Unit7 Will people have robots
Section 3a-3c Writing
Name
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请以
My life in 20 years
为题，根据以下表格的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍自己
20
年后的情况。
)Ⅰ.Writing topic
My life in 20 years
age
new looks
jobs
places to live and work
transpotation
family
free time activities
environment aroud you
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
Ⅳ.Finish the second draft(共26张PPT)
Section B
3a –3c Writing
Unit 7
Will people have robots
Read Jill’s answers to the question “What will your life be like in the future ” Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
3a
meet work live look keep
wear more less fewer take
Pre-writing
In 20 years, I think I’ll be a newspaper reporter. I’ll _____ in Shanghai, because there will be ______ jobs in that city. As a reporter, I think I will _____ lots of interesting people, so I’ll have more friends. I’ll have _____ pets, though, because I’ll have _____ free time. And my apartment will be no good for pets because it’ll be too small. So I’ll probably just ____ a bird. During the week, I’ll _____ smart clothes. On the weekend, I’ll _____ less smart but I’ll be more comfortable. In the future, people will _____ more so they’ll probably have fewer vacations, but I think I’ll _____ a holiday in Hong Kong when possible. One day I’ll even go to Australia.
live
more
meet
fewer
less
keep
wear
look
work
take
Pre-writing
What will Jill’s life be like in the future in 20 years？ job
place to live
friends and pets
dressing
free time activities
a newspaper reporter
Shanghai.
have more friends and less pets
keep a bird
smart clothes on weekdays and comfortable clothes on weekends
have fewer vacations
take a holiday in Kong Hong
Pre-writing
How old will you be
What will your life be like in 20 years
What will you be when you grow up
Where will you live/work/travel Why
How will you go to work
What will you look like
What will you do in your free time
Will you have a family
What will the environment around you be like
Will you keep a pet
Pre-writing
What will your life be like
Jobs
Places to live/work
Transportation
Free time activities
New looks
In 20 years
Age
Family
Environment around you
Pre-writing
Writing Topic
请以My life in 20 years 为题，根据以下表格的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍自己20 年后的情况。
My life in 20 years Age
New looks
Job
Places to live and work
Transportation
Family
Free time activities
Environment around you
…
Pre-writing
Person(人称）
The first person
Tense(时态）
The simple future tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
1.write a passage
(all the points)
2.80 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
Lead to the topic.
Make a conclusion
Think of the beginning sentences
Beginning: lead to the topic
1. Everyone wonders what their future life will be like. I also have some predictions about my future life. I'd like to share my predictions with you.
2. I'm Linda. My life in 20 years will be quite different from now. I'd like to share my predictions with you.
3. I'm Linda. Here are my preditions about my future life in 20 years.
Body:
What's more,
In addition,
As for...,
At the same time,
First, ...Second,...Third,...Last,...
Meanwhile,...
Think of the body sentences
Think of the ending sentences
Ending: make a conclusion and show your feelings
1. These are my predictions about my future life. From now on, I will work hard to make my predictions come true.
2. Although no one knows what will happen in the future, we can try our best to make our future better.
3. In a word, our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard and realize our dreams.
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Write a passage in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written all the points.(4 points)
Para : I have made a conclusion(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
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Grammar and language I have used the simple future tense correctly. For example， I will be a teacher in 20 years.(3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example，I will…because… I will…so I will… (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
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15
80
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Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Show Time
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
I am Linda. My life in 20 years will be quite different from now. Here are my predictions about my life in 20 years.
In 20 years, I will be 50 years old. I will be shorter and heavier than now and I will have shorter hair. I will be still a teacher because it is an interesting job. I will live in an beautiful apartment with my parents because I will take care of them. And I will work in a school in Mianyang because I think Mianyang is a beautiful city for people to live. I will go to work by subway or self-driving car. I will have a happy family. Maybe I will have a lovely grandson. In my free time, I will do lots of sports to keep healthy. On weekends, I will take my parents to the park near my home. In the future, there will be more people so the city probably will be more crowded. Maybe I will fly to the moon on vacation because I think it will be convenient to travel by spaceship in 20 years.
Now I am working hard and trying my best to make my predictions come true. I’m sure I will have a more wonderful life in twenty years.
Write a letter to yourself in 20 years
Record a video to yourself in 20 yearsMarking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written all the points.
Para : I have made a conclusion. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the simple future tense correctly. For example, I will be a teacher in 20 years. There will be… because … (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example, I will…because… I will…so I will… ( (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time
