仁爱版九年级英语全一册Unit 5 China and the world Topic 2 作文指导课件(共15张PPT)

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模块五　第二章　作文指导
你作为校园广播站的一名英语播报员，准备向全校学生介绍中国第一位进驻中国空间站的女宇航员王亚平。请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇广播稿。词数80左右。
个人信息 1980年1月出生于山东省；毕业于北京大学
主要事迹 1.从小就对太空感兴趣，1998年首次驾驶飞机驶上蓝天；
2.曾驾驶飞机去汶川救援，并于2010年成为宇航员；
3.2022年获得“二级航天功勋奖章”
评价 坚韧不拔，不怕困难
注意事项：
1.字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Second-grade Space Service Medal二级航天功勋奖章　persevering坚韧不拔的
第一步：审题谋篇
(一)审题
1．确定体裁：本文是介绍女宇航员王亚平主要事迹的广播稿，是一篇_________(体裁)。
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为______________人称。
3．确定时态：以____________________和____________________为主。
应用文
第三
一般现在时
一般过去时
(二)谋篇布局
时间
第二步：推敲词汇
1．从……毕业__________________________　
2. 对……感兴趣__________________________________________________
3．飞向天空________________________
4. 救人_____________________
graduate from...
be interested in.../show interest in...
fly to the sky
save people
5．被誉为_______________________
6. 害怕……_________________________
7．向……学习_______________________
8. 为……作贡献__________________________________
be honored as
be afraid of...
learn from...
make contributions to...
第三步：由词扩句
1．王亚平于1980年1月出生于山东省。
Wang Yaping ________ _________ in January, 1980 in Shandong Province.
was born
2．她从小就对太空感兴趣。
She _________ _____________ ________ space when she was little./She has __________ ___________ ________ space since she was little.
was interested in
showed interest in
3．1998年她首次驾驶飞机驶上蓝天。
She _________ _______ the blue sky in a plane in 1998 ________ ______ _______ ______.
flew to
for the
first time
4．她曾驾驶飞机去汶川救人，并于2010年成为宇航员。
She _________ __________ _______ Wenchuan to save people and she became an astronaut in 2010.
5．她获得“二级航天功勋奖章”。
She _____________ the Second-grade Space Service Medal.
once flew to
received
第四步：句式升级
1．王亚平，1980年1月出生于山东省，毕业于北京大学。
Wang Yaping ________ _________ in January, 1980 in Shandong Province and __________ ________ Peking University.
was born
graduated from
2．她如此杰出，于2022年获得“二级航天功勋奖章”。
So ___________ was she that she _______________ the Second-grade Space Service Medal in 2022.
3．她是坚韧不拔、不怕困难的伟大宇航员。
She is a great astronaut who is persevering and _________ ________ _______ difficulties.
excellent
received
not afraid of
第五步：连句成篇
Wang Yaping is the first woman astronaut to enter China's space station.
She was born in January, 1980 in Shandong Province and graduated from Peking University. Here are some important events in her life.
Wang has showed great interest in space since she was little. She flew to the blue sky in a plane in 1998 for the first time. What's more, she once flew to Wenchuan to save people. After that, she became an astronaut in 2010. So excellent was she that she received the Second-grade Space Service Medal in 2022.
Wang Yaping is a great astronaut who is persevering and not afraid of difficulties. As students, we should learn from her and make contributions to our country.