高考英语 专题 读后续写修炼 学案（1-4章）
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读后续写修炼
第一章：方法综述———————————————01
第二章：常见句型———————————————03
第三章：高级句型———————————————07
第四章：修辞手法———————————————11
第五章：结尾方法———————————————13
第六章：文学语言———————————————17
第七章：精华表达———————————————21
第八章：高考真题———————————————22
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
第一章：方法综述
宗旨：运用优美的语言，续写简单的故事，表现美好的主旨
一、段落框架——4+1格局
“4”： 第一句：紧承首句定格画面
第二句：适当推动情节发展
第三句：再次定格进行渲染
第四句：灵活表达炫技增分
“1”： 第一段：最后一句为衔接句
第二段：最后一句为结尾句
二、句式架构——增分技巧
①常用句型：最常用的是“非谓语/With结构/独立主格+主句”（第二章）
②高级句型（第三章）
③多样修辞（第四章）
④奇技淫巧：例如大写字母强调、语气词(Oops！Ah！Ouch！My goodness！Gosh！)
上帝视角the poor guy/the little furry creature/a lonely soul
三、语言风格——自然地道
①基本要求：平实友好，可读性强
②忌用生僻大词，能用词块绝不用单词
③用最贴切最喜欢的表达把句子写到极致，用的表达一定是之前用过，不出差错的表达（第七章）
④尽可能多地运用划线关键词
⑤切忌生搬硬套，所有表达要结合具体语境情境，结尾句结合原文体现关联性（第五章）
⑥内容连贯：注意句与句的逻辑衔接。考虑以下方法：
1）使用固定句式
2）短句打头，如A push on the back, /There it was, /介宾短语倒装
3）主语顺承，该句的主语一定在前一句中最好有出现
四、语料积累——两种途径
途径1——FEASTS法
读后续写就如同盛宴，盛宴(feasts)中就包含了我们需要的所有基本语料。
途径2——情感导向法 （第六章）
读后续写要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上，充分调动想象创新思维，大胆预测文章缺失部分的内容走势，进行充满个性色彩的设计，并用英语进行续写表达。所提供短文词数在350左右，划线词语涉及到名词(词组)、动词(词组)、介词(词组)和形容词等，其中，以名词(词组)为主，在续写中至少要使用5个关键词语，需要注意：在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要，可以改变动词的形式，可以改变名词的单复数，但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性；多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
1.创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造；
2.逻辑性：即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；
3.丰富性：即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更加立体饱满。
在进行续写写作时，我们应该始终牢记以下三个原则：
第一，始终保持“读者”视角，而非“作者”视角。写文章切忌从自身“作者”视角出发，自我陶醉于所使用的句式与表达，而要始终问自己“读者能准确明白我的想法吗？除了明白之外，他们是否能对我所写的故事感同身受呢？”如此的做法，对大家或许更有裨益。
第二，基于原文人物形象与故事脉络续写情节。“续”字本义就已清楚告知每一位考生，这不是一种创造性的文体，而是一种模仿性的文体。情节的选择不是大海捞针，更不是天马行空，而是带着脚镣的舞蹈。这个“脚镣”一是指原文人物性格，二是指前文情节脉络。
第三，营造画面，传递情感。一篇文章能得到认同，不在于字词使用的高级，或句式语法的多样，而在于真情实感语意的传达。细腻的措辞是微妙情感传递的基础，一篇好的续写必定离不开续写词汇的使用；但是，好的续写不是措辞的堆砌。
第二章、常见句型
be on the point of doing //be about to do sth … when 正要做某事时，这时…
I was on the point of screaming when I saw the most touching scene that would never be forgotten.
Laurie was just about to subconsciously cry out when another quick thought silenced her word.
at the sight of····// at the thought of 一看到,一想到
At the sight of the crowd and the flashlight of the camera, a scene of despair swallowed her.
At the sight of the elaborately prepared and inviting dishes, Tom felt a surge of guilt sung his heart.
Her enthusiasm is fading at the thought of how long that might take, just to have her kids reject it.
as … 当…
As the dense smoke wound its way closer, his bewilderment finally gave way to a nagging sense of anxiety, urging them almost desperately to put all the stakes on the dog.
As we listening to birds twittering and singing vigorously and felt the breeze gently kissing our cheeks, a radiant smile registered on her rosy face, melting all my uneasiness.
Before 在…之前 // 还没来得及
Tom passed her the creased paper before the timidity took hold of him.
Before words of ecstasy escaped my tongue, the rain had been pouring down.
Before the young man could even open his mouth, John had raised his hands in midair, shouting with eyes shut and sweat streaming down his chalk-white face.
There followed many anxious days before Jerry began to feel better.
Her mind was clouded with confusion before the question unconsciously slipped off her tongue.
Somehow 不知怎的
Somehow awakened by the touch of warmth, Elizabeth finally found back the missing words as she shouted them out syllable by syllable, “Beautiful flowers for a beautiful performance.”
Her voice was tender and soft but somehow holding magic power to quiet down the initially buzzing crowd.
With a white letter J written on the corner, it lay silently behind the table leg yet somehow holding magic power to catch her eye and accelerate her heart beat.
as if … 似乎
Raindrops drummed on the roof, as if bidding farewell to the last beam of summer sunlight.
The cigarette smoke was still curled in air, as if a reminder that nobody can be judged by merely its appearance.
Laurie beamed back as dazzling light from ice-skating rink cast tender rays on the two figures as if telling a tale where victory paled into insignificance in contrast with inner justice, kindness and cherished friendship.
As if suffering an electric shock, she bounced up, took several steps backward and scanned the room (for any sign of …) with unsettled eyes.
…just enough to /just in time to 足以… //恰好来得及…
Any setback could be just enough to engulf him in endless frustration, shattering every bit of his hope into ashes.
She unsteadily rose to her feet, raised her head just in time to catch a glimpse of Jinny’s encouraging gaze.
We are just in time to catch a glimpse of the tall black-bearded figure, his shoulders rounded, as he tiptoed down the passage.
He cast a sideways look at his teammate, just in time to meet the encouraging beam on his face.
Not only + ， but also + 不但… 而且…
The very stick shone not only the summer light, but also the cherished friendship.
And it was then that Laurie confirmed her precious choice, which not only blessed her with dreamy victory, but also the respect from her rivals.
In the thunderous applause, he grinned from ear to ear, not only for the unusual experience, but also for the fruitful glimpse of the glamour of nature.
每…比前一个
Words came through his quivering lips in broken syllables, each one more frantic than the last.
Laurie was totally intoxicated in her performance, each step lighter than the former one.
But this time /this one was … 但是这次…
The team went into action, much as we do when there is a medical emergency. But this one was a Christmas emergency.
All these were put on the trolley which was normally used to deliver medicinefe to difrent wards, but this time, to send love.
鼓起勇气, 用尽力气
muster / summon up/drain/ squeeze/ use up/ run out of his last bit of // the very last ounce of strength
use up every bit of his remaining strength
I picked myself up to a standing position and glanced slowly around back towards my comfortable and warm bed and had to use the very last ounce of strength to fight the irresistible impulse/urge to head back into its hug.
Magic/ spell 魔力
Seeing tears moistening the mother’s sight, I understood that the magic of hospital was not only physical but also mental.
As they advanced, as if under a magic spell, the once horrible scene of fire was gradually replaced by a picture of twittering birds hovering around the winding brook.
Like magic, the poor creature gradually came to life, regaining its senses and struggling to stand up.
As the performance started, the very first note tenderly drifted beneath his fingers, as if casting a magic spell on the audience and brought sheer silence to the gym.
Those photos, now yellow with age, as if holding a magic, made all the long-buried memories of the past revive /regain their color and unfold vividly before my eyes.
时间
There is no time to hesitate and a quick decision was in pressing need.
in a split second / in the blink of an eye / in the twinkling of an eye/time ticked away fast
At the very moment, time almost came to a halt/time seems to slow its pace as the ball was flying in the air and everyone held their breath in total silence.
After what seemed like a century, the longing for boots finally gave way to the desire to buy a turkey.
Seconds dragged by like centuries as the buzzing from the audience cut its way into her ears.
As days rolled on, she devoted countless days and nights to practicing
As time dragged by, the pressure in gym was stretched to a breaking point and the air was too thin to breath.
