2024届高三英语一轮起航读后续写思维方向专练(11)(含答案)
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注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket(the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forward very much to owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn’t earn enough money to feed five children, so I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for us because we couldn’t afford it. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it！I don’t care who her father is; her grades can’t match Martha’s at all. I won’t lie or falsify(伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.
But Mr. Boone’s voice sounded calm. “Joann’s father is not only on the Board(董事会), he owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
The pounding in my ears drowned out the rest of the words, only a word here and there filtered through. “…Martha is Mexican…resign … won’t do it …”
To this day I don’t remember how I made it through the rest of the afternoon. That night, I cried into my pillow so Grandmother wouldn’t hear me.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There’s been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won’t cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said, I’ll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” That day, I cried sadly on the walk home.
Paragraph 1:
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
Paragraph 2:
I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed.
【参考范文】
版本1:
Paragraph1：
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
His back bent into an arch and his face was drowned in sweats. I called him, in a choked voice. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, after which Grandpa fell silent, eyes rounding in disbelief. A surge of regret gnawing at my heart, I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was
Paragraph 2：
I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. I knew I might never get that jacket which represented my years of hard work and expectation. However, I tried to fight back the tears, with my head still lifted with dignity. “My grandpa…won’t pay the dollars. He said if I had to pay for it, then it wouldn’t be a scholarship jacket.” There was a deafening silence. The principal looked at me, biting his lip, as if thinking. Finally, after what seemed like a century, he decided that he would make an exception for me. I could hardly believe it. Looking into his eyes, which brimmed with smiles, I stood up and bowed low to him. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.
版本2:
Paragraph 1
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, a surge of regret gnawing at my heart. I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Grandpa’s eyes rounded in disbelief. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was
Paragraph 2
I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. My head still lifted with dignity, I tried to fight back the tears, stammering, “I cannot…afford the jacket, sir.” Staring into my eyes, the principal suddenly grinned, “I have good news for you.” I looked at him in confusion. “The board decided that an award cannot be bought just for the sake of winners’ dignity.” His eyes brimmed with smiles. I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.
【文章概要】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者所在学校在九年级的毕业典礼上有一个传统：一件漂亮的金绿色夹克(学校的颜色)被授予九年来一直保持最高成绩的学生。作者从一年级起就一直是个优等生，非常期待能拥有那件夹克。况且按照作者的家庭条件是买不起的。作者无意中听到数学老师和历史老师的关于是否把夹克奖励给父亲是校董事会的乔安，作者很失望，第二天校长说今年关于奖励金夹克的政策有了变化。今年董事会决定收取15美元的费用，作者决定回去与祖父商量一下。
线索：
与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说—-作者感受—到校长办公室并转述爷爷的话—校长决定为此破例--作者感悟
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，
由第一段首句内容“到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆田里找到了爷爷”知
第一段可简单地描写爷爷，作者将事情告诉了爷爷，爷爷对作者说买来的奖不能称为奖品以及作者的心情。
由第二段首句内容“第二天，作者走进校长办公室，心里既难过又失望”知
第二段可描写作者将爷爷的话转述给了校长，校长沉思了一会，对作者说要为作者破例一次。作者在那时才相信Schmidt 先生和爷爷是对的:奖励永远不能伪造或购买。
词汇拓展
行为类
与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话：ask/ murmur/ hate/round/ be called/nod
来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话：represent/ pay the dollars/
校长决定为作者破例一次: looked at me/bite his lip/decide/make an exception/ believe
情绪表达
失望：reluctant /bitter /red /swollen 作者的感悟：right/accurate/ correct
从句使用
Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern
现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句
Looking into his eyes, which brimmed with smiles, I stood up and bowed low to him
由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.
On impulse(冲动) I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes, “she said in surprise, with extreme excitement." It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year ago.”
