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《八十天环游地球》(Around the World in 80 Days)是“世界科幻小说之父”儒勒·凡尔纳(Jules Verne)的一部科幻小说，描写了富有的英国绅士福克先生(Mr. Fogg)和朋友打赌，自己在八十天内环游地球一周，朋友们都不相信，如果一旦输了，福克先生将会倾家荡产。 福克先生非常自信，意志坚定，克服了种种障碍，最终成功了。通过阅读此书我们可以了解世界各地的民俗，并坚信无论我们做什么，只要坚持不懈地去实践，最后一定会成功。
注意：
1. 可根据内容需要适当拓展，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数100左右。参考范文
Review of Around the World in 80 Days by Jules Verne
This book tells the story of Mr. Fogg, a rich English gentleman, who succeeds in traveling around the world in eighty days. Mr. Fogg makes a bet with his friends that he can travel around the world in eighty days. During his journey, he meets a lot of difficulty. Faced with various setbacks, he never gives up and his effort pays off in the end. Besides, among the characters of this story, I like Mr. Fogg best, a strong-minded person with self-confidence.I enjoy this book. For one thing, I can learn about diverse customs of different parts of the world; for another, it convinces me that no matter what we do, if we persevere with it, we will succeed in the end.一句多译
1. 福克先生是一位富有的英国绅士，他成功地在80天之内环游地球。
Mr. Fogg, who is a rich English gentleman, succeeds in traveling around the world in eighty days.
Mr. Fogg, a rich English gentleman, succeeds in traveling around the world in eighty days.
Mr. Fogg is a rich English gentleman and he succeeds in traveling around the world in eighty days.2. 面对各种各样的挫折，他从不放弃。
Faced with various setbacks, he never gives up.
Facing all kinds of setbacks, he never gives up.
When he is faced with various setbacks, he never gives up.3. 此外，在这个故事的所有人物中，我最喜欢福克先生。
Besides/Moreover, among the characters of this story, I like Mr. Fogg best.
What's more, among the characters of this story, Mr. Fogg is the character that I like best.
In addition, among the characters of this story, I like Mr. Fogg better than any other character.4. 如果我们坚持不懈，我们最后一定会成功。
If we persevere with it, we will succeed in the end.
We will succeed in the end as/so long as we persevere with it.
Persevere with it and we will succeed in the end.
Persevering with it, we will succeed in the end.01 基础回顾感悟1．________adj.抽象的；深奥的n.摘要
2．________n．目标；目的vi.&vt.瞄准；(向目标方向)努力
3．________vt.采用；采纳；收养
4．________n．努力；尝试；企图vt.尝试；企图
5．________adj.确切的；特定的
6．________n．展览；陈列；展览会
7．________vi.有感染力；呼吸；求助vt.将……上诉n.呼吁；恳求8．________n．信任；信心；信念→________adj.忠实的；守信用的→________adv.忠实地
9．________adj.典型的；有代表性的→________n．类型；典型
10．________vt.拥有；具有；支配→________n．(尤作复数)所有；财产
11．________n．巧合(的事)；(事情、口味、故事等)相结合
12．________vt.预言；预告；预测→________n．预言→________n．预言者13．________n．喜爱；偏爱→________v．喜爱；偏爱
14．________n．文明；文化；文明；文明社会→________v．使文明；使开化
[答案]
1. abstract' 2. aim '3. adopt 4. attempt'5. specific
6. exhibition ' 7. appeal'8. faith; faithful; faithfully
9. typical; type'10. possess; possession 11. coincidence
12. predict; prediction; predictor 13. preference; prefer
14. civilization; civilize1. 集中 ______________
2. 也；还；而且 ______________
3. 巧合地 ______________
4. 在19世纪晚期 ______________
5. 大量 ______________
6. 导致 ______________
7. 大量的…… ______________8. (可是)另一方面 ______________
9. 活着的；本人 ______________
10. 偏爱 ______________
11. (对某人)有吸引力；(使某人)感兴趣
______________
12. 在于；位于 ______________[答案]
1. concentrate on 2. as well as 3. by coincidence
4. in the late 19th century 5. a great deal 6. lead to
7. scores of... 8. on the other hand 9. in the flesh
10. have a preference for 11. appeal to 12. lie in1. Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting were the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris.在那些突破传统画法的画家中有生活和工作在法国巴黎的印象派画家。
句式分析：介词短语位于句首的完全倒装句。
句式仿写：沿途全是参天大树，其中一些有近百年的历史。
________________， some of them with a history of nearly 100 years.2. Henry Clay Frick, a rich New Yorker, died in 1919, leaving his house, furniture and art collection to the American people.亨利·克莱·弗里克是纽约的一位富豪，于1919年去世，把他的房子、家具和艺术收藏品全部留给了美国人民。
句式分析：现在分词短语作结果状语。
句式仿写：他急忙看了她一眼，留意到她美若天仙。
He took a quick glance at her，________she was as beautiful as a fairy.3. On the one hand, some modern art is abstract; that is, the painter does not attempt to paint objects as we see them with our eyes...一方面，一些现代艺术作品是抽象的；也就是说，画家并不想把物体画得像我们亲眼所见的那样……
句式分析：that is＝that is to say, namely意为“也就是说，即是”；常作插入语。
句式仿写：他做的这件事，也就是说，他应受到责备。
He did it; __________________________.4. On the other hand, some paintings of modern art are so realistic that they look like photographs.另一方面，现代艺术的一些绘画作品是那么的真实，以至于它们看起来就像照片一样。
句式分析：on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……，另一方面……。
句式仿写：一方面他很聪明，另一方面他很勤奋。
____________________________________________________[答案]
1. Along the road are thick and tall trees 2. noticing that
3. that is, he is to blame 4. On the one hand, he is clever; on the other hand, he is hard-working.02 考点分层细解
[归纳拓展]
(1)without aim 漫无目的地
with the aim of 以期……，旨在……
achieve one's aim 达到目的
take aim at 向……瞄准
(2)aim at/for sth. 力求达到
aim at doing sth. 力争做到
aim to do sth. 旨在做某事
be aimed at 目的是，旨在
(3)aimless adj. 无目的的[语境助记]
①Teamwork is required in order to achieve these aims.