As one dreary day blended into another, he …
Days felt like weeks, weeks like months, and those many months felt like everlasting pain.
waste no time to do...
It dawned on me that … / it struck(hit) me that … / I was struck by the sudden realization that …我突然意识到
It dawned on me that rather than patients, they were actually the homeless, who wanted nothing but a warm Christmas with presents.
I was struck by the sudden realization that the distance of life and death could not separate genuine friends.
回忆
Scenes after scenes where//the yellowish/ faded/by-gone/long-buried /dust-laden / vague yet affectionate/ reminiscences/recollections/memories/scenes of … come flooding in //come pouring in //flash my mind // revive// reemerge vividly // regain their color //come flooding into our mind / reemerged and became vivid in mind.
Scenes after scenes where his books fell helplessly on the ground, he crawled desperately to find glasses, together with the tears of hollowness spinning in his eyes, now reemerged and became vivid in my memory, revealing the disguised truth of that day.
The fragments of bygone reminiscences regained their color and pieced into my grandfather’s face, aged yet firm.
The long-lost image seemed to regain its color, gradually piecing together into a vague silhouette, weather-beaten yet firm.
When my eyes /glances fell on //landed on // rested on the photos, now yellow with age, the dust-laden/ yellowish reminiscence of those bygone days flooded in, fresh and vivid.
The photos passed the keys to my memories, taking me further down the memory lane of the past.
The yellowish paper took me to further memory lane, where thousands of fragments pieced together, vividly forming the image of my grandfather, old yet determined.
Gone was the past but the smiles will stand in my memory, never fading away.
The news from her stunned me, and I was thrown back in an instant to our childhood again.
The news of her caught me completely thunder-stricken, stirring beautiful memories of our childhood together in a split second.
My memory drifted to our sweet childhood.
思考, 思绪
He rested his chin in his hand and fiddled with the pencil
scratch one's head
mind racing/ swirling rack one's brains to say/dig into one's mind for/fumble for sth to say ...weigh what to say
, not having the faintest idea about what to do
couldn't collect her thought orderly.
questions exploded inside his head like fireworks and he couldn't decide which to ask first.
be totally blank in the mind /blank-minded / mind goes blank / mind is in turmoil
All her memories about the six words somehow escaped her.
involuntarily, he tightened his grip on the handle of the luggage and quickened his pace towards his home, his mind drifting to the surprised and delighted expression on his mother's face.
Chin in his cupped hands, he sat there motionlessly, all his mind on where to spend the long-anticipated holiday.
听
Whispers cut/made their way/drift into my ear from time to time.
strain his ears to capture every sound including the rustling of trees, but nothing emerged.
说
His faint voice gradually faded into slight sobs. in his sobbing voice,
In the of thousands of anticipating eyes, words were just on the tip of her tongue.
Then he paused, as if on the verge of adding something. He weighed his words and cleared his throat.
He came to a halt, as if wanting to say something more.
… as if recollecting the words which just got lost on their way to his mouth.
…as if having more words on the tip of his tongue,
At the very moment, a gush of warmth swept over her and the six words, which had been practiced dozens, even hundreds of times, popped into her mind and then drifted from lips, followed by a shower of thunderous applause.
No sooner had his last syllables slipped out of his mouth than others burst into laughter.
She muttered with broken syllables, “beautiful flowers for…” Her mind went blank and the prepared words just slipped away. Numbness coupled with dread got the better of her.
Regaining her composure little by little, the once vague words now flooded back into her mind. The long-practiced speech drifted from her lips, followed by a shower of thunderous applause. Yes, she made it.
She took a deep gulp of air/inhaled deeply and each syllable bounced up from her throat, echoing around that hall.
想象
In her mind’s eye, he saw the poor girl rooted to the spot and fumbling for words at the end of the performance, which drove her to the verge of misty eyes.
form a picture in one's mind
In company with Dad, I rode the tricycle tirelessly that evening, enjoying the strength instilled into my feet and picturing/ imagining/ visualizing myself walking briskly.
看
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fix one's eyes unblinkingly on .../one's eyes are glued to .../can't take one's eyes off .../eyes lingering on
steal a glance at
shift one's gaze from ... to ...
follow one's gaze
avoid/elude one's eye contact
under his anticipating gaze, ...
, ... only to be met with ... ... meet his eyes
scan for any sign of ...
What encountered her confused expression and enquiring eyes was/ were …
Her eyes fell on the box, and when she looked up, they were glistening with tears.
He cast /throw/ shoot a sideways look/ glance at his teammate, just in time to meet the encouraging beam on face.
The youngest kid cast a begging look at her mother, only to be greeted with a complete refusal.
What bounced/popped/leapt/came into her sight/ eyes /vision, surprisingly, was an empty house with skinny Marcia standing there, weary and tearful.
When his face split into a smile to welcome the dog back, what greeted him, though, was Brady’s bite on his pants, which was so fierce that he almost stumbled.
What stuffed his nose was the damp smell of earth. What lay lay/unfolded before/ in front of his desperate eyes/ sight was the winding and endless path to the far distance.
Illuminated by the faint light of his flashlight, a lively picture unfolded before/ in front of his eyes -owls hovered above, swooping down from time to time; rabbits leapt here and there, leaving a trail of paw prints behind.
观众、舞台
A piercing sound of whistle marked the start of the long-anticipated basketball match.
Deafening screams and thunderous cheers dominated the court.
All the buzzing and cheering was drowned in a piecing whistle.
The spotlight shone on the two figures and the fragrant of kindness and courage blossomed brilliantly at the very moment.
Both the dazzling spotlights and the audience cheering and clapping made a surge of nervousness sweeping her.
Whispers gradually erupted inside the hall.
The entire hall went into a hush, with countless pairs of eyes concentrating on the very girl, whose face was now extraordinarily redder than the roses.
Amid the applause, under the spotlight, the roses glittered, as if telling a vivid story of a shy girl overcoming her inner fear.
The crowds’ clapping was still echoing as if applauding a shy girl conquering her inner timidity.
After the feast of music, an explosion of deafening applause put his wonderful performance to an end.
The performance ended with rounds of cheers, applause and a string of genuine compliment from the audience.
Everyone rose to their feet and burst into appreciative applause.
Silence reigned as audiences was still savoring..., yet was soon penetrated by a sudden burst of sustained applause.
The audience were in stunned silence after his incredible performance, followed by an eruption of cheers and a string of exclamations, which were just enough to declare her successful comeback.
其他句型
The moment he stepped indoors, he dashed towards the kitchen, dug for the left orange, and ran outdoors without hesitation.
The youngest kid cast a begging look at her mother, only to be greeted with a complete refusal.
With each step closer to Mr. wolf, gone was his endless imagination of sweet orange and promising future, to be replaced by chilling coldness of grief, tearing himself into pieces.
After his incredible performance, the audience were in stunned silence, followed by an explosion of thunderous applause spreading across the whole gym.
Half nervous, half excited, he marched towards the stage in the spotlights.
No matter how harsh the reality is, there is always hope that can be extracted from our lives.
Never in his wildest dream had he imagined he could receive such an unexpected gift.
第三章、高级句型
1. 倒装句 （半倒装、全倒装）
①副词+谓语vi+主语 （全倒）
The door swung open and out came Mary with puffy eyes.（…，分词、定从）
In the thick curtain of smoke out dashed Brady’s figure.
In the distance, through a haze of heavy smoke appeared the vague yet brave figure.
In the corner of the classroom sat Steven, who rested his chin in the hands and stared at the blackboard motionlessly.
②Here/there +谓语vi+主语（全倒） (主语是代词时候不用倒装)
Here lay a green box on her slightly quivering hand with white letters glistening on it.
There she stood, immersed in the long-lost yet familiar atmosphere, with shining spotlights and cheering audience.
③表语+be+主语 （全倒）
With each step closer to Ms. Wolff, gone was any trace of excitement, to be replaced by a nagging sense of anxiety.
Engraved in his memory was the never-fading friendship which navigated him out of the gloomy day.
④as (半倒)
Freezing cold as it was, the street was packed with people.
Slim as the chance of survival was, she struggled to drag her feet ahead inch by inch before fear and fatigue got better hold of her.
