和朋友在伦敦西南部的旺兹沃斯租了一套房子，她说DIY还能让她在租约到期时避免损失任何押金。
宾语从句
长难句分析
3. Though DIY has traditionally been seen as male hobby, the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
让步状语从句
句子主干: the research shows it is women now leading the charge.
翻译：尽管DIY传统上被认为是男性的爱好，但研究表明，现在是女性主导了这一潮流。
宾语从句
语法填空
1 . I’m sure I wasn’t much ____ a help to start with painting the rooms and putting down the flooring throughout the house. It took weeks and is was backbreaking work, but I know he was proud of my skills.
2 . So, it’s been useful to know ______ to cover up holes and repaint a room to avoid any charges when I’ve moved out.”
of
how
Passage C
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与社会
作者在13岁时开始喜欢哲学，随后Weiner的书The Socrates Express唤起了作者对哲学的热爱。文章通过介绍The Socrates Express这本书，倡导读者花时间去读这本书。
文章来源：https://www.npr.org/2020/08/27/906607702/the-socrates-express-takes-readers-on-a-ride-through-applied-philosophy#
1 I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder’s Sophie’s World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book. It spoke to me and brought me into a world of philosophy (哲学).
2That love for philosophy lasted until I got to college. Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Baudrillard, or Confucius better than you — and then try to explain them.
3Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express: In Search of Life Lessons from Dead Philosophers reawakened my love for philosophy. It is not an explanation, but an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
5He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experiences, and he does so with plenty of humor. Weiner enters into conversation with some of the most important philosophers in history, and he becomes part of that crowd in the process by decoding (解读) their messages and adding his own interpretation.
6The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging. The invitation is clear: Weiner wants you to pick up a coffee or tea and sit down with this book. I encourage you to take his offer. It’s worth your time, even if time is something we don’t have a lot of.
Para.1-2: 导入话题：13岁时，Sophie’s World带我进入哲学的世界，我对哲学的爱持续到上大学。
Para.3: 引入新事物：Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express重新唤醒我对哲学的爱。
Para.4:介绍：列举了几位哲学家来帮助读者理解Weiner的书。
Para.6: 评价：对The Socrates Express进行评价，呼吁读者阅读。
Para.5:介绍新事物：进一步介绍Weiner的书。
28. Who opened the door to philosophy for the author
A. Foucault. B. Eric Weiner.
C. Jostein Gaarder. D. A college teacher.
1I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder’s Sophie’s World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book. It spoke to me and brought me into a world of philosophy (哲学).
同义替换：
opened the door to philosophy ≈ brought me into a world of philosophy
细节理解题
29. Why does the author list great philosophers in paragraph 4
A. To compare Weiner with them.
B. To give examples of great works.
C. To praise their writing skills.
D. To help readers understand Weiners book.
3Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express: In Search of Life Lessons from Dead Philosophers reawakened my love for philosophy. It is not an explanation, but an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
推理判断题
作者在第四段开头描写了Weiner书的内容，接着作者通过列举了几位伟大的哲学家来描写读完这本书后我们能从中学到的东西，由此可推知，作者列举了几位伟大的哲学家是为了帮助读者理解Weiner的书。
30. What does the author like about The Socrates Express
A. Its views on history are well-presented.
B. Its ideas can be applied to daily life. 应用到
C. It includes comments from readers.
D. It leaves an open ending.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
细节理解题
同义替换
be applied to daily life ≈use philosophy to improve a life
31. What does the author think of Weiners book
A. Objective and plain.
B. Daring and ambitious.
C. Serious and hard to follow.
D. Humorous and straightforward.
6The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging. The invitation is clear: Weiner wants you to pick up a coffee or tea and sit down with this book. I encourage you to take his offer. It’s worth your time, even if time is something we don’t have a lot of.
5He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experiences, and he does so with plenty of humor.
推理判断题
幽默的
简单易懂的
勇敢的
有雄心壮志的
清楚的，简单的
1 I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder’s Sophie’s World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book. It spoke to me and brought me into a world of philosophy (哲学).
2That love for philosophy lasted until I got to college. Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Baudrillard, or Confucius better than you — and then try to explain them.
3Eric weiner’s The Socrates Express: In Search of Life Lessons from Dead Philosophers reawakened my love for philosophy. It is not an explanation, but an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
4Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to improve a life.
5He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experiences, and he does so with plenty of humor. Weiner enters into conversation with some of the most important philosophers in history, and he becomes part of that crowd in the process by decoding (解读) their messages and adding his own interpretation.
6The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging. The invitation is clear: Weiner wants you to pick up a coffee or tea and sit down with this book. I encourage you to take his offer. It’s worth your time, even if time is something we don’t have a lot of.
重要词汇
1.a copy of
2.with my head in and out of that book
3.frames each philosopher’s work
4.makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise
5.enter into conversation
6.add his own interpretation.
7.a sharp book
8.draw readers in
9.apparent simplicity
10. pull sb. in
一本
脑子里都在琢磨这本书
表达每个哲学家的作品
使哲学思想成为一个吸引人的练习
进入对话
加上他自己的解释
一本尖锐的书
吸引读者
明显的简单
吸引某人
重要词汇
11.pick up
12.be applied to
13.Objective and plain
14.Daring and ambitious
15.Humorous and straightforward
拿起；举起；提起
被应用于
客观的和清楚的/简单的
勇敢的和有雄心壮志的
幽默的和简单易懂的
长难句分析
1. Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Baudrillard, or Confucius better than you — and then try to explain them.
who引导的定语从句
句子主干： Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than
翻译：没有什么比那些自认为比你更了解福柯、鲍德里亚或孔子的人更能扼杀人们对哲学的热爱了，他们还试图解释这些哲学。
省略that的宾语从句
语法填空
1. It is not an explanation, an invitation to think and experience philosophy.
2. Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then
(frame) each philosopher’s work in the context (背景) of one thing they can help us do better.
