【知识点专区】2015年高中英语 书面表达图画作文 专项练习（含解析）
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一、书面表达
1．下图反映的是众多高校毕业生面对的一个大难题。请你根据对右图的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包括以下内容:
1. 描述图片内容;
2. 分析该现象产生的原因;
3. 提出可能的解决方法。
注意: 词数150个左右。
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2．假如你是红星中学高二（1）班李华，下面四幅图描述了近期你看到骑公共自行车“绿色出行”
的宣传后所采取的行动。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。
3．仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。
情景：假定你叫李华，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请在学校居住的Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。
参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会)
这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。
Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。
注意：1. 词数100左右；文章开头已写出，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：住宿accommodation
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to
5． 2012年10月9日，巴基斯坦十五岁女孩马拉拉在放学回家途中遭到塔利班暗杀，头部中枪。康复后，马拉拉不畏威胁、积极为巴基斯坦女童争取受教育权利。联合国将每年的7月12日（她的生日）定为“马拉拉日”（Malala Day）。作为同龄人的你，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包括以下内容：
1．简述马拉拉的故事；
2.说明教育的重要性（至少两点）；
3．谈谈学校教育对你的影响（至少两点）。
注意：
1.作文词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
2.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
On October 9, 2012, Malala, a 15-year-old Pakistani girl, was shot i一飞the head by the Taliban on
6．请根据上面两幅图写一篇短文，写作时要注意以下几点：
1. 第一段把漫画中的内容描述清楚；
2. 第二段写你自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点；适当地发挥，使语言连贯。
词数：120左右
参考词汇：扶起瓶子straighten the bottle up
7．请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。
注意：1.词数100左右。 2.参考词汇：吊销驾照：revoke a driving license
8．下图中欧阳的妈妈正在与老师交谈，请根据图画所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，发表自己的感想。
9．某英语报举办以勤俭节约为主题的中学生英语写作大赛：要求参赛者根据以下四幅图内容，用英语描述发生在李华身上真实的故事并阐述其意义。
注意：1、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2、词数120左右。
参考词汇：节俭thrift
One day， Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout,
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_______________________________________________________________________________1．见解析。
【解析】参考范文：
Recently, there are an increasing number of college graduates who have difficulty in hunting for a job.
As we can see from the picture, a large quantity of college graduates are queuing up for the chance of getting a job, which is obviously beyond their reach.
There are many factors contributing to this phenomenon. First, the economy in China is influenced due to the global financial crisis, which may lead to many factories being closed down. Second, the expansion of higher education may account for this phenomenon. What is worse, there is a general unrealistic expectation among graduates that they deserve an easy job as well as high pay, so many students reject some jobs which seem not so attractive to them.
From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. As for the graduates, they should adjust their expectations to the labor market. Besides, measures should also be taken by universities to help cultivate students’ proper attitude towards employment. Only in this way can the problem be released.
2．
One possible version：
Being driven by my father to school one day, I suddenly noticed many public bicycles parked along the road in my neighborhood. Behind them on the wall was a sign reading “Green Travel”. Feeling it my duty to do something, I told my father that I would give up his car and rent a bike instead.
Back home that day, I searched the Internet for information about how and where to rent a bike. I found out that there was a rental service nearby, where I could apply for a rental card. The next day I headed toward it immediately after school. To be honest, I was a bit surprised to find quite a few people lining up there for the cards. I joined them and finally got one. The next day I first rode a bike to the subway station and then took the subway to school.
The bicycle seat is not as comfortable as a car seat, but I feel proud that I am doing something for the environment.
