2024届高三英语二轮复习：读后续写亲情类奶奶做清洁工供孙子读大学学案（含答案）
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ryan lost his parents in an accident when he was only two. Since then, his grandma,Elsa, raised him alone, and tried to provide him with everything he needed.
瑞安两岁时在一次事故中失去了父母。从那以后，他的奶奶艾尔莎独自抚养他，并试图为他提供所需的一切。
When Ryan was 15, his grandma retired from her company. She had prepared much of her savings for Ryan’s college education, so she just took on a part-time job to cover the daily bills. However, Ryan disliked his grandma’s part-time job. She worked as a cleaning lady at a nearby park and he was afraid one of his classmates would see his grandma and think lowly of them.
瑞安15岁时，他的奶奶从公司退休了。她已经为瑞恩的大学教育准备了很多积蓄，所以她只是做了一份兼职来支付日常账单。然而，瑞安不喜欢他奶奶的兼职工作。她在附近的一个公园当清洁女工，他担心他的一个同学看到他的奶奶会对他们不屑一顾。
One day,Ryan was chosen to act the lead role in a school play. All others acting in the play invited their families to the big opening night, but Ryan was too ashamed to invite his grandma. Unfortunately for him,EIsa saw the flyer (宣传单) of the play while she was cleaning Ryan’s room. That night, when having the dinner in the living room, she talked to Ryan about the flyer, saying she would love to attend.
有一天，瑞恩被选为学校话剧的主角。所有在剧中表演的人都邀请了他们的家人参加盛大的开幕之夜，但瑞恩太羞愧了，没有邀请他的奶奶。不幸的是，EIsa看到了传单(宣传单) 当她打扫瑞恩的房间时。那天晚上，当她在客厅吃晚饭时，她和Ryan谈论了传单，说她很乐意参加。
“You won’t be attending, grandma,” he shouted. Hearing that, Elsa wanted to know why. Finally, Ryan broke, “It’s because I don’t want my friends to find out you’re a cleaning lady!“ Elsa was shocked. She was hurt, and couldn’t find the words to respond to her grandson. Instead, she silently went to her room and cried all night long.
“你不会来的，奶奶，”他喊道。听到这些，艾尔莎想知道为什么。最后，Ryan说：“因为我不想让我的朋友发现你是一个清洁女工！”Elsa很震惊。她很受伤，找不到语言来回应她的孙子。相反，她默默地回到自己的房间，哭了一整夜。
Little did Ryan know — his grandma kept working because of him. If she had the choice, she would rather stay at home and enjoy her retirement, but she knew she had to make money so that Ryan could continue living comfortably. And although Elsa was sad about Ryan’s behavior, she continued working.
瑞安几乎不知道——因为他，他的奶奶一直在工作。如果有选择的话，她宁愿呆在家里享受退休生活，但她知道自己必须赚钱，这样Ryan才能继续舒适地生活。尽管艾尔莎对瑞恩的行为感到难过，但她仍在继续工作。
Elsa’s legs and back had been experiencing bad pains for long because of her work. And she just secretly took painkillers (止痛药)without telling Ryan about her illness. However, the terrible thing happened.One Sunday morning at home, she found herself unable to stand up.
由于工作原因，艾尔莎的腿和背部长期疼痛难忍。她只是偷偷地吃了止痛药(止痛药)没有告诉瑞恩她的病情。然而，可怕的事情发生了。一个星期天早上，在家里，她发现自己站不起来了。
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.开头已给出。
Soon, Ryan found it and rushed her to the hospital.
很快，瑞安发现了这个情况，并将她紧急送往医院。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ryan decided to say sorry to grandma.
瑞安决定向奶奶道歉。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本分析】
【故事大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ryan两岁时父母在一场事故中丧生，他跟着奶奶生活，奶奶为了给Ryan提供舒适的生活兼职做公园的清洁工，Ryan被选为学校话剧的主角，其他人都邀请了家人，但是Ryan担心同学看不起他就没有告诉奶奶，奶奶无意中发现了传单并表示愿意参加，得知Ryan的想法后奶奶很伤心，但她依然继续工作，由于工作劳累，一个星期天的早晨，奶奶发现自己站不起来了。
【详解】
1.情节续写：
①由第一段首句内容“很快，Ryan发现了，赶紧把她送到了医院。”可知，第一段可描写Ryan很担心焦虑的心情，将奶奶送到医院救治，坐立不安地等待奶奶的治疗，与此同时得知奶奶的病情，并为自己之前说过的话感到后悔。好在在医生的治疗下，奶奶很快恢复了健康。
②由第二段首句内容“Ryan决定向奶奶道歉。”可知，第二段可描写Ryan向奶奶道歉，并努力分担家务活，减轻奶奶的负担。后来带奶奶去观看学校话剧并给了她一个惊喜。在台上他向奶奶表达的感恩之情，观众们报以热烈的掌声。
2.续写线索：焦急地等待——检查结果——得知奶奶隐瞒了自己的病情——陷入回忆——深深地后悔——表达道歉——奶奶安慰表示原谅——给奶奶惊喜---带奶奶去学校参加话剧表演——奶奶自豪地流泪——观众们感动
3.重点词汇
raise him alone
provide him with everything
cover the daily bills
think lowly of
realize/be aware of
apologize/make an apology/say sorry to sb
be seated/sit
worried/concerned
proudly/with pride
One possible version:
Soon, Ryan found it and rushed her to the hospital. Worried and anxious, Ryan waited restlessly outside the emergency room. After what seemed an endless wait, the door opened. Out came the doctor and EIsa in a wheelchair, Ryan was informed Elsa’s illness was just a result of overwork. Luckily, it wasn’t deadly. Ryan let out a sigh of relief. At that moment, memories came flooding back. He recalled everything Grandma had done for him. Realizing Elsa was hiding her pain, he felt regretful about his previous hurtful words.
