【知识点专区】2015年高中英语 书面表达提纲作文 专项练习（含解析）
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评卷人 得分
一、书面表达
1．散步是一种良好的锻炼方式，它对我们的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )健康非常有益。请以“Walking to Keep Fit”为题写一篇100～120词的英语短文，介绍一下散步的好处以及你的建议。
注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walkin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health.
2．一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭、工作业余生活21·世纪*教育网
注意：1、字数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
3．假设你是李华。你的两位 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )朋友Tom与 Peter几天前产生了误会。10月19日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：www-2-1-cnjy-com
1、礼物选择；
2、你的理由；
3、其他和解建议。
注意：（1）、词数100左右 ；
（2）、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 。
（3）、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
4．假如你是一名高三年级学生。你发现班 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )上有些同学晚上学习到深夜，白天也不安排休息时间，但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡；有些同学饮食习惯不好，不吃早餐。请你写一篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食, 保证学习好、身体好。
注意：发言稿须包含上述要点，但可适当发挥，使讲话完整通顺。
It’ s a pleasure ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
5．A little boy in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )vited his mother to attend his school’s first teacher-parent meeting. When she said she would go, he was disappointed as he had always been ashamed of his mother’s scar that covered nearly the entire right side of her face. The boy never wanted to talk about why or how she got the scar.www.21-cn-jy.com
At the meeting, the pe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ople were impressed by the kindness and natural beauty of his mother in spite of the scar, but the little boy was still embarrassed and hid himself from everyone. He did, however, overhear a conversation between his mother and his teacher.2·1·c·n·j·y
The teacher a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sked carefully, “How did you get the scar on your face ” The mother replied, “When my son was a baby, he was in a room that caught fire. Everyone was too afraid to go in because the fire was out of control, but I went in. As I was running toward his bed, I saw a long piece of wood coming down and I placed myself over him trying to protect him. I was knocked senseless but fortunately, a fireman came in and saved both of us.” She touched the burned side of her face. “This scar will be lasting, but to this day, I have never regretted what I did.” At this point, the little boy came out running toward his mother with tears of regret in his eyes.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容
2. 以约120个词讲述一个关于你(或你的朋友)的父母对子女无私的爱的故事。内容包括：
（1）讲述一个体现父母无私的爱的故事；
（2）父母无私的爱对你（或你的朋友）带来的影响；
（3）你认为作为儿女要如何回报父母的爱。
【写作要求】
1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
6．假定你是李华，希望通 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：21cnjy.com
年龄；
性别；
爱好
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已写好。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.2-1-c-n-j-y
Best regards,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．
Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walk ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health.It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones.It’s safer than many other ways of exercise，especially for the elderly and it’s easy to do without considering rules.Besides，walking can also help us lose weight. 21*cnjy*com
What should we pay ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )attention to during the walk？First，we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so that we can relax.Second，we should walk fast enough to cause us to breathe with difficulty but still able to talk.Third，it’s important to walk with our arms moving freely.And last but not least we should do it every day.
【解析】一篇好作文的四要素：一是要点要齐全；二是用词和句子结构要富于变化；三是文章句子之间衔接自然，是一有机整体；四是书写要清楚、美观。【出处：21教育名师】
本文叙述了散步的好处和方法，语言简 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )洁有力，使用了学生们常见的句型和词汇，如not only…but also…；it is 形容词 to do；好的词汇有：strengthen，build up等；再就是文章使用了一些衔接词，是文章内容非常紧凑，不失为一篇佳作。
2．
I often imagine ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.【版权所有：21教育】
【解析】
试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )be different 不同；get along well with 与。。相处融洽；in my free time在我的业余时间；take exercise锻炼；I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.在这个句子出现what引导的宾语从句；I will do a good job in whatever I do这个句子中whatever引导名词性从句。In a work, my life will be much richer and more colorful.,在这个句子运用比较级，表示越来越。。
3．
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.21·cn·jy·com
As far as I know, P ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.21教育网
Apart from giving him ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语A ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s far as I know所我所知；build up增强；it is convenient for sb to do 做某事对于某人来说是很便利的；In the meanwhile与此同时；Apart from除了；If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him 这个句子运用到对现在的虚拟；In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句，代指上面这件事；No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. 这句话中no matter what引导让步状语从句，还运用到动名词做主语；
考点： 提纲类作文
4．
It’ s a pleasure fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r me to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day. So they often cannot help falling asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
In my opinion, it’s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )extremely important for us to have enough sleep an a proper diet. We must try to make wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit and study well. I wonder if you agree with me.21教育名师原创作品
That’s all. Thank you for listening !