3. The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and gradually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging.
but
frames
that/which
Passage D
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与自然——
介绍灰熊在美国的现状及其问题
Grizzly bears, which may grow to about 2. 5m long and weigh over 400kg, occupy a conflicted corner of the American psyche-we revere(敬畏) them even as they give us frightening dreams. Ask the tourists from around the world that flood into Yellowstone National Park what they most hope to see, and their answer is often the same: a grizzly bear.
" Grizzly bears are re-occupying large areas of their former range," says bear biologist Chris Servheen. As grizzly bears expand their range into places where they haven't been seen in a century or more, they're interestingly being sighted by humans.
The western half of the U.S. was full of grizzlies when Europeans came, with a rough number of 50,000 or more living alongside Native Americans. By the early 1970s, after centuries of cruel and continuous hunting by settlers, 600 to 800 grizzlies remained on a mere 2 percent of their former range in the Northern Rockies. In 1975, grizzlies were listed under the Endangered Species Act.
Today, there are about 2 ,000 or more grizzly bears in the U. S. Their recovery has been so successful that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to de-list grizzlies，which would loosen legal protections and allow them to be hunted. Both efforts were overturned due to lawsuits from conservation groups. For now, grizzlies remain listed.
Obviously, if precautions( 预防) aren't taken, grizzlies can become troublesome , sometimes killing farm animals or walking through yards in search of food. If people remove food and attractants from their yards and campsites, grizzlies will typically pass by without trouble. Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters is also highly effective at getting grizzlies away. “Our hope is to have a clean，attractant-free place where bears can pass through without learning bad habits," says James Jonkel, longtime biologist who manages bears in and around Missoula.
P1:灰熊对美国人的意义
P2:灰熊重新占据人们视线
P3:灰熊先前的数量情况
P4：灰熊现今的数量情况
P5：对灰熊采取保护措施的影响及意义
32. How do Americans look at grizzlies
They cause mixed feelings in people.
They should be kept in national parks.
They are of high scientific value.
They are a symbol of American culture.
Grizzly bears, which may grow to about 2. 5m long and weigh over 400kg, occupy a conflicted corner of the American psyche-we revere(敬畏) them even as they give us frightening dreams. Ask the tourists from around the world that flood into Yellowstone National Park what they most hope to see, and their answer is often the same: a grizzly bear.
33. What has helped the increase of the grizzly population
The European settlers' behavior.
The expansion of bears' range.
The protection by law since 1975.
The support of Native Americans.
The western half of the U.S. was full of grizzlies when Europeans came, with a rough number of 50,000 or more living alongside Native Americans. By the early 1970s, after centuries of cruel and continuous hunting by settlers, 600 to 800 grizzlies remained on a mere 2 percent of their former range in the Northern Rockies. In 1975, grizzlies were listed under the Endangered Species Act.
Today, there are about 2 ,000 or more grizzly bears in the U. S. Their recovery has been so successful that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to de-list grizzlies,which would loosen legal protections and allow them to be hunted…….
同义替换 act法案≈law
34. What has stopped the U. S. Fish and Wildlife Service from DE-listing grizzlies
A. The opposition of conservation groups.反对 保护
B. The successful comeback of grizzlies.
C. The voice of the biologists.
D. The local farmers' advocates.
Today, there are about 2 ,000 or more grizzly bears in the U. S. Their recovery has been so successful that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service has twice attempted to de-list grizzlies，which would loosen legal protections and allow them to be hunted. Both efforts were overturned due to lawsuits from conservation groups. For now, grizzlies remain listed.
de-除掉；去掉；取消
推翻，撤销
同义替换 delist ≈ stop listing opposition ≈ overturn
35. What can be inferred from the last paragraph
A. Food should be provided for grizzlies.
B. People can live in harmony with grizzlies.
C. A special path should be built for grizzlies.
D. Technology can be introduced to protect grizzles.
…If people remove food and attractants from their yards and campsites, grizzlies will typically pass by without trouble. Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters is also highly effective at getting grizzlies away. “Our hope is to have a clean，attractant-free place where bears can pass through without learning bad habits," says James Jonkel, longtime biologist who manages bears in and around Missoula
与…和谐相处
重要词汇
1.Occupy a conflicted corner
2.American psyche
3.expand range
4.increasingly be sighted by
5.a rough number
6.de-list
7.loosen legal protections
8.efforts were overturned
9.lawsuits from conservation groups
10.become troublesome
11.in search of
12.attractant-free
占据冲突的角落
美国人的灵魂/心灵/内心
扩大范围
越来越多被看到
粗略的数字
脱离名单
放宽法律保护
努力被推翻
来自自然保护组织的诉讼
变得麻烦
寻找
无引诱物的
1. Grizzly bears, which may grow to about 2. 5m long and weigh over 400kg, occupy a conflicted corner of the American psyche-we revere(敬畏) them even as they give us frightening dreams.
长难句分析
翻译：灰熊，可能长到2.5米左右长，重达400公斤，占据了美国人内心的一个矛盾的角落---尽管它们给我们带来了可怕的梦，我们敬畏它们。
插入语中，由even as引导让步状语从句
which引导定语从句
主干: Grizzly bears occupy a conflicted corner
插入语中的主句
2. The western half of the U.S., was full of grizzlies when Europeans came, with a rough number of 50,000 or more living alongside Native Americans.
长难句分析
翻译：欧洲人来的时候，美国西半部到处都是灰熊，大约有5万只或更多的灰熊与美洲原住民生活在一起。
When引导时间状语从句
主干: The western half was full of grizzlies.