Ryan decided to say sorry to grandma. Turning to her, he knelt down, grasping her hand, and apologized sincerely to her, “Sorry, grandma. I shouldn’t have shouted like that.” Elsa just smiled and comforted him. Days after Elsa felt better, Ryan surprised her by taking her to his school. She was seated in the front row of the school hall. “My performance is for my selfless, hardworking and loving grandma!” Ryan said before they started the play. A wave of applause echoed in the hall, and Elsa was proudly in tears.
【点睛】[高分句型1] After what seemed an endless wait, the door opened. （运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Out came the doctor and EIsa in a wheelchair, Ryan was informed Elsa’s illness was just a result of overwork.（运用了副词out位于句首引起的全部倒装）
[高分句型3] Turning to her, he knelt down, grasping her hand, and apologized sincerely to her, “Sorry, grandma. I shouldn’t have shouted like that.”（运用了现在分词作状语；shouldn’t have done本不应该做而做了，通常表示后悔的心情）
[高分句型4]That night, when having the dinner in the living room, she talked to Ryan about the flyer, saying she would love to attend.
（运用了状语从句中的省略）
[高分句型5]Little did Ryan know — his grandma kept working because of him. （否定词little“没有”放句首要半倒装，助动词did提到主语前）
[高分句型6]All others acting in the play invited their families to the big opening night.（现在分词做others的后置定语）
[高分句型7]If she had the choice, she would rather stay at home and enjoy her retirement.（if引导的虚拟状语从句）
Ryan lost his parents in an accident when he was only two. Since then, his grandma,Elsa, raised him alone, and tried to provide him with everything he needed.
瑞安两岁时在一次事故中失去了父母。从那以后，他的奶奶艾尔莎独自抚养他，并试图为他提供所需的一切。
When Ryan was 15, his grandma retired from her company. She had prepared much of her savings for Ryan’s college education, so she just took on a part-time job to cover the daily bills. However, Ryan disliked his grandma’s part-time job. She worked as a cleaning lady at a nearby park and he was afraid one of his classmates would see his grandma and think lowly of them.
瑞安15岁时，他的奶奶从公司退休了。她已经为瑞恩的大学教育准备了很多积蓄，所以她只是做了一份兼职来支付日常账单。然而，瑞安不喜欢他奶奶的兼职工作。她在附近的一个公园当清洁女工，他担心他的一个同学看到他的奶奶会对他们不屑一顾。
One day,Ryan was chosen to act the lead role in a school play. All others acting in the play invited their families to the big opening night, but Ryan was too ashamed to invite his grandma. Unfortunately for him,EIsa saw the flyer (宣传单) of the play while she was cleaning Ryan’s room. That night, when having the dinner in the living room, she talked to Ryan about the flyer, saying she would love to attend.
有一天，瑞恩被选为学校话剧的主角。所有在剧中表演的人都邀请了他们的家人参加盛大的开幕之夜，但瑞恩太羞愧了，没有邀请他的奶奶。不幸的是，EIsa看到了传单(宣传单) 当她打扫瑞恩的房间时。那天晚上，当她在客厅吃晚饭时，她和Ryan谈论了传单，说她很乐意参加。
“You won’t be attending, grandma,” he shouted. Hearing that, Elsa wanted to know why. Finally, Ryan broke, “It’s because I don’t want my friends to find out you’re a cleaning lady!“ Elsa was shocked. She was hurt, and couldn’t find the words to respond to her grandson. Instead, she silently went to her room and cried all night long.
“你不会来的，奶奶，”他喊道。听到这些，艾尔莎想知道为什么。最后，Ryan说：“因为我不想让我的朋友发现你是一个清洁女工！”Elsa很震惊。她很受伤，找不到语言来回应她的孙子。相反，她默默地回到自己的房间，哭了一整夜。
Little did Ryan know — his grandma kept working because of him. If she had the choice, she would rather stay at home and enjoy her retirement, but she knew she had to make money so that Ryan could continue living comfortably. And although Elsa was sad about Ryan’s behavior, she continued working.
