2024届高考英语二轮复习：书面表达概要写作课件（41张PPT）
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概要写作指导
学生在写作过程中的常见问题
1. 不会审题，找不到要点。写了无关紧要的句子。
2. 不会概括，摘抄了文中的个别句子。
3. 表达单一，缺乏高分特质的用词与用句。
4. 衔接不自然，对各类体裁没有清晰的写作框架。
5.其他问题如：书写问题，大小写问题，主谓不一致，拼写等基本表达的正确性问题。
审题时注意的问题
1. 学会判断文体。各种文体有不同的篇章结构。
2. 注意原文的时态。
3. 要抓住主要信息，而不是次要信息。要学会判断段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间的逻辑关系。
4. 切忌抄袭原作原句，或将原文细节作为中心。平时可多做同义词替换练习。
概要微技能
根据概要所需技能，从高度概括，删除细节，同义替换，句式运用以及如何运用巧妙的衔接词等方面展开。
写概要时，首先通读全文，分析文章的组织结构。第二步是寻找关键词，总结每一段的大意。最后一步是根据每段的大意以及作者的侧重点，重组归纳全文的大意用自己的话概述成段，并注意衔接。
学会概括
1. 找主题句，一般来说主题句位于段首或者段末，偶尔出现在段中，甚至有的需要自己提炼。
如何分析？
根据语言特点来判断哪个是主题句，哪些不是。主题句具有概括的特点，其他句子都是支撑句，一般是具体的论据，数字，描述等。
微段落训练
1. What appeals to customers 2. Obviously the quality of a product does, but visual image, an instantly recognized logo, contributes a great deal. 3.It is not only the image provided by the packaging that counts but the whole corporate identity of the company.
answer
supporting details
key sentence
The logo appeals to customers a lot.
attracts
The logo attracts customers a lot.
替 换
1.Both male and female are buying into the trend, but women are expected to do more shopping on the Internet than men. 2. It seems women are now more attracted to the convenience of online shopping than they used to be. 3. Average spending online this Christmas by women will rise to $240 compared to the slightly lower average of $233 for men.
supporting sentences
key sentence
Both male and female are buying into the trend, but women are expected to do more shopping on the Internet than men.
Women do more shopping online than men.
高度提炼
1. With only two weeks to go before Christmas ,buying presents is a high priority for a lot of people. 2.However, this year not so many people are leaving their homes to go shopping. 3. These days lots of people can do their shopping in the comfort of their own homes with the help of the Internet.
specific description
key sentence
These days lots of people can do their shopping in the comfort of their own homes with the help of the Internet.
Nowadays many people can purchase gifts at home on the Internet before Christmas.
高度提炼与替换
1. Logos are used on letterheads, packaging and brochures as well as on the product itself. 2. They may also appear in newspapers or on television as part of an advertising campaign.
并 列 关 系
many occasions
many occasions 是概括性语言
Logos can appear on many occasions.
提炼主题句
练一练
Many doctors see aphasics(失语症患者）as people who are not completely normal because they lack the ability to understand words. However, according to Dr.Sacks, they are more gifted than normal people. Normal people may get carried away by words. Aphasics seem to understand expressions better , though they cannot understand words.
Many doctors see aphasics(失语症患者）as people who are not completely normal because they lack the ability to understand words. However, according to Dr.Sacks, they are more gifted than normal people. Normal people may get carried away by words. Aphasics seem to understand expressions better , though they cannot understand words.
Dr. Sacks believes aphasics are more talented than normal people.
删除细节
在概要写作中，如何识别概括性的语言是一种能力。要识别概括性的语言，首先要学会辨析概括性与细节描写等语言之间的区别。会识别什么样的语言是概括性的，什么样的语言是细节性，描述性的。
一.删除细节
The countryside my father grew up in was large in size.
My father grew up in a large countryside.
One winter Sunday, my little sister Colleen and I built the greatest snowman ever. For personality ,we gave him a traditional carrot nose, beautiful hat, cozy scarf and gloves.
One winter Sunday, my younger sister and I produced an attractive snowman.
attractive
Online shopping is becoming more and more popular for a number of reasons; prices are often lower online ;you don’t have to queue up in busy shops and you can buy almost any product imaginable with just a few clicks of your mouse.
Online shopping’s great strengths contribute to the increasing popularity of it.
strengths
二.减少具体例子
Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain ,and Huangshan Mountain, were visited by only a few people in the past. Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on those mountains, and better train and bus services, have brought them within reach of many who never thought of visiting them ten years ago.
With the development of society , more and more people are visiting beautiful mountains like Mount Tai.
the development of society
练一练
We know that many animals do not stay in one place. Birds ,fish and other animals move from one place to another place at a certain time. They move for different reasons: most of them move to find food more easily, but others move to get away from places that are too crowded.
We know that many animals do not stay in one place. Birds ,fish and other animals move from one place to another place at a certain time. They move for different reasons: most of them move to find food more easily, but others move to get away from places that are too crowded.
migration
many reasons
Many reasons can account for（解释..的原因） the migration（迁徙） of animals.