【解析】
试题分析：根据提示可知本文为图画式作文，命题者要求学生根据图片内容写一篇短文。因为出题者没有提出具体的写作话题，所以需要学生自己观察图片提炼出主要话题进行写作。分析图片可知它主要讲为保护环境，一个青少年积极参与“绿色出行”活动的故事。此类作文的结构往往采用三段式，第一段简要讲述故事发生的时间，地点及人物。第二段是故事的主要部分。第三段是故事的结尾部分，然后用一到两句话说明自己的感受，结束全文，升华主题。在在行文构思中，注意过渡词和各种句型的搭配使用，确保文章层次清晰，结构严谨。
【亮点说明】
本范文结构清晰，最大的特色是灵活使用各种句型结构。例如现在分词作状语Being driven by my father to school one day及Feeling it my duty to do something，过去分词作后置定语many public bicycles parked along the road in my neighborhood，完全倒装句Behind them on the wall was a sign reading “Green Travel”. Where引导的非限制性定语从句where I could apply for a rental card.等等。 其次是文章中使用Back home that day和The next day等短语表明故事按照时间顺序发展，向阅卷老师展示了清晰的结构。最后是文章中一些过渡短语和固定结构选用的非常好，如give up his car，To be honest，as comfortable as a car seat和feel proud that等。第二段中的I was a bit surprised to find quite a few people lining up there for the cards中使用了“主语+be+adj.+to do sth.”的句型，并且包含了一个现在分词做后置定语的成分，充分展现了作者深厚的作文功底，无可争议地提高了文章的档次。
3．
One possible version：
Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you
Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇图画作文，要求根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。写图画作文首先要仔细审图，获取主要信息，确定写作要点。根据所给图画内容以及所给提示信息可知本文是告诉Brown女士参加聚会的路线，属于说明文范畴。而且获取的信息是Brown应该从学校出发，目的地是中心公园（the Central Park）.。在写作时要根据图画信息，灵活使用指路的表达语，指明如何到达中心公园。此外，说明文还要注意语言的简练，应该多使用简单句，避免使用复杂的句式，而且文章应使用一般现在时。
【亮点说明】本篇范文语言简洁明了，清楚详细地指明了路线，很好地完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者首先表达了自己听到她能参加聚会的高兴和感激。然后告诉Brwon 女士聚会的地点和具体的路线。在文中，作者使用了多种简单句式，比如祈使句，Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.感叹句What a funny thing!还有并列句Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.等。而且反义问句Maybe you've been there, haven't you 的出现增强了文章语言的感染力和亲和力。
考点：考查图画作文
4．
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend the summer school during the vacation.
I’ve seen your ad., and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be any host family or university dormitory
I am looking forward to your early replay.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于图表类作文，文章要写的重点内容反映在纯英文的图表中，这无疑增加了写作的难度。但认真审题之后，其实也不难看出其写作要点包括：说明写信的目的；询问：开课时间和每周上课时间、班级大小、收费情况、住宿类型。此外要明确在写作时要用第一人称，基本时态以现在时为主。
【亮点说明】
范文要点全面，时态清晰，词汇使用规范。尤其是在主体段落中的表达清晰自然，使用了First, Besides,来串联句子，且在表述中注意了句式的变换，所询问的内容不一定都用问句来表述，恰当地使用了宾语从句“I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. ”使得文章简洁而不简单，是一篇考场佳作！
5．
On October 9,2012,Malala,a 15-year-old girl, was shot in the head by the Taliban on her way home from school. However, the Taliban failed to silence her. After a miraculous recovery，she was committed to fighting for girls’ right to education. In honor of her bravery and devotion, the UN declared July 12(her birthday) as Malala Day.
Deeply inspired by the story of Malala, I firmly believe in the significance of education. It enables people to raise their voices for rights and change the world by calling for more equality. Furthermore, education promotes the development of science and technology as well as more values and world peace. Without education, people may become weak, fearful and hopeless.