⑤So 放句首(半倒)
So fragile is he that any frustration will throw him into an abyss of despair.
So anxious was Brady that every breath he took was as heavy as the dense smoke.
⑥Never/no longer 放句首(半倒)
Never had triumph approached her so close.
No longer would I label a student as the hopeless.
Never in my wildest dream had I imagined he lived in such poor conditions.
⑦No sooner… than … // hardly … when // not until …
Hardly had John caught sight of the money in the young man’s hands when a sense of awkwardness flooded him.
Hardly had Emily spotted her name again when she jumped up and blurted out a high-pitched scream of ecstasy, with mouth curling into a shape of “O”.
Hardly had we reached the helicopter when the bear tore down the fence.
2. 强调句
It was then that I noticed that his tiny body was trembling involuntarily and bitter tears were trickling down his face unceasingly.
It is kindness and love that transformed the worst Christmas into the best one like magic, not only for ourselves, but also for those struggling souls that needed just a little warmth and hope.
It was friends who dragged you out of the mud of tragedy and navigated you ahead against all odds.
It was not until the vigor had been drained that they heard the melodic sound of the river again--- we are safe now.
In every way.../by no means.../not until...did.../nothing but/anything but
否定加否定 do+动词原形；very/single；反身代词（I myself）
3. With/without结构
With a sparkle of merriment radiating from her eyes, she strode ahead with a spring in every step, lips outlining an enchanting smile.
With curtains drawn open and light turned on, her voice lingered around the auditorium, echoing in every audience’s hearts.
Without lifting my head from the paper, I sat still, turning a deaf ear to Meghan’s beg.
4. 分词做状语
Biting his lips involuntarily and digging his nails into his palm, he trudged out of the hall with back hunched and head drooping.
Swallowing hard, she murmured and squeezed out some broken syllable through her quivering lips.
Paralyzed on the grass and breathing crisp air, Robert and Henry were engulfed in exhaustion, with blood drained from their pale face.
Torn between the overwhelming yearning for the delicate boots and the melancholy for our depressing Christmas, I came to a halt halfway to the shoe store.
Engulfed by nervousness, Elizabeth felt her heart pounding wildly and heads buzzing repeatedly.
5. 独立主格做伴随状语
Mind swirling, hands shaking, her each and every step closer amplified her pounding heartbeat.
Eyes blazing with radiant sparkles of joy, he waved his arms wildly toward Lucy, grinning from ear to ear.
Eyes fixed unblinkingly on the mother deer, I endeavored to hold my breath and prepared myself for its possible attack against my boy.
Hands waving madly and legs kicking water desperately, he screamed for rescue at the top of his voice.
Simple syllables crashing like a roll of thunder in his ears, John felt his heart rate accelerating and mind going blank.
They nestled against each other by the Christmas tree decorated with ornament, twinkling eyes fixed unblinkingly on various beautifully wrapped presents.
Heart scattered into pieces, I stole a glance at Ben inching behind me.
Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation.
例如，使用分词、独立主格描写打球画面：
Muscles outlined by the setting sun, beads of sweat glistening on their forehead, the players stood with their eyes fixed unblinkingly on the ball.
Taking a deep gulp of air, he suddenly accelerated his pace, spinning, flashing, leaving his opponents behind.
He leapt into the air with all his strength, stretching out his hand in full length to snatch the ball.
Bouncing, flying, swirling, in numerous anticipating gazes, the very ball drew a brilliant arc in midair and hit exactly at the basket.
He took a sharp turn, lowered his shoulder and dashed towards his right side like a bolt of lightning.（动作链）
6. 形容词做状语
Eager and excited, she waved her arms wildly, trying to attract other’s attention.
Fluent and graceful, each pose was in her control.
Mr. Wolff’s voice, thick with love, was as marvelous as her piano, gently drifting into Elizabeth’s ears, streaming down to her heart, dispelling all her nervousness.
He was tossing and turning in his bed, hot and unease, tortured by a sense of thirsty.
A charming smile resembles a ray of glow from heart, warm and irresistible.
The radiant sunbeam shadowed his tiny figure, harmonious and peaceful.
The four children, fascinated and curious, circled the Christmas tree with eyes glued to the twinkling stars on it, face lit up with brimming excitement.
Speechless and happy, she held her so tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
7. 定语从句
In that split second, all passengers’ gazes turned to this woman, who was once the one being sympathized but now the one being admired.
The fabulous melody drifted out and echoed around the hall, which tugged at everyone’s heartstrings.
Approaching her idol, for whom she had tossed and turned for countless nights, Elizabeth was consumed with exhilaration mingled with nervousness.
Two boys and a grinning snowman merged into a harmonious world, where a boy embraced the glamour and magic of nature.
Laurie portrayed graceful arcs smoothly on the ice and blended into the silver world where she had always belonged to.
8. What 引导的主语从句
What encountered her nervous and desperate eyes was Mr. Smith’s reassuring smile, which instilled infinite courage into her body.
What came into my sight was an empty house with skinny Marcia standing there, weary and tearful.
When his face split into a smile to welcome the dog back, what greeted him, though, was Brady’s bite on his pants, which was so fierce that he almost stumbled.
What stung our eyes was skinny Marcia, who …
What accompanied him was only the ruthless roar of the chilly winter wind.
What was also shining were those sweet memories of their precious cross-age friendship.
What lay before their desperate eyes was/were …
What was also shining were those sweet memories of their precious cross-age friendship.
9. 同位语
Just as he desperately witnessed the hasty retreat of his friends, Henry, his last straw of hope, came into his sight.
Ms. Wolff, the idol in her dreams, was now just meters ahead.
She swirled and danced, bringing everyone into an ice wonder land, a white fantasy.
10. 插入语
What came/popped into my sight, surprisingly, was big letters JJ written on the box.
His opponent, surprisingly, popped out of nowhere and snatched the ball.
At this moment, amid numerous gazes, Laurie …
There she stood, immersed in the long-lost yet familiar atmosphere, with shining spotlights and cheering audience.
And here he was, right in front of the very fawn, the evidently thirst-stricken creature.
Those photos, now yellow with age, as if holding a magic, made all the long-buried memories of the past revive /regain their color and unfold vividly before my eyes.
The door, with a deafening crash, landed flat on the floor.
A shark, with its tail shaking and its jaws clicking, made a leap from the sea and afterwards dived back into the water.
With the tide gently rolling to her feet, Betty, sitting in the sand, felt the wave of relief swept across the beach.
The merciless words,like invisible knives,penetrated into John’s heart, breaking all his rosy anticipation into pieces.
11. 感叹句
If only my mom could watch my performance!(虚拟语气)
How I longed to sit dozing in the shade of trees.
How ridiculous I was ….
What a bless and savior you are to …
I am amazed at how time molded us into what we are today.
How a small act of kindness could nurture the fragrant flow of friendship, bringing invaluable blessings to us.
12. 破折号
With the green box in her hand, Laurie spotted — and there it was—two letters JJ on the corner.
Turning it over, Laurie involuntarily let out a cry —two letters popped into her sight.
13. 动作链（连续发生）
Laurie skated, danced, and jumped to every beat of the music.
He inched his way inside, sank into the sofa and heaved a sigh of sorrow.
She put down the shoes, tugged at my sleeve with her little hands and pleaded to go out.
He dashed towards the river, inhaled a deep gulp of air and jumped without hesitation.
He dashed back to his office, seized his phone and dialed his home number.
I broke into a run back to the nurses’ station, tearfully shared what I had seen with nurses, and eagerly invited them to do something meaningful for the poor family.
He waved back, accelerated his pace and outstretched his arms towards his friend, leaving a string of footprints on the soft snow.
Dion gathered another pile of snow, rolled it into a perfect ball and lifted it upon the previous one.
The moment he stepped indoors, he dashed towards the kitchen, dug for the left orange, and ran outdoors without hesitation.
14. 副词放句首
Blankly, he elbowed his way through the excited crowd towards the door.
Abruptly, he sprang up to his feet, running towards the house to fetch another cup of water.
Hesitantly, I tapped at the door, with tremendous sorrow surging through my heart.
Quickly, she followed the sound to a stream.
Slowly, she turned around, and mustering all her remaining strength, staggered towards the darkness, her back hunched and body slightly trembling.
