上外版（2020）选择性必修第三册 Unit 1 Fighting Stress 建议信写作课件（共14张PPT）

(共14张PPT)
A letter of advice
建议信
一、建议信的写作框架
1. 介绍写作背景和写作目的；
2. 提出具体的建议及对应的原因；
3. 表达被采纳的希望或美好的祝愿。
二、写作建议信的注意事项
1. 明确写作要求和写作对象；
2. 文章架构清晰符合逻辑；
3. 文章用语容易让人接受；
4. 提出合理可行的建议。
建议信的常用句型：
1. 第一段阐明写信目的：
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to …
I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to …
It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on…
Knowing that you have trouble in doing…, I’m writing to give you some suggestions to deal with it. (较为高级)
建议信的常用句型：
2. 第二段提出建议：
My suggestions are as follows.
When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should do…
I’d like to suggest/advise that … should do…
You’d better do/ not do
I think it would be more beneficial if you could……
Why not do … / Why don’t you do …
What about… / How about…
建议信的常用句型：
3. 第三段结束语：
I hope that my suggestions are helpful to make your situation better.
I would be more than pleased to see your further improvement.
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious consideration/account.
If you have any other question, don’t hesitate to write to me.
General structure 1：
How is everything going with you Knowing that you are deeply concerned about…, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions to deal with this situation.
Here are my detailed suggestions. First and foremost, ... In addition, … (Moreover, …) Last but not least, …
To sum up, I sincerely hope that you can take my suggestions into serious account. And if you have any other question, please don’t hesitate to write to me. Best wishes!
范文赏析
I am really sorry to know that you have been caught in the dilemma about how to spend your summer holiday. It’s totally understandable since I was once in that situation, which is the reason why I am here to provide you with some advice that is hopefully of great help to you.
范文赏析
I hope the following suggestions are helpful to you. To begin with, I suggest that you should arrange your time step by step and make it clear when you should study or play. Were I you, I would set a goal for myself to read at least 10 books during the summer holiday, ensuring that I can absorb abundant knowledge and broaden my horizon. Furthermore, it would be better if you could regularly participate in volunteer services so that you can make your life more meaningful.
范文赏析
Last but not least, do keep it in mind that you should spend more time with your family in order to create a more harmonious atmosphere for yourself to live.
范文赏析
I do hope you can take my advice into consideration and nothing will excite me more than seeing you make more progress. Looking forward to your early reply.
The writing structure
Ending：Express the wish
Body: Give advice
Firstly
Beginning: Raise the problem
Besides
Lastly
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Write a letter of advice
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jordan今年寒假要来中国北京旅行。请你写封邮件给他提出建议，内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.你的建议；
3.你的希望。
A possible version
Dear Jordan,
Knowing that you’ll pay a visit to Beijing this winter holiday, I am delighted. Now I’ll give you some advice.
First, it’s freezing cold here, so you’d better wear some warm clothes. Second, you should know where to go. To tell the truth, there are so many places of interest that you shouldn’t miss. Take the Great Wall as an example. As an old saying goes, ‘‘He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.’’
I hope that you are certain to have a pleasant time.
Yours,
Li Hua
谢谢!