With+n+doing复合结构作状语，表伴随
1. Our hope is to have a clean，attractant-free place ______bears can pass through without learning bad habits
2. Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters _____ (be) also highly effective at getting grizzlies away.
3. By the early 1970s, after centuries of cruel and continuous hunting by settlers, 600 to 800 grizzlies_________ ( remain) on a mere 2 percent of their former range in the Northern Rockies
is
where
语法填空
(had)remained
七选五
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与自我——
文章介绍了成为一个有耐心的人的诀窍。
Tricks To Becoming A Patient Person
Here's a riddle: What do traffic jams, long lines and waiting for a vacation to start all have in common There's one answer. 36 .
In the Digital Age, we're used to having what we need immediately and right at our fingertips.
However, research suggests that if we practiced patience, we'd be a whole lot better off. Here are several tricks.
● Practice gratitude(感激）
Thankfulness has a lot of benefits: Research shows it makes us happier, less steressed and even more optimistic. 37 ." Showing thankfulness can foster self-control," said Ye Li, researcher at the University of California.
● Make yourself wait
Instant gratification(满足)may seem like the most "feel good" option at the time, but psychology research suggests waiting for things actually makes us happier in the long run. And the only way for us to get into the habit of waiting is to practice. 38 . Put off watching your favorite show until the weekend or wait 10 extra minutes before going for that cake. You'll soon find that the more patience you practice,the more you start to apply it to other, more annoying situations.
● 39
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone, we get impatient about the circumstances. You should learn to say to yourself," 40 ."You'll then gradually become more patient.
总分结构
P1: 引出主题，耐心的通性
P2: 在数字时代,耐心的重要性
P3：感恩的好处
P4：等待的好处。
P5:走出舒适区。
3个变耐心的技巧
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable, not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
观察选项特点，圈画逻辑词定逻辑，圈画核心词定主题
.
Here's a riddle: What do traffic jams, long lines and waiting for a vacation to start all have in common There's one answer. ___36___
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
G选项all是原词复现，they指代上文中的“traffic jams, long lines and waiting for a vacation to start”三件事。
段尾句，考查句间顺承关系。
.
●Practice gratitude(感激)
Thankfulness has a lot of benefits:Research shows it makes us happier,less stressed and even more optimistic. ___37___ "Showing thankfulness can foster self-control," said Ye Li,researcher at the University of California.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
本段为总分结构，主旨句为Thankfulness has a lot of benefits, 后面详细说明感恩的好处。E选项中also表示并列关系，help us practice more patience是好处的表现，故E项从逻辑及内容上都符合要求。
段中句，考查句间并列关系。
总分结构
● Make yourself wait
Instant gratification(满足)may seem like the most "feel good" option at the time, but psychology research suggests waiting for things actually makes us happier in the long run. And the only way for us to get into the habit of waiting is to practice. ___38___ Put off watching your favorite show until the weekend or wait 10 extra minutes before going for that cake.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
根据前文“the only way for us to get into the habit of waiting is to practice”及后文“Put off ... going for that cake可知中间空内容应该是如何练习耐心的动作描写，B项祈使句与后面并列，small tasks呼应后面的 “Put off watching your favorite show” 和 “wait 10 extra minutes” 。
段中句，考查句间顺承关系。
● ___39___
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone, we get impatient about the circumstances. You should learn to say to yourself," 40 ."You'll then gradually become more patient.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable, not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
考察小标题，根据其他小标题动词短语的特点，缩小范围到ABC。下文首先从反面指出走出舒适区让人不适，后面从正面说明应该如何做，而且C选项的uncomfortable与前文的 “comfort”是同源词复现，故选C作为标题.
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone,we get impatient about the circumstances. You should learn to say to yourself," ___40___." You’ll then gradually become more patient.
A. Find your causes
B. Start with small tasks
C.Accept the uncomfortable
D.All this adds up to a state of hurry
E. It can also help us practice more patience
F.This is merely uncomfortable,not intolerable
G.They’re all situations where we could use a little extra patience
空前首先从反面指出走出舒适区让人不适，后面从正面说明应该如何做，而且F选项的uncomfortable与前文的 “comfort”是同源词复现,F选项的this指代前文“experience something outside of our comfort zone”， 且F与空后句构成顺承的逻辑关系，故选F.
段中句，考查句间顺承关系。
重要词汇
1. trick
2. in the Digital Age
3.have sth at your fingertips
4.be a whole better off
5.foster self-control
6.comfort zone
7. Find your causes
8. adds up to a state of hurry
n.诡计，骗局; 技巧&v.欺骗,欺诈;
在数字化时代
熟悉，精通
更幸福，更满意
培养自制力
舒适区
找到你的原因
结果是匆忙的状态
长难句分析
However,research suggests that if we practiced patience we’d be a whole lot better off.
翻译：然而，研究表明，如果我们有耐心，我们会过得更好。
主干：research suggests
宾语从句
if引导的条件状语从句
长难句分析
So many of us have the belief that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone,we get impatient about the circumstances.
翻译：我们很多人都相信舒适是我们唯一能容忍的状态，当我们经历舒适区之外的事情时，我们会对环境变得不耐烦。
主干：So many of us have the belief
同位语从句，修饰belief
when引导的时间状语从句
省略that的定语从句,修饰先行词state
语法填空
1. However,research suggests _____ if we practiced patience we’d be a whole lot better off.
2. Thankfulness has a lot of benefits:Research shows it makes us happier,less _______ (stress) and even more optimistic.
3. So many of us have the _______ (believe) that being comfortable is the only state we will tolerate, and when we experience something outside of our comfort zone,we get _________ (patient) about the circumstances.
that
stressed
belief
impatient
2023年全国甲卷完型填空
完形填空的设定规律
（一）从文章结构看
1. 首句通常不设空，以便考生对短文前提和背景有个较清楚的了解，从而使考生尽快熟悉语境、推测文章大意。
2. 短文设空平均密度为25个单词一个空。
（二）从语言层次看
考点设计对把握语段的要求在提高。我们可以把考点分为三个层次，即句子层次、句群层次和语篇层次.
