牛津深圳版英语七年级上册 Unit 1 Making friends 课时5 写作课件

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Unit 1　Making friends
课时5
写作
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例文呈现
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四基三级练
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课时过关
你是Anne，写一封电子邮件给新认识的笔友Tony，介绍一下你自己的情况。词数60左右。
内容：1.你自己的个人信息；　2.你的家庭情况；
3．你的学习情况； 4.谈谈你的梦想。
Dear Tony,
　　My name is Anne. I would like to be your e-friend. I come from China. I have a big family. There are five people in my family, my grandparents, my parents and I. We live in a big house close to a supermarket.
　　My school is big. It is far from my home, so I take a bus to school every day. My favourite subject is English. My dream is to be an English teacher. My favourite sport is table tennis. My other hobbies are riding a bike and reading.
　　I hope to hear from you soon.
　　Best wishes.
Yours，
Anne
写作常用句型：
1．My school is far away from my home, so I take a bus to school.
我的学校离家很远，所以我乘坐公共汽车去上学。
2．My dream is to be a famous writer. 我的梦想是成为一位有名的作家。
3．My hobby is playing chess. 我的爱好是下棋。
4．I like flying kites in my free time. 空闲的时候我喜欢放风筝。
5．I am thin. I have long hair. 我比较瘦，长头发。
6．I want to make friends with young people from all over the world.
我想和来自世界各地的年轻人交朋友。
7．I hope to hear from you soon. 我希望很快能收到你的来信。
　你在深圳，你的名字叫Kevin，请写一封电子邮件给你新认识的美国笔友Dave，向他介绍你的爱好，你的家庭情况，你的学校，还有你的梦想。词数60左右。
写作方法指导与操练
一、写什么——细审题，列要点
1．问候美国笔友；　2.介绍你的爱好、家庭情况、学校、梦想等；
3.表达愿望。
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一点：问候美国笔友；
1．我很高兴和你交朋友。
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I am very happy to make friends with you.
写作方法指导与操练
第二点：介绍你的爱好、家庭情况、学校、梦想等；
2．我来自深圳。 我的名字叫Kevin。
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3．我和我的父母以及爷爷奶奶住在一起。
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4．我家离学校很近，所以我每天走路上学。
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I come from Shenzhen. My name is Kevin.
I live with my parents and my grandparents.
My home is close to the school, so I go to school on foot every day.
写作方法指导与操练
5．我的爱好是踢足球、游泳等； 我每周末都会和我的朋友们踢足球。
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6．我最喜爱的科目是数学和英语，我的梦想是成为一名工程师。
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My hobbies are playing football and swimming. I often play football with my friends every weekend.
My favourite subjects are Maths and English. My dream is to be an engineer.
写作方法指导与操练
第三点：表达愿望。
7．我希望尽快收到你的来信，我希望交更多的朋友。
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I am looking forward to your letter. I hope to make more friends
as well.
【参考词汇】
1．come from　　2.live with　　 3.be close to…　　4.be far from…
5．take a bus 6.be good at… 7.My hobbies are…
8．My favourite subject is… 9.My dream is to be…
10.I would like to be…
【我的完整作品】
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Dear Dave，
I am very happy to meet you on the Internet. Now let me tell you something about myself. My name is Kevin. I'm 12 years old. I come from Shenzhen. I have a big family. I live with my parents and my grandparents. My home is close to the school, so I go to school on foot every day. I like doing sports very much. I'm good at swimming and
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playing football. I like all the subjects at school, and my favourite subjects are Maths and English. My dream is to be an engineer. I'm a nice boy and I want to make friends with you! Thanks！
Kevin
谢谢大家！