2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习及答案（1--8份打包）

2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（1）及答案
D1 短文改错记叙文
【英语卷(解析）·2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考（201408）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分1 0分）
下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。
It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.
【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】 注意固定句型的应用，名词的单数形式，固定搭配及主谓一致。
【答案解析】1. It→As 正如我们看见的，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。这里是非限制性定语从句，用As引导。
2. millions→million ?到2002年底，有2千万的手机用户。数词后面加million
3.a→the到2005年，这个数字到了3千万。这里是特指“手机用户的数量”，a→the
4.convenience→convenient人们发现手机很方便，使用find +宾语+形容词：convenience→convenient
5. to ---with get in touch with sb ,与某人取得联系。
6. meeting→meet有不同的功能满足不同的需求。这里是不定式做目的状语
7. surf→surfing such as后面接动名词： surf→surfing
8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an
9.our前加to手机的辐射会对我们的健康造成伤害。Do harm to“对…造成伤害”，our前加to
10.are→is?拥有手机的人的数量还在稳定上升。主语是the number of…，谓语是单数：are→is
【英语卷(解析)·2015届广西桂林中学高三8月月考（201408）】
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind, just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】讲述一个人骑马到了一个餐馆，又冷又湿，想一个办法让自己取暖的故事。
【答案解析】
76. rain前加the 考查形容词。In the rain在雨中；
77.coldly → cold 考查形容词。句意：又冷又湿，他非常想温暖一下自己。Cold形容词做伴随状语。
78.去掉and 考查句子结构。And应该连接两个句子，但wet and cold只是伴随状语，故去年掉and.
79. too → so 考查固定结构。句意：然而这个餐馆如何拥挤以至于不能靠近火源。So …that 如此以至于。
80. Taking → Take 考查祈使句。句意：给我的马一些鱼。
81. didn’t → doesn’t 考查动词的时态。句意：对不起，先生，马不会吃鱼。表示客观事实，故用一般现在时。
82. surprising → surprised考查形容词。句意：许多人对这个奇怪的菜单感到很吃惊。修饰人用surprised。
83. whom → them 考查代词。句意：为了看看马吃鱼，所有的人都跑出去了。Them代指的是人们。
84. besides → beside 考查介词。句意：屋子里只剩下他自己，坐在火堆旁边开始暖和。
85. warm前加to或warm → warming考查动词的用法。Begin to do 或begin doing 开始做某事。
短文改错
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 76 ________
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 ________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 ________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 84 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 85 ________
【参考答案】76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in---into 82. had---have.
83. ways—way 84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
短文改错
There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when
78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
短文改错
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources 82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
【参考答案】
I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them
短文改错
As students, we have classes from early morning
till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break 76. _____
between class is definitely important, even necessary. 77. _____
Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. 78. ______
During the ten-minute break we did something to get 79. ______
rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, 80. ______
instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that 81. _______
will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. 82. ______
I usually do some simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat 83. ______
with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. 84. ______
When the new class begins, I feel freshly again. 85. ______
【参考答案】
take---taking. 77.class—classes. 78.or—and.
79. did—do. 80. real---a real
81. tired—more tired. 82. pleased—pleasing.
83. Sometime—Sometimes.
84. 正确。 85. freshly---fresh.
【短文改错】
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4___ ___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___
are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____
see that there is anything on their website 7____
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he 9___
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___
forward to seeing you again.
【参考答案】KEY 6
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__
are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__
see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_
forward to seeing you again.
