(共17张PPT)
Unit 2
What time do you go to school
Writing
Nicole and Mark are talking about their daily life.
What's Nicole's day like？
I think Nicole has a/an _______ day.
I think Nicole's day is ________ .
busy
healthy
nice
interesting
exciting
wonderful(精彩的）
meaningful（有意义的)
colorful(丰富多彩的)
full(充实的)
planned(有计划的)
What do you think of Nicole？
A:She can make good use of (合理利用)time.
B:She can't make good use of time.
She is a girl who can make good use of time and plan life well(规划好生活).
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Nicole's day
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.I go to school.I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.I go home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about danceI have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm.I help my mom with the dishes. I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. I read books. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
The first draft
I have a busy day with lots of activities.
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I always have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.After that, I go to school. I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.After I finish school, I go straight home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about dance.I have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm. After dinner, I help my mom with the dishes. After that, I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. Before going to sleep,I like reading. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Although my day is busy, I feel happy and satisfied (满意的) .I think we should learn to make good use of time and plan life well.
Nicole's day
The second draft
What are the same between them
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.I go to school.I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.I go home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about danceI have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm.I help my mom with the dishes. I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. I read books. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
I have a busy day with lots of activities.
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I always have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.After that, I go to school. I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.After I finish school, I go straight home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about dance.I have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm. After dinner, I help my mom with the dishes. After that, I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. Before going to sleep,I like reading. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Although my day is busy, I feel happy and satisfied (满意的) .I think we should learn to make good use of time and plan life well.
Both of them describle(描述) activities and time.
What are the differences between them
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.I go to school.I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.I go home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about danceI have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm.I help my mom with the dishes. I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. I read books. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
I have a busy day with lots of activities.
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I always have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.After that, I go to school. I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.After I finish school, I go straight home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about dance.I have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm. After dinner, I help my mom with the dishes. After that, I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. Before going to sleep,I like reading. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Although my day is busy, I feel happy and satisfied (满意的) .I think we should learn to make good use of time and plan life well.
Beginning
Ending
Body
What are the differences between them
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.I go to school.I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.I go home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about danceI have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm.I help my mom with the dishes. I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. I read books. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
I have a busy day with lots of activities.
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I always have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.After that, I go to school. I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.After I finish school, I go straight home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about dance.I have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm. After dinner, I help my mom with the dishes. After that, I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. Before going to sleep,I like reading. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Although my day is busy, I feel happy and satisfied (满意的) .I think we should learn to make good use of time and plan life well.
1.We often write activities in time order(时间顺序).
2.We should use some conjunctions(连接词).
What are the differences between them
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.I go to school.I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.I go home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about danceI have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm.I help my mom with the dishes. I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. I read books. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
I have a busy day with lots of activities.
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I always have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.After that, I go to school. I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.After I finish school, I go straight home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about dance.I have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm. After dinner, I help my mom with the dishes. After that, I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. Before going to sleep,I like reading. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Although my day is busy, I feel happy and satisfied (满意的) .I think we should learn to make good use of time and plan life well.
1.We can use some adverbs of frenquency(频率副词）.
What are the differences between them
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.I go to school.I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.I go home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about danceI have dinner with my family at 7:30 pm.I help my mom with the dishes. I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. I read books. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
I have a busy day with lots of activities.
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I always have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.After that, I go to school. I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.After I finish school, I go straight home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about dance.I have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm. After dinner, I help my mom with the dishes. After that, I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. Before going to sleep,I like reading. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Although my day is busy, I feel happy and satisfied (满意的) .I think we should learn to make good use of time and plan life well.
1.We can use some words let the expressions(表达) be more beutiful.
How to describle someone's day
someone's day
Para1:Beginning
Para2:Body
Para3:Ending
Lead to the topic.
I have a ...day with.../I’d like to tell you.../Let me tell you something about ...
1.activities and time
2.use some conjunctions(连接词).
3.write activities in time order(时间顺序)
4.use some adverbs of frenquency(频率副词）.
5.make the sentence beautiful.
I think...
Feelings.
Writing Toipc
Different people may have different living habits. What about your friend's living habits Are they healthy or unhealthy Please write a passage to describle your friend's saturday.
要求：1.条理清晰，时态准确
2.70词左右。
What should we think about before writing
Person (人称)
Tense(时态)
Details(细节)
Structure(结构)
The third person.
The simple present tense.
1.daily activities. 2.70 words
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Text (体裁)
A passage.
Introduce your friend's saturday.
Lead in to the topic.
Express(表达) your feelings.
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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10:00
09:00
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07:00
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已开始计时
时间到
While-writing
Sharing Time
Work in groups, correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation（标点）
6.languge(语言)
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.Unit 2 What time do you usually get up Name
Writing
1.Writing Topic
Different people may have different living habits. What about your friend's living habits Are they healthy or unhealthy Please write a passage to describle your friend's saturday.
写作要求：1.字迹工整，句子通顺. 2词数在70词左右.。3.衔接自然，适当运用连接词等。
2.Analyse the topic
Person： Tense：
Text： Details：
Structure：
3.Useful expressions
Frequency words activities time and logic good sentence patterns
always usually often sometimes seldom hardly ever Never ... get up wash one’s face brush one’s teeth eat breakfast do exercise/play sports do homework do some reading take a walk take a shower go to bed ... in the morning in the afternoon in the eveing at night then after that after doing sth. at last ... either..or... ...
Finish the first draft
My Friend’s Saturday
Finish the second draft
My Friend’s SaturdayNicole's day （the first draft)
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.I go to school.I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.I go home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about danceI have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm.I help my mom with the dishes. I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. I read books. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Nicole's day(the second draft)
I have a busy day with lots of activities.
I get up at 7:00 in the morning.Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower. At 7:30, I always have breakfast with my dad, because my mom leaves home earlier.After that, I go to school. I have lunch at 1p.m at the school canteen.After I finish school, I go straight home. I do my home work at 3 p.m.At 5 pm, I take dance classes in a dance club. I am crazy about dance.I have dinner with my family at around 7:30 pm. After dinner, I help my mom with the dishes. After that, I go to my room and chat onling with my friends. Before going to sleep,I like reading. I turn off the lights at 10:30.
Although my day is busy, I feel happy and satisfied (满意的) .I think we should learn to make good use of time and plan life well.Marking ladders
Unit6 Do you like bananas
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. ( 1 point )
Para : I Lead in to the topic. ( 1 point )
Para_____:I introduce my friend’s saturday . (4 points)
Para.____:I express(表达) my opinions(观点) about my friend’s saturday. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are correct. (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes. (2 points)
I have checked my word count is around . ( 1 point )
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time