1. 句子层次的设空
指那些只需读懂设空所在句便可选出答案的题目。
2. 句群层次的设空
指根据上下文的内容，经过推理判断可以得到答案的题目
3. 语篇性设空
指那些需要联系全文的情境、内容才能确定正确答案的设空。
文段细读，语篇连贯
话题一致性
语义连贯性
全篇思读，宏观把握
思维导图，理清架构
抓住主线，挖掘暗线
梳理结构，语篇衔接
语篇系统思维
综合逻辑分析
完形填空的解题策略
1
上下文逻辑关系
2
词法及词义辨析
4
语法知识
3
固定短语搭配
5
文化背景及生活常识
完形填空的微技能
① 表示并列：and，as well as，or，likewise(同样地)，similarly，in the meanwhile，meanwhile，neither...nor，either.or，not only.but also等；
② 表示列举：for example，for instance，such as等：
③ 表示递进furthermore，in addition，moreover，besides，what＇s more，worse still，to make things worse，even等：
④ 表示顺承：then等；
⑤ 表示转折：however，but，nevertheless，yet，while，on the contrary等；
⑥ 表示让步：although，.though，even though/.if，despite，in spite of，anyhow/anyway(口语、常作干扰项)，as（倒装），while(虽然、尽管、即使)，still(尽管如此)等：
⑦ 表示因果目的：because，since，for，as，so，therefore，thus，in order to，consequently等：
⑧ 表示条件：if，unless，.once，on condition that等；
⑨ 表示时间：before，after，while，until等：
⑩ 表示对比：instead of，instead等，
逻辑关系
主题语境 人与社会
体裁类型 记叙文
内容导读
文章讲述了本篇讲述了“我”住在Garfagnana时邻居送来了自家的食品-畸形的西红柿和浑浊的酒，起初感觉不是很好，但是尝试过后，发现比超市的好，从而引发了我对这件事情的思考和感悟。
主题 体现了不要以貌取人，要树立正确的人生观，价值观，世界观。
真题完形填空分析
考点分布
词性 题号
动词（8个） 41，42，44，50，54，56，59，60
名词（4个） 43，45，52，53
形容词（6个） 46，47，48，51，55，57
短语（2个） 49，58
Many years ago, I bought a house in the Garfagnana, where we still go every summer. The first time we 41 there, we heard the chug chug-chug of a motorbike 42 its way down the hill toward us. It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tomatoes and a bottle of wine. It was a very nice 45 for him to make. But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen: not at all like the nice, round, 47 things you get in a supermarket. And the wine was cloudy, in a funny old bottle with no label(标签) on it. These can’t be any 48 , we thought. But we were 49 his kindness, so we 50 them.
What we discovered is that it’s 51 to judge what you can’t only by its 52 . Those tomatoes had 53 that reminded me of the ones my uncle used to grow when I was a child. Nowadays supermarket tomatoes 54 perfect but taste of water. Nobody’s going to have a
55 memory of those. It’s a surprise they haven’t managed to grow square ones so that they can 56 them easily. Mario’s wine may have been cloudy and come out of an old bottle, but it was 57 .
It’s good to eat things at the correct time, when they’re 58 and as close as possible to where they were 59 . What Mario had 60 us was the taste of the Garfagnana.
Para 1：beginning刚搬来时，邻居给我了奇形怪状的土豆和包装老旧的红酒，不好婉拒只能接受了。
Para 2: development
→ending
但是尝试过后，我意识到自己的错误，发现这些东西比超市的好。
Para3: conclusion
在正确的时间，任由植物发展，不在乎其外貌，人也亦如此。
Many years ago, I bought a house in the Garfagnana, where we still go every summer. The first time we 41 there, we heard the chug chug-chug of a motorbike 42 its way down the hill toward us. It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tomatoes and a bottle of wine.
41 A.waited B. met C. camped D. stayed
v.
42 A. making B. searching C. squeezing D. feeling
v.
43 A.customer B.neighbor C. relative D. passenger
n.
44 A.lend B. send C. bring D. show
v.
上下语境
等待
露营
停留
固定搭配
挤压
顾客
亲戚
邻居
乘客
上下语境
make one’s way 前进，前往
What Mario had 20 us was the taste of the Garfagnana.
It was a very nice 45 for him to make. But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen: not at all like the nice, round, 47 things you get in a supermarket.
45 A.choice B. comment C. promise D.gesture
n.
46 A. worried B. moved C.thrilled D. bored
v.
47 A. simple B. real C. shiny D. fun
adj.
承诺
姿势
感动的
激动的
无聊的
选择
评论
上下语境
情感态度
简单的
闪光的
语义场
担忧的
It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tomatoes and a bottle of wine.
And the wine was cloudy, in a funny old bottle with no label(标签) on it. These can’t be any 48 , we thought. But we were 49 his kindness, so we 50 them.
48 A.more B. good C. new D. easy
adj.
49 A.sympathetic to B. thankful for C. cautious about D. interested in
50 A. tried B. sold C. retured D. mixed
v.
上下语境
逻辑推理
逻辑推理
对…有好感
对…感激
对…谨慎
be no good | not be any/much good没用处/好处
What we discovered is that it’s 51 to judge what you can’t only by its 52 . Those tomatoes had 53 that reminded me of the ones my uncle used to grow when I was a child.
51 A. unnecessary B. uncertain C.unwise D. unusual
adj.
52 A. appearance B. quality C.origin D. price
n.