2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（2）及答案解析
短文改错议论文
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试（201407）】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
【答案】
71.had改为 have 解析：考查动词的时态。句意：许多年轻人都有抽烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。整个文章用一般现在时来叙述客观事实，故用一般现在时。
72. student 改为 students。解析：考查名词的单复数。句意：虽然他们还是中学生，根据they来判断用复数形式。
73.do 改为 does 解析：考查动词的时态。Do harm to 对。。有害。整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。
74. realized 后的that去掉 解析：考查宾语从句。句意：越来越多的人意识到这个问题的严重性。Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导，故把that去掉。
75.boring 改为 bored 解析：考查形容词辨析。Be bored with 厌烦。。。
76. other 改为 others 解析：考查代词。与上文提到some people 相呼应。
77.himself 改为 themselves 解析：考查反身代词。句意：其它人认为抽烟能清醒自己。与others相呼应。
78. causing 改为 caused 解析：考查动词的。句意：事实上，抽烟导致了许多疾病。这是个叙述过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。
79. the waste of money 中the 改为 a 解析：考查冠词。A waste of sth浪费某物。
80. danger 改为 dangerous 解析：考查形容词。句意：而且粗心的抽烟的人可能会引发危险的火灾。
短文改错
Dear sir,
Thank you very much for your letter. I pleased to hear 76._____________
about your holiday and the people you meet in Rome. It 77. _____________
sounded great fun and how I wish I could have been with 78. _____________
you. Thank you also for the stamps you sent them to me 79._____________
for my collection. Most of them were those what I had 80. _____________
been expecting for long. You said by your letter that 81. _____________
you wish to have some photos of me. Sorry to tell you, 82. _____________
I have little photos good enough to send to others. 83. _____________
Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please 84. _____________
write soon and tell me what you are getting on with 85. _____________
your college life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Jason
【参考答案】76.I后加am 77. meet→met 78.√
79.去掉them 80.what→that或去掉those
81. by→in 82.wish→wished 83.little→few
84.your→my 84.what→how
短文改错
There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when
78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
短文改错----1
One day I happened to find a chatting room in
my QQ，there people were chatting in English．I tried
to chat with some of them．T0 my surprised，I found
the oral English of some junior students were better
than me．I asked them for advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I
would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ．
Day by day I learned from many useful words and
expressions．With time went by．I found that I could
even communicate some college students freely．
【参考答案】
76.√ 77.there-where 78.surprised-surprise
79.were-was 80.me-mine 81.But-So
82.praltise-prsltising 83.from 84.with-Aswent-going 85.with
短文改错
Now I have taken more than ten years at school. As 　 63. ________
a child，I regarded my school a beautiful garden. I 64. ________
went to school happily and excitedly with a small bag.
Time flew very fast. Now I’m studying at a senior 65. ________
middle school. Every day morning I go to school early. 66. ________
In the evening， I do a lot of exercises， just like a farmer 67. ________
working hard， expect a good harvest. During breaks 　 68. ________
between class， I often go out to enjoy myself. I’m 69. ________
sure I’ll never forget wonderful time I spent at school. 70. ________
【参考答案】63.taken→been 64.school后加as
65.flew→flies 66.去掉day
67.√ 68. expect→expecting 69. class→classes 70. wonderful后加the

短文改错
In England, afternoon tea, taken between four or five, 76_________
is the most informal meal of the day. If you are a friend 77_________
of the family, you may drop for tea without 78_________
been invited. Very often it is not served at a table. 79_________
The member and visitors take tea in the sitting room. 80__________
Each person had a cup and saucer, a spoon and a 81 __________
small plate for bread-and-butter and cake. On the way, 82___________
do not help you to cake first; bread-and butter first, 83__________
then cake if there is any. Other piece of advice is: do not put 84__________
more than one piece of bread or cake at same time. 85___________
【参考答案】
76, or----and 77.right 78.drop ----drop in 79.been---being
80.member----members 81.had----has 82.On ----By
83.you---yourself
84.Other---Another 85.at ---at the

【短文改错】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1___
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2_____
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could 3____
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later, 4____
I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your 5___
encouraging words.I will always remember what you 6____
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve ___
had pleasant journey home and will come to china ___
again sometimes in the future.I will write again 9____
and send you the photos we take together 10____
【参考答案】KEY 5
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. for
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in no
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could terrible
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later, years
I now think English ∧fun to learn.I got a lot from your is
encouraging words.I will always remember what you right
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve /to
had ∧pleasant journey home and will come to china a
again sometimes in the future.I will write again sometime
and send you the photos we take together took
2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（3）及答案解析
【英语卷(解析)·2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（201408）】A
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
76.so去掉。 because为从属连词，不与并联连词so连用，故去掉so。
77. her→him 前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。
78. say→said 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。
79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。
80.passing→passed 句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。
81. was told tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。
82.immediate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。
83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。
84. mile→miles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。
85. in→with。 在某人的帮助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。

【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试（201409）WORD版】
第一节短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day． One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone． Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car． He shouted, but the man drive off． As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief． What's more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven． So the next day, he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard． "To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feeling． But I am a Christian and I forgive him!" When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakes．
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】本文讲述一个善良的人用爱心感动盗贼的故事
【答案解析】
when –that 考查强调句。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行车。强调一年前。
but—and 考查连词。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行，并且每天都骑着它。两个句子之间是并列关系。
Ran—Running 考查非谓语动词。句意：他跑到前院，看到一个男人正在把他的自行车装到他的车上。两个句子共用一个主语，he与run之间是主动关系。
drive—drove 考查动词的时态。句意：他叫喊但那个男人开车跑了。But连接的两个句子时态保持一致。
real---really 考查副词 句意：作为一个虔诚的基督徒，他告诉父亲他真的原谅了那个小偷。
the thief后面加to 考查动词用法。Want sb to do 想让某人做某事。
the message—a 考查冠词。句意：因此第二天，他前院的海报上写一个短信；因为第一次提到故用a.
