【知识点专区】2015年高中英语 书面表达图表作文 专项练习（含解析）
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本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网www.21cnjy.com
评卷人 得分
一、书面表达
1．中国的传统节日中秋节马上就要到了，你的美国笔友Mike请你在他们的校报上介绍一下中秋节的情况，请你根据下表写一篇短文。2-1-c-n-j-y
【写作内容】中秋节简介
时间 每年阴历八月十五日，是中国最重要的传统节日之一。
范围 中国及亚洲其它一些国家都会庆祝。
象征 人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征，在那天会互相表达祝福。
方式 在那一天，人们通常回家与家人团聚，共聚晚餐。人们还会吃月饼，那是一种圆圆的饼，里面有肉、果仁、鸡蛋等。
【写作要求】只能使用5个英语句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
2．你叫李华。最近，你们班同学就“地球一 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )小时”活动展开了一场热烈盼讨论。下表是这次讨论的结果。请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编写一封信，介绍你们班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。【出处：21教育名师】
60％的同学支持 40％的同学反对 你的看法
引起人们对全球气候变暖的关注 做秀，意义不大 ……
节约能源 收效甚微
全世界共同努力，保护地球 给人们生活，学习和工作带来不便
…… ……
注意：1．字数120左右；
2．开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：做秀一show
不便一inconvenience
Dear Editor，
Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour．
3．生活中冲突时有发生。 假设你班同学苏 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。 请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。21世纪教育网版权所有
简要描述事情的经过 打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等
分析发生冲突的原因
1. 遇事不够冷静
2. ……
谈谈避免冲突的做法 (请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法)
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。 开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Confl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )icts with others are common in everyday life.___________________________________________________________________
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4．请根据以下表格所提供的内容, 写一篇短文。
时 间 2013年5月27日
地 点 市区一十字路口红绿灯处
经 过 一名中年妇女骑车带着女儿闯了红灯, 并辱骂交警。半小时后, 女儿返回, 递上一封道歉信
你的看法 ……
应包括以下内容:
1. 简述此事;
2. 就此事谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。
注意:
1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150个左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
A middle-aged woman ra ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2013. _______________________________
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5．人们常说“字如其人”。据一项调查显 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )示，有85．8％的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文，说明该现象并发表看法。21教育网
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注意：1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节。
Nowadays, with th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.www.21-cn-jy.com
6．假设你是某中学高三(5)班的班长。你 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )班同学利用课余时间回收废报纸和饮料瓶获得了一笔收入。就如何使用这笔收入，你昨天下午专门组织了一次班会让全班同学进行讨论。请你根据以下讨论结果用英语写一篇班会总结。2·1·c·n·j·y
【写作内容】
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【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
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7．11月11日阿里巴巴(Aliba ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ba Group) 旗下的淘宝网（）和天猫（）的销售额达到了191亿，其中天猫为132亿，淘宝为59亿。www-2-1-cnjy-com
某英文论坛对这一成功的营销案例进行讨论 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )。假如你是该论坛用户，请你根据以下图示，用英文写一篇短文，分析其成功的原因及你的想法，在该论坛上发帖参与讨论。
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注意：1.词数：120词左右；
2.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：网民netizen
On November 11, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 2012, Singles Day, Alibaba Group took in 19.1 billion RMB from the sales of and , which is believed to be the biggest sales in a single day 21*cnjy*com
8．假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
知心话 感恩 感谢父母的关心、鼓励
对父母的期望 1. 多加交流2. 适时提供帮助
学习打算 考生自拟（至少写两点）
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）。
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Thr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ee approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!21cnjy.com
Mom and Dad, I am qui ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )te confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．
one possible version:
The Mid-autumn ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year. Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries. People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune, and it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion, enjoying a large meal with their family. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside. 21·世纪*教育网
【解析】
试题分析：分析要求可知，中国的传统节日 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )中秋节马上就要到了，你的美国笔友Mike请你在他们的校报上介绍一下中秋节的情况。内容包括：1. 时间；2. 范围。3. 象征。4. 庆祝方式。只能使用5个英语句子表达全部内容。短文应该用一般现在时，第三人称。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。【版权所有：21教育】
【亮点说明】首先用which的非限制性 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )定语从句和Not only ... but also... 来说明中秋节的时间及范围。其次用并列句说明中秋节的象征意义。最后用两个句子来说明中国人在中秋节这一天的庆祝方式。其中They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.句中有which 引导的非限制性定语从句等。
考点：提纲作文。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．见解析。21教育名师原创作品
【解析】参考范文：
Last week our class ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d a heated discussion on Earth Hour．Different students have different opinions about this activity．21*cnjy*com
About 60% of the s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tudents are in favor of it． As we all know ,global warming is a big problem in the world． Earth Hour can raise people’s awareness of global warming． Besides, turning off lights for an hour is energy-saving． Only by working together can we make our earth a better place to live in．
