Marking Ladders
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic and briefly introduced Mianyang. (1 point)
Para : I have introduced at least 3 places in Mianyang and the reasons.(4 points)
Para : I have expressed my opinions about Mianyang and show my welcome. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the superlative forms correctly. For example, It is the most beautiful. It has the shortest waiting time. You can buy it the most cheaply. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences. For example, I think...because..., In my eyes, the best… is…,As for…If you want to…,…is the best choice. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point
Total scoreUnit4 What’s the best movie theater Name
Section 3a-3c Writing
Writing topic
假设你是Maria,请你回复Sharon的邮件，给她推荐三个绵阳最值得去的地方并说明理由,每个地方至少两点理由。必须用到最高级。字数80词左右。
Dear Maria, How is it going I heard that there are many places to relax in Mianyang. Next week, I will come to Mianyang for a visit. Can you introduce some fun places to me Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours Sharon
2. Analyse the topic
Person:___ Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
Park :Fuleshan Park; Xishan Park; People’s Park; Wetland Park … Movie theater: Wanda Cinema; Zhonghuan Cinema; Bona Cinema; Dadi Cinema… Shopping mall: Wanda; Parkson（百盛）; Walmart(沃尔玛) … Mountains: Yaowang Valley(药王谷); Jiuhuang Mountain; Douchuan Moutain… Other places: Yuewang Tower(越王楼); Xianhai Lake;Oriental Heritage(方特东方神话);Libai’s hometown(李白故居); Banaqia (北川巴拿恰)；Miajia Alley(马家巷); Tieniu Square(铁牛广场); Mianyang Museum;Mianyang Science and technology Hall(绵阳科技馆) ; Luofushan Spring (罗浮山温泉);Qijiang Village(郪江古镇)；Baima Village(白马羌寨)；Bao’en Temple(报恩寺)；Wanglang; Huya…
Ⅳ.Finish the First draft
Ⅴ.Finish the second draft(共29张PPT)
Section B
3a –3c Writing
Unit 4
What’s the best movie theater
Pre-writing
Fuleshan park
Pre-writing
Xishan park
Pre-writing
People’s park
Which park do you like going to Why
Pre-writing
Fuleshan park
Xishan park
People’s park
Read the article about Greenwood Park. Fill in the blanks with the correct superlative forms of the adjectives and adverbs in the box.
crowded creative good fast quietly
3a
P31
This is Greenwood Park.
Pre-writing
Greenwood Park is _______ place to go to on weekends. I always finish my breakfast ___________ on Saturdays because I want to get to Greenwood Park before 10:00 a.m. to meet my friends. The park is ______________ place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to see the street performers. Some people think they are boring, but I think they are _______________ people. However, the place where you can enjoy your time __________________ is at one of the small coffee shops near the park. You can read or relax there. There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
the best
crowed creative good fast quietly
(the) fastest
the most crowded
the most creative
(the) most quietly
Pre-writing
Why does the writer go to Greenwood Park
Read the article again and find out:
1.Beginning: the topic sentence (主题句)
2. Body :the supporting sentences(支持句)
3. Ending:the conclusion sentence(总结句)
Greenwood Park is the best place to go to on weekends.
(1) can meet_______
friends
(2) can see_______________________________
the street performers
(3) can enjoy_______________________
the time the most quietly
There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
Pre-writing
(read or relax in one of the small coffee shops near the park.)
Pre-writing
Good places in Mianyang
Wanglang
Bao’en Temple
Huya
Baima Village
Yuewang Tower
Wetland Park
Fuleshan Park
Tieniu Square
Majia Alley
Xianhai Lake
Jiuhuang Mountain
Qijiang Village
Yaowang Valley
Douchuan Mountain
Luofushan Spring
Pre-writing
Other good places in Mianyang
Libai’s Hometown
Oriental Heritage
Banaqia
Mianyang Museum
Mianyang Science & Technology Hall
Wanda Cinema
Walmart
Example：I think Wanda Cinema is the best movie theater in Mianyang. Because it has the biggest screens and the most comfortable seats. Also, you can buy tickets the most quickly there.
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
A:Which place do you think is the best Why
B:I think the best…is… because…
At least 2 reasons
Work in pairs to ask and answer
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From: Sharon in the UK
Dear classmates in Class 1,
How is it going I heard that there are many places to relax in Mianyang. Next week , I will come to Mianyang for a visit . Can you intorduce some fun places to me
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Sharon
请你回复Sharon的邮件，给她推荐三个绵阳最值得去的地方并说明理由,每个地方至少两点理由。必须用到最高级。字数80词左右。
Person(人称）
The third person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense
Text(文体）
An e-mail
Details(细节）
1.Introduce the 3 best places in Mianyang and the reasons. 2.80 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
Introduce the best 3 places in Mianyang and the reasons.
What else should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
Lead to the topic:
Express your opinions about Mianyang
and show your welcome
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Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic and briefly introduced Mianyang. (1 point)
Para : I have introduced the best park, school, movie theater , shopping mall or other places in Mianyang and the reasons.(4 points)
Para : I have expressed my opinions about Mianyang and show my welcome. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
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Grammar and language I have used the superlative forms correctly. For example, It is the most beautiful. It has the shortest waiting time. You can buy it the most cheaply. (3 points)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences, such as clauses(从句); I think...because...,. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
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Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Show Time
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Dear Sharon,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to Mianyang for a visit. I'd like to introduce some fun places for you.
First of all, if you want to visit a park, I think Fuleshan park is the best.It is the biggest and has the most beautiful environment . Also, you can enjoy the most beautiful flowers there. The most important thing is that you can see the whole city when you get to the top of the mountain. Then, if you want to watch a movie, I think Wanda Cinema is the best choice. Because it has the biggest screens and the most comfortable seats. Also, you can buy tickets the most quickly there. Besides, Jiuhuang Mountain is also a good place to visit. Because It has the most beautiful views and the highest karst cave in southwest of china. What's more, the weather there is the finest in summer and it has the best food and service.
All in all,Mianyang is a good place to have fun. There is something for everyone. Welcome to Mianyang.
yours
Linda
Thank you !