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead, Her happiness at retrieving(找回)this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn’t control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
【文章概要】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个30多岁的单身母亲，在去面试路上的电车里捡到一把伞，并根据伞上信息，找到伞的而主人，将伞物归原主并且拒绝了酬谢。接下来，这位母亲在穷困潦倒的生活中迎来了圣诞节，却苦于没有钱付房租以及买食物、送礼物给女儿的故事。
续写线索：收到包裹——感到困惑和惊喜——发现纸条——感到温暖和希望
【参考范文】
Paragraph1：
On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family. On entering his house, I was surprised to find a barely empty room with a broken bed and a dirty sofa. Willard told me his mother died and that his father was missing, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters, Willard mumbled, “I just want to help others by contributing my milk money.” I couldn’t help bursting into tears, thinking I should help him break his silence.
Paragraph2：
The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared his story with the whole class and said, “Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thanks to Willard, you are great!” After a silence, all the students clapped, saying “Willard, you are great!” and they walked to him and hugged him tightly. A friend relationship was built and Willard’s silence was broken by a smile on his face.
【详解】
第一段首句内容“突然，门铃响了，佩吉急忙去开门，说一定是圣诞老人。”知，
第一段可先写门打开后，母亲看到的确有送包裹之人后的疑惑以及她和女儿确定包裹是给她们时的惊喜。
由第二段首句内容“突然，贴在一个包裹上一张纸条吸引了我的目光”知，
第二段可描写母亲发现这个包裹的寄送人是其之前所归还伞的主人，以及这个人的此番举动为这对母女在寒冷的圣诞节带来的温暖和希望。
词汇拓展：
动作类 ①收到礼物：heard man talking heartily to her/went to the door ②读便条：pick up the note/read
情绪类 ①.热情：heartily/ kindly ②.幸福：satisfaction/ contentment/ happiness/ fulfilment/ happiness
句式表达
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
由连接词that引导的宾语从句作非谓语动词calling的宾语
A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
由关系代词which引导的限制性定语从句
.Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other.
非谓语之现在分词的熟练运用
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket(the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forward very much to owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn’t earn enough money to feed five children, so I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for us because we couldn’t afford it. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it！I don’t care who her father is; her grades can’t match Martha’s at all. I won’t lie or falsify(伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.
But Mr. Boone’s voice sounded calm. “Joann’s father is not only on the Board(董事会), he owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
The pounding in my ears drowned out the rest of the words, only a word here and there filtered through. “…Martha is Mexican…resign … won’t do it …”
To this day I don’t remember how I made it through the rest of the afternoon. That night, I cried into my pillow so Grandmother wouldn’t hear me.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There’s been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won’t cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said, I’ll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” That day, I cried sadly on the walk home.
Paragraph 1:
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
Paragraph 2:
I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed.
【参考范文】
版本1:
Paragraph1：
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
His back bent into an arch and his face was drowned in sweats. I called him, in a choked voice. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, after which Grandpa fell silent, eyes rounding in disbelief. A surge of regret gnawing at my heart, I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was
Paragraph 2：
I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. I knew I might never get that jacket which represented my years of hard work and expectation. However, I tried to fight back the tears, with my head still lifted with dignity. “My grandpa…won’t pay the dollars. He said if I had to pay for it, then it wouldn’t be a scholarship jacket.” There was a deafening silence. The principal looked at me, biting his lip, as if thinking. Finally, after what seemed like a century, he decided that he would make an exception for me. I could hardly believe it. Looking into his eyes, which brimmed with smiles, I stood up and bowed low to him. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.
版本2:
Paragraph 1
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, a surge of regret gnawing at my heart. I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Grandpa’s eyes rounded in disbelief. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was
Paragraph 2
I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. My head still lifted with dignity, I tried to fight back the tears, stammering, “I cannot…afford the jacket, sir.” Staring into my eyes, the principal suddenly grinned, “I have good news for you.” I looked at him in confusion. “The board decided that an award cannot be bought just for the sake of winners’ dignity.” His eyes brimmed with smiles. I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.