When I reflect on my own experience, I feel grateful I have a lot from my school education. To begin with, I have acquired knowledge and skills to prepare myself for the future. In addition, school education provides me with opportunities to broaden my horizon and better myself. Finally, I have learned to be a more caring and loving human being.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇开放性作文写作,要求有三个：1．简述马拉拉的故事；2.说明教育的重要性（至少两点）；
3．谈谈学校教育对你的影响（至少两点）。但是具体的内容要考生自己发挥。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子： fail to 没能做某事， be committed to致力于…， fight for 为…而斗争，In honor of为了纪念…，as well as 不但，而且，reflect on反思， broaden my horizon开阔我的视野，call for要求， Deeply inspired by the story of Malala, I firmly believe in the significance of education.这句话使用了过去分词做状语，还有范文的一大亮点是关联词的使用，如：Furthermore, To begin with, In addition, Finally。
考点：考查开放式作文
6．
Do you understand this cartoon Let me tell you. One day, the son wanted to help a little girl stand up when she fell over, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked at seeing her son just let the fallen oil bottle lie. She asked him why he didn’t put it in place, but the boy talked back, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well. They should let their children know it’s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in a society which is a big family for all of us. Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right
【解析】
试题分析: 图表作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】文中出现一些常见的短语stand up站着；knock sth down撞倒。。；was shocked at对。。感到震惊；disagree with不同意某人的意见；set a good example to给。。树立榜样；If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it这个句子体现对过去的虚拟。They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well.这个句子提到not only but also连接并列的谓语动词，时态保持一致；We live in a society which is a big family for all of us这个句子中which引导society的定语从句；
考点：看图作文
7．
One possible version：
My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.
Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didn’t listen to them, saying “No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.
How he regretted what he had done!
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达是图画作文。第一步，应仔细审图，注意图画中人或物的体貌表情特征和背景，确定图画所要传达的信息。第二步要挖掘要点，拟题纲。应该根据图画内容的不同，采用不同的段落发展方式。本篇书面表达是由四幅图组成，由图片内容不难看出图片所要表达的是关于酒后驾车的问题，可以按照事情的发展顺序写成记叙文。要求写发生在叔叔身上昨天的事情，所以文章要使用一般过去时，使用第三人称。在行文过程中要注意用适当的连接词，适当发挥想象，以充实文章内容。此外，还要尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式以增加文章亮点，提供作文档次。
【亮点说明】本篇范文根据图片内容写成了一篇记叙文，讲述了叔叔的遭遇。使用了一般过去时态，字数符合要求，内容表达清楚，基本完成了写作任务。文章首先使用My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.引出要讲述的事情，然后按照时间顺序讲述了发生的事情。最后以How he regretted what he had done结尾，整篇文章内容充实，叙述详略得当。而且作者使用了As a result，After the meal, A few minutes later, Worse still等词有效地起到了连接上下文的作用，使文章内容连贯，语言流畅。文章还使用了结果状语从句He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.，时间状语从句when his car ran into a tall tree.和感叹句How he regretted what he had done!
考点：考查提纲作文
8．
One day, OuYang’s mum was talking with his teacher. When the teacher asked OuYang’s mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.
The picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life. The parents try to satisfy their children physically, arranging everything for their children. As a result, they expect their children should get good marks in return. They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children. However, when children don’t obey their will or can’t live up to their expectations, they will complain a lot. In a word, too much and little communication make the love selfish.
In my opinion, parents should communicate with their children as much as possible. Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. I believe mutual understanding and toleration can make them both happy.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，按照题目要求要先介绍图画内容，然后发表自己的感想，做题时首先认真读图，读懂图画所要表达的含义，而不是介绍图画表面的内容，这要求学生有一定的归纳能力，第二部介绍自己对这种现象的感想，在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
【亮点说明】所给范文条理清晰，语言简洁，应用了一些较好的短语和句子：arranging everything for 为…安排一切，As a result因此, live up to 达到…的标准，in return做为回报， in a word总之，一句话, as much as possible尽可能多的. When the teacher asked OuYang’s mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. 这句话使用了宾语从句，While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.这句话使用了非谓语动词， They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children.这句话使用了让步状语从句， Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. 这句话使用了倒装句。
考点：考查图画类书面表达
9．
One dya ,Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout, he had to buy a shopping bag for what he had bought. After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bag by using a pair of his old trousers. Several hours later, he did make himself a very nice bag. When he showed it to his mother, she was amazed at what he had done and praised him a lot .
Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environmental friendly behavior. What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us. Therefore , I believe that thrift is a good virtue for every one of us Chinese to keep.
