Umit 1 Topic 1Period 3 Reading for writing课件【对的英语】仁爱科普版九年级上册

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Unit 1 The Changing World
Topic 1 Our country has developed rapidly.
Period 3 Reading for Writing
科普版九年级上册
Learning Objectives
Learn some new words and expressions;
Know about the changes in Beijing;
Be able to use topic sentences to write about the changes in our hometown;
Go on learning the present perfect tense.
Guessing
Guess the meaning of the red words.
narrow wide
Guessing
Guess the meaning of the red words and learn the blue ones.
telegram
fax machine
cellphone = mobile phone
simple, slow
various , quick, easy
communications
the Internet
Free talk
Have changes taken place in your hometown
What are they
What’s a topic sentence
a sentence that states the main thought of a paragraph
I have played basketball for two years.
Every weekend I spend a whole morning doing it.
I always like playing it when I have time.
I’m proud of my skills for playing it.
I like playing basketball.
Read and find the topic sentence.
In the 1960s, the living conditions in the city were poor. The roads were narrow and there weren't many ring roads. Big families were crowded into small houses. Many families couldn't get enough food. Few children had the chance to receive a good education. People had little money to see a doctor And there were few hospitals. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
China has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up. More and more ring roads and subways have appeared and buildings in Beijing are becoming taller and brighter. People's living conditions have improved a lot. And there are more kinds of food and clothes to satisfy people's needs. Children can study not only in modem schools but also on the Internet. People can enjoy good medical care. What’s more, communications are becoming easier and quicker 一 people can use telephones, cellphones, fax machines and the Internet.
Read and find the topic sentence.
Think
After giving the topic sentence, what should we do
DETAILS!
work on the topic sentence
Read for details
Think about how the writer makes details work for the topic sentence.
In the 1960s, the living conditions in the city were poor. The roads were narrow and there weren't many ring roads. Big families were crowded into small houses. Many families couldn't get enough food. Few children had the chance to receive a good education. People had little money to see a doctor And there were few hospitals. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Read and answer
Read and answer the following questions.
How were the living conditions in Beijing in the 1960s
How does the write prove (证明) it
They were poor.
The roads were narrow and there weren’t many ring roads.
Big families were crowded into small houses.
Few children had the chance to receive a good education.
People had little money to see a doctor. And there were few hospitals.
People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Read for details
Think about how the writer makes details work for the topic sentence.
China has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up. More and more ring roads and subways have appeared and buildings in Beijing are becoming taller and brighter. People's living conditions have improved a lot. And there are more kinds of food and clothes to satisfy people's needs. Children can study not only in modem schools but also on the Internet. People can enjoy good medical care. What’s more, communications are becoming easier and quicker 一 people can use telephones, cellphones, fax machines and the Internet.
Read and fill
Read Para. 3 and fill in the blanks.
____ ____ more rings roads _____ _____ subways have appeared.
The buildings in Beijing are ______ and __________ than before.
To show that people’s living conditions have improved a lot, the writer gives us four examples. They are more ______ ____ food and clothes, good education, good ________ _______, easier and quicker ________________.
Not only
but also
taller brighter
kinds of
medical care
communications
Think
Do you think the underlined sentence is in the right place Why or why not
China has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up. More and more ring roads and subways have appeared and buildings in Beijing are becoming taller and brighter. People's living conditions have improved a lot. And there are more kinds of food and clothes to satisfy people's needs. Children can study not only in modem schools but also on the Internet. People can enjoy good medical care. What’s more, communications are becoming easier and quicker 一 people can use telephones, cellphones, fax machines and the Internet.
Read and list four changes in Beijing
1) More and more ring roads and subways have appeared.
2) Buildings in Beijing are becoming taller and brighter.
3) There are more kinds of food and clothes to satisfy people’s needs.
4) Children can study not only in modern schools but also on the Internet.
Read and think
Why does the passage have the title, Changes in Beijing
Key point 1: the poor living conditions in Beijing
Key point 2: the developing living conditions in Beijing
CHANGES
Free talk
When we write a passage to introduce the changes in our hometown, what key points and topic sentences will you set
Read and think
What’s the main idea of Paragraph 1
I’m Kangkang. For this report, I have interviewed my grandmother. She has lived in Beijing for more than forty years. She has seen the changes in Beijing herself.
Self-introduction and Writing Purpose
What else can we write in this part
Think
How to write the close sentences at the end of the passage
Beijing has made rapid progress and it has already succeeded in hosting the 2008 Olympic Games. I think it is important to remember the past, live in the present, and dream about the future.
Conclusions and opinions
What else can we write in this part
Retell
For this report, Kangkang ______ his grandmother, who _________________________________
Beijing has _________ and it has _________ hosting the 2008 Olympic Games. I think ______________________
In the 1960s Nowadays
the living conditions poor be improved a lot
roads Narrow wide
buildings Small, crowded Taller and brighter
food & clothes Not enough More kinds of
education Few good
medical care Little, few good
communications Simple, slow Various, quick, easy
Drawing the outline
Changes in My Hometown Opening Background information
Body Life in the past
Life at present / Changes
Conclusion Summarizing and improvement
Write details
The following pictures may help you.
Group work
Work in groups to check your writing.
项目 标准 分值 得分
得分项 要点 覆盖写作要点，主题句明确 6
语言 用词基本准确，语法正确，句式多样 6
结构 结构紧凑，层次清晰，开头结尾响应 4
逻辑 句子连贯，段落衔接自然 2
美化 运用并列句和复合句，提升句子品质 2
扣分项 词数 少于80或多于120词 -2
书面 书面不干净，字迹不工整 -2
合 计
Sharing
Share your group’s works and mark grades for each one, according to the standard for evaluation.
Summary
We learn some new words and expressions;
what is a topic sentence and how to use it;
some skills for reading and writing.
We Can draw the outline before writing/
write a passage to introduce the changes in our hometown;
Jason says
Though almost everything in our hometown has changed for the better, some things will never change. The love of life and good traditions are always here, in our hometown. Whatever has changed a lot, there will be many soft and sweet memories in our hearts forever.
Homework
Recite 1a aloud and fluently; (All)
Write a passage about the changes in our hometown. (Levels C&B)
Make a survey about what has changed and hasn’t changed in our hometown, and write a report. (Levels A )
Tips: Please pay attention to using proper tenses
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