仁爱版九年级英语全一册 模块6 第3章 作文指导课件(共14张PPT)

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模块六　第三章　作文指导
回想着三年的初中生活，你感慨万千。学校将在毕业典礼上举行“感恩教育仪式”。请你根据下表要点，用英语为该活动写一篇演讲稿，简述这三年来感恩的人和事，以及你的感想和对未来的打算。
感恩父母 悉心照顾、赚钱养家……(自拟至少一条)
感恩老师 耐心教导、善于激励、无私奉献
感恩同学 合作分享、互相帮助、共同进步
感想和打算 ……(请结合自身实际，至少写两句话)
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：complaint抱怨　unselfish无私的　devote...to...把……用于……
第一步：审题谋篇
(一)审题
1．确定体裁：本文是一篇演讲稿，是_____________(体裁)。
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为__________人称。
3．确定时态：以____________________为主。
应用文
第一
一般现在时
(二)谋篇布局
first
second
finally
because of
as a result
第二步：推敲词汇
1．照顾______________________　　　　　　
2. 过更好的生活____________________________
3．在困境中____________________
4. 鼓励某人做某事_________________________________
5．互相帮助_________________________
6. 因……感谢某人_________________________
take care of
live a better life
in trouble
encourage sb. to do sth.
help each other
thank sb. for...
第三步：由词扩句
1．三年前我进入了初中。
I came to the secondary school ________ __________ _________.
2．他们毫无怨言地照顾我。
They _______ _________ ______ me without any complaint.
three years ago
take care of
3．我的父母让我过更好的生活。
My parents make me ________ ________ _______ _______.
4．我的老师们很有耐心并且总是鼓励我。
My teachers ________ _________ and always _____________ me.
live a better life
are patient
encourage
5．他们在教育事业上奉献时间。
They ___________ their time ______ education.
6．我们经常互相帮助并且互相学习。
We often ______ ________ ______ and _______ ______ ______ ______.
devote
to
help each other
learn from each other
第四步：句式升级
1．从我进入初中以来，三年时间过去了。
Three years _______ __________ _________ I came to the secondary school.
2．我的父母总是尽力让我过更好的生活。
My parents always _______ _______ ________ to make me _______ _______ ________ _______.
has passed since
try their best
live a
better life
3．我的老师们很有耐心并且当我有困难的时候总是鼓励我。
My teachers ______ _________ and always ___________ me when I am _____ ____________.
4．他们无私地在教育事业上奉献时间。
It's unselfish ______ them ________ _________ their time ______ education.
are patient
encourage
in trouble
of
to devote
to
5．将来，我将做得很好，让他们以我为荣。
I am going to do well in the future _____ ________ they can be proud of me.
so that
第五步：连句成篇
How time flies! Three years has passed since I came to the secondary school. During the past three years, I have gained a lot and grown a lot.
First, I should say thanks to my dear parents.
They take good care of me without any complaint. They work hard and try their best to make me live a better life. Second, I thank all my teachers for their great help and support. They are patient and always encourage me when I am in trouble. It's unselfish of them to devote their time to education. Finally, I also feel very thankful to my classmates. We often help each other and learn from each other. As a result, we have made great progress.
I will never forget these happy days. I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.