2024届高考英语作文复习专项：读后续写高分技巧之非谓语动词的运用导学案（无答案）

读后续写高分技能—非谓语动词的运用
Teaching aims：By the end of the class, students are able to vivify and enrich the scene by using
1、现在分词doing/过去分词done作状语（注意分词与逻辑主语的关系）
2、分词形容词作状语 (修饰句子主语)
3、with+名词/代词 + doing/done 复合结构
学习理解
现在分词短语doing可用来表示伴随动作，也可替换状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句等，使句子结构更加紧凑。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的现在分词的使用。
1.He said, looking down at his daughter with love.
2."How's Amy " he asked, opening his eyes wide.
3.Mrs Black sat down, breathing heavily.
4.He slept the first night in a field, feeling lonely, tired, cold and hungry.
5.Seeing the helicopter, Jane waved her yellow blouse, screaming for help.
应用实践
二、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落。
1. I sat back in an easy chair and fell asleep.
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2.When I saw no one noticing us, I put the Christmas present down and left.
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3.When she arrived there, she searched the unfamiliar building, and asked for Amy’s dormitory from door to door.
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4.For a few moments I just stood there. I held that ten-dollar bill and I wondered what to buy and who to buy it for.
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5.A tall girl answered the door and she was frowning. She told Emily that Amy was working in the school café.When she heard this, Emily forced a faint smile, thanked her and left.
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学习理解
过去分词或分词形容词可用来表示伴随状态，描写情绪或心理活动。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的过去分词或形容词的作用。
1.Mr Bumble stopped for a moment, amazed and even rather frightened by this change in Oliver．
2.Frightened and frustrated, she began sobbing.
3.“Why is the boy crying ”repeated the other man, puzzled.
4.His mind went blank, shocked and scared.
5.Jane walked in the forest, tired and worried.
应用实践
二、请用过去分词或形容词改写下列句子或小段落。
1.In the evening, the children returned home. They were tired and hungry.
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____________________________________________________________2.Tom looked over the gate. He could see a yellow cart which was loaded with furniture and plants coming up the road.
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3.Meg thought that her classmates would consider her to be a lazy girl. She sat on the floor. She felt hopeless and worried.
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____________________________________________________________4.Oliver went up to the master，with his bowl in his hand．He felt very frightened, but also desperate with hunger.
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____________________________________________________________5.He was dressed up as Father Christmas and was accompanied by a “guard of honour” of six pretty girls.He rode a baby elephant who was called Jumbo and set off down the main street of the city.
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学习理解
with+名词/代词+doing/done复合结构在句中表状态或说明背景情况，常作伴随、条件、原因、方式等状语。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的with+名词+doing/done复合结构的作用。
1、With tears welling up in my eyes, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.
2、He rushed to the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing.
3、With her eyes sparkling, she struggled to her feet and shouted, “I’m here!"
4、With all the things bought, they headed for the church.
5、With his plan ruined by the accident, he let out a cry of anger.
应用实践
二、请根据with+名词/代词+doing/done复合结构，填所给词正确形式。
1. With prices ______(go) up so fast, we can’t afford luxuries(奢侈品).
2. He worked alone in the lab with the door_________(lock).
3. She had to walk home with bike _______(steal).
4. With the boy__________(lead) the way, we found the hotel.
5.The singer stood there, with a group of fans ___________ (surround) him.
创新迁移
Scene 1 荒野求救
During an adventure, Jane quarreled with her husband Tom and got lost in the forest. Then, she tried her best to attract the attention of the helicopter. Finally, she was saved and reunited with Tom.
Suddenly, a moving dot(点) on the horizon was spotted. __________________________ (筋疲力尽但又满怀希望的),Jane jumped to her feet to catch a clear sight of it. “The helicopter,” Jane murmured(低语 v ), sprang up(腾起 ) and dashed(冲 v) to the center of an open area,__________ (wave)her yellow blouse desperately and_________(yell) at the helicopter with excitement. This time she was spotted. With eyes _________(fill) with tears, Jane jumped off the rock and rushed towards Tom , _________(hug) tightly in his arms, “please never leave me alone!"
Scene 2 骑行遇狼逃生
Mac was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. His friends had to stop to make a bicycle repair, so he pedaled (骑行) along alone. Suddenly, a wolf appeared, catching up with him. At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska and saw the scene.
The car abruptly(突然) stopped in front of him. Paul rolled down the window,_________ (yell), “Come on, get in the car.”_______________(内心害怕), Mac jumped off the bicycle and dashed into the back seat of the car. The wolf walked around the car and howled (嚎叫；咆哮 v )at them fiercely, ____________(try) to break the widow but just in vain.____________(realize) the wolf couldn't catch up any more, Mac sighed with relief . Paul handed him a bottle of water and he managed a weak smile, ________________(murmur低语) something like “Thank you very much”.
Scene 3 火海救人
Tiara, an 8-year-old girl, was stuck in the firing house. Surrel, her neighbor who was 64 years old, went into smoke-filled house searching but in vain. He ran outside to catch his breath. "Where is Tiara "he asked desperately.
“The second floor. "her aunt shouted back. ________(take) a deep breath, he went in a second time. The darkness was overwhelming. ________(run) blindly, he finally made it to the second floor, where he was met by burning heat. ________________________(担忧且气喘吁吁), “Baby girl, where are you ” He cried. Suddenly a soft moan (n.呻吟) emerged. ____________(hear) this, he quickly crawled(爬v ) towards the sound. Finally, he touched something. It was Tiara. With his heart ____________(beat) fast, he pulled Tiara toward him, ___________(hug) her tightly and_____________(bring) her out of the house, totally_____________________(筋疲力尽的) .
Homework
Apply what we learnt today to your continuation writing.
The story of “ I” and “the Mexican family” 2021年1月八省联考读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw(锯子)from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.__________________________
Paragraph2：After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.______________________________