【解析】
试题分析: 图表作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语was amazed at对，，感到吃惊；make use of 利用；What’s more,而且；After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bag by using a pair of his old trousers.这个句子中运用it occur to sb that 某人突然间想起。。；Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environmental friendly behavior.这个句子think后面带有一个宾语从句，从句中动名词做主语；What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us.这个句子中it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式，which引导非限制性定语从句；
考点： 看图作文
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1．下图反映的是众多高校毕业生面对的一个大难题。请你根据对右图的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包括以下内容:
1. 描述图片内容;
2. 分析该现象产生的原因;
3. 提出可能的解决方法。
注意: 词数150个左右。
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2．假如你是红星中学高二（1）班李华，下面四幅图描述了近期你看到骑公共自行车“绿色出行”
的宣传后所采取的行动。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。
3．仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。
情景：假定你叫李华，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请在学校居住的Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。
参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会)
这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。
Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。
注意：1. 词数100左右；文章开头已写出，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：住宿accommodation
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to
5． 2012年10月9日，巴基斯坦十五岁女孩马拉拉在放学回家途中遭到塔利班暗杀，头部中枪。康复后，马拉拉不畏威胁、积极为巴基斯坦女童争取受教育权利。联合国将每年的7月12日（她的生日）定为“马拉拉日”（Malala Day）。作为同龄人的你，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包括以下内容：
1．简述马拉拉的故事；
2.说明教育的重要性（至少两点）；
3．谈谈学校教育对你的影响（至少两点）。
注意：
1.作文词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
2.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
On October 9, 2012, Malala, a 15-year-old Pakistani girl, was shot i一飞the head by the Taliban on
6．请根据上面两幅图写一篇短文，写作时要注意以下几点：
1. 第一段把漫画中的内容描述清楚；
2. 第二段写你自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点；适当地发挥，使语言连贯。
词数：120左右
参考词汇：扶起瓶子straighten the bottle up
7．请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。
注意：1.词数100左右。 2.参考词汇：吊销驾照：revoke a driving license
8．下图中欧阳的妈妈正在与老师交谈，请根据图画所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，发表自己的感想。
9．某英语报举办以勤俭节约为主题的中学生英语写作大赛：要求参赛者根据以下四幅图内容，用英语描述发生在李华身上真实的故事并阐述其意义。
注意：1、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2、词数120左右。
参考词汇：节俭thrift
One day， Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout,
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_______________________________________________________________________________1．见解析。
【解析】参考范文：
Recently, there are an increasing number of college graduates who have difficulty in hunting for a job.
As we can see from the picture, a large quantity of college graduates are queuing up for the chance of getting a job, which is obviously beyond their reach.
There are many factors contributing to this phenomenon. First, the economy in China is influenced due to the global financial crisis, which may lead to many factories being closed down. Second, the expansion of higher education may account for this phenomenon. What is worse, there is a general unrealistic expectation among graduates that they deserve an easy job as well as high pay, so many students reject some jobs which seem not so attractive to them.
From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. As for the graduates, they should adjust their expectations to the labor market. Besides, measures should also be taken by universities to help cultivate students’ proper attitude towards employment. Only in this way can the problem be released.
2．
One possible version：
Being driven by my father to school one day, I suddenly noticed many public bicycles parked along the road in my neighborhood. Behind them on the wall was a sign reading “Green Travel”. Feeling it my duty to do something, I told my father that I would give up his car and rent a bike instead.
Back home that day, I searched the Internet for information about how and where to rent a bike. I found out that there was a rental service nearby, where I could apply for a rental card. The next day I headed toward it immediately after school. To be honest, I was a bit surprised to find quite a few people lining up there for the cards. I joined them and finally got one. The next day I first rode a bike to the subway station and then took the subway to school.
The bicycle seat is not as comfortable as a car seat, but I feel proud that I am doing something for the environment.