However , about 40% ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) of the students say this activity is not very meaningful． They think it is only a show and that it doesn’t make much difference． What’s more, turning off lights for an hour may cause inconvenience to people’s life, work and study．
In my opinion, this ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )activity is of great importance． But one activity alone is not enough if we want to save energy and protect our earth． Let’s act through our day-to-day habits．
3．见解析。
【解析】这是一篇表格类作文，内含三 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )个要点：简要描述事情经过；分析发生冲突的原因；谈谈避免冲突的做法，文章要紧紧围绕这三个要点展开。各个要点的表达要清晰，第一个要点只要简要描述；第二、三个要点考生可以自己做合理的联想，理由要有新意，内容要符合逻辑。可适当发挥，增加细节。三个要点层次要分明，衔接要自然。最后注意一些衔接词和特殊句式的运用。
参考范文：
One possible version：
Conflicts_with_oth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ers_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other,trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) was Su's ault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact，blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To av ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place.
Don' t be self centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
4．见解析
【解析】参考范文：
A middle-aged woman r ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )an the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2013. Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman. However, half an hour later, the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.
People with bad manner ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s can often be seen in our daily life, like the mother mentioned above. They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. They are self-centered, and don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. It is difficult for them to make a change unless they are educated properly.
Luckily, we are also s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )urrounded by many virtuous people. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter. How I hope all of us are kind, polite and helpful to each other so that we can enjoy a better life.
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Nowadays, with ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.
According to a r ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ecent survey, about 85. 8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their handwriting. 51. 5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10. 9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, “ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )writing style shows the man ”. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
【解析】试题分析：考查图表类作文写作, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。21·cn·jy·com
【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见的短语 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )According to根据；there is no need to没有必要做某事；are so busy with忙于做某事；in my opinion在我看来；32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.这个句子中使用so ..that如此以至于；As the saying goes, “writing style shows the man ”. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.这句话中使用到谚语，并且运用到动名词做主语；
考点： 图表类作文
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One possible version：
Yesterday aftern ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oon，we held a class meeting discussing how to spend the money our whole class earned by recycling and selling newspapers and plastic bottles after class. Three fifths of the students suggested buying stationery for our own use because it can let us experience the enjoyment of harvest. Meanwhile，it is an approach to encouraging our classmates to continue this action. However，two fifths of the students believed that the money should be donated to the people in the earthquake stricken areas because they need the money more urgently than us. More importantly，it is meaningful to spend the money earned by ourselves in helping others.
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇论说文，提示信息以 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )表格形式出现，要求同学们在写作前仔细分析内容，归纳要点。根据图表所示，文章应分为两个层次，也就是要讲明两种建议，一种建议是买文具发给大家来让同学们体验收获的喜悦并且鼓励大家；另一种建议是把钱捐给灾区去帮助他人。这两种建议的顺序可以打乱，但是要使用连接词来进行恰当的过渡。作文要求只用五句话表达，所以必须使用一些如定语从句， 状语从句等的复合句和一些介词短语，非谓语短语等。
【亮点说明】本篇范文要点全面，概括 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )准确，语言通顺连贯，内容全面，段落层次分明，标点符号使用规范。作者首先提出讨论的内容，然后分别讲述了两方面的看法，并且陈述了原因。按照要求使用五个长句简述了要求的内容，很好地完成了写作任务。文中一些副词和连接词Meanwhile，However，More importantly的使用使文章过渡自然，语言流畅。而且文章高级词汇stationery ，urgently和短语experience the enjoyment of harvest，is meaningful to，spend money in doing sth的使用也是文章的亮点所在。
考点：考查提纲作文
7．
One possible version：
On November 11, 20 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )12, Singles Day, Alibaba Group took in 19.1 billion RMB from the sales of and , which is believed to be the biggest sales in a single day. What led to the successful sales
First of all, highl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y-developed internet technology played an important role, without which such big sales in one day would not have been possible. More and more netizens , mostly young people, are willing to accept this shopping trend. Advertisements also contributed greatly to the success. Long before Singles Day ,news about the sales filled the internet, TV and newspapers. Therefore, people all over the country knew about it . Advertisements with focus on low prices , about 50% off, could been seen everywhere, which encouraged the netizens to buy .What’s more, varieties of goods online satisfied most of the buyers. So they can purchase almost everything from foods to cars without leaving their houses.