15. 地点/时间状语/介词短语前置
Out of the corner of my eye I could see the little girl sobbing because I didn’t have time for her.
Under the shining spotlights, in the anticipating gazes of audience, students made their way on and off the stage.
At the sight of the elaborately prepared and inviting dishes, Tom felt a surge of guilt sung his heart.
Out of curiosity, she bent down, leaned over and reached out to fetch the box with a wildly thumping heart.
A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.
For the first time in her life, Maria felt frightened and lonely.
16. 短句
Turning it over, Laurie involuntarily let out a cry ---- two letters popped into her sight. Yes, it was Jinny’s.
Icy rain was pouring ruthlessly, engulfing the whole world in its tight clutch, nowhere to escape.
….but in vain.
No reply. All was silence.
17. 无灵主语
①时间或地点名词+see/ witness/ find/ bring/ prove/ provide
The last few years have witnessed your devotion to….
May the coming year bring peace and joy. 愿未来的一年带来和平与喜悦
②心理状态或其他状态的名词，如luck/ joy/ regret/ sorrow+desert/ return/ motivate/ inspire/ guide/ conquer/ linger
Courage deserted me when….勇气弃我而去
Anxiety tore him into pieces.
Anger choked my words.
His optimism has given way to doubt.
③行为或动作意义的名词，如sight/ thought/ glance/ look/ idea/ feeling+
strike/ greet/ arouse/ amaze/ delight/ frighten/ stun/ overwhelm/swallow/wormed into/possessed
A terrible thought suddenly struck me./popped into / crossed / flashed through his mind.
I was so excited and words slipped out of my mouth. 我不由得脱口而出(=blurted out )
A nervous laugh escaped my throat. 我不由自主紧张地笑了一声.
Words flood / flow out of her. Words failed me Words pale in the shadow of grief
Sleep didn’t visit her although the silence of a dead world was on the jungle.
His name escaped / failed me at the moment. = His name slipped my mind.
A sudden explosion in the street sent people running / fleeing in every direction.
Its arrival transformed the house into a vibrant and lively one...
His original / initial / previous caution / guard / alert gave way to ecstasy
④天气现象，情景等名词，如rain/ storm/ snow/ weather+come/ leave/ prevent/ permit/ allow/ bring/ threaten/ cooperate
Night approaching, darkness ruled the forest.
The gentle breeze gradually put him at ease.
Dusk found him crying in the street.
Dawn saw the little boy still working.
第四章、修辞手法
短句排比
No quietness, no relief, only the sleepless night awaiting him.
No happier Christmas. No happier birthday. Only an abandoned soul.
No more fear, no more timidity. This time she conquered the fright to be the best.
No more coldness, no more video games. It was that wintry morning that Freddie sniffed the fragrance of having a good time in snowy winter.
Without worries, without injuries. Laurie was totally intoxicated in her performance.
主语排比
Its slender body, its silky mane, its leisurely pace and its shiny saddle, all kept me so spellbound.
His beloved wife, his cozy home, his fond life, all came racing into his head in that split second.
The intimate company of friends, the lively glamour of nature, the splendid scenery of swirling snowflakes, all of these knitted together, narrating/ unveiling a lovely story of having a good time.
The icy wind howling outside, the warm songs drifting inside, the love together with kindness, all of these composed the most wonderful melody for Christmas, echoing in the hospital.
His anticipation for the gift, his birthday wishes and great joy of Christmas all vanished without trace.
The numbness that pounded his brain, the hollowness that took hold of his soul and the sadness that permeated through his body now threatened to engulf him entirely.
复现排比
Yet none of them saw me, and none, including myself, realized that tears had been trickling down my cheeks.
The smile was exactly the same as that of our first encounter, and the smile will forever be in the depth of my heart.
I saw his dedication, his persistence, and most importantly, his deep love for his mom.
This time, she was ready to be the best version of herself, to be a shining diamond on the ice. He had nowhere to stay, no way to go, and no one by his side. Not a single.
I squeeze my eyes shut and try to reach for him across the hundreds and hundreds of miles, to send my thoughts into his mind, to let him know he is not alone.
Every step, every circle, every leap cast the audience into a dream-like fantasy.
Scene after scene where Ben popped in and out of the room delightedly, where July staggered with that stick, where he smiled brightly and protected him from falling and tripping, all came flooding into our mind and brought us to the verge of tears.
对比
The serious look on July’s face softened.
As snowflakes soundlessly carpeted the outside world, the warmth of love was blazing inside.
Festive light bulbs sparkled like stars in the inky night, which paled compared with the true beauty of love blossoming in our heart.
Her tiny figure seemed to be weaker than ever.
This time, he was no longer a bad advertisement for my teaching. Instead, his skillful performance and infinite determination has become my best advertisement.
The birth problem could only disable his body, but it could never deter her from realizing her dreams.
Contrary to John’s wildest imagination, he pulled out several wrinkled bills, instead of a gun or a knife.
He confidently opened his mouth, yet what came forth was a single painful groan.
I had gone from hero to zero in fleeting 30 seconds.
It dragged me from the fantasy of hero into the harsh reality of penniless nobody.
My instinct told me that …, but my assumption couldn’t be further from the fact.
One second, he was in wonderful dream of the Christmas gift; the next, all the exhilaration vanished without trace in a split second, to be replaced by tremendous grief of loss.
The ripples of laughter once lingering in the house was now replaced by a deathly silence.
Former excitement evaporated, and in its place was the faith in sportsmanship.
My initial depression and negativity gave way to an upwelling surge of eagerness for the captivating presence of the newly-got tricycle. (initial...gave way to...and finally to...)
amplify/magnify以声衬静
拟人
Sadness completely got hold of me. Gripped by the terror, I …
The mellow sunlight kissed my face with its warmth, marking the closing chapter of this bone-chilling winter.
The icy rain was pouring ruthlessly, engulfing the whole world in its tight clutch.
Darkness engulfed the bus in its indifference. Some passengers just stared at their mobile phones silently while. Others murmured to complain about getting home late. Yet nobody lent him a hand.
Snowflakes danced and swirled in the bone-chilling air like tiny crystalline angels.
Their rosy faces shone radiantly when the snowman progressively came into shape, beaming at two boys cheerfully like a cherubic angle.
That day, the snowman stood silently and curved its lips into a beaming smile, watching the two figures chasing, playing and having a good time on a wintry day.
Having the lovely nose, the snowman almost came alive, wearing a broad smile as a mute message of thankfulness to the boys who made wonder in such a snow day.
With snowflakes swirling and dancing in the air, two boys and a grinning snowman merged into a harmonious world, where a boy embraced the glamour and magic of nature.
Within minutes, a vivid snowman stood proudly in the front yard, poked his head and craned his neck to have a better look at the icy world.
Thousands of gazes pierced her back, like the biting thorns of such beautiful roses.
The ball slapped hard on the board and landed right into the basket.
Everyone’s eyes landed upon that ball drawing a beautiful line/curved a beautiful arc in the air, in a split second flying straight into the target.
比喻
However, the huge theatre was like a gloomy mouth gaped open, where stood those audience awaiting her words, which did shatter her fragile soul.
Once a seed of music was sowed in a heart, it would take root and grow into a lofty tree to shelter a frightened child.
Yes, her flower of efforts bore fruit eventually and all it needed was the sunshine of courage and encouragement.
There existed no such thing as perfect performances, but An’s consideration did add a soft note to her tune of life.
I just reached a major crossroad in my life.
Some subtle sense of pity seemed to freeze the still air, as if we went from March to December.
Like a stone that broke the lake's peace, more and more passengers tried to talk with the old man
and the woman, comforting them that all things would be good.
夸张
The short distance from edge of the stage to where Mrs. Wolff stood seemed to stretch into an endless marathon as she gingerly made her way forward with shaky steps.
Seconds dragged by like centuries as the buzzing from the audience cut its way into her ears.
As if transporting the most treasured item in the world, Billy inched his way towards the very direction of the baby fawn, when the radiant sunbeam cast an ever-so-bright ray on his childish face.
Each step seemed to drag for a century, but simply not enough for her to fumble for the right words.
She racked her brains for the very six words but in vain. Panic swept over her. This dream-like fantasy tuned out to be a nightmare with fear dominating.
