【大单元整合教学】Unit 3 Section B 3a –3c Writing 课件（人教版八上Unit 3 I'm more outgoing than my sister）

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Section B
3a –3c Writing
Unit 3
I am more outgoing than my sister
Pre-writing
Wang Lingling Liu Lili
tall tall
long straight hair short straight hair
likes reading like sports
popular popular
outgoing outgoing
serious funny
hard-working smart
Compare them according to the chart.
Wang Lingling is as tall as Liu Lili.
Say more sentences:
Wang’s hair is longer than Liu Lili’s.
=they are both tall.
…
Pre-writing
Fill in the blanks according to the chart.
Every one has his or her best friend. Wang Lingling's best friend is Liu Lili.
They are both tall, but Wang Lingling’s hair is ______than Liu Lily’s. Wang Lingling likes reading, but Liu Lili likes sports. _____of them are outgoing. Wang Lingling is ___popular ___Liu Lili. Wang Lingling is more serious but Liu Lili is __________. Wang Lingling is ______hard-working but Liu Lili is smarter _____Wang Lingling.
Although they have different characters, they can be friends.
longer
Both
as
as
funnier
more
than
Pre-writing
Fill in the chart in 3b and describe your friends.
Name (姓名) Name
Appearance (外貌) Appearance
Character(性格) Character
Hobby (爱好) Hobby
A friend who is similar to me
A friend who is different from me
____ is my best friend. She/He is similar to me. He/She is …
____ is my best friend, too. She/He is different from me. He/She is …
Pre-writing
Write two paragraphs describing two of your friends.
写作要求：字数80-120.
参考词汇：both, as…as, be similar to,
be different from, the same as
Person(人称）
She/He
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
Introduce two of your friends and their appearances, characters, hobbies and so on.
80 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
Introduce your two good friends and their appearances, characters, hobbies and so on.
What else should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
We help each other and get together as often as we can. The more we get together, the happier we will be.
Lead to the topic.
I have two good friends. One is similar to me, the other is different from me.
Show your feelings.
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Write a passage in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic (1 point)
Para : I have introduced two good friends and their appearances, characters, hobbies and so on. (4 points)
Para : I have expressed my feelings.
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
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Grammar and language I have used the comparative forms and the simple present tense correctly. For example, I work as hard as him. I am more outgoing than her.(3 points)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences, such as exclamatory sentences(感叹句）; clauses; it’s adj for sb to do sth; so…that, etc. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
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15
80
1
Sharing Time
Work in groups, appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Show Time
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. Language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
My good friends
As a saying goes, “a life without a friend is a life with out a sun.” Friends play an important part in our lives. So each of us, rich or poor, should have at least one or two good friends. As for me, I have 2 best friends. One is Lily and the other is Lucy.
Lily is similar to me. She is a cute girl who grows up with me together. We both have long, straight hair. We are both a little heavy because both of us don’t like doing sports. And she is as outgoing as me. We both like eating and enjoy reading books so we often eat out and read books together. Also ,I can sing as well as her.
However, Lucy is different from me. She is a lovely girl with long blonde hair. I am a little shorter than her. And she is stronger than me because she likes exercising. She is more serious than me but I’m funnier than her. What’s more, I am better at English but she does better in math. So we often help each other to improve our weak subjects.
I am lucky to have them in my life. We help each other and get together as often as we can. The more we get together, the happier we will be.
Thank you !