【大单元整合教学】Unit 1 写作课件（人教版七上Unit 1 My name’s Gina）

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Unit 1
My name’s Gina.
Writing
You and your friend.
Name first name last name age telephone
Hi,everyone.Nice to meet you.
I’m...My first name is ... My last name is ...I am ... My telephone number is …
... is my deskmate.His/Her first name is ...His/Her last name is ...She/He is...His/Her telephone number is …
That’s all. Thank you.
Make a report.
Fill the chart according to you and your friend’s information.(信息）
Review
All about me
I am Liu Shanshan. My first name is Shanshan.My last name is Liu.I am 13 years old.My phone number is 15881635473.I like blue.
Here are 2 self-inrtoductions(自我介绍).Let’s read them and fill the chart.
What can we know about Liu Shanshan
First name
Last name
Age
Phone number
Favorite color
Pre-writing
Shanshan
Liu
13
15881635473
blue
What do you think of Shanshan’s self-introduction
All about me
Hello,nice to meet you. I am Zhang Ming.I’m 12 years old.I am a student in No.2 Middle school.My first name is Ming and my last name is Zhang.My favorite color is red.My phone number is 18080738804.I like reading very much.I’m easygoing(随和的).I want to make friends with all of you.
What can we know about Zhang Ming
First name
Last name
Age
Phone number
Favorite color
Personality(性格)
Pre-writing
Ming
Zhang
red
18080738804
12
easygoing
reading
Hobby(爱好)
Self-introduction
Name(first&last)
Phone number
Age
Favorite color
Personality
hobby
Pre-writing
What can we put in a self-introduction
food
drinks
subjects
...
school
Pre-writing
All about me
Hello,nice to meet you. I am Zhang Ming.I’m from Mian Yang. My first name is Ming because my parents want me to be wise(英明).I like red because it means good luck.My phone number is 18080738804.I like reading very much.I’m easygoing(随和的).I want to make friends with all of you.
What’s the stucture of a self-introduction
Structure 结构
Para1:开篇问好 引起注意
Para2:具体情况 展开介绍
Para3:结束语
Hello,nice to meet you./I’m happy to see you.
First name
Last name
Age
school
Phone number
Favorite color
Hobby
...
I like to make friends with you.
How to make an self-introduction
Pre-writing
Writing Topic
Pre-writing
你们的初中生活学习即将开始，新学期的第一天，班主任老师要求同学们自我介绍，以便互相认识。假如你是Li Hua, 请写一篇自我介绍的英语作文。
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
3.字数不少于60词。
The first person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense
Text(文体）
Details(细节）
What should we think about
Person(人称）
A passage
at least 8 points, 60 words
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
Show thanks or wishes
Show greetings
Introduce yourself
first name
last name
age
phone number
favorite color/food/drinks
hobby
school...
Pre-writing
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
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已开始计时
时间到
Correction codes:
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
○
？
﹋
—
△
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Post-writing
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have Shown greetings. (1 point)
Para : I have introduce myself. (3 points)
Para : I have showed my thanks and wishes. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
Post-writing
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. For example:My first/last name is...I like... (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example: My first name is ...because it means... My favorite color is...I like... (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
60
1
Post-writing
Post-writing
Hello,nice to meet you.
I am Li Hua.My first name is Hua and my last name is Li.I’m from Mian Yang. I am 12 years old.My first name is Hua because my parents love China and Hua is from Chinese 中华 .My favorite color is red because it means good luck.My phone number is 18080738804.I like reading and playing basketball very much.I’m very brave.
I want to make friends with all of you.