同义替换
高考评分最高档次（第5档）中的第四条，要考生完全使用自己的语言，这表明我们不能摘抄原文原句，我们得用其他的语言来表述与原文句子同样的意思。
词词替换
In order to keep our health, we should take more healthy food into consideration.
To maintain our health, we should consider more healthy food.
词性变化
It’s of great importance to keep a balanced diet as well as a healthy eating habit.
A balanced diet and a healthy eating habit are very important.
单词与词组和词组与词组的替换
A healthy diet can equip us with a strong and healthy body.
A healthy diet can make us healthy and strong.
句式替换
运用主动语态和被动语态的转化及反向表达
You can obtain a large amount of information on the internet nowadays.
Abundant information is available on the internet.
同义替换填空
1. Make sure that you have eight hours’ sleep.
Eight hours’ sleep must be __________.
2. If things are not properly dealt with, our labor will be totally lost.
Things not properly ________,our labor will be totally lost.
guaranteed
handled
In the United States, everyone can buy guns.
In the United States, guns are ______ to everyone.
available
请用同义替换的方法概括段落大意
We know that many animals do not stay in one place. Birds, fish and other animals move from one place to another place at a certain time. They move for different reasons: most of them move to find food more easily, but others move to get away from places that are too crowded.
Animals always migrate regularly. The reason varies from one species to another.
反向表达
I had a good idea.
A good idea hit me.
A wondrful idea struck me.
A fantastic idea flew into my mind.
I felt sad yesterday.
Sadness seized me yeaterday.
I felt excited and happy.
A mixture of excitement and happiness filled my heart.
Great changes took place in Quzhou in 2018.
The year 2018 witnessed the great changes in Quzhou.
The father is very proud to have an intelligent and pretty daughter.
The intelligence and beauty of the daughter makes her father extremely proud.
巧妙使用衔接词
It helps drive Zhejiang's development. Furthermore, it's of great help to enchance the high-speed railway technology.
not only.....but also as well as both...and Furthermore Besides What's more Moreover
In addition 并列
It helps drive Zhejiang's development. It helps to promote the high-speed railway technology.
The graduates themselves are responsible for the situation. The government should be responsible for it too.
Not only are the graduates themselves responsible for the situation, but also the government should.
因果
The students have pressure from studies .Parents don't need to put much pressure on them.
The students have pressure from studies . Accordingly, parents don't need to put much pressure on them.
therefore consequently hence accordingly
because of due to owing to as a result of
now that thus as since for thanks to
概要写作指导
学生在写作过程中的常见问题
1. 不会审题，找不到要点。写了无关紧要的句子。
2. 不会概括，摘抄了文中的个别句子。
3. 表达单一，缺乏高分特质的用词与用句。
4. 衔接不自然，对各类体裁没有清晰的写作框架。
5.其他问题如：书写问题，大小写问题，主谓不一致，拼写等基本表达的正确性问题。
审题时注意的问题
1. 学会判断文体。各种文体有不同的篇章结构。
2. 注意原文的时态。
3. 要抓住主要信息，而不是次要信息。要学会判断段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间的逻辑关系。
4. 切忌抄袭原作原句，或将原文细节作为中心。平时可多做同义词替换练习。
概要微技能
根据概要所需技能，从高度概括，删除细节，同义替换，句式运用以及如何运用巧妙的衔接词等方面展开。
写概要时，首先通读全文，分析文章的组织结构。第二步是寻找关键词，总结每一段的大意。最后一步是根据每段的大意以及作者的侧重点，重组归纳全文的大意用自己的话概述成段，并注意衔接。
学会概括
1. 找主题句，一般来说主题句位于段首或者段末，偶尔出现在段中，甚至有的需要自己提炼。
如何分析？
根据语言特点来判断哪个是主题句，哪些不是。主题句具有概括的特点，其他句子都是支撑句，一般是具体的论据，数字，描述等。
微段落训练
1. What appeals to customers 2. Obviously the quality of a product does, but visual image, an instantly recognized logo, contributes a great deal. 3.It is not only the image provided by the packaging that counts but the whole corporate identity of the company.
answer
supporting details
key sentence
The logo appeals to customers a lot.
attracts
The logo attracts customers a lot.
替 换
1.Both male and female are buying into the trend, but women are expected to do more shopping on the Internet than men. 2. It seems women are now more attracted to the convenience of online shopping than they used to be. 3. Average spending online this Christmas by women will rise to $240 compared to the slightly lower average of $233 for men.
supporting sentences
key sentence
Both male and female are buying into the trend, but women are expected to do more shopping on the Internet than men.
Women do more shopping online than men.
高度提炼
1. With only two weeks to go before Christmas ,buying presents is a high priority for a lot of people. 2.However, this year not so many people are leaving their homes to go shopping. 3. These days lots of people can do their shopping in the comfort of their own homes with the help of the Internet.
specific description
key sentence
These days lots of people can do their shopping in the comfort of their own homes with the help of the Internet.
