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Unit 5 Visiting the Moon
课时5
写作
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例文呈现
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四基三级练
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课时过关
你们班准备本周日去参观太空餐馆,请你根据所给的中文提示语,写一篇60词左右的短文,向同学们介绍一下你的计划。注意语句通顺,意思连贯。
8:00 集合
8:30 到达太空餐馆。据说它又大又美丽,还很干净
11:00 看一场关于太空的电影
12:00 吃中午饭,有很多美味的食物
12:30 回家
Attention, everyone. Here are the arrangements (安排) for the space trip.
Our class will go to the Space Restaurant this Sunday. We will meet at 8 a.m. We will get there half an hour later. It is said that the restaurant is very big, beautiful and clean. We will see a film about the space at 11:00.We will have lunch at 12:00.There will be lots of delicious food. At 12:30, we'll return home. I think we'll have a good time.
写作常用句型:
1.We are going to visit the Space Hotel. 我们将会去参观太空旅馆。
2.We are going to get there at 7 a.m. tomorrow. 我们将会在明天上午7点到达那里。
3.Without gravity, our bodies may get weak. 没有地球的引力,我们的身体可能会变得虚弱。
4.We'll be back to the Earth next week. 下星期我们将回地球。
5.They will also need a large amount of air so that people there can breathe.
他们也将需要大量空气以便人们可以呼吸。
6.We are going to see the movie at the space cinema. 我们将会在太空影院观看电影。
为了更好地了解太空生活,你们班决定一起去参观太空博物馆。请根据以下提示写一则通知。
内容提示:1.下周六,全班同学一起去参观太空博物馆;
2.7:30在校门口集合,8:00准时坐校车前往太空博物馆;
3.导游将会给同学们介绍太空酒店以及最新的太空高科技知识,不允许拍照;
4.下午5点返校。
注意:1.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,逻辑清晰;
2.80词左右,可适当扩展。
参考词汇:high-tech高科技的
写作方法指导与操练
一、写什么——细审题,列要点
1.为了了解太空生活, 下周六决定一起去参观太空博物馆;
2.出发 (返回) 时间、地点以及注意事项;
3.了解太空酒店以及最新的太空高科技知识,提出期待。
写作方法指导与操练
二、怎么写——遣词句,重结构
第一点:为了了解太空生活, 下周六决定一起去参观太空博物馆;
1.为了更好地了解太空生活,我们班决定下周六一起去参观太空博物馆。
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To know more about space, our class is going to visit the Space
Museum next Saturday.
写作方法指导与操练
第二点:出发 (返回) 时间、地点以及注意事项;
2.我们将在上午7:30在校门口集合。我们将在半个小时后乘坐校车离开学校。
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3.我们将在下午5点返校。
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We are going to meet at the school gate at half past seven and leave school half an hour later by school bus.
We are going to return to our school at 5:00 p.m.
写作方法指导与操练
第三点:了解太空酒店以及最新的太空高科技知识,提出期待。
4.导游将会给同学们介绍太空酒店以及最新的太空高科技知识。
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5.顺便说一下,在参观博物馆时不允许拍照。
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The guide will introduce the Space Hotel and the high-tech knowledge about space.
By the way, when we visit the museum we are not allowed to take photos.
写作方法指导与操练
6.最重要的是,希望大家准时参加,祝大家玩得愉快。
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The most importantly, don't be late and have a good time.
【我的完整作品】
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Listen, everyone. To know more about space, our class is going to visit the Space Museum next Saturday. We are going to meet at the school gate at half past seven and leave school half an hour later by school bus.
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When we visit the museum, the guide will introduce the Space Hotel and the high-tech knowledge about space. We should listen carefully to make sure that we don't miss anything. By the way, we are not allowed to take photos there. We are going to return to our school at 5:00 p.m. I hope we will enjoy ourselves.
谢谢大家!