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求写一篇 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )关于班级现象的演讲稿，来谈谈自己的看法和建议。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。21世纪教育网版权所有
【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见的短语h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ave a chance to有机会做某事；take a rest休息；cannot help doing禁不住 做某事；In my opinion在我看来；And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；only in this way can we keep fit and study well.这个句子考查到only+状语+部分倒装；21*cnjy*com
考点： 提纲类作文
5．
one possible version:
A boy was ashamed o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f his mother’s scar on the face. Knowing by accident it was caused when she tried to rescue him from a terrible fire at the risk of her life, he was touched and regretful.
Children are said to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) be a gift from God for parents. Therefore, most parents are grateful for this great gift and never hesitate to sacrifice for their children. My friend, Tom, is disabled from birth, who can only move in a wheelchair. His parents devote all their love to him though most of their friends and relatives try to persuade them to give birth to one more child, which may at least ensure their happy life in their late years. Considerable difficulties are involved in looking after a disabled one, but Tom’s parents make every effort to ensure he can live as happy a life as any normal child. Their devotion and selfless love make Tom an active, confident boy and a top student in school, the most promising one to be admitted to Beijing University.
Tom’s story is bu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t one of the moving stories between parents and children. No one can deny that parents are the ones who love us most and deserve our deepest love. As children, we should always be thankful to their love and be ready to love them in return.
【解析】
试题分析：分析要求可知，内容包括：1 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). 写故事梗概；2. 讲述一个关于父母对子女无私的爱的故事。内容包括：（1）讲述一个体现父母无私的爱的故事；（2）父母无私的爱对你（或你的朋友）带来的影响；（3）你认为作为儿女要如何回报父母的爱。短文应该用一般过去时讲述故事梗概，第三人称。多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。
【亮点说明】本文概括准确如开始时对妈妈 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )脸上的伤疤感到ashamed，了解情况后很受感动touched and 也很后悔自己的行为regretful。讲述故事体现了父母对一个残疾孩子无私的爱。他们devote all their love to him，为了全心全意照顾他，不考虑再要一个孩子防老。be involved in looking after a disabled one, make every effort to ensure he can live as happy a life as any normal child. 都很不错。句子之间的连贯表现在运用了不同的连词，如but, Therefore。句中还有which \who引导的非限制性定语从句等提高了文章的表达水平。
考点：提纲作文。
6．
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
Best regards,
【解析】
试题分析：考查开放性作文写 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语do ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sb a favor帮某人忙；is interested in对。。感兴趣；be good for 对，，有好处；share with与某人分享；taking care of 照顾；have in common.有共同之处 ；In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis.这个句子who 引导someone的定语从句；With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common这个句子中travelling, taking 是并列in的宾语。
考点： 提纲类作文
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评卷人 得分
一、书面表达
1．散步是一种良好的锻炼方式，它对我们的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )健康非常有益。请以“Walking to Keep Fit”为题写一篇100～120词的英语短文，介绍一下散步的好处以及你的建议。
注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walkin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health.
2．一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭、工作业余生活21·世纪*教育网
注意：1、字数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
3．假设你是李华。你的两位 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )朋友Tom与 Peter几天前产生了误会。10月19日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：www-2-1-cnjy-com
1、礼物选择；
2、你的理由；
3、其他和解建议。
注意：（1）、词数100左右 ；
（2）、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 。
（3）、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
4．假如你是一名高三年级学生。你发现班 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )上有些同学晚上学习到深夜，白天也不安排休息时间，但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡；有些同学饮食习惯不好，不吃早餐。请你写一篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食, 保证学习好、身体好。
注意：发言稿须包含上述要点，但可适当发挥，使讲话完整通顺。
It’ s a pleasure ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
5．A little boy in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )vited his mother to attend his school’s first teacher-parent meeting. When she said she would go, he was disappointed as he had always been ashamed of his mother’s scar that covered nearly the entire right side of her face. The boy never wanted to talk about why or how she got the scar.www.21-cn-jy.com
At the meeting, the pe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ople were impressed by the kindness and natural beauty of his mother in spite of the scar, but the little boy was still embarrassed and hid himself from everyone. He did, however, overhear a conversation between his mother and his teacher.2·1·c·n·j·y
The teacher a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sked carefully, “How did you get the scar on your face ” The mother replied, “When my son was a baby, he was in a room that caught fire. Everyone was too afraid to go in because the fire was out of control, but I went in. As I was running toward his bed, I saw a long piece of wood coming down and I placed myself over him trying to protect him. I was knocked senseless but fortunately, a fireman came in and saved both of us.” She touched the burned side of her face. “This scar will be lasting, but to this day, I have never regretted what I did.” At this point, the little boy came out running toward his mother with tears of regret in his eyes.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容
2. 以约120个词讲述一个关于你(或你的朋友)的父母对子女无私的爱的故事。内容包括：
（1）讲述一个体现父母无私的爱的故事；
（2）父母无私的爱对你（或你的朋友）带来的影响；
（3）你认为作为儿女要如何回报父母的爱。
【写作要求】
1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
