(共15张PPT)
邀请信
——十校联考应用文
应用文的目的
—实现交际目的
真实地考虑对方感受(读者意识)
假定你是校英语俱乐部 “Language and culture” 的负责人李华,请给外教 Peter 写邮件邀请他做一次讲座。
内容包括:1.讲座的时间和地点;2.讲座对象;3.讲座的内容;
注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题
体裁
写作对象
人称
时态
写作目的
要点
语气
邀请信(决定格式和语言模板)
校英语俱乐部负责人李华→外教
第一人称(I/We)+第二人称(you)
一般现在时+一般将来时
成功邀请外教做讲座
讲座时间和地点;对象;内容
尊重真诚
You can do ×
You should do ×
读者意识之第一段
I’m Li Hua, 同位语. I’m writing to invite you to do…
I’m Li Hua,校英语俱乐部 “Language and culture” 的负责人. I’m writing to invite you to do…
in charge of
take charge of
be responsible for
head n.负责人;领导人
leader n.领袖;领导者(语义不是很契合)
I’m Li Hua, the head of English Club Language and Culture. I’m writing to invite you to deliver a lecture.
读者意识之第二段
讲座时间和地点;对象;内容
高级句式+词块+细节增加
The lecture will be held next Friday in the lecture hall.
Our speech will start on October 15th at 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. in the lecture hall.
时间太笼统显得邀请不真诚
时间由小到大
具体时间月日年
from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. on October 15th in the lecture hall
读者意识之第二段
对象
高级句式+词块+细节增加
没有提及(要点缺失)
提及了都基本可行
Students who are interested will participate in it.
all students
club members
读者意识之第二段
高级句式+词块+细节增加
讲座内容
how to improve English
English language, English culture and the role of English
English traditional cultural activities
Language and culture
the difference between Chinese and English
practical ways of learning English
English learning
!!!细究题目(深意)
English
n.英语;英文
adj.英格兰的;英国的;英格兰人的;英国人的
读者意识之第二段
讲座内容
!!!细究题目(深意)
Language and culture
the difference between Chinese and English
the role of English in American history
how British culture has influenced the development of English
how English reflects the change of American culture/history
the origin and development of English
the diversity of languages and the corresponding cultures
the history of Britain
some ways of learning English
1+1
读者意识之第三段
希望邀请成功+尽快回复
I would appreciate it /be grateful if you could accept my invitation.
It would be greatly appreciated if you could accept my invitation.
Your presence will definitely add color to our activity.
I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Looking forward to your early reply.
读者意识之合成作文
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, the head of English club Language and culture. I’m writing to invite you to deliver a lecture to students.
The lecture is scheduled in the lecture hall from 2 p.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday, in which all students can participate. And the lecture is about how English reflects the development of western culture, which aims to stir up students’ passion for leaning English and deepen their understanding of western culture.
I would appreciate it if you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
你是外教Peter,你愿意接受邀请在工作之余来进行演讲吗?
尊重真诚(的恭维)
恭维Peter的语言能力出色;文化了解透彻;讲座经验丰富等…
恭维Peter的国家的文化灿烂&历史悠久(侧面恭维)
have a good command of English
equipped with a deep/profound insight into British culture
with great eloquence/abundant experience in delivering lectures
splendid British culture
读者意识之如何修改
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, the head of English club Language and culture. I’m writing to invite you to deliver a lecture to students.
The lecture is scheduled in the lecture hall from 2 p.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday, in which all students can participate. And the lecture is about how English reflects the development of western culture, which aims to stir up students’ passion for leaning English and deepen their understanding of western culture.
I would appreciate it if you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I’m Li Hua, the head of English club Language and culture. I’m more than honored to invite you to deliver a lecture for your profound insight into western culture.
To stir up students’ passion for English learning and western culture, the lecture is scheduled in the lecture hall from 2 p.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday, in which all students will participate. We hope you could share with us the development of English combined with British splendid culture, which will definitely benefit our students with your great eloquence.
I would appreciate it if you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
读者意识之审题
假如你是李华。你校将组织一次慈善义卖(charity bazaar)活动,请你给外教Margot写一封email,告知她活动内容,并邀请她来参加。慈善义卖活动包括以下内容:
1.活动时间:2017年1月20日。
2.活动地点:体育馆3楼308室。
3.活动目的:筹钱为家庭贫困学生购买冬天的衣物。
4.可带的义卖物品:书籍、旧物……
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
读者意识之审题
假定你是李华,是你校英语协会会长。请你写信给你校外教Mr. Smith,邀请他到校给协会同学做一个关于多元文化的演讲,并介绍相关事宜如下:
1)演讲时间:下星期日下午三点;
2)演讲地点:学校演讲大厅;
3)活动安排:听演讲,提问。
假如你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 比赛时间;
2. 演讲话题;
3. 报名方式。
注意:
1. 词数80左右
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯
读者意识之审题
假定你是高中生李华,你市郊区新建了一个有机农业园。你的外国朋友Tony对有机农业感兴趣,于是你写一封邮件邀请他去有机农业园游玩,内容包括:
1.介绍有机农业园相关内容:
⑴活动:有讲解的参观(a guided tour)、采摘有机蔬菜等;
⑵有机蔬菜种类;
⑶有机蔬菜优点;
2.约定见面时间和地点、期待回复。
注意:
1.词数:80左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会打算举办留学生中华古典诗歌朗诵比赛(the Chinese Classical Poetry Recitation Contest),请你写信邀请留学生James参加。要点如下:
1.活动的目的、意义;
2.比赛时间和地点:7月10日下午3:00-5:00;学校报告厅;
3.内容和形式:诵读中华古典诗歌;前十名奖励诗集《唐诗300首》(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Peter,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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自我介绍+问候+写作背景+写作目的
自我介绍+写作目的
需要选择
I’m Li Hua, 同位语. I’m writing to invite you to do…
题目要求的主要内容
高级句式+词块+细节增加
实现交际目的
希望邀请成功+尽快回复
appreciate/grateful
looking forward to…