feeling---feelings 考查名词。句意：你伤害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。
him—you 考查代词。句意：但我是个基督徒，我原谅你。
left for 去掉for 考查动词。句意：当他第二天早上离开家时。Leave A for B 离开A地去B地。
短文改错
?I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. __________
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. __________
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. __________
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________
easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. __________
【参考答案】
I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income 76. ____a______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. ___had ____
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. ___hard_______
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. ____too______
my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______
easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____
短文改错
My cousin Xiao Hong and I went on trip to my uncle’s 76. _____________
last Sunday. We were riding along a hillside then suddenly 77. _____________
some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes. 78. _________
Xiao Hong’s legs got serious hurt and so did mine. We 79. _____________
couldn’t move a bit. Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead. 80. ____________
Waving our hand, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing 81. ____________
us, they run to the spot as fast as they could. Thanks to 82___________
their help, we were all sent to a nearby hospital and received 83. ____________
medical treatment in time. Although we do not know about their 84. ________
names, we fell they like our dear big brothers and sisters. 85. _______
【参考答案】76.on︿ a 77. then →when 78 were去掉
79 serious → seriously 80.正确 81. hand→hands 82.run→ran
83.all→both 84.about 去掉 85.they︿are
短文改错
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．_______________
the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately. 77．_______________
She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．_______________
on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．_______________
kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．_______________
burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the 81．_______________
windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．_______________
surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I 83．_______________
was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it 84．_______________
was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．_______________
【参考答案】
76．as→When 77．answer后加it 78．She→It
79．a→the 80． room后加was
81．opening→opened 82．With→To 83．√
84．去掉about 85．which→that
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______
Yours,
Mike
【参考答案】
76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确
80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew
84.trip前a 85.better----more
(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.
答案：
I'm a senior student from China, seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who communicating with others. I speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious I'm really looking forward to your approval.
短文改错
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76.
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77.
at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78.
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79.
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80.
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82.
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83.
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84.
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85.
are as sweet as ever before .
【参考答案】
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. yet
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. were
at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. an
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. ourselves
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80. helpless
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81. swim
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82. treated
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83. √
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. others
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85. since
are as sweet as ever before .
短文改错
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over
76. _______
the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since
77. _______
long ago , many adults and children called their friends together
78. _______
to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people
79. _______
like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words,
80. _______
they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are
81. _______
playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities
82. _______
for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy.
83. _______
Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American
84. _______
big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.