In short , a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dvertisements with proper focus plus advanced technology will promote sales.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达要求根据图示 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，就淘宝和天猫的成功营销案例进行讨论，分析其成功的原因及想法。根据这些提示可以判断短文应该用第一人称，使用一般现在时。从图示可以分析成功的原因有四个方面，包括price（价格），goods（货物），internet technology（网络技术），advertisement（广告），还可以适当发挥想象，补充内容。在写这四方面内容时要注意使用恰当的连接词，比如表示顺序的词: first of all , secondly , what’s more等，以使文章层次分明，结构清晰。此外，还要注意使用多种句式结构和高级词汇以提高文章档次。
【亮点说明】本文使用经典 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的三段式结构，首段介绍了淘宝和天猫的成功事例，用What led to the successful sales 引出文章要讨论的中心，使文章过渡自然。在第二段分析成功的原因时，作者使用了First of all, also ，Therefore, What’s more,等连接词使段落层次非常清晰。最后用in short引出作者的结论。此外，作者在文中用了大量的短语are willing to，played an important role, contributed to，focus on等。还有定语从句without which such big sales in one day would not have been possible.和 which encouraged the netizens to buy.
考点：考查提纲作文
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Dear Mom and Dad, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies.
Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.
I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains." Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文的属于提纲类写作， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )要求对父母说说心里话，话题切合考生实际，与考生的生活非常贴近，考生有话可说，有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的，要求考生有较强的整合能力，在写作时充分利用连接词，高级句型和词汇，如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语，以使文章的层次更高。应该用合适的连接词，可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。在例举学习打算的时候可以加入谚语，让文章更上一层楼。
【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组：T ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hanks to 多亏，making remarkable progress 取得很大的进步，made up my mind to 决定，make every effort to study努力学习， the key to…的关键。 还使用了不少精典句式，如： Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. 这句话使用了固定句型，I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.这句话使用了it做形式宾语和which引导的定语从句，I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.这句话使用了定语从句， Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies这句话使用了现在分词做状语。文章还恰当地使用了俗语：Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains."。
考点: 考查提纲类书面表达
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评卷人 得分
一、书面表达
1．中国的传统节日中秋节马上就要到了，你的美国笔友Mike请你在他们的校报上介绍一下中秋节的情况，请你根据下表写一篇短文。2-1-c-n-j-y
【写作内容】中秋节简介
时间 每年阴历八月十五日，是中国最重要的传统节日之一。
范围 中国及亚洲其它一些国家都会庆祝。
象征 人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征，在那天会互相表达祝福。
方式 在那一天，人们通常回家与家人团聚，共聚晚餐。人们还会吃月饼，那是一种圆圆的饼，里面有肉、果仁、鸡蛋等。
【写作要求】只能使用5个英语句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
2．你叫李华。最近，你们班同学就“地球一 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )小时”活动展开了一场热烈盼讨论。下表是这次讨论的结果。请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编写一封信，介绍你们班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。【出处：21教育名师】
60％的同学支持 40％的同学反对 你的看法
引起人们对全球气候变暖的关注 做秀，意义不大 ……
节约能源 收效甚微
全世界共同努力，保护地球 给人们生活，学习和工作带来不便
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注意：1．字数120左右；
2．开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：做秀一show
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Dear Editor，
Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour．
3．生活中冲突时有发生。 假设你班同学苏 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。 请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。21世纪教育网版权所有
简要描述事情的经过 打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等
分析发生冲突的原因
1. 遇事不够冷静
2. ……
谈谈避免冲突的做法 (请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法)
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。 开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Confl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )icts with others are common in everyday life.___________________________________________________________________
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4．请根据以下表格所提供的内容, 写一篇短文。
时 间 2013年5月27日
地 点 市区一十字路口红绿灯处
经 过 一名中年妇女骑车带着女儿闯了红灯, 并辱骂交警。半小时后, 女儿返回, 递上一封道歉信
你的看法 ……
应包括以下内容:
1. 简述此事;
2. 就此事谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。
注意:
1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150个左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
A middle-aged woman ra ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2013. _______________________________
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5．人们常说“字如其人”。据一项调查显 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )示，有85．8％的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文，说明该现象并发表看法。21教育网
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注意：1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节。
Nowadays, with th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.www.21-cn-jy.com
6．假设你是某中学高三(5)班的班长。你 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )班同学利用课余时间回收废报纸和饮料瓶获得了一笔收入。就如何使用这笔收入，你昨天下午专门组织了一次班会让全班同学进行讨论。请你根据以下讨论结果用英语写一篇班会总结。2·1·c·n·j·y
【写作内容】
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【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
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7．11月11日阿里巴巴(Aliba ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ba Group) 旗下的淘宝网（）和天猫（）的销售额达到了191亿，其中天猫为132亿，淘宝为59亿。www-2-1-cnjy-com
某英文论坛对这一成功的营销案例进行讨论 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )。假如你是该论坛用户，请你根据以下图示，用英文写一篇短文，分析其成功的原因及你的想法，在该论坛上发帖参与讨论。
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注意：1.词数：120词左右；
2.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：网民netizen
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8．假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
知心话 感恩 感谢父母的关心、鼓励
对父母的期望 1. 多加交流2. 适时提供帮助
学习打算 考生自拟（至少写两点）
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）。
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Thr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ee approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!21cnjy.com