要达到这些目标需要团队协作。
②They're aiming at training everybody by the end of the year.
他们力求在年底前人人得到培训。
③The program is aimed at the teenage audience.
这个节目针对的是青少年观众。
[新题型演练]
Hope Project______ ______(aim) helping the poor children in remote areas to receive education.
答案：aims at
解析：句意：希望工程旨在帮助偏远地区的贫困儿童接受教育。aim at (doing sth.)“旨在(做某事)”。[归纳拓展]
(1)adopt an idea 采纳一条建议
adopt a(n) approach/policy/attitude
采取方法/政策/态度
(2)adopted adj. 领养的
an adopted son 养子 [语境助记]
①After much consideration, I decided to adopt his suggestion.
我再三考虑之后，决定采纳他的建议。
②My mother was adopted when she was four.
我母亲四岁时被人领养。
③His adopted son went abroad last week.
他的养子上周出国了。[关键一点]
adapt与adopt仅有一个字母之差，要注意它们含义上的区别：adapt“改编；使适应”；adopt“采用；采纳；收养”。
[新题型演练]
After much consideration, I decided to ______ ______ ______(采纳他的建议)．
答案：adopt his suggestion
解析：句意：我再三考虑，决定采纳他的建议。 [归纳拓展]
(1)be in possession of sth. 拥有/占有某物
be in the possession of sb./be in one's possession
为某人所有；归某人所有
(2)have possession of 拥有(指买来或从别人那里
拿来)
take possession of 占领；夺取
come into possession 占有某物(3)possess vt. 拥有；具有；支配
possess sb. of 使某人拥有
be possessed of 有；拥有
[语境助记]
①The police asked me if I possessed a gun.
警察问我是否拥有一支枪。
②Fear possessed him and prevented him from moving.
恐惧支配着他，使他无法移动。③He is in lawful possession of a shotgun.
他合法地持有猎枪。
[新题型演练]
—Is the young man standing at the gate________ ________ ______ the car?
—No. The car is________ ________ ________ ________ his father.(possession)答案：in possession of; in the possession of
解析：句意：“是站在门口的那个年轻人拥有那辆车吗？”“不，那辆车是他爸爸的。”be in possession of sth.“拥有某物”；be in the possession of sb.“为某人所有”。[归纳拓展]
(1)attempt to do＝try to do＝make an attempt to do
试图做……
attempt at sth. 试图做某事
(2)at one's first attempt 某人第一次尝试
in an attempt to do sth. 试图做某事 [语境助记]
①The boys made an attempt to leave for camping but were stopped by their parents.
男孩子们想去野营但被他们的父母们拦住了。
②Every time I've attempted to convince her, I've failed completely.
每一次我都试图说服她，但全然不起作用。[新题型演练]
Jim was as proud as a peacock when he passed his driving test ______ ______ ______ ________(第一次尝试)．
答案：at his first attempt
解析：句意：吉姆第一次尝试就通过了驾照考试，他像孔雀一样骄傲。at one's first attempt“第一次尝试”。[归纳拓展]
have a good figure 身材好，身材苗条
keep one's figure 保持苗条的身材
figure that... 认为……
figure out 算出，想出，理解[语境助记]
①This doesn't mean trying to figure out what's wrong with the other person.
这并不意味着要尽力弄明白另一个人怎么了。
②Married women are increasingly likely to be older than their husbands，figures show.
