(共19张PPT)
单元主题意义引领下的
应用文写作
——以选择性必修一 Unit 1 People of Achievement 为例
A description of someone you admire
2022年5月30日
(诺贝尔奖)one of the prizes given each year to people who have done important work in physics, chemistry, economics, literature, and peace.
Tu Youyou was awarded the
Nobel Prize for Physiology (生理学) or Medicine on 5 October 2015.
1. What is happening in the picture
2. How can we describe Tu, a person of success or a person of value?
Activity 1 :review
Is Tu Youyou a person of success or a person of value Why
How to be a person like Tu
Discussion
Activity2:
假如你是李华。你校英语社定于下月举行以“你敬佩的一个人”为主题的英文征文比赛, 介绍生活当中的伟人并谈谈你的看法。请你给校英语社投稿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸上作答。
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A letter
A description of someone you admire
Activity3:analyse
1. Structure
2. Tense(时态)
3. Voice(语态)
4. Person(人称)
5. Language features
simple future & past tense
active voice & passive voice (often)
the 1st, 2nd & 3rd person(often)
brief, direct, clear, concise and formal
假如你是李华。你校英语社定于下月举行以“你敬佩的一个人”为主题的英文征文比赛, 介绍生活当中的伟人并谈谈你的看法。请你给校英语社投稿
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
purpose;
relevant descriptions (appearance;
achievement ;
conclusion
which aspect can we introudce a person
general information (人物概况)
appearance & personality (外貌、性格)
education (教育经历)
life experience(生平)
assessment or achievement (评价)
general information (人物概况)
Madam Curie, a great scientist, was born in Poland on Nov. 7, 1867.
---用同位语
1.居里夫人是一位伟大的科学家,1867年11月7日出生在波兰。
2.亚伯拉罕-林肯是一个贫穷家庭的儿子,于1809年2月12日出生在肯塔基州。
Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on Feb. 12, 1809.
3.查尔斯-狄更斯出生于一个贫穷的职员家庭,是一位伟大的小说家,曾受过很少的教育。
Born into a poor clerk’s family, Charles Dickens, a great novelist, had little schooling.
appearance & personality (外貌、性格)
He is a near-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose.
---用with作定语
1.他近视,鼻子上戴着一副眼镜。
2.她长得很好看(长相普通/滑稽),有一头漂亮的长发。
She is good-looking/ordinary-looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair.
3.他又高又瘦,眉毛浓密,看上去很帅。
He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows, looking very handsome.
4.爱因斯坦出生于德国,是一位具有非凡想象力的伟大科学家。
。
Born in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist with extraordinary imagination.
education (教育经历)
Majoring in science, he graduated from a famous university in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies.
---用非谓语动词
1.他主修理科,毕业于北方一所名牌大学,4年后出国深造。
2.毕业于中山大学英语系,她继续深造,获得博士学位。
Graduating from the Department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor’s degree.
life experience(生平)
He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.
---用倒装句、定语从句
1.他创造了新的游泳世界纪录,为中国队赢得了一枚金牌。
2.他如此努力,以至于他几乎一生都致力于教育事业。
So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to the education cause.
3.以极大的决心和毅力,他花了37年时间在这本书上,为中国作出了巨大贡献。
With great determination and perseverance, he spent 37 years on the book, which makes a great contribution to China.
assessment or achievement (评价)
Leifeng set us a good example, so all the people spoke highly of him.
---用动词、形容词短语
1.雷锋给我们树立了一个好榜样,因此所有人都高度评价他。
2.他是中国最伟大的小说家之一,作为一个杰出的人物,将永远被人们铭记。
He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
3.我们高度赞扬他的英勇事迹,他的英雄事迹将传遍全国各地。
We sing high praise for his brave stories, and his heroic story will spread all over the country.
介绍人物常用句型:
① I am Li Hua,a girl of 23 /aged 23, who graduated from Guangdong University. (同位语,定语从句)
② I am Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School,which is close to your school. (同位语,定语从句)
③ I attach great importance to subjects such as physics, computer science, English and so on. I show a high sense of team spirit, which I think is of great importance for the job. (定语从句)
④ Born in Shanghai in 1980, Yao Ming is considered/honored as one of the most outstanding basketball players in the world. (非谓语)
⑤ Our English teacher is attractive and slim with a pair of glasses on her nose. (with复合结构)
⑥ My favorite teacher is... ,a responsible teacher with over 20 years’ teaching experience. Being optimistic and energetic, he often takes an active part in after-class activities. (非谓语)
⑦ He set a new world record in the competition, for which everyone thinks highly of him. Not only is he gifted at English but also he has a good command of French. (倒装句)
⑧ In his spare time,it is he who organizes activities such as outings and parties for us, from which we benefit a lot, (强调句型,定语从句)
⑨ It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high-speed railways all over the world.(强调句)
Based on what we have learnt about Tu Youyou and what Albert Einstein said, can you list more people to share your understanding of success and value
activity 4:Thinking&talk
Free Talk
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介; 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us./ Speaking of the person I respect most, I want to introduce…
activity5:Assignment
Checklist
Checklist self group other group teacher
Content Does he/she answer the questions clearly
Does he/she list the concrete reasons
Does the presentation include the measures to be a person like Tu
Structure Are the ideas presented clearly and logically
Language Does the presentation contain the words/expressions we have learnt this class
Does he/she speak fluently
Suggestion
Assessment
( Please rank your assessment based on evidence. )
Thank you!