Mom and Dad, I am qui ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )te confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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The Mid-autumn ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year. Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries. People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune, and it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion, enjoying a large meal with their family. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside. 21·世纪*教育网
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试题分析：分析要求可知，中国的传统节日 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )中秋节马上就要到了，你的美国笔友Mike请你在他们的校报上介绍一下中秋节的情况。内容包括：1. 时间；2. 范围。3. 象征。4. 庆祝方式。只能使用5个英语句子表达全部内容。短文应该用一般现在时，第三人称。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。【版权所有：21教育】
【亮点说明】首先用which的非限制性 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )定语从句和Not only ... but also... 来说明中秋节的时间及范围。其次用并列句说明中秋节的象征意义。最后用两个句子来说明中国人在中秋节这一天的庆祝方式。其中They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.句中有which 引导的非限制性定语从句等。
考点：提纲作文。
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【解析】参考范文：
Last week our class ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d a heated discussion on Earth Hour．Different students have different opinions about this activity．21*cnjy*com
About 60% of the s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tudents are in favor of it． As we all know ,global warming is a big problem in the world． Earth Hour can raise people’s awareness of global warming． Besides, turning off lights for an hour is energy-saving． Only by working together can we make our earth a better place to live in．
However , about 40% ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) of the students say this activity is not very meaningful． They think it is only a show and that it doesn’t make much difference． What’s more, turning off lights for an hour may cause inconvenience to people’s life, work and study．
In my opinion, this ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )activity is of great importance． But one activity alone is not enough if we want to save energy and protect our earth． Let’s act through our day-to-day habits．
3．见解析。
【解析】这是一篇表格类作文，内含三 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )个要点：简要描述事情经过；分析发生冲突的原因；谈谈避免冲突的做法，文章要紧紧围绕这三个要点展开。各个要点的表达要清晰，第一个要点只要简要描述；第二、三个要点考生可以自己做合理的联想，理由要有新意，内容要符合逻辑。可适当发挥，增加细节。三个要点层次要分明，衔接要自然。最后注意一些衔接词和特殊句式的运用。
参考范文：
One possible version：
Conflicts_with_oth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ers_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other,trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) was Su's ault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact，blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To av ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place.
Don' t be self centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
4．见解析
【解析】参考范文：
A middle-aged woman r ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )an the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2013. Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman. However, half an hour later, the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.
People with bad manner ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s can often be seen in our daily life, like the mother mentioned above. They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. They are self-centered, and don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. It is difficult for them to make a change unless they are educated properly.
Luckily, we are also s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )urrounded by many virtuous people. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter. How I hope all of us are kind, polite and helpful to each other so that we can enjoy a better life.
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Nowadays, with ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.
According to a r ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ecent survey, about 85. 8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their handwriting. 51. 5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10. 9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, “ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )writing style shows the man ”. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
【解析】试题分析：考查图表类作文写作, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。21·cn·jy·com
【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见的短语 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )According to根据；there is no need to没有必要做某事；are so busy with忙于做某事；in my opinion在我看来；32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.这个句子中使用so ..that如此以至于；As the saying goes, “writing style shows the man ”. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.这句话中使用到谚语，并且运用到动名词做主语；
考点： 图表类作文
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Yesterday aftern ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oon，we held a class meeting discussing how to spend the money our whole class earned by recycling and selling newspapers and plastic bottles after class. Three fifths of the students suggested buying stationery for our own use because it can let us experience the enjoyment of harvest. Meanwhile，it is an approach to encouraging our classmates to continue this action. However，two fifths of the students believed that the money should be donated to the people in the earthquake stricken areas because they need the money more urgently than us. More importantly，it is meaningful to spend the money earned by ourselves in helping others.