8. 类比
the daylight was fading, so was the hope of... bore resemblance to
第一章：方法综述———————————————01
第二章：常见句型———————————————03
第三章：高级句型———————————————07
第四章：修辞手法———————————————11
第五章：结尾方法———————————————13
第六章：文学语言———————————————17
第七章：精华表达———————————————21
第八章：高考真题———————————————22
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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第一章：方法综述
宗旨：运用优美的语言，续写简单的故事，表现美好的主旨
一、段落框架——4+1格局
“4”： 第一句：紧承首句定格画面
第二句：适当推动情节发展
第三句：再次定格进行渲染
第四句：灵活表达炫技增分
“1”： 第一段：最后一句为衔接句
第二段：最后一句为结尾句
二、句式架构——增分技巧
①常用句型：最常用的是“非谓语/With结构/独立主格+主句”（第二章）
②高级句型（第三章）
③多样修辞（第四章）
④奇技淫巧：例如大写字母强调、语气词(Oops！Ah！Ouch！My goodness！Gosh！)
上帝视角the poor guy/the little furry creature/a lonely soul
三、语言风格——自然地道
①基本要求：平实友好，可读性强
②忌用生僻大词，能用词块绝不用单词
③用最贴切最喜欢的表达把句子写到极致，用的表达一定是之前用过，不出差错的表达（第七章）
④尽可能多地运用划线关键词
⑤切忌生搬硬套，所有表达要结合具体语境情境，结尾句结合原文体现关联性（第五章）
⑥内容连贯：注意句与句的逻辑衔接。考虑以下方法：
1）使用固定句式
2）短句打头，如A push on the back, /There it was, /介宾短语倒装
3）主语顺承，该句的主语一定在前一句中最好有出现
四、语料积累——两种途径
途径1——FEASTS法
读后续写就如同盛宴，盛宴(feasts)中就包含了我们需要的所有基本语料。
途径2——情感导向法 （第六章）
读后续写要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上，充分调动想象创新思维，大胆预测文章缺失部分的内容走势，进行充满个性色彩的设计，并用英语进行续写表达。所提供短文词数在350左右，划线词语涉及到名词(词组)、动词(词组)、介词(词组)和形容词等，其中，以名词(词组)为主，在续写中至少要使用5个关键词语，需要注意：在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要，可以改变动词的形式，可以改变名词的单复数，但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性；多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
1.创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造；
2.逻辑性：即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；
3.丰富性：即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更加立体饱满。
在进行续写写作时，我们应该始终牢记以下三个原则：
第一，始终保持“读者”视角，而非“作者”视角。写文章切忌从自身“作者”视角出发，自我陶醉于所使用的句式与表达，而要始终问自己“读者能准确明白我的想法吗？除了明白之外，他们是否能对我所写的故事感同身受呢？”如此的做法，对大家或许更有裨益。
第二，基于原文人物形象与故事脉络续写情节。“续”字本义就已清楚告知每一位考生，这不是一种创造性的文体，而是一种模仿性的文体。情节的选择不是大海捞针，更不是天马行空，而是带着脚镣的舞蹈。这个“脚镣”一是指原文人物性格，二是指前文情节脉络。
第三，营造画面，传递情感。一篇文章能得到认同，不在于字词使用的高级，或句式语法的多样，而在于真情实感语意的传达。细腻的措辞是微妙情感传递的基础，一篇好的续写必定离不开续写词汇的使用；但是，好的续写不是措辞的堆砌。
第二章、常见句型
be on the point of doing //be about to do sth … when 正要做某事时，这时…
I was on the point of screaming when I saw the most touching scene that would never be forgotten.
Laurie was just about to subconsciously cry out when another quick thought silenced her word.
at the sight of····// at the thought of 一看到,一想到
At the sight of the crowd and the flashlight of the camera, a scene of despair swallowed her.
At the sight of the elaborately prepared and inviting dishes, Tom felt a surge of guilt sung his heart.
Her enthusiasm is fading at the thought of how long that might take, just to have her kids reject it.
as … 当…
As the dense smoke wound its way closer, his bewilderment finally gave way to a nagging sense of anxiety, urging them almost desperately to put all the stakes on the dog.
As we listening to birds twittering and singing vigorously and felt the breeze gently kissing our cheeks, a radiant smile registered on her rosy face, melting all my uneasiness.
Before 在…之前 // 还没来得及
Tom passed her the creased paper before the timidity took hold of him.
Before words of ecstasy escaped my tongue, the rain had been pouring down.
Before the young man could even open his mouth, John had raised his hands in midair, shouting with eyes shut and sweat streaming down his chalk-white face.
There followed many anxious days before Jerry began to feel better.
Her mind was clouded with confusion before the question unconsciously slipped off her tongue.
Somehow 不知怎的
Somehow awakened by the touch of warmth, Elizabeth finally found back the missing words as she shouted them out syllable by syllable, “Beautiful flowers for a beautiful performance.”
Her voice was tender and soft but somehow holding magic power to quiet down the initially buzzing crowd.
With a white letter J written on the corner, it lay silently behind the table leg yet somehow holding magic power to catch her eye and accelerate her heart beat.
as if … 似乎
Raindrops drummed on the roof, as if bidding farewell to the last beam of summer sunlight.
The cigarette smoke was still curled in air, as if a reminder that nobody can be judged by merely its appearance.
Laurie beamed back as dazzling light from ice-skating rink cast tender rays on the two figures as if telling a tale where victory paled into insignificance in contrast with inner justice, kindness and cherished friendship.
As if suffering an electric shock, she bounced up, took several steps backward and scanned the room (for any sign of …) with unsettled eyes.
…just enough to /just in time to 足以… //恰好来得及…
Any setback could be just enough to engulf him in endless frustration, shattering every bit of his hope into ashes.
She unsteadily rose to her feet, raised her head just in time to catch a glimpse of Jinny’s encouraging gaze.
We are just in time to catch a glimpse of the tall black-bearded figure, his shoulders rounded, as he tiptoed down the passage.
He cast a sideways look at his teammate, just in time to meet the encouraging beam on his face.
Not only + ， but also + 不但… 而且…
The very stick shone not only the summer light, but also the cherished friendship.
And it was then that Laurie confirmed her precious choice, which not only blessed her with dreamy victory, but also the respect from her rivals.
In the thunderous applause, he grinned from ear to ear, not only for the unusual experience, but also for the fruitful glimpse of the glamour of nature.
每…比前一个
Words came through his quivering lips in broken syllables, each one more frantic than the last.
Laurie was totally intoxicated in her performance, each step lighter than the former one.
But this time /this one was … 但是这次…
The team went into action, much as we do when there is a medical emergency. But this one was a Christmas emergency.
All these were put on the trolley which was normally used to deliver medicinefe to difrent wards, but this time, to send love.
鼓起勇气, 用尽力气
muster / summon up/drain/ squeeze/ use up/ run out of his last bit of // the very last ounce of strength
use up every bit of his remaining strength
I picked myself up to a standing position and glanced slowly around back towards my comfortable and warm bed and had to use the very last ounce of strength to fight the irresistible impulse/urge to head back into its hug.
Magic/ spell 魔力
Seeing tears moistening the mother’s sight, I understood that the magic of hospital was not only physical but also mental.
As they advanced, as if under a magic spell, the once horrible scene of fire was gradually replaced by a picture of twittering birds hovering around the winding brook.
Like magic, the poor creature gradually came to life, regaining its senses and struggling to stand up.
As the performance started, the very first note tenderly drifted beneath his fingers, as if casting a magic spell on the audience and brought sheer silence to the gym.
Those photos, now yellow with age, as if holding a magic, made all the long-buried memories of the past revive /regain their color and unfold vividly before my eyes.
时间
There is no time to hesitate and a quick decision was in pressing need.
in a split second / in the blink of an eye / in the twinkling of an eye/time ticked away fast
At the very moment, time almost came to a halt/time seems to slow its pace as the ball was flying in the air and everyone held their breath in total silence.
After what seemed like a century, the longing for boots finally gave way to the desire to buy a turkey.
Seconds dragged by like centuries as the buzzing from the audience cut its way into her ears.
As days rolled on, she devoted countless days and nights to practicing
As time dragged by, the pressure in gym was stretched to a breaking point and the air was too thin to breath.