Nowadays many people can purchase gifts at home on the Internet before Christmas.
高度提炼与替换
1. Logos are used on letterheads, packaging and brochures as well as on the product itself. 2. They may also appear in newspapers or on television as part of an advertising campaign.
并 列 关 系
many occasions
many occasions 是概括性语言
Logos can appear on many occasions.
提炼主题句
练一练
Many doctors see aphasics(失语症患者）as people who are not completely normal because they lack the ability to understand words. However, according to Dr.Sacks, they are more gifted than normal people. Normal people may get carried away by words. Aphasics seem to understand expressions better , though they cannot understand words.
Many doctors see aphasics(失语症患者）as people who are not completely normal because they lack the ability to understand words. However, according to Dr.Sacks, they are more gifted than normal people. Normal people may get carried away by words. Aphasics seem to understand expressions better , though they cannot understand words.
Dr. Sacks believes aphasics are more talented than normal people.
删除细节
在概要写作中，如何识别概括性的语言是一种能力。要识别概括性的语言，首先要学会辨析概括性与细节描写等语言之间的区别。会识别什么样的语言是概括性的，什么样的语言是细节性，描述性的。
一.删除细节
The countryside my father grew up in was large in size.
My father grew up in a large countryside.
One winter Sunday, my little sister Colleen and I built the greatest snowman ever. For personality ,we gave him a traditional carrot nose, beautiful hat, cozy scarf and gloves.
One winter Sunday, my younger sister and I produced an attractive snowman.
attractive
Online shopping is becoming more and more popular for a number of reasons; prices are often lower online ;you don’t have to queue up in busy shops and you can buy almost any product imaginable with just a few clicks of your mouse.
Online shopping’s great strengths contribute to the increasing popularity of it.
strengths
二.减少具体例子
Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain ,and Huangshan Mountain, were visited by only a few people in the past. Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on those mountains, and better train and bus services, have brought them within reach of many who never thought of visiting them ten years ago.
With the development of society , more and more people are visiting beautiful mountains like Mount Tai.
the development of society
练一练
We know that many animals do not stay in one place. Birds ,fish and other animals move from one place to another place at a certain time. They move for different reasons: most of them move to find food more easily, but others move to get away from places that are too crowded.
We know that many animals do not stay in one place. Birds ,fish and other animals move from one place to another place at a certain time. They move for different reasons: most of them move to find food more easily, but others move to get away from places that are too crowded.
migration
many reasons
Many reasons can account for（解释..的原因） the migration（迁徙） of animals.
同义替换
高考评分最高档次（第5档）中的第四条，要考生完全使用自己的语言，这表明我们不能摘抄原文原句，我们得用其他的语言来表述与原文句子同样的意思。
词词替换
In order to keep our health, we should take more healthy food into consideration.
To maintain our health, we should consider more healthy food.
词性变化
It’s of great importance to keep a balanced diet as well as a healthy eating habit.
A balanced diet and a healthy eating habit are very important.
单词与词组和词组与词组的替换
A healthy diet can equip us with a strong and healthy body.
A healthy diet can make us healthy and strong.
句式替换
运用主动语态和被动语态的转化及反向表达
You can obtain a large amount of information on the internet nowadays.
Abundant information is available on the internet.
同义替换填空
1. Make sure that you have eight hours’ sleep.
Eight hours’ sleep must be __________.
2. If things are not properly dealt with, our labor will be totally lost.
Things not properly ________,our labor will be totally lost.
guaranteed
handled
In the United States, everyone can buy guns.
In the United States, guns are ______ to everyone.
available
请用同义替换的方法概括段落大意
We know that many animals do not stay in one place. Birds, fish and other animals move from one place to another place at a certain time. They move for different reasons: most of them move to find food more easily, but others move to get away from places that are too crowded.
Animals always migrate regularly. The reason varies from one species to another.
反向表达
I had a good idea.
A good idea hit me.
A wondrful idea struck me.
A fantastic idea flew into my mind.
I felt sad yesterday.
Sadness seized me yeaterday.
I felt excited and happy.
A mixture of excitement and happiness filled my heart.
Great changes took place in Quzhou in 2018.
The year 2018 witnessed the great changes in Quzhou.
The father is very proud to have an intelligent and pretty daughter.
The intelligence and beauty of the daughter makes her father extremely proud.
巧妙使用衔接词
It helps drive Zhejiang's development. Furthermore, it's of great help to enchance the high-speed railway technology.
not only.....but also as well as both...and Furthermore Besides What's more Moreover
In addition 并列
It helps drive Zhejiang's development. It helps to promote the high-speed railway technology.
The graduates themselves are responsible for the situation. The government should be responsible for it too.
Not only are the graduates themselves responsible for the situation, but also the government should.
因果
The students have pressure from studies .Parents don't need to put much pressure on them.
The students have pressure from studies . Accordingly, parents don't need to put much pressure on them.
therefore consequently hence accordingly
because of due to owing to as a result of
now that thus as since for thanks to