53 A. size B. shape C.color D. taste
n.
上下语境
上下语境
不明智的
不平常的
没有必要的
不确定的
长相
But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen:
Nowadays super-market tomatoes 54 perfect but taste of water.
质量
起源
同词复现
Nowadays super-market tomatoes 54 perfect but taste of water. Nobody’s going to have 55 memory of those. It’s a surprise they haven’t managed to grow square ones so that they can 56 them easily. Mario’s wine may have been cloudy and come out of an old bottle, but it was 57 .
54 A. smell B. look C. become D.work
v.
55 A. happy B. vivid C.short D. vague
adj.
56 A. clean B.check C. count D. pack
adj.
57 A. perfect B. useful C.convenient D. familiar
adj.
逻辑推理
上下语境
生动的
模糊的
打包
数数
逻辑推理
反义复现
熟悉的
It’s good to eat things at the correct time, when they’re 58 and as close as possible to where they were 59 .What Mario had 60 us was the taste of the Garfagnana.
58 A.on view B. on sale C. in season D. in need
59 A. finished B. stored C. found D. grown
v.
60 A. cooked B. given C. bought D. told
v.
上下语境
生活常识
当季的
需求中
在展览
出售
But when we looked at the tomatoes, we were 46 because they were so misshapen:
It was 43 called Mario, coming to 44 us a box containing some tormatoes and a bottle of wine.”
词汇积累
make one’s way
make a nice gesture
misshapen
shiny
Cloudy
not be any/much good
be sympathetic to
judge by appearance
Squeeze
Vague
on view
in season
前进,前往
做出友好的表示
adj. 畸形的；奇形怪状的
发亮的；闪光的
【熟词生义】浑浊的
没用处/好处
对…同情的
以貌取人
挤压
模糊的
在展览
当季
◆解题前 单纯求快,忽略语篇理解。
◆解题中 ①对文意分析不透,忽视特定语境下知识的运用。
②缺乏必要的语言知识。
③时间安排不当
④存在畏惧心理。
◆解题后 没有重新通读全文,修改答案的习惯
完形填空时我们存在的问题
语法填空
语篇类型：说明文
主题语境：人与社会
文章介绍了寓言的形式在今天仍然具有价值。主要介绍了雷切尔·卡森的《明日寓言》与传统寓言的不同。
For thousands of years, people have told fables (寓言) ___61___ (teach) a lesson or to pass on wisdom. Fables were part of the oral tradition of many early cultures, and the well-known Aesop’s fables date to the ___62___ (six) century, B. C. Yet, the form of the fable still has values today, ___63___ Rachel Carson says in “A Fable for Tomorrow”
Carson uses a simple, direct style common to fable. In fact, her style and tone (口吻) are seemingly directed at children. “There was once a town in the heart of America, ___64___ all life seemed to enjoy peaceful existence with is surroundings,” her fable begins, ___65___ (borrow) some familiar words from many age-old fables. Behind the simple style, however, is a serious message ___66___ (intend) for everyone.
___67___ (difference) from traditional fables, Carson’s story ends with an accusation instead of a moral. She warns of the environmental dangers facing society, and she teaches that people must take responsibility ___68___ saving their environment.
The themes of traditional fables often deal with simple truths about everyday life. However, Cason’s theme is a more weighty ___69___ (warn) about environmental destruction. Carson proves that a simple lyric form that has been passed down through the ages can still ____70____ (employ) today to draw attention to important truths.
to teach
sixth
as
where
borrowing
intended
Different
for
warning
be employed
题号 考点
61 非谓语动词
62 数词
63 定语从句
64 定语从句
65 非谓语动词
66 非谓语动词
67 形容词
68 介词
69 名词
70 动词语态
63. 考查as引导非限制性定语从句。句意:然而，寓言的形式在今天仍有价值，正如雷切尔卡森在《明天的寓言》中所说的那样。“as”意为“正如，就像”。
64. 考查where引导的定语从句。句意:在美国的中心地带曾经有一个小镇,那里的所有生命似乎都在享受着与周围环境的和平共处。此处用where引导的定语从句修饰先行词a town,表明“在这个小镇上”。
66. 考查非谓语动词。句意：然而，在简洁的风格背后，是每个人都想要传达的严肃信息。be intended for打算为……所用，在句中作定语，所以用过去分词形式。
69.考查名词。句意：然而，卡森的主题是对环境破坏的更严重警告。形容词weighty后接名词形式。根据句中不定冠词a可知，用可数名词的单数形式。
重要词汇
pass on wisdom
oral tradition
Be directed at
intend for
ends with an accusation
take responsibility for
environmental destruction
passed down
draw attention to
传递智慧
口头传统
被引导到
打算用于
以指控结束
承担责任
环境破坏
传承下来
注意
1. Carson proves that a simple lyric form that has been passed down through the ages can still be employed today to draw attention to important truths.
长难句分析
翻译：卡森证明，一种流传多年的简单抒情形式今天仍然可以用来引起人们对重要真理的关注。
To do非谓语，表目的
that引导宾语从句
主干: Carson proves
That引导定语从句,修饰先行词a simple lyric form
投稿
2023全国甲卷 应用文
介绍中国历史人物
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。
审 题
文体：
主题：
要点：
1.人物简介
2. 人物主要事迹
3.人物带来的启示或意义
投稿
中国历史人物
时态：
人称：
一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅；
第三人称
Para 1. 引出历史人物+历史人物简介
框架构思
框架构思
Para 2. 历史人物主要事迹
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。
Para 3. 历史人物带来的启示或意义
学生可能存在的问题
描写的人物不是历史人物
1.内容
启示或意义与该人物主要事迹不相关
审题
语言
1. 事迹描写逻辑不清晰，表达不准确，中式英语频现。
2. 词性混乱，逗号连接2句话，从句引导词错误，长句中
主句没有谓语等
卷面
1.书写潦草，卷面不整洁
2.字数不够或太多
Brainstorm 10个历史人物及简介
1.孔子:中国古代伟大的哲学家、教育家和政治家，儒家思想的创始人。
Confucius: A great ancient Chinese philosopher, educator, and politician, the founder of Confucianism.