As one dreary day blended into another, he …
Days felt like weeks, weeks like months, and those many months felt like everlasting pain.
waste no time to do...
It dawned on me that … / it struck(hit) me that … / I was struck by the sudden realization that …我突然意识到
It dawned on me that rather than patients, they were actually the homeless, who wanted nothing but a warm Christmas with presents.
I was struck by the sudden realization that the distance of life and death could not separate genuine friends.
回忆
Scenes after scenes where//the yellowish/ faded/by-gone/long-buried /dust-laden / vague yet affectionate/ reminiscences/recollections/memories/scenes of … come flooding in //come pouring in //flash my mind // revive// reemerge vividly // regain their color //come flooding into our mind / reemerged and became vivid in mind.
Scenes after scenes where his books fell helplessly on the ground, he crawled desperately to find glasses, together with the tears of hollowness spinning in his eyes, now reemerged and became vivid in my memory, revealing the disguised truth of that day.
The fragments of bygone reminiscences regained their color and pieced into my grandfather’s face, aged yet firm.
The long-lost image seemed to regain its color, gradually piecing together into a vague silhouette, weather-beaten yet firm.
When my eyes /glances fell on //landed on // rested on the photos, now yellow with age, the dust-laden/ yellowish reminiscence of those bygone days flooded in, fresh and vivid.
The photos passed the keys to my memories, taking me further down the memory lane of the past.
The yellowish paper took me to further memory lane, where thousands of fragments pieced together, vividly forming the image of my grandfather, old yet determined.
Gone was the past but the smiles will stand in my memory, never fading away.
The news from her stunned me, and I was thrown back in an instant to our childhood again.
The news of her caught me completely thunder-stricken, stirring beautiful memories of our childhood together in a split second.
My memory drifted to our sweet childhood.
思考, 思绪
He rested his chin in his hand and fiddled with the pencil
scratch one's head
mind racing/ swirling rack one's brains to say/dig into one's mind for/fumble for sth to say ...weigh what to say
, not having the faintest idea about what to do
couldn't collect her thought orderly.
questions exploded inside his head like fireworks and he couldn't decide which to ask first.
be totally blank in the mind /blank-minded / mind goes blank / mind is in turmoil
All her memories about the six words somehow escaped her.
involuntarily, he tightened his grip on the handle of the luggage and quickened his pace towards his home, his mind drifting to the surprised and delighted expression on his mother's face.
Chin in his cupped hands, he sat there motionlessly, all his mind on where to spend the long-anticipated holiday.
听
Whispers cut/made their way/drift into my ear from time to time.
strain his ears to capture every sound including the rustling of trees, but nothing emerged.
说
His faint voice gradually faded into slight sobs. in his sobbing voice,
In the of thousands of anticipating eyes, words were just on the tip of her tongue.
Then he paused, as if on the verge of adding something. He weighed his words and cleared his throat.
He came to a halt, as if wanting to say something more.
… as if recollecting the words which just got lost on their way to his mouth.
…as if having more words on the tip of his tongue,
At the very moment, a gush of warmth swept over her and the six words, which had been practiced dozens, even hundreds of times, popped into her mind and then drifted from lips, followed by a shower of thunderous applause.
No sooner had his last syllables slipped out of his mouth than others burst into laughter.
She muttered with broken syllables, “beautiful flowers for…” Her mind went blank and the prepared words just slipped away. Numbness coupled with dread got the better of her.
Regaining her composure little by little, the once vague words now flooded back into her mind. The long-practiced speech drifted from her lips, followed by a shower of thunderous applause. Yes, she made it.
She took a deep gulp of air/inhaled deeply and each syllable bounced up from her throat, echoing around that hall.
想象
In her mind’s eye, he saw the poor girl rooted to the spot and fumbling for words at the end of the performance, which drove her to the verge of misty eyes.
form a picture in one's mind
In company with Dad, I rode the tricycle tirelessly that evening, enjoying the strength instilled into my feet and picturing/ imagining/ visualizing myself walking briskly.
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fix one's eyes unblinkingly on .../one's eyes are glued to .../can't take one's eyes off .../eyes lingering on
steal a glance at
shift one's gaze from ... to ...
follow one's gaze
avoid/elude one's eye contact
under his anticipating gaze, ...
, ... only to be met with ... ... meet his eyes
scan for any sign of ...
What encountered her confused expression and enquiring eyes was/ were …
Her eyes fell on the box, and when she looked up, they were glistening with tears.
He cast /throw/ shoot a sideways look/ glance at his teammate, just in time to meet the encouraging beam on face.
The youngest kid cast a begging look at her mother, only to be greeted with a complete refusal.
What bounced/popped/leapt/came into her sight/ eyes /vision, surprisingly, was an empty house with skinny Marcia standing there, weary and tearful.
When his face split into a smile to welcome the dog back, what greeted him, though, was Brady’s bite on his pants, which was so fierce that he almost stumbled.
What stuffed his nose was the damp smell of earth. What lay lay/unfolded before/ in front of his desperate eyes/ sight was the winding and endless path to the far distance.
Illuminated by the faint light of his flashlight, a lively picture unfolded before/ in front of his eyes -owls hovered above, swooping down from time to time; rabbits leapt here and there, leaving a trail of paw prints behind.
观众、舞台
A piercing sound of whistle marked the start of the long-anticipated basketball match.
Deafening screams and thunderous cheers dominated the court.
All the buzzing and cheering was drowned in a piecing whistle.
The spotlight shone on the two figures and the fragrant of kindness and courage blossomed brilliantly at the very moment.
Both the dazzling spotlights and the audience cheering and clapping made a surge of nervousness sweeping her.
Whispers gradually erupted inside the hall.
The entire hall went into a hush, with countless pairs of eyes concentrating on the very girl, whose face was now extraordinarily redder than the roses.
Amid the applause, under the spotlight, the roses glittered, as if telling a vivid story of a shy girl overcoming her inner fear.
The crowds’ clapping was still echoing as if applauding a shy girl conquering her inner timidity.
After the feast of music, an explosion of deafening applause put his wonderful performance to an end.
The performance ended with rounds of cheers, applause and a string of genuine compliment from the audience.
Everyone rose to their feet and burst into appreciative applause.
Silence reigned as audiences was still savoring..., yet was soon penetrated by a sudden burst of sustained applause.
The audience were in stunned silence after his incredible performance, followed by an eruption of cheers and a string of exclamations, which were just enough to declare her successful comeback.
其他句型
The moment he stepped indoors, he dashed towards the kitchen, dug for the left orange, and ran outdoors without hesitation.
The youngest kid cast a begging look at her mother, only to be greeted with a complete refusal.
With each step closer to Mr. wolf, gone was his endless imagination of sweet orange and promising future, to be replaced by chilling coldness of grief, tearing himself into pieces.
After his incredible performance, the audience were in stunned silence, followed by an explosion of thunderous applause spreading across the whole gym.
Half nervous, half excited, he marched towards the stage in the spotlights.
No matter how harsh the reality is, there is always hope that can be extracted from our lives.
Never in his wildest dream had he imagined he could receive such an unexpected gift.
第三章、高级句型
1. 倒装句 （半倒装、全倒装）
①副词+谓语vi+主语 （全倒）
The door swung open and out came Mary with puffy eyes.（…，分词、定从）
In the thick curtain of smoke out dashed Brady’s figure.
In the distance, through a haze of heavy smoke appeared the vague yet brave figure.
In the corner of the classroom sat Steven, who rested his chin in the hands and stared at the blackboard motionlessly.
②Here/there +谓语vi+主语（全倒） (主语是代词时候不用倒装)
Here lay a green box on her slightly quivering hand with white letters glistening on it.
There she stood, immersed in the long-lost yet familiar atmosphere, with shining spotlights and cheering audience.
③表语+be+主语 （全倒）
With each step closer to Ms. Wolff, gone was any trace of excitement, to be replaced by a nagging sense of anxiety.
Engraved in his memory was the never-fading friendship which navigated him out of the gloomy day.
④as (半倒)
Freezing cold as it was, the street was packed with people.
Slim as the chance of survival was, she struggled to drag her feet ahead inch by inch before fear and fatigue got better hold of her.
⑤So 放句首(半倒)
So fragile is he that any frustration will throw him into an abyss of despair.