【解析】
试题分析：根据提示可知本文为图画式作文，命题者要求学生根据图片内容写一篇短文。因为出题者没有提出具体的写作话题，所以需要学生自己观察图片提炼出主要话题进行写作。分析图片可知它主要讲为保护环境，一个青少年积极参与“绿色出行”活动的故事。此类作文的结构往往采用三段式，第一段简要讲述故事发生的时间，地点及人物。第二段是故事的主要部分。第三段是故事的结尾部分，然后用一到两句话说明自己的感受，结束全文，升华主题。在在行文构思中，注意过渡词和各种句型的搭配使用，确保文章层次清晰，结构严谨。
【亮点说明】
本范文结构清晰，最大的特色是灵活使用各种句型结构。例如现在分词作状语Being driven by my father to school one day及Feeling it my duty to do something，过去分词作后置定语many public bicycles parked along the road in my neighborhood，完全倒装句Behind them on the wall was a sign reading “Green Travel”. Where引导的非限制性定语从句where I could apply for a rental card.等等。 其次是文章中使用Back home that day和The next day等短语表明故事按照时间顺序发展，向阅卷老师展示了清晰的结构。最后是文章中一些过渡短语和固定结构选用的非常好，如give up his car，To be honest，as comfortable as a car seat和feel proud that等。第二段中的I was a bit surprised to find quite a few people lining up there for the cards中使用了“主语+be+adj.+to do sth.”的句型，并且包含了一个现在分词做后置定语的成分，充分展现了作者深厚的作文功底，无可争议地提高了文章的档次。
3．
One possible version：
Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you
Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇图画作文，要求根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。写图画作文首先要仔细审图，获取主要信息，确定写作要点。根据所给图画内容以及所给提示信息可知本文是告诉Brown女士参加聚会的路线，属于说明文范畴。而且获取的信息是Brown应该从学校出发，目的地是中心公园（the Central Park）.。在写作时要根据图画信息，灵活使用指路的表达语，指明如何到达中心公园。此外，说明文还要注意语言的简练，应该多使用简单句，避免使用复杂的句式，而且文章应使用一般现在时。
【亮点说明】本篇范文语言简洁明了，清楚详细地指明了路线，很好地完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者首先表达了自己听到她能参加聚会的高兴和感激。然后告诉Brwon 女士聚会的地点和具体的路线。在文中，作者使用了多种简单句式，比如祈使句，Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.感叹句What a funny thing!还有并列句Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.等。而且反义问句Maybe you've been there, haven't you 的出现增强了文章语言的感染力和亲和力。
考点：考查图画作文
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend the summer school during the vacation.
I’ve seen your ad., and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be any host family or university dormitory
I am looking forward to your early replay.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于图表类作文，文章要写的重点内容反映在纯英文的图表中，这无疑增加了写作的难度。但认真审题之后，其实也不难看出其写作要点包括：说明写信的目的；询问：开课时间和每周上课时间、班级大小、收费情况、住宿类型。此外要明确在写作时要用第一人称，基本时态以现在时为主。
【亮点说明】
范文要点全面，时态清晰，词汇使用规范。尤其是在主体段落中的表达清晰自然，使用了First, Besides,来串联句子，且在表述中注意了句式的变换，所询问的内容不一定都用问句来表述，恰当地使用了宾语从句“I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. ”使得文章简洁而不简单，是一篇考场佳作！
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On October 9,2012,Malala,a 15-year-old girl, was shot in the head by the Taliban on her way home from school. However, the Taliban failed to silence her. After a miraculous recovery，she was committed to fighting for girls’ right to education. In honor of her bravery and devotion, the UN declared July 12(her birthday) as Malala Day.
Deeply inspired by the story of Malala, I firmly believe in the significance of education. It enables people to raise their voices for rights and change the world by calling for more equality. Furthermore, education promotes the development of science and technology as well as more values and world peace. Without education, people may become weak, fearful and hopeless.
