牛津深圳版英语九年级上册 Module3 Leisure time Unit 6 Healthy diet第5课时 Writing课件(共24张PPT)

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Module 3 Leisure time
Unit 6 Healthy diet
第5课时 Writing
目录
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课堂练习
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写作乐园
话题六 餐厅点评
【短文写作】
假设你和你的朋友们昨天去了一家名叫the Spicy的川菜馆。请你根据下面的内容要点，以“Excellent Sichuan food at the Spicy”为题，写一篇对这家餐厅的英文点评。80词左右。
写作乐园
内容包括：
(1) 介绍这家店的特色、价格、食物以及服务；
(2) 说明你对这家店的评价。Excellent Sichuan food at the Spicy
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【写作指导】
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 此篇作文的主要内容是写餐厅的英文点评，所以写作过程中要使用很多形容词、副词，让他人能够迅速地知道这家餐馆各方面的细节；
2. 首先要写这家餐厅的特色和价格；然后再写这家餐厅食品的味道、服务和上菜的速度；最后表达自己的观点；
3. 时态应以一般过去时为主。写完之后要对全文进行检查，以确保文章用词准确、条理清楚、语句通顺。
【范文赏析】
Excellent Sichuan food at the Spicy
Yesterday my friends and I ate at the Spicy. It served traditional Sichuan food. We paid about 60 yuan a person to eat there.
The food was wonderful. The fish was fresh and it tasted good. We also had some chicken. Though it was very spicy, I like that fantastic taste.
The waiters were friendly. They provided very good service. But the food was served a little slowly as the restaurant was so busy.
I would certainly recommend the Spicy to others for its excellent, traditional Sichuan food. It was also not very expensive. But you' d better book the tables in advance.
课堂练习
一、写作能力提升
(一)请找出句子中错误的部分，并将正确的句子写在横线上。
1. Many people like to eat more vegetables and fewer meat to keep healthy.
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Many people like to eat more vegetables and less meat to keep healthy.
2. Stay up late is bad for people' s health.
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(二) 请根据括号内的改写要求，将句子改写。
3. Will he come tonight I don' t know. (改为含宾语从句的复合句)
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Staying up late is bad for people' s health.
I don' t know if / whether he will come tonight.
4. What did they talk about The girl wondered. (改为含宾语从句的复合句)
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(三)请根据括号内的扩写要求，将短句扩写。
5. We need to go to bed early. (扩写目的)
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The girl wondered what they talked about.
We need to go to bed early to keep healthy.
6. I would certainly recommend this restaurant to others. (扩写原因)
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I would certainly recommend this restaurant to others for its delicious food and good service.
二、读写综合
A. 回答问题　　
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题，并把答案写在横线上。
If you go to a fast food restaurant, you will probably see a lot of teenagers. Today, many teenagers are overweight, and the reason for this is their bad eating habits. Most teenagers love fast food with a lot of fat, oil, salt and sugar. People often call this kind of food
“junk food”. But bad eating habits go beyond fast food. We find many teenagers eat unhealthily. Some don' t have breakfast before they go to school. During the day, some don' t have a good meal for lunch. In a recent survey at one school, scientists found that over two thirds of the students didn' t have a healthy diet. They didn' t like vegetables, and many of them didn' t like to eat fruit. They preferred to eat food with a lot of salt, sugar and fat.
Parents today also worry about their children' s diet. Some doctors give the following advice：
First, ask your children not to eat too much junk food.
Second, ask your children not to eat food with too much salt. Salt can cause high blood pressure in the future.
Third, ask your children to eat more vegetables and fruit.
Last but not least, ask your children to drink more milk. Drinking milk will help their bones grow.
1. Who will you probably see if you go to a fast food restaurant
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We will probably see a lot of teenagers (if we go to a fast food restaurant). / A lot of teenagers.
2. Why are many teenagers overweight today
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3. How many students didn' t have a healthy diet according to a survey at one school
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The reason for this is their bad eating habits. / Because of their bad eating habits.
Over two thirds of the students didn' t have a healthy diet. / Over two thirds of the students.
4. Who give advice about diet in the passage, parents or doctors
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5. How many pieces of advice are mentioned
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Doctors give advice about diet in the passage. / Doctors.
Four / 4 pieces of advice are mentioned. / Four / 4.
B. 书面表达
假设我市某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请你根据下面的内容要点，写一篇题为“How to keep healthy”的短文，参加此次征文活动。
内容包括：
(1) 运动的益处；
(2) 如何养成健康的饮食习惯(至少两点)；
(3) 如何保持心理健康。
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to keep healthy
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life. ____________________________________________
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What should we do to keep healthy
First, exercise is good for keeping healthy physically and mentally. We can take part in regular exercise, such as cycling, mountain climbing, running and so on. Second, it' s also very important for us to form healthy eating habits.
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Always remember to drink more water and milk, and eat more vegetables and fruit. Avoiding eating too much junk food and fast food. In addition, we should always be optimistic, positive and friendly, which helps us to get along well with others.
If we can do the above, we are sure to become healthier.
THANKS!