牛津深圳版英语七年级上册 Unit 7 School clubs 课时5 写作课件（16张PPT）

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Unit 7　School clubs
课时5
写作
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例文呈现
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四基三级练
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课时过关
　　根据所给提示，用英语写一篇游记或日记 (用过去时)。80词左右。
　　要点提示：1.今天是5月21日，周六，天气晴朗，你和爸爸骑车来到附近的公园；
2．上午爸爸教你放风筝，中午野餐；
3．下午你们在公园里散步，将地上的垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾箱 (dustbin);
4．你很开心，因为你保护了环境。
Saturday Sunny, May 21, 2022
It's a fine day today. My father and I went to the nearby park by bike. The park is a beautiful place with many trees and flowers. My father taught me to fly a kite in the morning and we had a picnic at noon. In the afternoon, we took a walk around the park. When we saw rubbish on the ground, we picked it up and threw it into a dustbin. I felt happy because I helped to protect the environment.
写作常用句型：
1．Last month, they attended the Clubs Fair. 上个月，他们参加了俱乐部展览会。
2．First, they learnt about the Rocket Club. 首先，他们了解了火箭俱乐部。
3．Our club will teach you how to build rockets. 我们的俱乐部将会教你怎样制作火箭。
4．Will it go all the way into space 它会一直去到太空吗？
5．She used a remote control to drive it all around the playground.
她用一个遥控器在整个操场上控制它。
6．I went for a walk in the woods. 我在树林里散步。
7．The teacher asks her to make a poster to attract new members.
老师让她做一张海报来吸引新成员。
8．The night before, I was so excited that I could not sleep.
前一天晚上，我太兴奋了以至于睡不着。
9．Finally, it was time to go home. 最后，到了回家的时间了。
10．I can't wait for my next adventure with Mr. Li and the Hiking Club.
我迫切期待和李老师以及徒步社团的下一次冒险。
　　假如你上周日参加了英语俱乐部的活动，请按下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的文章。
　　提示：1.八点起床，然后吃完早餐，骑自行车到深圳图书馆；
2．看到很多人站在大树下，用英语谈论各种各样的事；
3．通过参加英语俱乐部，你学会了很多。如：交了很多朋友，提高了英语口语水平。
写作方法指导与操练
一、写什么——细审题，列要点
1．参加英语俱乐部的时间、地点；
2．参加英语俱乐部的方式及主要活动；
3．我对英语俱乐部的看法和感受。
写作方法指导与操练
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一点：参加英语俱乐部的时间、地点；
1．上周日，我八点钟起床，然后去参加英语俱乐部活动。
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2．在我吃过早餐后，我骑车去深圳市图书馆； 那里有很多人参加英语俱乐部。
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Last Sunday, I got up at 8：00 and then took part in the English club activities.
After I had breakfast, I went to Shenzhen Library by bike. There were many people in the English Club.
写作方法指导与操练
第二点：参加英语俱乐部的方式及主要活动；
3．当我到达那里的时候，我看见许多人站在一棵大树下。
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4．他们都是英语爱好者，他们在用英语谈论各种各样的事。
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When I got there, I saw a lot of people standing under a big tree.
They were all English lovers. They talked about all kinds of things in English.
写作方法指导与操练
第三点：我对英语俱乐部的看法和感受。
5．通过参加英语俱乐部，我学会了很多。
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6．例如，了解了许多外国文化； 提高了我的英语口语水平。
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With the help of the English Club, I have learnt a lot.
For example, I have learnt a lot of foreign cultures and improved my spoken English.
写作方法指导与操练
7．此外，我还在这里交到许多新朋友，我希望你也能参加这个俱乐部。
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Besides, I made many new friends here. I hope you can join this
club, too.
【参考词汇】短语：improve (提高)，spoken English (口语)，English lovers, all kinds of，foreign cultures
句式：When I did…， I did…，I saw sb. doing sth.
【我的完整作品】
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Last Sunday, I got up at 8：00 and then had breakfast. After that, I went to Shenzhen Library by bike. When I got there, I saw a lot of people standing under a big tree. They are all English lovers. They talked about all kinds of things in English.
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　　I learnt a lot from the English Club. For example, I made many new friends here and improved my spoken English. I hope you can join this club, too.
谢谢大家！