牛津深圳版九年级上册Module 2 Ideas and viewpoints Unit4 Writing课件(共21张PPT)

(共21张PPT)
U4 Writing
Problems and advice
Retell the passage
on a diet
ashamed of himself
embarrassed
her sister
makes a mess
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Anna is worried about her friend Jolin. Jolin is too thin but she still thinks she's fat. She is always on a diet and she is getting too thin.
Peter feels ashamed of himself. His friend laughed at a sick lady but he didn't say anything.
Simon feels embarrassed when he smiles or opens his mouth. His friends laugh at him and say bad things about him when he wears braces.
Julie is annoyed with her sister. Her sister is too noisy. She always takes her things without telling her and she always makes a mess.
Discussion:
How to help them solve their problems
Can you give them some advice
Read Aunt Linda’s replies to the Internet posts on page 51. Then complete the table below.
Aunt Linda’s suggestions
To Anna
To Peter
You should try to get Jolin to see a doctor.
You should also tell her that she’s not alone—we all worry about our looks sometimes.
You should make up your own mind in the same situation next time.
You shouldn’t listen to your friends.
Aunt Linda’s suggestions
To Simon
To Julie
You should stop paying attention to your friends.
You should think of the beautiful, straight teeth you’ll have in a few months’ time.
You should talk to your sister more.
You should try spending some time with her every day.
What makes a good reply
Problem to solve Simon feels ashamed of himself.
I believe you’ve learnt an important lesson— you’ll regret it if you don’t do the right thing at the right moment. Next time in the same situation, you should make up your own mind. You shouldn’t listen to your friends. It was awful of them to laugh at a sick lady.
comfort
suggestion
comment
Problem to solve How to stop being shy.
comfort
suggestion
What makes a good reply
Comment/En-couragement
Sympathy & comfort
Suggestions
Supports: If…/Unless/ It’s…to..
encouragements
How to write a reply
Check list of
your homework:
一、格式及篇章结构是否合理：
三段：
安抚？
建议？
评价或鼓励？
二、语法、拼写、符号是否使用正确
时态一致 (无出现 He was…… He also show……)
主谓一致 (无出现He were……)
单复数得当（无出现 a students）
大小写得当 (无出现 . when)
一句话中只有一个谓语（无出现 He was went……）
连接词 （However, /Therefore, …）
好的表达，如：What’s more…
三、字迹工整，清晰
Have a try!
审题：
时态 2. 人称
Structure
第一段：
Comfort(安慰)
第二段：
Suggestions(建议)
第三段：
Comments/ Encouragement
（鼓励）
Sentence Pattern:
第一段：Comfort(安慰)
I am sorry to hear that…..
Lots of/ Many……so, you are not alone.
Here are my suggestions.
My suggestions are as follows.
Here I’ll share with you my suggestions.
I’ll try to make some constructive suggestions.
Sentence Pattern:
第二段：Suggestions(建议)
First… Second…Third
Firstly…secondly…Finally
Firstly…Besides…Moreover/
what’s more
First of all…In addition…
Last but not least
I think you are supposed to….
I’d like to suggest that…..
I think it would be wise to take
the following actions.
Sentence Pattern:
第二段：Suggestions(建议)
Ways to give suggestions:
It’s a good idea to...
It’s important for you to...
You can do…/ You can’t do…
Do…/ Don’t do…
You should do …/ You shouldn’t do…
You need to do…/ You don’t need to do…
You’d better do…/ You’d better not do…
Why don’t you do… / Why not do…
How/ What about doing…
You can consider doing
Sentence Pattern:
第三段：Comments/
Encouragement（鼓励）
in my opinion
personally speaking,
In my eyes
As far as I am concerned
I hope my suggestions will be helpful
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this aspect.
Have a try!
Check list
一、篇章结构是否合理：
三段：
安抚？
建议？
评价或鼓励？
二、要点是否齐全、观点是否完整
四个要点及以上
三、语法、拼写、符号是否使用正确
时态一致 (无出现 He was…… He also show……)
主谓一致 (无出现He were……)
单复数得当（无出现 a students）
大小写得当 (无出现 . when)
一句话中只有一个谓语（无出现 He was went……）
连接词 （However, /Therefore, …）
好的表达，如：What’s more…
四、字迹工整，清晰
Dear Juliana,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about your exams. Don’ be so nervous. Because many students have the same trouble. You are not alone. And I can give you some suggestions.
First of all, I think one of the most important things to do is to make a plan. Then, you can have enough time to revise them. Secondly, you should go to bed early and have a good sleep. In order that, you will feel good the next morning. Besides, you’d better have a good breakfast and you can eat some bread, milk, fruit and so on. Food can give you energy. What’s more, I think you don't be too nervous about the exams, and it can help you think clearly. I hope my advice will be useful for you.
Yours,
Li Ming