So anxious was Brady that every breath he took was as heavy as the dense smoke.
⑥Never/no longer 放句首(半倒)
Never had triumph approached her so close.
No longer would I label a student as the hopeless.
Never in my wildest dream had I imagined he lived in such poor conditions.
⑦No sooner… than … // hardly … when // not until …
Hardly had John caught sight of the money in the young man’s hands when a sense of awkwardness flooded him.
Hardly had Emily spotted her name again when she jumped up and blurted out a high-pitched scream of ecstasy, with mouth curling into a shape of “O”.
Hardly had we reached the helicopter when the bear tore down the fence.
2. 强调句
It was then that I noticed that his tiny body was trembling involuntarily and bitter tears were trickling down his face unceasingly.
It is kindness and love that transformed the worst Christmas into the best one like magic, not only for ourselves, but also for those struggling souls that needed just a little warmth and hope.
It was friends who dragged you out of the mud of tragedy and navigated you ahead against all odds.
It was not until the vigor had been drained that they heard the melodic sound of the river again--- we are safe now.
In every way.../by no means.../not until...did.../nothing but/anything but
否定加否定 do+动词原形；very/single；反身代词（I myself）
3. With/without结构
With a sparkle of merriment radiating from her eyes, she strode ahead with a spring in every step, lips outlining an enchanting smile.
With curtains drawn open and light turned on, her voice lingered around the auditorium, echoing in every audience’s hearts.
Without lifting my head from the paper, I sat still, turning a deaf ear to Meghan’s beg.
4. 分词做状语
Biting his lips involuntarily and digging his nails into his palm, he trudged out of the hall with back hunched and head drooping.
Swallowing hard, she murmured and squeezed out some broken syllable through her quivering lips.
Paralyzed on the grass and breathing crisp air, Robert and Henry were engulfed in exhaustion, with blood drained from their pale face.
Torn between the overwhelming yearning for the delicate boots and the melancholy for our depressing Christmas, I came to a halt halfway to the shoe store.
Engulfed by nervousness, Elizabeth felt her heart pounding wildly and heads buzzing repeatedly.
5. 独立主格做伴随状语
Mind swirling, hands shaking, her each and every step closer amplified her pounding heartbeat.
Eyes blazing with radiant sparkles of joy, he waved his arms wildly toward Lucy, grinning from ear to ear.
Eyes fixed unblinkingly on the mother deer, I endeavored to hold my breath and prepared myself for its possible attack against my boy.
Hands waving madly and legs kicking water desperately, he screamed for rescue at the top of his voice.
Simple syllables crashing like a roll of thunder in his ears, John felt his heart rate accelerating and mind going blank.
They nestled against each other by the Christmas tree decorated with ornament, twinkling eyes fixed unblinkingly on various beautifully wrapped presents.
Heart scattered into pieces, I stole a glance at Ben inching behind me.
Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation.
例如，使用分词、独立主格描写打球画面：
Muscles outlined by the setting sun, beads of sweat glistening on their forehead, the players stood with their eyes fixed unblinkingly on the ball.
Taking a deep gulp of air, he suddenly accelerated his pace, spinning, flashing, leaving his opponents behind.
He leapt into the air with all his strength, stretching out his hand in full length to snatch the ball.
Bouncing, flying, swirling, in numerous anticipating gazes, the very ball drew a brilliant arc in midair and hit exactly at the basket.
He took a sharp turn, lowered his shoulder and dashed towards his right side like a bolt of lightning.（动作链）
6. 形容词做状语
Eager and excited, she waved her arms wildly, trying to attract other’s attention.
Fluent and graceful, each pose was in her control.
Mr. Wolff’s voice, thick with love, was as marvelous as her piano, gently drifting into Elizabeth’s ears, streaming down to her heart, dispelling all her nervousness.
He was tossing and turning in his bed, hot and unease, tortured by a sense of thirsty.
A charming smile resembles a ray of glow from heart, warm and irresistible.
The radiant sunbeam shadowed his tiny figure, harmonious and peaceful.
The four children, fascinated and curious, circled the Christmas tree with eyes glued to the twinkling stars on it, face lit up with brimming excitement.
Speechless and happy, she held her so tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
7. 定语从句
In that split second, all passengers’ gazes turned to this woman, who was once the one being sympathized but now the one being admired.
The fabulous melody drifted out and echoed around the hall, which tugged at everyone’s heartstrings.
Approaching her idol, for whom she had tossed and turned for countless nights, Elizabeth was consumed with exhilaration mingled with nervousness.
Two boys and a grinning snowman merged into a harmonious world, where a boy embraced the glamour and magic of nature.
Laurie portrayed graceful arcs smoothly on the ice and blended into the silver world where she had always belonged to.
8. What 引导的主语从句
What encountered her nervous and desperate eyes was Mr. Smith’s reassuring smile, which instilled infinite courage into her body.
What came into my sight was an empty house with skinny Marcia standing there, weary and tearful.
When his face split into a smile to welcome the dog back, what greeted him, though, was Brady’s bite on his pants, which was so fierce that he almost stumbled.
What stung our eyes was skinny Marcia, who …
What accompanied him was only the ruthless roar of the chilly winter wind.
What was also shining were those sweet memories of their precious cross-age friendship.
What lay before their desperate eyes was/were …
What was also shining were those sweet memories of their precious cross-age friendship.
9. 同位语
Just as he desperately witnessed the hasty retreat of his friends, Henry, his last straw of hope, came into his sight.
Ms. Wolff, the idol in her dreams, was now just meters ahead.
She swirled and danced, bringing everyone into an ice wonder land, a white fantasy.
10. 插入语
What came/popped into my sight, surprisingly, was big letters JJ written on the box.
His opponent, surprisingly, popped out of nowhere and snatched the ball.
At this moment, amid numerous gazes, Laurie …
There she stood, immersed in the long-lost yet familiar atmosphere, with shining spotlights and cheering audience.
And here he was, right in front of the very fawn, the evidently thirst-stricken creature.
Those photos, now yellow with age, as if holding a magic, made all the long-buried memories of the past revive /regain their color and unfold vividly before my eyes.
The door, with a deafening crash, landed flat on the floor.
A shark, with its tail shaking and its jaws clicking, made a leap from the sea and afterwards dived back into the water.
With the tide gently rolling to her feet, Betty, sitting in the sand, felt the wave of relief swept across the beach.
The merciless words,like invisible knives,penetrated into John’s heart, breaking all his rosy anticipation into pieces.
11. 感叹句
If only my mom could watch my performance!(虚拟语气)
How I longed to sit dozing in the shade of trees.
How ridiculous I was ….
What a bless and savior you are to …
I am amazed at how time molded us into what we are today.
How a small act of kindness could nurture the fragrant flow of friendship, bringing invaluable blessings to us.
12. 破折号
With the green box in her hand, Laurie spotted — and there it was—two letters JJ on the corner.
Turning it over, Laurie involuntarily let out a cry —two letters popped into her sight.
13. 动作链（连续发生）
Laurie skated, danced, and jumped to every beat of the music.
He inched his way inside, sank into the sofa and heaved a sigh of sorrow.
She put down the shoes, tugged at my sleeve with her little hands and pleaded to go out.
He dashed towards the river, inhaled a deep gulp of air and jumped without hesitation.
He dashed back to his office, seized his phone and dialed his home number.
I broke into a run back to the nurses’ station, tearfully shared what I had seen with nurses, and eagerly invited them to do something meaningful for the poor family.
He waved back, accelerated his pace and outstretched his arms towards his friend, leaving a string of footprints on the soft snow.
Dion gathered another pile of snow, rolled it into a perfect ball and lifted it upon the previous one.
The moment he stepped indoors, he dashed towards the kitchen, dug for the left orange, and ran outdoors without hesitation.
14. 副词放句首
Blankly, he elbowed his way through the excited crowd towards the door.
Abruptly, he sprang up to his feet, running towards the house to fetch another cup of water.
Hesitantly, I tapped at the door, with tremendous sorrow surging through my heart.
Quickly, she followed the sound to a stream.
Slowly, she turned around, and mustering all her remaining strength, staggered towards the darkness, her back hunched and body slightly trembling.
