2022-2023学年仁爱版英语八年级下册期末作文预测-有意义的暑假课件(共17张PPT)

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确定人称时态
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话题：假期生活
暑假即将到来，作为即将踏入毕业班的你打算如何度过一个有意义的暑假呢？请你根据一下图标内容，以“A Meaningful Summer Holiday”为题，写一篇英语短文，词数80左右。
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列:逻辑顺序词+句式
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开头：As we know,......
结尾：In a word,....
plan to/want to/would like to
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it's a ..idea to do sth.
it's+meaningful for me to do sth.
列:逻辑顺序词+句式
范文：基础款
The summer holiday is coming soon. How can we make it meaningful Here are my plans. Fisrtly, I plan to do some reading after I finish my homework. Secondly, I’m going to do more exercise to keep healthy. What’s more, I will develop healthy eating habits. Thirdly, I will help my mother with some housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning. Last, it’s a good idea for me to learn to play the guitar.
In a word, I will make full use of time to spend a meaningful holiday.
范文：升级版
As we know, spending a meaningful summer holiday matters a lot. Here are my plans.
As the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man." So to start with, I plan to do some reading after I finish my homework. Next, it’s a good idea to develop healthy eating habits as well as doing more exercise to keep healthy . What’s more, I am willing to help my mother with some housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning. Last but not least, trying to help others in need is meaningful for me.
In a word, as long as I keep the plans in mind and put into practice, I truly believe that I will have a meaningful holiday.
提分亮点1
-谚语As the saying goes, “...”
1.Reading makes a full man."
读书使人充实。
2.Read ten thousand books， travel ten thousand miles.
读万卷书，行万里路
提分亮点2
句式+高级短语
1. 形式主语it’s a good idea to
2. 动名词做主语Doing sth. is.....
3.高级短语
be willing to do sth.乐意做某事
as well as,也，除此之外
as long as只要
keep in mind牢记在心
put intro practice 付诸实践
提分亮点3
副词的小词大用
In a word, as long as I keep the plans in mind and put into practice, I truly believe that I will have a meaningful holiday.
truly：真地
更能真切地表达情绪情感
同理：
deeply strongly really
其他活动类拓展表达
1.travel with their family and relax themselves
2.take up some hobbies, such as cooking,planting and playing basketball.
3.be a volunteer and help people
4.give my old clothes to the poor area
5.work on a farm
佳句赏析
阅读：
1.As for the reason why I like reading, I think it can not only help me relax but also open up my eyes to the outside world.
至于我喜欢阅读的原因，我认为它不仅能帮助我放松，而且还能打开我通往外面世界的视野。
2.Reading books can bring me comfort, knowledge and happiness.
读书能给我带来安慰、知识和快乐。
佳句赏析
音乐 listen to music
1.Music can bring me happiness. That’s why I plan to listen to some light music . 音乐能带给我快乐。这就是为什么我打算听一些轻音乐。
2.Music brings me comfort and peace of mind .
音乐带给我心灵的安慰和平静。
看电影Watch movies
Watching movies is so interesting that I fall in love with it deeply. 看电影是如此有趣，以至于我深深地爱上了它。
佳句赏析
旅行
I like travelling because I can go to different places and meet
different people.Sometimes I make good friends during the
iourney.
我喜欢旅游是因为我可以去不同的地方认识不同的人。有时候我
在旅途中交到了好朋友。
佳句赏析
做家务
Last I will help my mother do some housework. She was really tired when I was go to school. Except for taking care of me, she also has to work.
最后,我会帮我妈妈做些家务。我去学校的时候她真的很累。除了要照顾我
之外,她还要工作。
结合话题，灵活套用句式
In a word, as long as...,I strongly believe that...
In a word, as long as we make full use of our spare time, I strongly believe that we’ll live a more enjoyable and colorful life.
In a word, as long as we obey the safety rules,I strongly believe that we’ll live a safe and happy life.
Thank you!