85. _______
【参考答案】
76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had
79. play- playing 80． 正确
81. feel-feeling 82. how-why
83. make-makes 84.去掉the 85. sell-buy

2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（4）及答案解析
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省石家庄二中高三开学考试（201408）】
第三节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】本文以自己等车这件事为例说明耐心的重要性
【答案解析】
1. importance 考查固定句型。句意：耐心在我们的生活中非常的重要。Be of importance 等于 be important 。
2. waited for (加for) 考查固定短语。Wait for sth 等待。。
3. past-passed 考查动词的时态。句意：30分钟过去了，但没有一辆车来。根据but no bus came用一般过去时。
4. on foot 考查固定短语。句意：沮丧又着急，我决定步行去。On foot 步行
5. when-than 考查固定句型。No sooner ...than 一。。就
6. take the next bus 考查固定短语。 句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。The next bus 下一趟车。
7. another 30 minutes 考查搭配。句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。Another 30 minutes 再三十分钟。
8. did I realize 考查倒装 句意：只有这时我才意识到我的问题。Only +状语 +部分倒装 。
9. put后it去掉 考查定语从句。句意：耐心会浪费掉所有你所投入的努力。that we have put in 是all the effort的定语从句。
10. losing 考查固定短语。Close to 靠近, to是介词，故后面用动名词的形式。
【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省衡水中学高三小一调考试（201408）扫描版】
第三节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10出语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school. I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so series overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. In my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then did I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】文章讲述的是好习惯会让人受益终生，作者的减肥之路。
【答案解析】
Entered---Entering 考查非谓语动词。句意：我进入高中，我很喜欢吃快餐并且吃得很多 。两个句子共用一个主语I ，与enter之间是主谓关系，故用现在分词的形式。
eat—ate 考查动词的时态。句意：我进入高中，我很喜欢吃快餐并且吃得很多。Took与eat由and来连接，两个动词的时态保持一致。
serious—seriously 考查副词。句意：我非常胖以致于外表很丑陋。Seriously用来修饰形容词overweight.
It ---what 考查主语从句。句意：更糟糕的是同学们经常嘲笑我。What made matters worse引导主语从句。
去掉a 考查固定短语。Make fun of 取笑某人。
now—then 考查时间状语。句意：从那时起，我下决心不吃零食。根据句意，从那时起。
avoiding---avoid 考查动词短语。Make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做某事；
off—up 考查固定短语。句意：与此同时，我开始慢跑减肥。Take off 关掉；take up 从事。
In—To 考查固定短语。To one’s surprise 使某人感到吃惊的是。
until---before 考查连词。句意：不久之后 ，我转型成功。It was not long before ….不久之后。
短文改错
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources 82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
【参考答案-----】改错:
I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them

短文改错
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost 76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry? 77.
Experts have found that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. When one is feeling stressed, it set free, 79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get 80.
rid of the stress and you will often feel better before a 81.
good cry. Of course sex has nothing to do to crying. 82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more 83.
of this hormone than men. But next time you feel like 84.
bursting into tears, go ahead. It won't good to your health. 85.
【参考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容词作表语。
77．√
78．tear → tears。动词contain为复数形式，主语也应为复数形式。
79．it后加is。此处应用被动语态。
80．get → getting。of为介词，后面应接动名词作宾语。
81．before → after。哭后的感觉比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。从句不可用because of而应用because来引导。
84．But → So。分析语境逻辑可知，此处不表转折关系。
85．won't → will．
(2013·昆明市适应性检测)
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.
答案：
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as example. Only after his hard did he become successful. we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is the process in which try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .
(2013·浙江省五校联考)
A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
答案：
A young man called LowCarbon Brother a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help carbon dioxide in the air. For example, always picks up some waste paper on the street uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a life with so many modern around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
短文改错--1
At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy 76._____________
time. Two days before New Year’s Day, I went out with my 77. ____________
friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong. 78. ____________
It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to, and the 79. ____________
food was delicious. After that, we went to shopping for new 80. ____________
clothes and found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher, 81. ____________
Mr. Smith. To my surprised, he said he didn’t find Chinese 82. ____________
New Year very excited. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________
Because we have so many tests this week, so I have to 84. ____________
start studying hard again now. I wish the holiday were long! 85. ____________
书面表达 （满分30分）
61. bunch 62. praise 63. permission 64. blame 65. consideration
