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模块二 第二章 作文指导
学校校刊Environmental Protection专栏需要一篇呼吁大家为环保贡献力量的倡议书。请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一篇文章投稿。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
第一步:审题谋篇
(一)审题
1.确定体裁:本文是一篇呼吁大家保护环境的____________(体裁)。
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为__________人称。
3.确定时态:以________________为主。
应用文
第一
一般现在时
(二)谋篇布局
firstly
secondly
finally
第二步:推敲词汇
1.众所周知____________________
2. 关掉______________
3.清盘;光盘_____________________
4. 浇花___________________
as we all know
turn off
clear the plate
water flowers
5.与此同时______________________
6. 吃光____________
7.无论什么____________________
8. 起作用_______________________
at the same time
eat up
no matter what
make a difference
第三步:由词扩句
1.环境问题已经变得越来越严重了。
The environmental problem has become ________ ______ ________ serious.
2.我们应该做什么来保护环境呢?(过渡句)
________ ________ we do to _____________ the environment
3.首先,节约用水很重要。
_________, it's ____________ _____ save water.
more and more
What should
protect
Firstly
important to
4.其次,光盘是良好的行为。
____________, ______________ the plate is a _______ ______________.
5.当我们离开房间时,我们应该关灯。
We should _______ ____ the lights when _____________ a room.
Secondly
clearing
good behavior
turn off
leaving
第四步:句式升级
1.众所周知,环境问题已经变得越来越严重了。
____ ____ _____ _______, the environmental problem _____ _______ ______ and ________ serious.
2.此外,我们可以循环用水并使用它来浇花。
________, we can recycle the water and _______ it to ________ _________.
As we all know
has become
more
more
Besides
reuse
water flowers
3.在外就餐时,我们最好不要点过多的食物。
We'd better ______ ________ ____ __________ food when we eat out.
4.如果可以的话,不要忘了把剩余食物打包回家。
Don't ________ ____ pack the leftover home _____ ______________.
not order too much
forget to
if possible
5.无论我们做的努力多小,它也会起作用的。
_____ ____________ __________ a small ____________ we make, it does _______ _______ __________.
No matter what
effort
make a difference
第五步:连句成篇
I'm pleased to share my views about environmental protection.
As we all know, the environmental problem has become more and more serious. So what should we do to protect the environment
Firstly, it's important to save water. Remember to turn off the tap after use. Besides, we can recycle the water and reuse it to water flowers. Secondly, clearing the plate is a good behavior. We'd better not order too much food when we eat out. At the same time, don't forget to pack the leftover home if possible. Finally, we should turn off the lights when leaving a room.
No matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference.