2024届高考英语书信写作专项训练（含答案）

建议信
1．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony来信告诉你最近他在升入高中后不适应高中生活，学习压力大，导致失眠，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下内容给Tony回信，要点包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.给他提些建议；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是李华，你校外教Daniel正为每周的“English Corner”征集自由讨论的话题，欢迎同学们畅所欲言。请你给他写一封建议信，内容包括：
1．你建议的话题(食物和电影)；2．你的理由；3．你的希望。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior 2.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚开始高一生活，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你给他回信，要点如下：
1. 宽慰对方；
2. 提出建议；
3. 期待改善与祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Paul写信给你说，他爱上了中国美食，每天狂吃，而且平时不爱运动，对自己不断增长的体重表示担忧。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信，内容包括：
1.收信后的感受；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.请在答题卡相应的位置作答。
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高一，面临新的学习环境和新的老师与同学们，Tony不知所措，状态很差。请你给他写一封信表示安慰，要点如下：
1. 表示难过和理解；
2. 就如何调整状态提出建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是学习报编辑李华，英国交换生Eric最近在汉语学习上遇到了一些困难，特来信向你求助。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 多积累词汇；
2. 阅读中文书刊；
3. 收听中文原声广播等。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假如你是李华，你的朋友John刚转学到了一个新学校，感到很孤单，于是向你寻求帮助。请给John写一封回信，向他提出合理的建议，以帮助他尽快适应新校园生活。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是中国高一新生李华，你的同校交换生Mike给你写邮件，表达对于选科的困惑，不知道应该选物理还是历史，想问你的看法，请你给他回复邮件，要点如下：
1. 安慰并表示理解；
2. 分析选科应该基于什么依据；
3. 分享自己的选科想法以提供参考。
注意：1. 开头结尾已给出，词数100左右；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I am sorry to hear that
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9．假设你是李华，收到美国笔友Tony的求助信。他在信中说因为经常被同学误解，他很烦恼。请用英文给他写一封回信，帮他排忧解难。内容要点如下：
1.表示理解并给予安慰；
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3.信的开头已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你的朋友Alice因为节食生病在家，请给她写一封建议信，帮助她走出困境。要点包括：1.表示宽慰；2.提出建议。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1．Dear Tony,
You wrote that you’ve met a lot of challenges at senior high school recently, which makes you lay sleepless until dawn. I understand quite well that you are confused and feel terrible. You think you have to study harder and it is very difficult to finish all the homework. I’m writing to give you some advice.
I recommend that it be a good idea to have a talk with your teachers about your problem and they may give you some useful suggestions. What’s more, I feel it significant to make a proper arrangement of your study so that you can keep a balance between schoolwork and exercises. Doing some exercises can make you sleep better.
I hope you’ll find the advice helpful and get used to your senior high school life as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tony写封回信，就最近他在升入高中后不适应高中生活，学习压力大，导致失眠给他一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice → suggestion
困难的：difficult →hard
此外： what’s more →besides
有帮助的：helpful →useful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to give you some advice.
拓展句：I’m writing to give you some advice which is helpful to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You wrote that you’ve met a lot of challenges at senior high school recently, which makes you lay sleepless until dawn.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Doing some exercises can make you sleep better.（运用了动名词作主语）
2．One Possible Version：
Dear Daniel,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior 2. You can’t imagine how overjoyed I am hearing about your plan. And I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Food is a topic that will never be outdated, and I’m pretty sure the students will be interested in it. When it comes to food, we always have a lot to share, such as our favorite recipes, and the most renowned food streets. Another topic highly recommended is films. By exchanging information ranging from the plots to the film reviews, students are bound to benefit a lot both in their spoken English, and their thinking, which will undeniably help the activity enjoy an increasing popularity.
I hope these recommendations will be of value and I can’t wait to join you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对English Corner话题给外教Daniel写一封的建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想象：imagine→ fancy
建议： advice →suggestion
有名的：renowned →famous
价值：value → worth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Another topic highly recommended is films.
拓展句：Films is another topic that is highly recommended by me.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Food is a topic that will never be outdated, and I’m pretty sure the students will be interested in it. （运用了that引导的定语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]By exchanging information ranging from the plots to the film reviews, students are bound to benefit a lot both in their spoken English, and their thinking, which will undeniably help the activity enjoy an increasing popularity. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
3．Dear Chris,
I am sorry to hear that you just started your freshman year in high school and felt everything was strange. Such a problem is quite normal. The following suggestions may help you to fit in.