66. differs 67. familiar 68. relief 69. delivered 70. gradually
71. misled 72. length 73. promoting 74.appointed 75. annoyed
76. have改为had
77. 此行无错。
78. the改为a。
79. and改为but。
80. 去掉to/shopping 改为shop。
81. lots 后加of。
82. surprised 改为surprise。
83. excited改为exciting。
84. 去掉第二个so。
85. long改为longer。
2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（5）及答案解析
【英语卷（解析）·2015届广西桂林十八中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） （注：本题为新课改内容）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the first day when I went to work in a very famous restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in the restaurant. After ordered two French dishes and some food, I began to look frequently at their watch timing the serving of the meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch 32 minutes passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main reason why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about my findings and presented it the boss.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
71. 第一句 第一个in改为on。 在具体的某一天用介词on。
72. a few 改为few。 老板抱怨没几个人来餐馆吃晚饭。
73. 第二句 am改为was。讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时。
74. 第三句 ordered改为 ordering。Order的逻辑主语是主句的主语I, I和order是逻辑上的主谓关系，所以用ordering。
75. their改为my。 本句的主语是I ,它的形容词性物主代词是my。
76. 第四句that改为whether。我环顾四周看看是否还有别的不对的地方。
77. 第五句 secret改为secretly 修饰动词短语write down,要用副词。
78. 第六句 serving改为served。Meal 和serve是被动关系，饭还没有被端上来。
79. 第八句 wait改为waiting。 动名词短语作主语。
80. 第九句 the boss前加to。present sth to sb 将某物呈献给某人
【英语卷（解析）·2014届西藏自治区高三最后一次模拟统一考试（201405）】
E1 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：1.在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
【答案】
1.把for去掉 ask for意为“请求”。这里是“问询”之意，故去掉for
2.the改为her in one's twenties在某人二十几岁的时候
3.similarly改为similar similar to是后置定语修饰interests。要用形容词形式。
4.he改为she 这里指代的是a girl，所以要用she。
5.interesting改为interested be interested in对……感兴趣。这里同第3题，interested作后置定语。
6.Beside改为Besides beside adv.旁边地。besides adv.除此之外。这两个为易混词，应特别注意。
7.such后加a such a pen pal这样一个笔友。such a如此一个。
8.whichever改为whatever whatever 无论什么，强调不明什么对象。whichever 无论哪个，强调在明确的对象中不知要选哪个。
9.believed改为believe 根据后面的从句的时态可知这里是一般现在时。
10.learning改为learn learn是will的宾语所以用原形。
(2013·宝鸡市三模)
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
答案：
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman by a man with a knife in hand.Without hesitation, Jack made immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand, since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
(2013·长春市第四次调测)
I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
答案：
I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for from Wenchuan. As we all left home an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we play basketball on the playground, in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
(2013·甘肃省二诊)
Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they don't real need.
答案：
Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children want things that they don't need.
(2013·乌鲁木齐三诊)
Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
答案：
Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only up our strength and endurance it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other ， it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of who spend our days working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite . conclusion, it is good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（6）及答案解析
【英语卷（解析）·2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高考摸底测试（201408）】
E1第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching the computer software. An old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.
【答案】
1.richest前加the??? 形容词最高级前应加the。
2.that改为which? ??此处是非限制性定语从句，指物只能用which引导。
3.researching改为researched或去掉and??? 非谓语动词与主句之间不能有任何连词连接，故应去掉and或把researching改为researched，researched与set一起作并列谓语动词。
4.go改为goes 主语为an old saying，谓语动词应用单三形式。
5. extreme改为extremely??? 修饰形容词interested应用副词形式。
6. or改为and ??? 肯定句中应用and，表示“和”。
7.when改为until??? not…until…直到……才，故将when改为until。
8.me改为my curiosity为名词，其前应用形容词性物主代词。
9.exam改为exams exam为可数名词，此处应用复数形式。
10.of改为to the key to success成功的关键。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省唐山一中高二下学期期末考试（201407）】
第一节：短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When Joe left university, he got a good job in a bike’s factory. And after he had worked there for some years, he decided to have a change. So he put a notice several newspapers, says what experience he had and the kind of job he would like to have. One of the answer he received was from a man who was looking for a job either. This man wrote to him, “Dear sir, when you get a new job, to be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as I have been trying to find a position like yours for a long time.” After he had finished reading the letter, he suddenly realizes what he had done was real foolish.
