Marking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written my suggestions.
Para : I have made a conclusion. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the adverbial clause of condition correctly. For example, If you do …you will…. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example, I think you should... if you...you will... As long as…you will… unless…you will… ( (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time Unit10 If you go to a party,you’ll have a great time.
Section 3a-3c Writing
Name
Ⅰ.Writing topic
假如你是李华，你在QQ漂流瓶中收到了这样一个漂流瓶，请你仔细阅读这封信，根据信件内容，用英语回一封信，给她一些建议。
Hi,
I am a 14-year-old girl and a middle school student. I have a lot of worries lately. First, I have too much homework and I don’t know how to plan my time well. Besides, I have some problems with my parents. They always ask me to study hard and they don’t understand me. What should I do Can you give me some suggestions
Yours
Grace
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
Ⅳ.Finish the second draft(共24张PPT)
Choose (选择) a number that you like, and try to finish the tasks.
Challenge game
If you are rich, what will you do
If I am rich, I will buy a big house.
…
Number 1
Chain practice：用if 条件句接龙
（至少4个句子）
提示词:
study hard, get good grades, go to university, make a lot of money, travel around the world, have a great time
Number2
What will happen if you don’t finish your homework
If I don’t finish my homework, the teacher will be angry with me.
Number 3
Number 4
If you have problems with your parents, what will you do
talk with…
understand…
take action …
Number 5
If you have too much homework and you don’t know how to plan your time well , what will you do
use free time between classes
make a weekly plan
Number 6
If you have worries, what will you do
Writing Topic
假如你是李华，你在QQ漂流瓶中收到了这样一个漂流瓶，请你仔细阅读这封信，根据信件内容，用英语回一封信，给她一些建议。
Hi,
I am a 14-year-old girl and a middle school student. I have a lot of worries lately. First, I have too much homework and I don’t know how to plan my time well. Besides, I have some problems with my parents. They always ask me to study hard and they don’t understand me. What should I do Can you give me some suggestions
Yours
Grace
Person(人称）
The first/second person
Tense(时态）
The simple present/future tense
Text(文体）
A letter
Details(细节）
1.write a letter
(give your suggestions)
2.80 words
What should we think about
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
Lead to the topic.
Make a conclusion
Show your suggestions
Think of the beginning sentences
Beginning: lead to the topic
1.I am sorry to hear that you have a lot of worries. You needn't worry too much. It's normal to have problems in our life. Maybe I can give you some suggestions.
2.I am sorry to hear that you have much stress. You needn't worry too much. Here are my suggestions.
3.I know you are unhappy these days. Let me give you some advice.
Think of the body sentences
Body
I think you should…
If you…you will…
As long as you…you will…
Unless you…you will…
Ending: make a conclusion
Think of the ending sentences
1.In a word, if you have problems, you should face them and solve them but to run away from them. I hope my suggestions can help you out.
3. Everything will be fine. I hope my advice can help you.
2.In a word, sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. I am sure you can solve your problems.
Write a passage in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written my suggestions(4 points)
Para : I have made a conclusion(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3/4
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
1
Grammar and language I have used the adverbial clause of condition correctly. For example，if you do...you will... (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example，I think you should…if you... you will... As long as…you will… unless…you will…(1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
80
1
Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Dear Grace,
I am sorry to hear that you have a lot of worries. You needn't to worry too much. It's normal to have problems in our life. Maybe I can give you some suggestions.
On the one hand, you think you have worries on your homework. First, I think you should make a plan for doing your homework every day. Next, I think you can use some free time between classes . Finally, If you do your homework as soon as you get home, you will be able to deal with your heavy homework .
On the other hand, you think you have problems with your parents. Firstly, I think you should understand them. Because parents want you to have a better future. That's why they always ask you to study hard. Secondly, I think talking with your parents is the best way to solve the problem. You should tell them your worries and feelings. If you talk to them, they will understand you well and give you some good suggestions. And because they have more experience and are always there to help you. Thirdly, if you want them to understand you, you should take action to do better by yourselves.
In a word, if you have problems, you should face them and solve them but to run away from them. I hope my suggestions can help you out.
