牛津深圳版英语七年级上册 Unit 8 Collecting things　课时5 写作课件(共15张PPT)

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Unit 8　Collecting things
课时5
写作
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例文呈现
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四基三级练
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课时过关
　　请以“Collecting Stamps”为题写一篇小作文。
　　提示：1.从什么时候 (六岁) 怎么 (父亲寄信回家) 开始集邮的，现在的收藏情况 (700多张)；
2．其中你最喜欢的是什么 (植物和动物的邮票)；
3．集邮给你带来什么 (认识世界上很多不同的奇怪的植物和动物，带来快乐)。
　　要求：1.60～80词；2.文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
Collecting stamps
I like collecting stamps. When I was a six-year-old child, I began to collect stamps. My father worked in Beijing. He often posted letters home. The stamps on the envelopes were very beautiful, so I collected them. Now my collection is getting more than seven hundred. I like the stamps of plants and animals best. They are from China and foreign countries. I know many different and strange plants and animals all over the world from the stamps. Collecting stamps gives me a lot of fun.
写作常用句型：
1．I like collecting newspapers. 我喜欢收集报纸。
2．They went inside and saw newspapers everywhere.他们走进去，看见到处都是报纸。
3．The children followed her into the living room and saw lots of toys there.
孩子们跟着她走进起居室，看见很多玩具在那里。
4．There was hardly any space for the children to sit down.几乎没有空间让孩子们坐下。
5．You have your school work to do, so you shouldn't spend too much time collecting things!
你们有功课要做，所以你们不应该在收集东西方面花太多时间！
6．My friend will come to visit me in a short time from now.我的朋友不久将来看望我。
7．My teacher told me it's bad for the environment. 我的老师告诉我这对环境有害。
8．Daniel was the first student to speak. 丹尼尔是第一个讲话的学生。
9．As a result, they make new friends and learn about the cultures and history of different countries.
结果，他们结交了新朋友，并了解了不同国家的文化和历史。
10．Collecting computer games is a waste of time. 收集电脑游戏浪费时间。
　　假设你爱好收藏，在空余时间你喜欢收藏各种各样的杂志。请根据以下提示，写一篇60词左右的文章，介绍你的收藏经历。
　　1.非常喜欢收藏杂志。从十岁开始收藏杂志，到现在已收藏了上千本杂志；
2．收藏的杂志包括历史、地理、英语学习以及体育健康等；
3．通过阅读杂志了解了世界不同国家的不同文化。
写作方法指导与操练
一、写什么——细审题，列要点
1．自我介绍，指出我的收藏爱好； 2.介绍收藏来源以及数量； 3.我收藏的意义。
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一点：自我介绍，指出我的收藏爱好；
1．我叫杰克，是一名初中生。我爱好收藏杂志。
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My name is Jack. I am a junior high school student. My hobby is collecting magazines.
写作方法指导与操练
第二点：介绍收藏来源以及数量；
2．当我十岁的时候我开始收藏杂志。我花费了大部分的零花钱来购买杂志。
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I began to collect magazines at the age of ten. I spent most of my pocket money on magazines.
写作方法指导与操练
3．现在我已经收藏了上千本杂志。
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4．它们包含了各种各样的主题，例如历史、地理、英语学习以及体育健康等。
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Now I have collected thousands of magazines.
There are many kinds of subjects, such as history, geography，
English learning and sports and health.
写作方法指导与操练
第三点：我收藏的意义。
5．通过阅读杂志了解了世界上不同国家的不同文化。
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6．通过阅读杂志我还交了一些朋友。 我认为收藏杂志是一件很有意义的事情。
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By reading magazines, I can learn a lot about different cultures from
all over the world.
What's more, I made a lot of friends by reading magazines. I think collecting magazines is a meaningful thing.
【参考词汇】词汇：collect, magazine, geography, history, culture
短语：at the age of, learn about, thousands of, all over the world
句型：I started collecting…； some…， and some…； by reading magazines, I learn about…
【我的完整作品】
My Collections
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I like collecting magazines very much. I began to collect magazines at the age of ten. Now I have thousands of magazines. Some magazines are about history and geography. Some are about English learning and some are about sports and health. By reading magazines, I can learn a lot about different cultures from all over the world. What's more, I made a lot of friends by reading magazines. I think collecting magazines is a meaningful thing.
谢谢大家！