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模块六 第二章 作文指导
电影和书籍给我们的生活增添了很多色彩。大家都应该看过不少电影和书籍,你最喜爱哪一部电影或者哪一本书呢?请以My Favorite Movie/Book为题写一篇作文,介绍你最喜欢的电影或者书籍,词数80左右。
内容要求如下:
1.简要介绍电影或书籍的名称、类型和故事情节等;
2.陈述你喜欢它的原因;
3.说明它给你带来的启示。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
第一步:审题谋篇
(一)审题
1.确定体裁:本文是一篇介绍自己喜欢的电影或书籍的___________(体裁)。
2.确定人称:本文应该以______________人称为主、______________人称为辅来叙述内容。
3.确定时态:采用____________________介绍你喜欢它的原因和它给你带来的启示,多用____________________描述电影或书籍的故事情节。
说明文
第一
第三
一般现在时
一般过去时
(二)谋篇布局
named/called
which
that
who
because
but
第二步:推敲词汇
1.日复一日_______________________
2. 坚持……_____________________
3.最终_________________
4. 达成某人的目标_____________________________
day after day
stick to...
at last
achieve one's goal
5.尽力_________________________
6. 永不言弃________________________________________
7.打败敌人____________________________
8. 被视为……___________________________________________________
try one's best
never say never/never give up
defeat the enemies
be considered to be.../be regarded as...
第三步:由词扩句
1.我更喜欢那些引发我思考的电影。
I prefer the movies that give me something to _______ ______.
2.他最后打败了敌人并被看作一名英雄。
Finally he ____________ _______ _________ and was ___________ as a hero.
think about
defeated the enemies
considered
3.他坚持自己的原则和梦想。
He _________ _____ his own principles and dream.
4.毫无疑问他最终成功了。
He succeeded ________ ________ ________ ________.
stuck to
at last without doubt
5.如果我们尽力且永不放弃,我们就会达成目标。
If we _______ ______ ______ and ________ _______ _______, we will ________ ________ ________.
try our best
never give up
achieve our goals
第四步:句式升级
1.无论道路多艰难,他都坚持自己的原则和梦想。
______ _________ _________ hard the road was, he just ______ ______ his own principles and dream.
No matter how
stuck to
2.毫无疑问他最终成功了。
_________ ______ ________ that he succeeded _____ _________.
3.我们将永不会达成目标,除非我们尽力且永不言弃。
We will never ________ ________ _______ unless we _______ _______ _____ and ______ ______ ________.
There's no doubt
at last
achieve our goals
try our best
never say never
第五步:连句成篇
My Favorite
Different movies have different features. I prefer the movies that give me something to think about, such as the cartoon Kung Fu Panda.
Movie
A panda called Po was chosen to be the Dragon Warrior, which made other masters a bit angry, because they thought he wasn't strong enough. Even under huge pressure from others, Po still trained hard day after day. No matter how hard the road was, he just stuck to his own principles and dream. Finally he defeated the enemies and was considered as a hero. There's no doubt that he succeeded at last.
Life is always like this. We will never achieve our goals unless we try our best and never say never.