数据显示，越来越多已婚女性的年龄比丈夫的大。
③Though in her forties, she still has a good figure.
尽管她已经四十几岁了，但依然身材苗条。④I figured that she had got lost.
我认为她迷路了。
⑤I can't figure out why he quits his job.
我想不出来为什么他会放弃自己的工作。
[新题型演练]
She________ ______(想出) who the murderer was before the end of the book.答案：figured out
解析：考查动词短语。figure out“算出；理解；猜出”，符合语境。句意：在这本书结束之前，她就猜出了谁是凶手。[归纳拓展]
(1)a great/good deal可用作副词短语，意为“大量地，非常地”，修饰动词或比较级，在句中作状语。
(2)a great deal还可用作名词短语，表示“大量，许多”，在句中作主语或宾语。
(3)a great/good deal of表示“大量的，非常多的”，只能修饰不可数名词，在句中作定语。[语境助记]
①A great deal of their work is unpaid.
他们很多工作都是没有报酬的。
②I ran a great deal faster than he.
我跑得比他快得多。
③After a great deal of training，he runs a great deal faster than before.
经过大量的训练之后，他跑得比以前快多了。 [新题型演练]
________ ________ ________ ________work has been done to improve the people's living standard.
答案：A great/good deal of
解析：a great/good deal of“许多”，修饰不可数名词，相当于much；work为不可数名词。[归纳拓展]
(1)on (the) one hand...；on the other hand...
(引出不同的，尤指对立的观点、思想等)一方面……；另一方面(却)……
(2)first(ly)．..；second(ly)．.. 第一……；第二……
(3)for one thing...；for another...
一则……；二则……[语境助记]
①I want to go to the party，but on the other hand I ought to be studying.
我想去参加聚会，但从另一方面来说，我应该(留下来)学习。
②On the one hand I admire his gift，but on the other hand I distrust his judgement.
一方面我羡慕他的才华，而另一方面我却怀疑他的判断力。③I'm not going to buy it; for one thing I don't like the color，and for another it's far too expensive.
我不打算买这东西；一是我不喜欢这颜色，二是它太贵了。
④There are three reasons why I don't like him: first(ly) he's rude, second(ly) he's a liar, and third(ly) he owes me money.
我不喜欢他有三个原因：第一，他粗暴无礼；第二，他撒谎；第三，他欠我钱不还。[新题型演练]
I would like a job which pays more, but______ ______ ______ ______(另一方面) I enjoy the work I'm doing at the moment.
答案：on the other hand
解析：句意：我想找一份薪水高的工作，但从另一方面说我又很喜欢目前的这份工作。on the other hand“另一方面”，符合句意。[归纳拓展]
appeal to sb. 吸引某人
appeal to sb. to do sth. 呼吁某人做某事
appeal to sb. for sth. 恳求(某人)……
make an appeal to sb. 向某人提出呼吁[语境助记]
①The police made an appeal to the public to remain calm.
警方呼吁公众保持镇静。
②The police are appealing to the public for information about the crime.
警方呼吁公众提供有关这宗罪案的信息。
③Television reality shows are losing their audience appeal in China.
在中国，电视真人秀正在失去其对观众的吸引力。[新题型演练]
I'm writing a letter, expecting your newspaper to______ ________(呼吁) the public to pay more attention to environmental protection.
答案：appeal to
解析：句意：我正在写一封信，希望你们的报纸能够呼吁公众更加关注环境保护。appeal to“呼吁，恳请”。Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting were the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris.
在那些脱离传统画法的画家中有生活和工作在法国巴黎的印象派画家。 [归纳拓展]
本句结构为“介词短语＋系动词＋主语”，为倒装句式，正常语序为 The Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris, were among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting.
Among them are special windows that are resistant to dirt and water.
在它们(产品)中有可以防尘和防水的特殊窗户。(1)若把out，in，down，up，away，here，now，then，there，等表示方位和时间的副词和表示地点状语的介词短语置于句首时，用完全倒装句。
(2)当作表语的形容词、分词提到系动词前面时，句子也要全部倒装，构成“形容词/分词＋系动词＋主语”结构。[语境助记]
①In front of the house sat a small boy.
房前坐着一个小男孩。
②Gone are the days when women were looked down upon.
妇女受歧视的年代一去不复返了。
③Present at the meeting was Mr. Liu, who taught us English.
刘老师出席了会议，他教我们英语。[关键一点]
在上述情况下，如果主语是代词，则不用倒装。
如：Here you are.给你。
Away he went.他走了。
[新题型演练]
Between each of the morning classes ________(be) an interval, when the students can have a short break.
答案：is解析：此处为全部倒装结构，谓语动词的单复数形式应根据后面的主语 an interval 而定，因此用单数形式，根据定语从句中的 can 可知，应用一般现在时，所以用is。03 限时规范特训谢谢观看！