瑞安几乎不知道——因为他，他的奶奶一直在工作。如果有选择的话，她宁愿呆在家里享受退休生活，但她知道自己必须赚钱，这样Ryan才能继续舒适地生活。尽管艾尔莎对瑞恩的行为感到难过，但她仍在继续工作。
Elsa’s legs and back had been experiencing bad pains for long because of her work. And she just secretly took painkillers (止痛药)without telling Ryan about her illness. However, the terrible thing happened.One Sunday morning at home, she found herself unable to stand up.
由于工作原因，艾尔莎的腿和背部长期疼痛难忍。她只是偷偷地吃了止痛药(止痛药)没有告诉瑞恩她的病情。然而，可怕的事情发生了。一个星期天早上，在家里，她发现自己站不起来了。
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.开头已给出。
Soon, Ryan found it and rushed her to the hospital.
很快，瑞安发现了这个情况，并将她紧急送往医院。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ryan decided to say sorry to grandma.
瑞安决定向奶奶道歉。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本分析】
【故事大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ryan两岁时父母在一场事故中丧生，他跟着奶奶生活，奶奶为了给Ryan提供舒适的生活兼职做公园的清洁工，Ryan被选为学校话剧的主角，其他人都邀请了家人，但是Ryan担心同学看不起他就没有告诉奶奶，奶奶无意中发现了传单并表示愿意参加，得知Ryan的想法后奶奶很伤心，但她依然继续工作，由于工作劳累，一个星期天的早晨，奶奶发现自己站不起来了。
【详解】
1.情节续写：
①由第一段首句内容“很快，Ryan发现了，赶紧把她送到了医院。”可知，第一段可描写Ryan很担心焦虑的心情，将奶奶送到医院救治，坐立不安地等待奶奶的治疗，与此同时得知奶奶的病情，并为自己之前说过的话感到后悔。好在在医生的治疗下，奶奶很快恢复了健康。
②由第二段首句内容“Ryan决定向奶奶道歉。”可知，第二段可描写Ryan向奶奶道歉，并努力分担家务活，减轻奶奶的负担。后来带奶奶去观看学校话剧并给了她一个惊喜。在台上他向奶奶表达的感恩之情，观众们报以热烈的掌声。
2.续写线索：焦急地等待——检查结果——得知奶奶隐瞒了自己的病情——陷入回忆——深深地后悔——表达道歉——奶奶安慰表示原谅——给奶奶惊喜---带奶奶去学校参加话剧表演——奶奶自豪地流泪——观众们感动
3.重点词汇
raise him alone
provide him with everything
cover the daily bills
think lowly of
realize/be aware of
apologize/make an apology/say sorry to sb
be seated/sit
worried/concerned
proudly/with pride
One possible version:
Soon, Ryan found it and rushed her to the hospital. Worried and anxious, Ryan waited restlessly outside the emergency room. After what seemed an endless wait, the door opened. Out came the doctor and EIsa in a wheelchair, Ryan was informed Elsa’s illness was just a result of overwork. Luckily, it wasn’t deadly. Ryan let out a sigh of relief. At that moment, memories came flooding back. He recalled everything Grandma had done for him. Realizing Elsa was hiding her pain, he felt regretful about his previous hurtful words.
Ryan decided to say sorry to grandma. Turning to her, he knelt down, grasping her hand, and apologized sincerely to her, “Sorry, grandma. I shouldn’t have shouted like that.” Elsa just smiled and comforted him. Days after Elsa felt better, Ryan surprised her by taking her to his school. She was seated in the front row of the school hall. “My performance is for my selfless, hardworking and loving grandma!” Ryan said before they started the play. A wave of applause echoed in the hall, and Elsa was proudly in tears.
【点睛】[高分句型1] After what seemed an endless wait, the door opened. （运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Out came the doctor and EIsa in a wheelchair, Ryan was informed Elsa’s illness was just a result of overwork.（运用了副词out位于句首引起的全部倒装）
[高分句型3] Turning to her, he knelt down, grasping her hand, and apologized sincerely to her, “Sorry, grandma. I shouldn’t have shouted like that.”（运用了现在分词作状语；shouldn’t have done本不应该做而做了，通常表示后悔的心情）
[高分句型4]That night, when having the dinner in the living room, she talked to Ryan about the flyer, saying she would love to attend.
（运用了状语从句中的省略）
[高分句型5]Little did Ryan know — his grandma kept working because of him. （否定词little“没有”放句首要半倒装，助动词did提到主语前）
[高分句型6]All others acting in the play invited their families to the big opening night.（现在分词做others的后置定语）
[高分句型7]If she had the choice, she would rather stay at home and enjoy her retirement.（if引导的虚拟状语从句）