仁爱版九年级全一册Unit 2 Saving the earth.Topic 3 作文指导课件(共13张PPT)

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模块二　第三章　作文指导
地球是我们的家园。作为地球的主人，我们应该好好保护它。我国正在积极推进“碳达峰、碳中和”，作为中学生，我们应该怎样践行低碳生活呢？请你根据下面内容，用英语写一篇短文。词数80左右。
参考词汇：the low-carbon lifestyle低碳生活方式
注意事项：
1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
第一步：审题谋篇
(一)审题
1．确定体裁：本文是一篇介绍低碳生活的具体做法的____________(体裁)。
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为__________人称。
3．确定时态：以________________为主。
说明文
第一
一般现在时
(二)谋篇布局
for example
such as
and so on
be supposed to
第二步：推敲词汇
1．节约资源________________________
2. 节约用纸________________
3．用过的课本________________________
4. 砍伐______________
save the resources
save paper
the used textbooks
cut down
5．保护环境_____________________________
6. 吃光，吃完____________
7．对……有好处_________________
8. 在日常生活中___________________
protect the environment
eat up
be good for
in daily life
第三步：由词扩句
1．低碳生活方式对保护环境有好处。
The low-carbon lifestyle ________ __________ for ________________ the environment.
2．你可以试试这些方法。(过渡句)
________ _________ some methods for you.
is good
protecting
Here are
3．我们应该节约水、电。
We should __________ water and _________________.
4．我认为节约用纸很有必要。
I think ______ _______________ _____ ________ paper.
5．所有用过的课本应该要循环使用。
All the __________ _______________ should ________ ______________.
save
electricity
it's necessary to save
used textbooks
be recycled
第四步：句式升级
1．过低碳生活对保护环境有好处。
__________ a low-carbon lifestyle ________ ________ for ________________ the environment.
2．作为中学生，我们应该节约我们身边的资源，如水、电。
_________ middle school students, we should __________ the resources around us, _______ _____ water and _________________.
Having
is good
protecting
As
save
such as
electricity
3．我们还应该节约更多像大米一样的食物，并且吃光我们盘子里的所有食物。
Also, we _________ ______________ ________ save more food like rice and _________ ________ all the food in our plate.
4．如果每个人都能践行低碳生活，我们的地球将会越来越好。
_________ everyone can __________ a low-carbon lifestyle, our earth will be ____________ _________ ____________.
are supposed to
eat up
If
have
better and better
第五步：连句成篇
How to Make Our Earth Better
The earth is our home.
Everyone should protect our earth. Having a low-carbon lifestyle is good for protecting the environment. But how can we have a low-carbon lifestyle Here are some methods for you.
As middle school students, we should save the resources around us, such as water and electricity. I think saving paper is necessary in our daily life. All the used textbooks should be recycled. Then, cut down fewer trees. Also, we are supposed to save more food like rice and eat up all the food in our plate. Don't throw litter everywhere. We should keep the environment clean.
If everyone can have a low-carbon lifestyle, our earth will be better and better.