【答案】
bike后去掉’s 考查名词。句意：当乔离开大学时，他在自行车公司得到一个工作。
And--But 考查连词。句意：但是当他在这工作许多年后，决定改变一下。
notice 加in 考查介词。句意：因此他在报纸投放一个广告。
says改saying 考查非谓语动词。句意：因此他报纸上投放一个广告，说他的经历与
answer后回s 考查名词。One of 后面加名词复数。
either改too 考查副词。Either 用于肯定的也，而too用于否定的也。
to be 去掉to 考查祈使句。To do 表目的。Be kind 是祈使句。
your--my 考查代词。当你得到一个新工作的时候，给你的前任老板你的名字与地址。
realizes改为realized 考查动词的时态。根据上文提到After he had finished reading the letter可知整个句子用一般过去时。
real改为really 考查副词。句意：他会突然意识到他所做的是多么的蠢。
【重庆南开中学】
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每行只有一个错误，按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
If you park your car in a wrong place, traffic 76.
policeman will soon find it. You will be very unlucky 77.
if he lets me go without a ticket. But this does not 78.
always happen. Traffic police is sometimes very 79.
polite. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this 80.
note in my car, "Sir, we welcome you to our city. 81.
This is a 'No Parking' area. You will enjoy you your 82.
stay here whether you pay attention to our street signs. 83.
This note is simple a reminder." If you receive a 84.
request like this, you can fail to obey it! 85.
改错76．traffic前加a 77．unlucky--lucky
78．me—you 79．is--are 80．find--found 81．in—on
82．去掉you 83．whether--if 84．simple—simply
85．can--can't/can后加not或never
(2013·石家庄市二模)
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
答案：
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. their arrival, they were welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and the floor. Everything done, they in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because what they did joy to others. It also enriched own experience. They made a promise they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)
It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
答案：
It's reported that many people of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should road safety seriously in our daily life. While the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, is both good for themselves and others.
In word, obeying the traffic rules what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
(2013·齐齐哈尔市二模)
Dear David，
I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can't stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and selfconfidence. It's time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!
答案：
Dear David，
I have recently felt guilty, sleepless at night. You may wonder . To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I cheat in exams and I just can't stop . In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for . Besides, I sometimes referred to my notebooks copied something. As you know, cheating much harm to our learning and selfconfidence. It's time that I action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!
2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（7）及答案解析
短文改错应用文
【英语卷（解析）·2015届云南省玉溪一中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】
第一节：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
Do you read reviews after you see a movie? I use to do that, but I usually regretted. I read so much about a movie on advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all. The writers point out everything that is wrong with the film, but seldom mentions anything good about one. They also tell many things and even the ending of the movie. Lately I have changed way I choose movies to watch. I read reviews afterwards if necessary. What is very importance to me is that I don’t watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies. And I don’t ask other people how they like of it. Now, I enjoy myself even more.
改错：
【答案】【知识点】E2 短文改错应用文
【思路点拨】短文改错中的错误都是学生们经常犯的错误，修改时应考虑语法和词法知识，如动词、名词、形容词等形式的变化等。
【答案解析】
1.after—before 因为是在看电影之前看评论，故after改为before。
2.use—used 过去常常，used to do sth。
3.on—in in advance固定搭配，“提前”。
4.go—going end up doing sth结束做某事。
5.mentions—mention 主语为the writers，mention与point为并列的谓语动词，故不能用单三形式。
6.one—it it代指前文的film。
7.way前加the the way后跟定语从句，表示特指。
8.importance—important important形容词作表语。
9.that-which 引导词前有介词in，故应用which引导定语从句。
10.of 去掉 like为及物动词，不能加任何介词。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届宁夏银川一中高三上学期第一次月考（201408）】
第一节：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with．
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own．Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visits difficult．Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．Above all, they hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience．In addition, the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】【知识点】E2 短文改错应用文
【答案解析】
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【重庆南开中学】
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying,
“Time is money”,this shows the importance of time. When 76．
time has gone, it will never return back. It is a pity 77．
when many people make poor u se of time. They spend their 78．
precious time oversleeping, drinking and traveling. We don’t 79．
realized wasting time equal to wasting part of their life. 80．
They always regret having made a little achievement so far. 81．
Therefore, we should form the habit of value time. Do not 82．
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Lazy 83．
will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 84．
of poverty and even death. 85．
(2013·昭通市统检)
I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.
I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late? If you are available that time, please inform me.
Thank a lot!
