仁爱版九年级英语全一册 模块4Topic 2 I'm excited about the things that will be discovered in the future. 作文指导课件（15

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模块四 第二章 作文指导
随着现代科技的发展，机器人越来越普遍，给我们的生活带来了很多便利。你们班就Household robots这一话题展开了讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图，介绍一下机器人的基本情况。
注意事项：
1.文中必须包括所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
第一步：审题谋篇
(一)审题
1．确定体裁：本文是一篇介绍家用机器人的________________(体裁)。
2．确定人称：主要人称应为__________________。
3．确定时态：时态应该以____________________为主。
说明文
第三人称
一般现在时
(二)谋篇布局
问题
建议
第二步：推敲词汇
1．被广泛地使用________________________　　　　　　
2. 在我们的日常生活中___________________________
3．与某人聊天_______________________
4. 打电话____________________
be widely used
in our daily life
chat with sb.
make calls
5．处理危险事情____________________________________
6. 另一方面___________________________
7．在我看来_______________________
8. 改善人们生活________________________________
deal with dangerous things
on the other hand
in my opinion
improve people's life
第三步：由词扩句
1．家用机器人很受欢迎。
The household robots are __________ ______ people.
2．家用机器人能被用来做饭。
The household robots can _____ _______ to _________.
popular with
be used
cook
3．家用机器人还能帮助照顾老人，花时间和老人聊天。
The household robots can also help to _______ _______ ________ the elderly and _________ ______ chatting with them.
4．家用机器人的技术开发得不够好。
______ ____________ of the household robots _____ ____ ___________ ________ enough.
take care of
spend time
The technology
is not developed
well
5．家用机器人应该被用来改善人们的生活。
The household robots should be used ______ ___________ people's life.
to improve
第四步：句式升级
1．家用机器人不仅受欢迎而且被广泛地使用在我们的日常生活中。
The household robots ______ ______ _______ popular _________ ________ ________ _________ in our daily life.
are not only
but also
widely used
2．家用机器人的技术开发得不够好， 不能帮助解决所有问题。
______ ___________ of the household robots _____ ______ ______________ _____ enough to _______ ______ ____________.
The technology
is not developed
well
solve all problems
3．家用机器人的价格应该足够低， 这样普通人能负担得起一个家用机器人。
The _______ of the household robots _______ ___________ to be low enough so that __________ __________ can ______ ________.
price
is expected
common people
afford one
第五步：连句成篇
Household Robots
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our life, which brings great convenience to us.　
Household robots are not only popular but also widely used in our daily life. Firstly, they can be used to cook. Secondly, they can help to take care of the elderly and spend time chatting with them. Moreover, they can even make calls to deal with something dangerous. On the other hand, the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all problems.
In my opinion, household robots should be used to improve people's life. Also, I think the price is expected to be low enough so that common people can afford one.