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模块四 第三章 作文指导
随着社会的发展, 互联网在我们的日常生活中发挥了重要的作用。请根据以下提示, 以Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet 为题, 说明作为学生,我们该怎样恰当地使用网络。
优点 缺点
学习工具; 发送邮件; …… 玩游戏;
丧失学习兴趣;
……
要求:1.必须包含所给的信息,可适当发挥;
2.要有表明自己观点的句子;
3.书写工整, 句式规范, 条理清楚, 词数80左右。
第一步:审题谋篇
(一)审题
1.确定体裁:本文是一篇谈论互联网优缺点的________________(体裁)。
2.确定人称:应以__________________为主。
3.确定时态:主要时态应为____________________。
说明文
第三人称
一般现在时
(二)谋篇布局
优点
缺点
第二步:推敲词汇
1.互联网时代____________________________________
2. 学习工具__________________________
3.查阅单词_______________________
4. 搜索信息________________________________
5.发送邮件_____________________
6. 玩游戏____________________
the times of the Internet
a tool for study
look up words
search for information
send emails
play games
7.花很多时间做某事____________________________________________
8.失去学习的兴趣_______________________________________
9.对某人来说很危险______________________________
10. 充分利用__________________________
11.远离……____________________________
12. 不真实的信息____________________________
spend a lot of time on sth./in doing sth.
lose the interest in learning
be dangerous for sb.
make full use of
be/stay away from
unreal information
第三步:由词扩句
1.如今的社会是互联网的时代。
The ___________ society is the __________ of the Internet.
2.互联网给我们带来了很多的便捷。
The Internet _________ us lots of _____________.
3.有些学生把互联网作为一种学习工具使用。
Some students use the Internet _____ _____ _________ ________ _________.
present
times
brings
convenience
as a tool for study
4.有些学生也通过互联网阅读新闻或发送邮件。
Some students also _______ ________ or ________ __________ ________ the Internet.
5.总之,互联网帮助学生们学得更多,学得更好。
_____ _____ ______, the Internet helps students ________ _______ and ________ ________.
read news
send emails through
In a word
learn more
study better
6.然而, 有一些学生用互联网整天玩游戏和看电影。
__________, some students use the Internet to __________ __________ and see films the ________ ______.
7.结果,一些学生甚至丧失了学习的兴趣。
______ ______ _______, some students even _________ ___________ _________ ______ learning.
However
play games
whole day
As a result
lose their
interest in
第四步:句式升级
1.互联网给我们带来了很多的便捷,但也引发了不少问题。
The Internet _________ us ________ _______ lots of __________, _____ ______ some trouble.
2.一些学生用互联网查单词意思和事件的背景知识。
Some students ________ _______ the ____________ of _________ _________ and the background of ______ ________ on the Internet.
brings
not only
convenience
also
but
look up
meanings
the words
an event
3.我认为我们应该充分利用互联网,远离不健康的网页。
I think we should ________ _______ _______ ______ the Internet and _______ ________ _________ the unhealthy websites.
make full use of
stay away from
第五步:连句成篇
Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
The present society is the times of the Internet. The Internet brings us not only lots of convenience, but also some trouble.
Some students use the Internet as a tool for study. They look up the meanings of the words and the background of an event on the Internet. They also send emails through it. The Internet helps them learn more and study better. However, some students play games and see films on the Internet the whole day. As a result, they even lose their interest in learning. It's very dangerous for them.
I think we should make full use of the Internet and stay away from the unhealthy websites.