6．假定你是李华，希望通 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：21cnjy.com
年龄；
性别；
爱好
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已写好。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.2-1-c-n-j-y
Best regards,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．
Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walk ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health.It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones.It’s safer than many other ways of exercise，especially for the elderly and it’s easy to do without considering rules.Besides，walking can also help us lose weight. 21*cnjy*com
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【解析】一篇好作文的四要素：一是要点要齐全；二是用词和句子结构要富于变化；三是文章句子之间衔接自然，是一有机整体；四是书写要清楚、美观。【出处：21教育名师】
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I often imagine ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.【版权所有：21教育】
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试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )be different 不同；get along well with 与。。相处融洽；in my free time在我的业余时间；take exercise锻炼；I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.在这个句子出现what引导的宾语从句；I will do a good job in whatever I do这个句子中whatever引导名词性从句。In a work, my life will be much richer and more colorful.,在这个句子运用比较级，表示越来越。。
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Dear Tom,
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Best wishes
Li Hua
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试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语A ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s far as I know所我所知；build up增强；it is convenient for sb to do 做某事对于某人来说是很便利的；In the meanwhile与此同时；Apart from除了；If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him 这个句子运用到对现在的虚拟；In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句，代指上面这件事；No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. 这句话中no matter what引导让步状语从句，还运用到动名词做主语；
考点： 提纲类作文
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It’ s a pleasure fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r me to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day. So they often cannot help falling asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
In my opinion, it’s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )extremely important for us to have enough sleep an a proper diet. We must try to make wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit and study well. I wonder if you agree with me.21教育名师原创作品
That’s all. Thank you for listening !
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试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求写一篇 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )关于班级现象的演讲稿，来谈谈自己的看法和建议。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。21世纪教育网版权所有
【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见的短语h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ave a chance to有机会做某事；take a rest休息；cannot help doing禁不住 做某事；In my opinion在我看来；And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；only in this way can we keep fit and study well.这个句子考查到only+状语+部分倒装；21*cnjy*com
考点： 提纲类作文
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one possible version:
A boy was ashamed o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f his mother’s scar on the face. Knowing by accident it was caused when she tried to rescue him from a terrible fire at the risk of her life, he was touched and regretful.
Children are said to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) be a gift from God for parents. Therefore, most parents are grateful for this great gift and never hesitate to sacrifice for their children. My friend, Tom, is disabled from birth, who can only move in a wheelchair. His parents devote all their love to him though most of their friends and relatives try to persuade them to give birth to one more child, which may at least ensure their happy life in their late years. Considerable difficulties are involved in looking after a disabled one, but Tom’s parents make every effort to ensure he can live as happy a life as any normal child. Their devotion and selfless love make Tom an active, confident boy and a top student in school, the most promising one to be admitted to Beijing University.
Tom’s story is bu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t one of the moving stories between parents and children. No one can deny that parents are the ones who love us most and deserve our deepest love. As children, we should always be thankful to their love and be ready to love them in return.
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试题分析：分析要求可知，内容包括：1 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). 写故事梗概；2. 讲述一个关于父母对子女无私的爱的故事。内容包括：（1）讲述一个体现父母无私的爱的故事；（2）父母无私的爱对你（或你的朋友）带来的影响；（3）你认为作为儿女要如何回报父母的爱。短文应该用一般过去时讲述故事梗概，第三人称。多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。
【亮点说明】本文概括准确如开始时对妈妈 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )脸上的伤疤感到ashamed，了解情况后很受感动touched and 也很后悔自己的行为regretful。讲述故事体现了父母对一个残疾孩子无私的爱。他们devote all their love to him，为了全心全意照顾他，不考虑再要一个孩子防老。be involved in looking after a disabled one, make every effort to ensure he can live as happy a life as any normal child. 都很不错。句子之间的连贯表现在运用了不同的连词，如but, Therefore。句中还有which \who引导的非限制性定语从句等提高了文章的表达水平。
考点：提纲作文。
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Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
Best regards,
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试题分析：考查开放性作文写 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语do ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sb a favor帮某人忙；is interested in对。。感兴趣；be good for 对，，有好处；share with与某人分享；taking care of 照顾；have in common.有共同之处 ；In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis.这个句子who 引导someone的定语从句；With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common这个句子中travelling, taking 是并列in的宾语。
考点： 提纲类作文
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