2.秦始皇:第一个统一了中国，建立了封建制度的皇帝。
Qin Shi Huang: The first emperor who unified China and established the feudal system.
3.汉武帝：中国历史上最有影响力的皇帝之一，他创造了汉朝的黄金时代。
Emperor Wu of Han: One of the most influential emperors in Chinese history, who created the golden age of the Han Dynasty.
Brainstorm 10个历史人物及简介
4.刘备:三国时期蜀汉的创始人，俗称仁爱绅士。”
Liu Bei: The founder of Shu Han during the Three Kingdoms period, known as a "gentleman of benevolence”.
5.曹操:三国时期魏国的创始人，为一位杰出的战略家和中国历史上有争议的人物。
Cao Cao: The founder of Wei during the Three Kingdoms period, known as a brilliant strategist and a controversial figure in Chinese history.
6. 孙中山：中国现代民主革命的先驱者，被称为“民主革命之父”。” Sun Yat-sen: The pioneer of China's modern democratic revolution, known as the "father of the democratic revolution.
Brainstorm 10个历史人物
7.毛泽东：中华人民共和国的创始人之一，中国现代历史上最有影响力的政治家之一。
Mao Zedong: one of the founders of the People's Republic of China and one of the most influential politicians in modern Chinese history.
8. 李世民:唐朝的开国皇帝，他是贞观王朝的创始人。
Li Shimin: The founding emperor of the Tang Dynasty, known as the creator of the “Zhenguan Reign”.
9.玄奘:唐代著名的佛教僧人，以他去印度获取佛经而闻名。
Xuanzang: A famous Buddhist monk during the Tang Dynasty, known for his journey to India to obtain Buddhist scriptures.
10.韩愈:唐代著名的作家、思想家、政治家，是著名的唐、宋八大家之一
Han Yu: A famous writer, thinker, and politician during the Tang Dynasty, known as one of the "Eight Great Prose Masters of the Tang and Song Dynasties."
Brainstorm 毛主席主要事迹与意义
Mao Zedong was a Chinese revolutionary and politician who led the Communist Party of China to victory in the Chinese Civil War. He established the People's Republic of China in 1949 and served as its Chairman until his death in 1976. Mao's contributions to Marxist theory, socialist policies, and modernization of China's economy and society are significant. However, his policies also led to disastrous consequences like the Great Leap Forward and the Cultural Revolution. Mao's legacy remains controversial, but his leadership and vision have left a lasting impact on China and the world. His emphasis on self-reliance, mass mobilization, and continuous revolution inspired many revolutionary movements around the world. Mao's life teaches us the importance of leadership, and vision, and the need to balance ideology with practicality.
毛泽东是中国的革命家和政治家，他曾领导中国共产党在中国内战中取得胜利。他于1949年成立了中华人民共和国，并一直担任其主席，直到1976年去世。毛对马克思主义理论、社会主义政策和中国经济和社会现代化的贡献是重要的。然而，他的政策也导致了灾难性的后果，如大跃进和文化大革命。毛的遗产仍然存在争议，但他的领导能力和愿景已经对中国和世界留下了持久的影响。他对自力更生、大规模动员和持续革命的强调激发了世界各地的许多革命运动。毛的生活告诉我们，领导能力、愿景的重要性，以及平衡意识形态和实用性的必要性。
Brainstorm 孙中山主要事迹与意义
Sun Yat-sen was a Chinese revolutionary and politician who played a crucial role in the overthrow of the Qing dynasty and the establishment of the Republic of China. He founded the Kuomintang party and served as its first provisional president. Sun's Three Principles of the People, which emphasized nationalism, democracy, and people's livelihood, became the foundation of the Republic of China's political philosophy. Sun's legacy remains significant in modern China, as his ideas continue to influence political discourse. His life teaches us the importance of perseverance, leadership, and the need to balance ideology with practicality. Sun's vision of a modern, democratic China continues to inspire generations of Chinese people to strive for a better future.
孙中山是中国的革命者和政治家，他在推翻清朝和中华民国的建立过程中发挥了关键作用。他创立了国民党，并担任了国民党的第一任临时主席。孙提出的强调民族主义、民主和民生的《人民三大原则》，成为中华民国政治哲学的基础。孙的遗产在现代中国仍然很重要，因为他的思想继续影响着政治话语。他的生活教会了我们毅力、领导能力的重要性，以及平衡意识形态和实用性的必要性。孙的现代民主中国的愿景继续激励着一代代中国人为更美好的未来而奋斗。
Brainstorm 孔子主要事迹与意义
As a great philosopher and educator in ancient China, Confucius has left a profound impact on Chinese culture and society. Born in 551 BC, Confucius devoted his life to teaching and spreading his philosophy, which emphasized the importance of morality, education, and social order. His teachings have influenced generations of Chinese people and have become an integral part of Chinese culture. Confucius believed that education was the key to a harmonious society and that individuals should strive to become better people through self-cultivation. His teachings have inspired many to pursue knowledge and wisdom, and his legacy continues to shape Chinese society today. Confucius' life and teachings remind us of the importance of education, morality, and social harmony, and his wisdom continues to inspire people around the world.