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇论说文，提示信息以 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )表格形式出现，要求同学们在写作前仔细分析内容，归纳要点。根据图表所示，文章应分为两个层次，也就是要讲明两种建议，一种建议是买文具发给大家来让同学们体验收获的喜悦并且鼓励大家；另一种建议是把钱捐给灾区去帮助他人。这两种建议的顺序可以打乱，但是要使用连接词来进行恰当的过渡。作文要求只用五句话表达，所以必须使用一些如定语从句， 状语从句等的复合句和一些介词短语，非谓语短语等。
【亮点说明】本篇范文要点全面，概括 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )准确，语言通顺连贯，内容全面，段落层次分明，标点符号使用规范。作者首先提出讨论的内容，然后分别讲述了两方面的看法，并且陈述了原因。按照要求使用五个长句简述了要求的内容，很好地完成了写作任务。文中一些副词和连接词Meanwhile，However，More importantly的使用使文章过渡自然，语言流畅。而且文章高级词汇stationery ，urgently和短语experience the enjoyment of harvest，is meaningful to，spend money in doing sth的使用也是文章的亮点所在。
考点：考查提纲作文
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One possible version：
On November 11, 20 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )12, Singles Day, Alibaba Group took in 19.1 billion RMB from the sales of and , which is believed to be the biggest sales in a single day. What led to the successful sales
First of all, highl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y-developed internet technology played an important role, without which such big sales in one day would not have been possible. More and more netizens , mostly young people, are willing to accept this shopping trend. Advertisements also contributed greatly to the success. Long before Singles Day ,news about the sales filled the internet, TV and newspapers. Therefore, people all over the country knew about it . Advertisements with focus on low prices , about 50% off, could been seen everywhere, which encouraged the netizens to buy .What’s more, varieties of goods online satisfied most of the buyers. So they can purchase almost everything from foods to cars without leaving their houses.
In short , a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dvertisements with proper focus plus advanced technology will promote sales.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达要求根据图示 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，就淘宝和天猫的成功营销案例进行讨论，分析其成功的原因及想法。根据这些提示可以判断短文应该用第一人称，使用一般现在时。从图示可以分析成功的原因有四个方面，包括price（价格），goods（货物），internet technology（网络技术），advertisement（广告），还可以适当发挥想象，补充内容。在写这四方面内容时要注意使用恰当的连接词，比如表示顺序的词: first of all , secondly , what’s more等，以使文章层次分明，结构清晰。此外，还要注意使用多种句式结构和高级词汇以提高文章档次。
【亮点说明】本文使用经典 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的三段式结构，首段介绍了淘宝和天猫的成功事例，用What led to the successful sales 引出文章要讨论的中心，使文章过渡自然。在第二段分析成功的原因时，作者使用了First of all, also ，Therefore, What’s more,等连接词使段落层次非常清晰。最后用in short引出作者的结论。此外，作者在文中用了大量的短语are willing to，played an important role, contributed to，focus on等。还有定语从句without which such big sales in one day would not have been possible.和 which encouraged the netizens to buy.
考点：考查提纲作文
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Dear Mom and Dad, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies.
Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.
I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains." Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文的属于提纲类写作， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )要求对父母说说心里话，话题切合考生实际，与考生的生活非常贴近，考生有话可说，有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的，要求考生有较强的整合能力，在写作时充分利用连接词，高级句型和词汇，如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语，以使文章的层次更高。应该用合适的连接词，可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。在例举学习打算的时候可以加入谚语，让文章更上一层楼。
【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组：T ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hanks to 多亏，making remarkable progress 取得很大的进步，made up my mind to 决定，make every effort to study努力学习， the key to…的关键。 还使用了不少精典句式，如： Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. 这句话使用了固定句型，I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.这句话使用了it做形式宾语和which引导的定语从句，I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.这句话使用了定语从句， Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies这句话使用了现在分词做状语。文章还恰当地使用了俗语：Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains."。
考点: 考查提纲类书面表达
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