答案：
I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you next weekend, just because my elder sister come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted I should pick up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to what has changed in our city.
I want to express my again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks ？ If you are available that time, please inform me.
a lot!
(2013·绍兴市二模)
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
答案：
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the of English, so I got up early every morning, English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of . I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. I'm getting more and more interested learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
(2013·东北三省三校第二次联考)
Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
答案：
Yesterday, Li Mei to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back she showed him the receipt. Thinking was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop stopped her and began to search her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it . Many eyes were staring at her, made Li Mei very . Luckily, salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
2015高考英语学案：短文改错练习（8）及答案解析
短文改错记叙文
【英语卷(解析)·2015届浙江省“温州八校”高三返校联考（201408）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society.
I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
members---member 考查名词单复数。句意：成长为一名有责任的成员并不难。因为前面有a,故用单数形式。
happens---happened 考查动词的时态。我记得这件事发生在一个下雨的周日下午。事发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
waiting后面加for 考查固定搭配。Wait for sth等待某事；
knocked on ---down 考查固定搭配。Knock down sb 撞倒某人；
it—which 考查定语从句连接词。Which指代 a passing car
a –the 考查冠词。句意：一个男人立刻冲向那个女生给她急救；the girl上文已经提到过，表示特指；
but---and 考查连词；句意：幸运地是她伤的不重并且我们送她去了最近的医院。两个句子是并列关系；
comparing---compared 考查非谓语动词。句意：与逃跑的司机相比，我对我的所作所为感到很骄傲；
aware of 去掉of 考查固定短语。Be aware of sth 意识到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。
that –what 考查表语从句。句意: 做为社会的一员，我意识到，责任正是这个社会所需要的。
【英语卷(解析)·2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（201408）】 B
One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
76.invite→inviting。 现在分词作状语，故invite改为inviting。
77. families→family her修饰family，应用单数形式。78.
79. careless→carelessly 修饰written应用careless的副词形式。
80.help前the去掉。ask sb for help向某人求助，help为不可数名词，故去掉the。
81. too→either 否定句中表示“也”用either。
82.read前加to。be able to do sth能做某事。
83.chemist’s前加a。chemist在文中第一次出现，故应用不定冠词a。
84. but→and。 此处的前后分句是并列关系，不是转折关系，故用and。
85. will→would。 主句为过去时，从句也应用过去时，故will改为would。
短文改错
A person’s age no longer tells you something about 76. _______
his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer 77. ________
a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 78. ________
work or gets married or start a family. The social clock 79. ________
that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 80. ________
a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be. 81. ________
It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 82. ________
president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. ________
man who has become a father for the first time. What we 84. _______
all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays. 85. ________
【参考答案】
76. something → anything 77. healthy → health 78. which → when
（或 year∧ in） 79. start → starts 80. when∧ to 81. was
82．√ 83.or ∧ a 84. What →As 85. public’s → public
【重庆南开中学】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Bob,
I am pleasant to learn that you’re coming to Beijing 76．
to study Chinese. I’ve got some informations about foreigners 77．
learning Chinese. Here I’d like to recommend you famous 78．
language school-Elite Language School.
It reported that such a Chinese training course will satisfy 79．
your demands. It starts in February 20th and lasts a month till 80．
March 19th . It is given in No. 1 Lecture Hall but it’s intended 81．
for beginners like you. Besides, the tuition is reasonable. It cost 82．
only 2,000 RMB. I think it suits you and you will enjoy them. 83．
If you have more questions, please let me know or just sufing 84．
www. Elite.org. The more you will know, the more eager you will 85．
be to come.
Hope to see you in Beijing soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
(河南五校联考)
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months　month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did　根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would　这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was　what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。
【参考答案】
Women，present and ancient， at the home and 1．______abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few 2．______people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly． 3．______It takes in nourishment(营养) constantly．If it was short 4．______of nourishment,it’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with 5．______nourishment,it can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in 6．______too many,that means hair has already used too much 7．______nourishment which body gives it to the head．As time passes， 8．______brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______(头昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened． 10．______
【参考答案】Key 10
1．去掉the 2．that─which 3．her─their 4．was─is
5．falls─fall 6．minutes—minute
7．many─much 8．去掉it 9 lead后加to 10．√