孔子作为中国古代伟大的哲学家和教育家，对中国文化和社会产生了深远的影响。孔子出生于公元前551年，他的一生都致力于教学和传播他的哲学，其中强调了道德、教育和社会秩序的重要性。他的教导影响了几代中国人，并成为中国文化不可分割的一部分。孔子认为，教育是建立一个和谐社会的关键，个人应该通过自我修养来努力成为更好的人。他的教导激发了许多人去追求知识和智慧，他的遗产继续塑造着今天的中国社会。孔子的生活和教导提醒我们，教育、道德和社会和谐的重要性，他的智慧继续激励着世界各地的人们。
Brainstorm 汉武帝主要事迹与意义
Emperor Wu of Han, also known as Han Wudi, is one of the most significant emperors in Chinese history. He expanded the Han Dynasty's territory through military conquests, established a centralized government, and implemented policies to benefit the people, such as the promotion of Confucianism and the establishment of a state monopoly on iron and salt. He also sent envoys to explore and establish diplomatic relations with neighboring countries, which helped to spread Chinese culture and influence. His legacy serves as a reminder of the importance of strong leadership, cultural exchange, and innovation. His achievements laid the foundation for a prosperous and stable Han Dynasty, and his influence can still be seen in modern China today.
汉武帝，又称汉武帝，是中国历史上最重要的皇帝之一。他通过军事征服扩大了汉朝的领土，建立了中央集权政府，并实施了有利于人民的政策，如促进儒家思想和建立了国家的铁和盐垄断。他还派特使探索并与邻国建立外交关系，帮助传播中国文化和影响力。他的遗产提醒着人们，强大的领导力、文化交流和创新的重要性。他的成就为汉朝的繁荣和稳定奠定了基础，他的影响至今仍在现代中国可见。
Brainstorm 李世民主要事迹与意义
Li Shimin, also known as Emperor Taizong of Tang, is one of the most respected and admired emperors in Chinese history. He was a military strategist, a wise ruler, and a patron of the arts. He expanded the Tang Dynasty's territory through military conquests, established a merit-based system for government officials, and implemented policies to benefit the people. He also encouraged the development of literature, art, and music, which led to a flourishing of culture during his reign. His legacy serves as a reminder of the importance of good governance, leadership, and cultural patronage. His achievements laid the foundation for a golden age of Chinese civilization, and his influence can still be felt in modern China today.
李世民，又称唐太宗，是中国历史上最受人尊敬的皇帝之一。他是一位军事战略家，一位明智的统治者和艺术的赞助人。他通过军事征服扩大了唐朝的领土，为政府官员建立了基于功绩的制度，并实施了造福人民的政策。他还鼓励文学、艺术和音乐的发展，这导致了他统治期间文化的繁荣。他的遗产提醒着人们，良好的治理、领导能力和文化赞助的重要性。他的成就为中华文明的黄金时代奠定了基础，他的影响至今仍能在现代中国感受到。
Brainstorm 秦始皇主要事迹与意义
Qin Shi Huang, the first emperor of China, is a legendary figure in Chinese history. He is known for his military conquests, unification of China, and construction of the Great Wall and the Terracotta Army. He also standardized the writing system, weights and measures, and currency. However, his reign was also marked by the burning of books and the burying of scholars, which limited intellectual freedom. His legacy serves as a reminder of the importance of strong leadership and centralized government, but also the dangers of authoritarianism and suppression of dissent. His achievements laid the foundation for a unified China and influenced Chinese political and cultural development for centuries.
秦始皇是中国的第一位皇帝，是中国历史上的一个传奇人物。他以军事征服、统一中国、建造长城和兵马俑而闻名。他还标准化了书写系统、度量表和货币。然而，他的统治也以烧毁书籍和埋葬学者为标志，这限制了知识自由。他的遗产提醒人们，强大的领导和中央集权政府的重要性，也提醒人们，威权主义和镇压异见的危险。他的成就为统一的中国奠定了基础，影响了中国几个世纪以来的政治文化发展。
Brainstorm 岳飞主要事迹与意义
Yue Fei was a famous Chinese general and national hero during the Southern Song Dynasty. He was known for his loyalty, bravery, and patriotism. Yue Fei led his army to defeat the invading enemies several times and made great contributions to the defense of the country. He also advocated for the education of the common people and the promotion of Confucianism. His spirit of loyalty and patriotism has been admired by generations of Chinese people. The story of Yue Fei teaches us the importance of national defense and the spirit of patriotism. It also reminds us that we should always be loyal to our country and people, and strive to make contributions to the development and prosperity of our nation.
岳飞是南宋时期中国著名的将军和民族英雄。他以其忠诚、勇敢和爱国主义而闻名。岳飞带领他的军队多次击败了入侵的敌人，为保卫国家做出了巨大的贡献。他还提倡教育平民百姓和推广儒家思想。他的忠诚和爱国精神受到几代中国人民的钦佩。岳飞的故事告诉我们国防的重要性和爱国精神的精神。它还提醒我们，我们应该始终忠于我们的国家和人民，并努力为我们国家的发展和繁荣作出贡献。
1.我们在生活中可以做无数的事情。随着时间的推移，其中一些可能很容易被遗忘，而另一些总是能给我们留下深刻印象。我打算分享一下我做过的最有意义的事情。
We may do countless things in our life. With time going by, some of them may be easily forgotten, while others can always impress themselves on our hearts. I intend to share the most meaningful thing I did.
2.读到“最好的朋友”这个词，我的脑海里出现了一个人影——她是我的高中同学张叶。在高中的三年里，我们分享了无数时刻的欢笑、泪水、欢乐和悲伤。
Upon reading the expression “best friend”, a figure jumps into my mind-Zhang Ye, my schoolmate in senior high school. During the three years in senior high school, we shared countless moments of laughter and tears, joy and sorrow.
