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Unit5 Do you have a soccer ball
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. ( 1 point )
Para : I Lead in to the topic. ( 1 point )
Para : I Introduce my and my friend’s sports things, sports hobbies（运动爱好), reasons(原因) and other things . .. (4 points)
Para : I summarize the topic and show feelings in the end. ( 1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are correct (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes (2 points)
I have checked my word count is around . ( 1 point )
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time (共13张PPT)
Unit5
Do you have a soccer ball
Writing
Answer the questions.
1.What sports things do you have What sports things don’t you have
I have...but I don’t have...
2.What sports do you like playing And why
I like playing...because it’s...for...
3.When and where do you play ...
时间,I often play...地点
4.Who do you often play ...with
I often play...with...
Pre-writing
Work in pairs to answer the questions .
1.What sports things does your partner have What sports things doesn’t she/he have
She/He has...but she/he doesn’t have..
2.What sports does she/he like playing And why
She/He likes playing...because it’s...for...
3.When and where does she/he play ...
时间,she/he often plays...地点
4.Who does she/he often play ...with
She often plays...with...
Pre-writing
学校下周要举行运动会了，英语老师要求你写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下自己和你朋友喜欢的运动。请根据以下问题完成短文。
Writing Topic
1.What sports things do you have What sports things don’t you have
2.What sports do you like playing And why
3.When and where do you play ...
4.Who do you often play ...with
5.What sports things does your friend have What sports things doesn’t she/he have
6.What sports does she/he like playing And why
7.When and where does she/he play ...
8.Who does she/he often play ...with
写作要求：1.字迹工整，句子通顺。2.包含对所有提示问题回答，可适当发挥。3.不少于60词。
Pre-writing
I have three soccer balls and five basketballs. I don’t have a baseball.I like playing soccer. It’s relaxing. I play soccer at school with friends.Dale has ten ping-pong balls and six ping-pong bats. He doesn’t have a volleyball.He likes playing ping-pong. He thinks it’s easy for him. After class, he plays ping-pong with classmates.
Is this composition(作文) good
Beginning
Ending
Pre-writing
Body
I have three soccer balls and five basketballs. I don’t have a baseball.I like playing soccer. It’s relaxing. I play soccer at school with friends.Jacck has ten ping-pong balls and six ping-pong bats. He doesn’t have a volleyball.He likes playing ping-pong. He thinks it’s easy for him. After class, he plays ping-pong on the playground with classmates.
My name is Linda and my friend is Jack.We both like sports.Let me tell you something about our favorite sports.
I think it is good for us to play sports.Do you like playing sports
Is it good
Can it be better
Use “and,but,because” to make your composition more fluent.用“and,but,because”让你的文章更流畅.
Pre-writing
I have three soccer balls and five basketballs,but I don’t have a baseball.I like playing soccer,because it’s relaxing. I often play soccer at school with friends.Jack has ten ping-pong balls and six ping-pong bats,but he doesn’t have a volleyball.He likes playing ping-pong,because he thinks it’s easy for him. After class, he often plays ping-pong on the playground with classmates.
My name is Linda and my friend is Jack.We both like sports.Let me tell you something about our favorite sports.
I think it is good for us to play sports.Do you like playing sports
Pre-writing
What should we think about before writing
Person (人称)
Tense(时态)
Details(细节)
Structure(结构)
The first/third person.
The simple present tense.
1.Answer all questions. 2.60 words.
Beginning: Lead in to the topic.
Body: Introduce my and my friend’s sports things, sports hobbies（运动爱好), reasons(原因) and other things .
Ending: Summarize the topic and show feelings. 总结话题，表达情感
Text (体裁)
A passage.
Pre-writing
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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While-writing
While-writing
1. Pay attention to handwriting.(注意书写)
2. Use “and,but,because” to make your composition more fluent.
（用“and,but,because” 或让你的文章更流畅）
3 . Finish all the main points .（写完所有要点）
4.Use the simple present tense correctly.(正确使用一般现在时）
While-writing
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I Lead in to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I Introduce my and my friend’s sports things, sports hobbies（运动爱好), reasons(原因) and other things . (4 points)
Para : I summarize the topic and show my feelings in the end. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 points)
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Post-writing
Grammar and language My expressions are correct . (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are 0 spelling mistakes (2 points)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
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60
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Post-writing
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writingUnit 5 Do you have a soccer ball Name
Writing
Answer the questions.
What sports things do you have What sports things don’t you have
___________________________________________________________
What sports do you like playing And why
__________________________________________________________
When and where do you play ...
__________________________________________________________
Who do you often play ...with
__________________________________________________________
Work in pairs to answer the questions .
What sports things does your friend have What sports things doesn’t she/he have
__________________________________________________________
What sports does she/he like playing And why
__________________________________________________________
3.When and where does she/he play ...
__________________________________________________________
4.Who does she/he often play ...with
_________________________________________________________
3.Writing Topic
学校下周要举行运动会了，英语老师要求你写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下自己和你朋友喜欢的运动。请根据以上问题完成短文。
写作要求：1.字迹工整，句子通顺。2.包含对所有提示问题回答，可适当发挥。3.不少于60词。
4.Analyse the topic
Person： Tense：
Text： Details：
Structure：
Finish the first draft
Finish the second draft
