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北师大版必修一Unit3 Writing Workshop
Writing Workshop
An Event
Description
Pair Work
You are going to write about a celebration event that you have had before. Discuss with your partner.
1. What celebration do you want to write about and why
2. What details do you want to include
Celebration events
time
people
feelings
prepar
ations
Whose birthday was it
2. What did the family do to prepare for it
3. What gift did the writer make
4. How did Grandpa feel and what did he say
Read the description. Answer the questions.
1. Whose birthday was it
It was Grandpa's birthday.
2. What did the family do to prepare for it
Mum cooked special food. Dad invited some Grandpa's best friends from secondary school. I made a special gift for Grandpa.
3. What gift did the writer make
The writer made a video of Grandpa's life story for him.
4. How did Grandpa feel and what did he say
Excited.
He said it was a “wonderful birthday celebration” and that he was “looking forward to my eightieth, ninetieth and even one hundredth birthdays already!”
Read the description again.
Place the phrases in the correct order.
Introduction
Preparations
The best part
Feelings
Add more details.
Introduction
Preparations
Grandpa's 70th birthday
birthday lunch; gift (video)
The best part
Feelings
Add more details.
invitation to Grandpa's old friends; when Grandpa and his friends appeared in an old photo in their ____________________.
Grandpa felt _________.
school uniforms
excited
compose your writing
Introduction
Preparations
The best part
Feelings
Complete the outline of your event description based on the structure.
why: a birthday party ... where: house ...
when: August, last year ...
who: family members and friends
What happened during the party
Was it good
excited, thrilled, happy, satisfied ...
food, activities, gifts ...
Describing an Event
1. mention the reason why you want to describe the event;
2. write the place, time, occasion and people of the event;
3. use action verbs and linking words to put them in the right order;
4. describe your feelings at the end of the event.
Some words that can express feelings:
Some words that can describe a party:
Some linking / sequence words:
enthusiastic, thrilled, excited, interested, joyful, content / satisfied, disappointed, frustrated
wonderful, awesome, amazing, excellent, great, splendid, brilliant, marvelous, remarkable, striking, astonishing, incredible, extraordinary
now, at present, recently, after, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately,
Homework
Choose one of the following occasions and try to prepare a wonderful and ideal party.
A friend's birthday party
Your parents' wedding anniversary
A graduation party
Write a description of it with more than 100 words.
Pay attention to the tenses you use.