When I reflect on my own experience, I feel grateful I have a lot from my school education. To begin with, I have acquired knowledge and skills to prepare myself for the future. In addition, school education provides me with opportunities to broaden my horizon and better myself. Finally, I have learned to be a more caring and loving human being.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇开放性作文写作,要求有三个：1．简述马拉拉的故事；2.说明教育的重要性（至少两点）；
3．谈谈学校教育对你的影响（至少两点）。但是具体的内容要考生自己发挥。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子： fail to 没能做某事， be committed to致力于…， fight for 为…而斗争，In honor of为了纪念…，as well as 不但，而且，reflect on反思， broaden my horizon开阔我的视野，call for要求， Deeply inspired by the story of Malala, I firmly believe in the significance of education.这句话使用了过去分词做状语，还有范文的一大亮点是关联词的使用，如：Furthermore, To begin with, In addition, Finally。
考点：考查开放式作文
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Do you understand this cartoon Let me tell you. One day, the son wanted to help a little girl stand up when she fell over, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked at seeing her son just let the fallen oil bottle lie. She asked him why he didn’t put it in place, but the boy talked back, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well. They should let their children know it’s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in a society which is a big family for all of us. Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right
【解析】
试题分析: 图表作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】文中出现一些常见的短语stand up站着；knock sth down撞倒。。；was shocked at对。。感到震惊；disagree with不同意某人的意见；set a good example to给。。树立榜样；If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it这个句子体现对过去的虚拟。They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well.这个句子提到not only but also连接并列的谓语动词，时态保持一致；We live in a society which is a big family for all of us这个句子中which引导society的定语从句；
考点：看图作文
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One possible version：
My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.
Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didn’t listen to them, saying “No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.
How he regretted what he had done!
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达是图画作文。第一步，应仔细审图，注意图画中人或物的体貌表情特征和背景，确定图画所要传达的信息。第二步要挖掘要点，拟题纲。应该根据图画内容的不同，采用不同的段落发展方式。本篇书面表达是由四幅图组成，由图片内容不难看出图片所要表达的是关于酒后驾车的问题，可以按照事情的发展顺序写成记叙文。要求写发生在叔叔身上昨天的事情，所以文章要使用一般过去时，使用第三人称。在行文过程中要注意用适当的连接词，适当发挥想象，以充实文章内容。此外，还要尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式以增加文章亮点，提供作文档次。
【亮点说明】本篇范文根据图片内容写成了一篇记叙文，讲述了叔叔的遭遇。使用了一般过去时态，字数符合要求，内容表达清楚，基本完成了写作任务。文章首先使用My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.引出要讲述的事情，然后按照时间顺序讲述了发生的事情。最后以How he regretted what he had done结尾，整篇文章内容充实，叙述详略得当。而且作者使用了As a result，After the meal, A few minutes later, Worse still等词有效地起到了连接上下文的作用，使文章内容连贯，语言流畅。文章还使用了结果状语从句He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.，时间状语从句when his car ran into a tall tree.和感叹句How he regretted what he had done!
考点：考查提纲作文
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One day, OuYang’s mum was talking with his teacher. When the teacher asked OuYang’s mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.
The picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life. The parents try to satisfy their children physically, arranging everything for their children. As a result, they expect their children should get good marks in return. They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children. However, when children don’t obey their will or can’t live up to their expectations, they will complain a lot. In a word, too much and little communication make the love selfish.
In my opinion, parents should communicate with their children as much as possible. Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. I believe mutual understanding and toleration can make them both happy.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，按照题目要求要先介绍图画内容，然后发表自己的感想，做题时首先认真读图，读懂图画所要表达的含义，而不是介绍图画表面的内容，这要求学生有一定的归纳能力，第二部介绍自己对这种现象的感想，在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
【亮点说明】所给范文条理清晰，语言简洁，应用了一些较好的短语和句子：arranging everything for 为…安排一切，As a result因此, live up to 达到…的标准，in return做为回报， in a word总之，一句话, as much as possible尽可能多的. When the teacher asked OuYang’s mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. 这句话使用了宾语从句，While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.这句话使用了非谓语动词， They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children.这句话使用了让步状语从句， Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. 这句话使用了倒装句。
考点：考查图画类书面表达
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One dya ,Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout, he had to buy a shopping bag for what he had bought. After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bag by using a pair of his old trousers. Several hours later, he did make himself a very nice bag. When he showed it to his mother, she was amazed at what he had done and praised him a lot .
Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environmental friendly behavior. What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us. Therefore , I believe that thrift is a good virtue for every one of us Chinese to keep.
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【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语was amazed at对，，感到吃惊；make use of 利用；What’s more,而且；After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bag by using a pair of his old trousers.这个句子中运用it occur to sb that 某人突然间想起。。；Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environmental friendly behavior.这个句子think后面带有一个宾语从句，从句中动名词做主语；What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us.这个句子中it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式，which引导非限制性定语从句；
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