仁爱版九年级下册Unit 5 China and the world Topic 1 作文指导课件(共14张PPT)

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模块五　第一章　作文指导
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Clark和他的朋友正在北京度假，他们计划爬长城，想向你了解一下长城的情况。你因有事不能陪同，请根据以下内容提示，给Clark写一封邮件，告诉他有关长城的信息，并给他一些游览长城的建议。词数80左右。
The Great Wall
Introduction Advice
1.有两千多年历史 1.穿运动鞋
2.主要位于中国北方 2.做绿色观光者
3.长度约为8 800千米 3.注意安全
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
第一步：审题谋篇
(一)审题
1．确定体裁：本文是一封介绍长城及游览长城时注意事项的邮件，是一篇_________(体裁)。
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为___________人称。
3．确定时态：以____________________为主。
应用文
第三
一般现在时
(二)谋篇布局
时间
第二步：推敲词汇
1．位于________________　　　　　　　　
2. ……的长度________________________
3．运动鞋______________________
4. 一个好选择_______________________
lie in
a length of...
sports shoes
a good choice
5．值得做某事_____________________________
6. 玩得开心________________________________
7．……之一_______________________________
8. 保证安全________________________________
be worth doing sth.
have a good time
one of...
keep safe
第三步：由词扩句
1．长城位于中国的北方并且它有2 000多年的历史。
The Great Wall ______ ______ ______ _______ of China and it has________ __________ ______ over 2，000 years.
2．不到长城非好汉。
He who________ __________ _________ to the Great Wall is not a true man.
lies in the north
a
history of
has never been
3．登长城时你应该穿运动鞋。
You should wear a pair of_________ _________ when you're climbing the Great Wall.
4．长城值得一游。
The Great Wall is__________ __________.
sports shoes
worth visiting
第四步：句式升级
1．长城位于中国的北方，且有2 000多年的历史。
The Great Wall, ________ ______ ____ __________ _________ over 2，000 years, _______ _________ __________ ___________ ________ China.
which has a history of
lies in the north of
2．常言道：不到长城非好汉。
Just ______ _______ _________ _______， “He who ______ _______ ________ to the Great Wall is not a true man.”
3．登长城时，穿运动鞋是一个好的选择。
When you climb the Great Wall, wearing a pair of _________ _________ may be a_________ __________.
as the saying goes
has never
been
sports shoes
good choice
第五步：连句成篇
Dear Clark，
It's a pity that I can't climb the Great Wall with you. Here I have something about it to tell you and a few suggestions for you.
The Great Wall, which has a history of over 2，000 years, lies in the north of China. It has a length of about 8，800 km. Climbing the Great Wall is a must on a trip. Just as the saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.”
When you climb the Great Wall, wearing a pair of sports shoes may be a good choice. What's more, it's important for you to keep safe. Last but not least, you had better be a green visitor.
The Great Wall is worth visiting. I do hope you have a great time.
Yours，
Li Hua