【文章概要】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者所在学校在九年级的毕业典礼上有一个传统：一件漂亮的金绿色夹克(学校的颜色)被授予九年来一直保持最高成绩的学生。作者从一年级起就一直是个优等生，非常期待能拥有那件夹克。况且按照作者的家庭条件是买不起的。作者无意中听到数学老师和历史老师的关于是否把夹克奖励给父亲是校董事会的乔安，作者很失望，第二天校长说今年关于奖励金夹克的政策有了变化。今年董事会决定收取15美元的费用，作者决定回去与祖父商量一下。
线索：
与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说—-作者感受—到校长办公室并转述爷爷的话—校长决定为此破例--作者感悟
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，
由第一段首句内容“到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆田里找到了爷爷”知
第一段可简单地描写爷爷，作者将事情告诉了爷爷，爷爷对作者说买来的奖不能称为奖品以及作者的心情。
由第二段首句内容“第二天，作者走进校长办公室，心里既难过又失望”知
第二段可描写作者将爷爷的话转述给了校长，校长沉思了一会，对作者说要为作者破例一次。作者在那时才相信Schmidt 先生和爷爷是对的:奖励永远不能伪造或购买。
词汇拓展
行为类
与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话：ask/ murmur/ hate/round/ be called/nod
来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话：represent/ pay the dollars/
校长决定为作者破例一次: looked at me/bite his lip/decide/make an exception/ believe
情绪表达
失望：reluctant /bitter /red /swollen 作者的感悟：right/accurate/ correct
从句使用
Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern
现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句
Looking into his eyes, which brimmed with smiles, I stood up and bowed low to him
由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.
On impulse(冲动) I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes, “she said in surprise, with extreme excitement." It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year ago.”
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead, Her happiness at retrieving(找回)this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn’t control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
【文章概要】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个30多岁的单身母亲，在去面试路上的电车里捡到一把伞，并根据伞上信息，找到伞的而主人，将伞物归原主并且拒绝了酬谢。接下来，这位母亲在穷困潦倒的生活中迎来了圣诞节，却苦于没有钱付房租以及买食物、送礼物给女儿的故事。
续写线索：收到包裹——感到困惑和惊喜——发现纸条——感到温暖和希望
【参考范文】
Paragraph1：
On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family. On entering his house, I was surprised to find a barely empty room with a broken bed and a dirty sofa. Willard told me his mother died and that his father was missing, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters, Willard mumbled, “I just want to help others by contributing my milk money.” I couldn’t help bursting into tears, thinking I should help him break his silence.
Paragraph2：
The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared his story with the whole class and said, “Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thanks to Willard, you are great!” After a silence, all the students clapped, saying “Willard, you are great!” and they walked to him and hugged him tightly. A friend relationship was built and Willard’s silence was broken by a smile on his face.
【详解】
第一段首句内容“突然，门铃响了，佩吉急忙去开门，说一定是圣诞老人。”知，
第一段可先写门打开后，母亲看到的确有送包裹之人后的疑惑以及她和女儿确定包裹是给她们时的惊喜。
由第二段首句内容“突然，贴在一个包裹上一张纸条吸引了我的目光”知，
第二段可描写母亲发现这个包裹的寄送人是其之前所归还伞的主人，以及这个人的此番举动为这对母女在寒冷的圣诞节带来的温暖和希望。
词汇拓展：
动作类 ①收到礼物：heard man talking heartily to her/went to the door ②读便条：pick up the note/read
情绪类 ①.热情：heartily/ kindly ②.幸福：satisfaction/ contentment/ happiness/ fulfilment/ happiness
句式表达
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
由连接词that引导的宾语从句作非谓语动词calling的宾语
A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
由关系代词which引导的限制性定语从句
.Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other.
非谓语之现在分词的熟练运用