Marking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written my new year’s resolutions, why I make them and how I am going to do.
Para : I have made a conclusion. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the simple future tense correctly. For example, I am going to improve my relationships with my family. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example, my resolution is about/has to do with… In order to…, I am going to… ( (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time Unit6 I am going to learn computer science.
Section 3a-3c Writing
Name
(
2021
马上就要到了，又是一个充满希望的新年，又到了下决心的时刻。你的新年决心是什么，原因是什么？你打算如何去做？请根据以下提示要点，写一篇
80
词左右的英语短文。
)Ⅰ.Writing topic
要点：
1. What are your New Year’s resolutions
2. What kinds of resolutions are they
3. Why do you make these resolutions
4. How are you going to do to make resolutions work
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
1.in order that, in order to, so that 2.first(first of all,to start with),second(next,what’s more), third(last,last but not least,in addition)
Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
Ⅳ.Finish the second draft(共17张PPT)
What is your New Year’s resolution
Why do you make this resolution
How are you going to do to make it work
My resolution is about…
My resolution has to do with…
I make it because…
One of the main reasons is that…
I am going to…
In order to make it work, I am going to…
My resolution is to…
What kinds of resolutions are they
lose
weight
save money
get good grades
take a trip
study English
read more
reuse,
recycle
reduce
spend more time with family
exercise more
eat healthy food
What kinds of resolutions are they
Resolutions
2020
self-improvement
improve relationships with family
physical
health
school work
better planning
environment
2021马上就要到了，又是一个充满希望的新年，又到了下决心的时刻。你的新年决心是什么，原因是什么？你打算如何去做？请根据以下提示要点，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
Writing Topic
要点：
1.What are your New Year’s resolutions
2.What kinds of resolutions are they
3.Why do you make these resolutions
4.How are you going to do to make resolutions work
Person(人称）
The first person
Tense(时态）
The simple future tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
1.write a passage
(what/kinds/why/how)
2.80 words
What should we think about
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
Lead to the topic.
Make a conclusion
why
kinds of
what
how
Write a passage in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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？
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written my new year’s resolutions, why I make them and how I am going to do .(4 points)
Para : I have made a conclusion(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
1
Grammar and language I have used the simple future tense correctly. For example， I am going to improve my relationships with my family.(3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example，My resolution is about/has to do with… In order to …, I am going to… (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
80
1
Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
The new year is coming. It’s time to make resolutions. Let me tell you my resolutions.
My first resolution is about how to get good grades at school. Because as a student, the most important thing for me is to study. I am going to work hard at my subjects such as English ,Chinese and so on.
My second resolution has to do with physical health. One of the main reasons is that health is important for everyone. I am going to run 3 times a week to make my body healthy. Also, I am going to take up a new sport like ping pong and I am going to play it two or three times a week.
My third resolution is to spend more time with my family and friends. Because it can improve my relationships with my family and friends. I am going to communicate with my family more and I am going to help my parents with housework. I am also going to help my friends more. For example, I can help them with their English homework if there is anything they don’t understand. Helping my friends will show them that I care about them.
Although resolutions are difficult to keep, I am going to try my best to keep them. I am sure I am going to do better in 2021.