语言积累---写人写事类开头高频句式
3.如果有人问我“谁是我一生中最令人难忘/最能干的人”，我的回答就是我的中文老师，陈女士。是她的特质给我留下了深刻的印象和影响。
If I am asked “who is the most unforgettable/respectable person in my life”, my answer would be my Chinese teacher, Mrs. Chen. It is her special quality that has impressed and affected me deeply.
4. 我们周围有很多值得尊敬的人。他们可能是我们的老师、父母或我们的长辈之一。至于我，我的英语老师李女士是我最尊敬的人。正是她的乐于助人和善良使她在学生中大受欢迎。
We have plenty of respectable people around us. They are possibly our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, Mrs. Li, my English teacher, is the person I respect most. It is her helpfulness and kindness that win her great popularity among students.
语言积累---写人写事类开头高频句式
1.游学结束了，但它有深远的 影响。多亏了这次旅行，我们不仅提高了我们的沟通能力，而且我们对英国文化有了更好的了解，这扩大了我的知识，拓宽了我的视野。
The study tour came to an end, but it has a far -reaching influence. Thanks to the tour, not only have we improved our communicational skills, but we've also got a better understanding of British culture, which enlarge my knowledge and broaden my horizons.
2.只有通过这次经历，我才意识到，小事可以对我们的生活产生很大的影响。我会不遗余力地帮助那些有需要的人。多么有意义和富有成效的经历啊。
Only through this experience did I realize that small things could make a big difference in our life. I will spare no effort to offer my help to those in need. What a meaningful and fruitful experience.
3.总之，这种经历让我能够体验到帮助他人的快乐。同时,它给了我一个学习的机会。正是这种活动进一步加深了师生之间的关系。
In a word, this experience enables me to experience the happiness of helping others. Meanwhile，it offers me a chance to learn. It was this activity that further deepened the relationship between the teacher and students.
语言积累---写人写事类结尾高频句式
应用文高考评分标准
分值 评分标准说明
第一档： 13-15分 完全完成时试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多样丰富的地道和得体的句式与词汇；语法和用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富内容所致；体现了较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语句间连接成分，逻辑清晰合理，所写内容连贯、紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档： 10-12分 完全完成时试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用的句式与词汇能满足任务要求；语法和用词方面基本准确、有少许错误，为尽可能表达丰富内容所致；使用了简单句间的连接成分，逻辑清晰合理，所写内容连贯，达到预期的写作目的。
第三档： 7-9分 覆盖了主要内容要点；运用的句式与词汇基本能满足任务要求；语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解；基本达到预期的写作目的。
第四档： 4-6分 未恰当完成试题规定的任务，漏掉或未清楚描述主要内容，所用句式和词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，未能清楚地传达信息。
第五档： 1-3分 未完成试题规定的任务，明显遗漏主要内容。句式单调、词汇贫乏。语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解
0分档 未能传达任何信息：所写内容与要求无关。
评分标准
档次 给分 比例 评分标准
第五档 13-15 20% 语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚，有亮点表达
第四档 10-12 50% 语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚
第三档 7-9 24% 语言有一些错误，尚能表达
第二档 4-6 5% 语言错误较多，影响表达
第一档 0-3 1% 只能写出与要求内容有关的一些单词
应用文高考考核的能力
TA: Task Achievement(任务完成)--1
TR: Task Response(任务回应)--2
CC: Coherence & Cohesion
（内容连贯与篇章衔接）
GRA:
Grammatical
Range and Accuracy
（语法范围与精确性)
LR:Lexical Resource
（词汇资源)
语言能力
思维能力
As a history lover, many influential historic figures are engraved in my mind. But what comes to my mind first is Sun Yat-sen. Sun Yat-sen was a Chinese revolutionary and politician who played a crucial role in overthrowing the Qing dynasty and founding the Republic of China.
Born in 1866 in Guangdong province, Sun was educated in Hawaii and Hong Kong, where he was exposed to Western ideas and political systems. Sun founded the Revive China Society in 1894, which aimed to establish a democratic government in China. Despite facing numerous setbacks and challenges, Sun never gave up on his dream and finally succeeded in 1911, when the Republic of China was established.
Sun Yat-sen's life and achievements serve as a reminder of the importance of perseverance and determination in the face of adversity. Additionally, his vision and leadership inspired countless others to fight for democracy, freedom, and equality. and eventually strive for a better future.
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As a history lover, (很多历史人物刻在我的脑海里). But what comes to my mind first is Sun Yat-sen. Sun Yat-sen was a Chinese revolutionary and politician ___________________
______(起着关键角色)overthrowing the Qing dynasty and founding the Republic of China.
Born in 1866 in Guangdong province, Sun was educated in Hawaii and Hong Kong,______________________ (在那里，他接触了西方思想与政治体系). Sun founded the Revive China Society in 1894, which________________________(为了建立民主政府)in China. _________________________________________(尽管面对无数的挫折与挑战), Sun never gave up on his dream and finally succeeded in 1911, _________________________________(那时中华民国成立).
Sun Yat-sen‘s life and achievements ___________________________________ (提醒面对逆境时坚持与决心的重要性). Additionally, his vision and leadership inspired countless others to fight for democracy, freedom, and equality. and ____________________________（最终为更好的未来而努力）.
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人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
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The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
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There are many respectable people around us. As far as I'm concerned, the one who I respect most is my father, an ordinary but great doctor in his forties working in a hospital.
What touches me most is his full devotion to his work(主语从句). Not only is he patient with his patients but also he makes efforts to conduct medical research(倒装), hoping to find better cure(现在分词作伴随状语). Due to his brilliant contributions, he was titled as the Best Doctor in his hospital last year. Besides, as a responsible father, he always encourages me to overcome difficulties bravely and instructs me how to be a kind, generous and helpful man.
My father is setting a good example to me, which will have a lasting effect on my life.
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