15. 地点/时间状语/介词短语前置
Out of the corner of my eye I could see the little girl sobbing because I didn’t have time for her.
Under the shining spotlights, in the anticipating gazes of audience, students made their way on and off the stage.
At the sight of the elaborately prepared and inviting dishes, Tom felt a surge of guilt sung his heart.
Out of curiosity, she bent down, leaned over and reached out to fetch the box with a wildly thumping heart.
A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.
For the first time in her life, Maria felt frightened and lonely.
16. 短句
Turning it over, Laurie involuntarily let out a cry ---- two letters popped into her sight. Yes, it was Jinny’s.
Icy rain was pouring ruthlessly, engulfing the whole world in its tight clutch, nowhere to escape.
….but in vain.
No reply. All was silence.
17. 无灵主语
①时间或地点名词+see/ witness/ find/ bring/ prove/ provide
The last few years have witnessed your devotion to….
May the coming year bring peace and joy. 愿未来的一年带来和平与喜悦
②心理状态或其他状态的名词，如luck/ joy/ regret/ sorrow+desert/ return/ motivate/ inspire/ guide/ conquer/ linger
Courage deserted me when….勇气弃我而去
Anxiety tore him into pieces.
Anger choked my words.
His optimism has given way to doubt.
③行为或动作意义的名词，如sight/ thought/ glance/ look/ idea/ feeling+
strike/ greet/ arouse/ amaze/ delight/ frighten/ stun/ overwhelm/swallow/wormed into/possessed
A terrible thought suddenly struck me./popped into / crossed / flashed through his mind.
I was so excited and words slipped out of my mouth. 我不由得脱口而出(=blurted out )
A nervous laugh escaped my throat. 我不由自主紧张地笑了一声.
Words flood / flow out of her. Words failed me Words pale in the shadow of grief
Sleep didn’t visit her although the silence of a dead world was on the jungle.
His name escaped / failed me at the moment. = His name slipped my mind.
A sudden explosion in the street sent people running / fleeing in every direction.
Its arrival transformed the house into a vibrant and lively one...
His original / initial / previous caution / guard / alert gave way to ecstasy
④天气现象，情景等名词，如rain/ storm/ snow/ weather+come/ leave/ prevent/ permit/ allow/ bring/ threaten/ cooperate
Night approaching, darkness ruled the forest.
The gentle breeze gradually put him at ease.
Dusk found him crying in the street.
Dawn saw the little boy still working.
第四章、修辞手法
短句排比
No quietness, no relief, only the sleepless night awaiting him.
No happier Christmas. No happier birthday. Only an abandoned soul.
No more fear, no more timidity. This time she conquered the fright to be the best.
No more coldness, no more video games. It was that wintry morning that Freddie sniffed the fragrance of having a good time in snowy winter.
Without worries, without injuries. Laurie was totally intoxicated in her performance.
主语排比
Its slender body, its silky mane, its leisurely pace and its shiny saddle, all kept me so spellbound.
His beloved wife, his cozy home, his fond life, all came racing into his head in that split second.
The intimate company of friends, the lively glamour of nature, the splendid scenery of swirling snowflakes, all of these knitted together, narrating/ unveiling a lovely story of having a good time.
The icy wind howling outside, the warm songs drifting inside, the love together with kindness, all of these composed the most wonderful melody for Christmas, echoing in the hospital.
His anticipation for the gift, his birthday wishes and great joy of Christmas all vanished without trace.
The numbness that pounded his brain, the hollowness that took hold of his soul and the sadness that permeated through his body now threatened to engulf him entirely.
复现排比
Yet none of them saw me, and none, including myself, realized that tears had been trickling down my cheeks.
The smile was exactly the same as that of our first encounter, and the smile will forever be in the depth of my heart.
I saw his dedication, his persistence, and most importantly, his deep love for his mom.
This time, she was ready to be the best version of herself, to be a shining diamond on the ice. He had nowhere to stay, no way to go, and no one by his side. Not a single.
I squeeze my eyes shut and try to reach for him across the hundreds and hundreds of miles, to send my thoughts into his mind, to let him know he is not alone.
Every step, every circle, every leap cast the audience into a dream-like fantasy.
Scene after scene where Ben popped in and out of the room delightedly, where July staggered with that stick, where he smiled brightly and protected him from falling and tripping, all came flooding into our mind and brought us to the verge of tears.
对比
The serious look on July’s face softened.
As snowflakes soundlessly carpeted the outside world, the warmth of love was blazing inside.
Festive light bulbs sparkled like stars in the inky night, which paled compared with the true beauty of love blossoming in our heart.
Her tiny figure seemed to be weaker than ever.
This time, he was no longer a bad advertisement for my teaching. Instead, his skillful performance and infinite determination has become my best advertisement.
The birth problem could only disable his body, but it could never deter her from realizing her dreams.
Contrary to John’s wildest imagination, he pulled out several wrinkled bills, instead of a gun or a knife.
He confidently opened his mouth, yet what came forth was a single painful groan.
I had gone from hero to zero in fleeting 30 seconds.
It dragged me from the fantasy of hero into the harsh reality of penniless nobody.
My instinct told me that …, but my assumption couldn’t be further from the fact.
One second, he was in wonderful dream of the Christmas gift; the next, all the exhilaration vanished without trace in a split second, to be replaced by tremendous grief of loss.
The ripples of laughter once lingering in the house was now replaced by a deathly silence.
Former excitement evaporated, and in its place was the faith in sportsmanship.
My initial depression and negativity gave way to an upwelling surge of eagerness for the captivating presence of the newly-got tricycle. (initial...gave way to...and finally to...)
amplify/magnify以声衬静
拟人
Sadness completely got hold of me. Gripped by the terror, I …
The mellow sunlight kissed my face with its warmth, marking the closing chapter of this bone-chilling winter.
The icy rain was pouring ruthlessly, engulfing the whole world in its tight clutch.
Darkness engulfed the bus in its indifference. Some passengers just stared at their mobile phones silently while. Others murmured to complain about getting home late. Yet nobody lent him a hand.
Snowflakes danced and swirled in the bone-chilling air like tiny crystalline angels.
Their rosy faces shone radiantly when the snowman progressively came into shape, beaming at two boys cheerfully like a cherubic angle.
That day, the snowman stood silently and curved its lips into a beaming smile, watching the two figures chasing, playing and having a good time on a wintry day.
Having the lovely nose, the snowman almost came alive, wearing a broad smile as a mute message of thankfulness to the boys who made wonder in such a snow day.
With snowflakes swirling and dancing in the air, two boys and a grinning snowman merged into a harmonious world, where a boy embraced the glamour and magic of nature.
Within minutes, a vivid snowman stood proudly in the front yard, poked his head and craned his neck to have a better look at the icy world.
Thousands of gazes pierced her back, like the biting thorns of such beautiful roses.
The ball slapped hard on the board and landed right into the basket.
Everyone’s eyes landed upon that ball drawing a beautiful line/curved a beautiful arc in the air, in a split second flying straight into the target.
比喻
However, the huge theatre was like a gloomy mouth gaped open, where stood those audience awaiting her words, which did shatter her fragile soul.
Once a seed of music was sowed in a heart, it would take root and grow into a lofty tree to shelter a frightened child.
Yes, her flower of efforts bore fruit eventually and all it needed was the sunshine of courage and encouragement.
There existed no such thing as perfect performances, but An’s consideration did add a soft note to her tune of life.
I just reached a major crossroad in my life.
Some subtle sense of pity seemed to freeze the still air, as if we went from March to December.
Like a stone that broke the lake's peace, more and more passengers tried to talk with the old man
and the woman, comforting them that all things would be good.
夸张
The short distance from edge of the stage to where Mrs. Wolff stood seemed to stretch into an endless marathon as she gingerly made her way forward with shaky steps.
Seconds dragged by like centuries as the buzzing from the audience cut its way into her ears.
As if transporting the most treasured item in the world, Billy inched his way towards the very direction of the baby fawn, when the radiant sunbeam cast an ever-so-bright ray on his childish face.
Each step seemed to drag for a century, but simply not enough for her to fumble for the right words.
She racked her brains for the very six words but in vain. Panic swept over her. This dream-like fantasy tuned out to be a nightmare with fear dominating.
8. 类比
the daylight was fading, so was the hope of... bore resemblance to