First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interaction with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers for help, who can usually offer you some suggestions.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and you can fit in as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Chris写封信，他刚刚开始高一生活，感到一切都很陌生，考生在信中要宽慰他，提出建议并表示期待改善与祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
因此：therefore→hence
有用的：helpful→useful
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better.
拓展句：First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible, which will help you to get to know each other better.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interaction with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. (运用了不定式作真正的主语，it作形式主语，which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers for help, who can usually offer you some suggestions. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．参考范文：
Dear Paul,
Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese food, I totally understand how difficult it is for a food lover to resist the temptation of nice food, so it is no wonder that you are putting on weight.
I think it quite easy to solve the problem as long as you follow my suggestions. On the one hand, you had better eat more meals with less food each time in everyday life, which will help you digest better and reduce the risk of getting overweight. On the other hand, I recommend that you go for a 40-minute walk with your friend every day so that your fat will be burnt more efficiently in your body.
I am sure that you will soon win your nice figure back if you follow my advice. Just go for it!
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Paul回信，就他最近的饮食习惯及健康状况提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完全地：totally→completely
困难的：difficult→ tough
长胖：put on weight → gain weight
建议：recommend→suggest
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I think it quite easy to solve the problem as long as you follow my suggestions.
拓展句：I think it is quite easy to solve the problem as long as you follow my suggestions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese food, I totally understand how difficult it is for a food lover to resist the temptation of nice food, so it is no wonder that you are putting on weight.（运用了现在分词作原因状语、how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】On the one hand, you had better eat more meals with less food each time in everyday life, which will help you digest better and reduce the risk of getting overweight.（运用了which引导非限定性定语从句）
5．Dear Tony,
I’m so sorry to hear you fail to adjust yourself to Senior High School life. But you needn’t too worry about it, because everyone of us will meet the problem when faced with a new situation. Here are some tips for you.
First of all, take everything new in Senior High as it is. Don’t be too anxious, which will prevent you enjoying life. Besides, it is known that a well-balanced learning plan matters. In addition, you can take part in sports as much as possible, which does good to making friends. Apparently more friends will make you away from loneliness.
I believe you will get used to it soon and I’ll wait for your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高一，面临新的学习环境和新的老师与同学们，Tony不知所措，状态很差。请你给他写一封信表示安慰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适应：adjust oneself to→adapt oneself to
习惯于：get used to→get accustomed to
阻止：prevent→stop
此外：Besides/In addition→What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here are some tips for you.
拓展句：I can offer you some tips, which may release your stress.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so sorry to hear you fail to adjust yourself to Senior High School life. (运用了省略that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] But you needn’t too worry about it, because everyone of us will meet the problem when faced with a new situation. (运用了because引导原因状语从句和省略句)
6．Dear Eric,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about learning Chinese. You might try the tips below.
First, it’s very important to remember as many words as possible. Second, you could read some fun Chinese books to increase your reading ability. Make sure you spend about 30 minutes on it every day. At last, listen to Chinese radio programs to experience the feeling of the language.
I believe you will make much progress soon by following these tips.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Eric写一封信，针对汉语学习提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→pleased
首先：first→first of all
有趣的：fun→interesting
增加，增进：increase→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At last, listen to Chinese radio programs to experience the feeling of the language.
拓展句：At last, listen to Chinese radio programs to experience the feeling of the language, which is important to improve your reading ability.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Make sure you spend about 30 minutes on it every day.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that）
【高分句型2】I believe you will make much progress soon by following these tips.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that）
7．Dear John,
Hearing that you felt very lonely in the new school, I am more than willing to give you some advice.
Firstly, join a club that you’re interested in. You can meet a lot of people there and having a common hobby will make it easier for you to make friends with them. Secondly, play an active role in the class activities. Therefore, you can make full use of these chances to improve your friendship with your classmates. Most importantly, stay positive. Don’t worry too much, as I believe everything will be better soon as long as you try to change your life.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.
Good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的朋友John刚转学到了一个新学校，感到很孤单，于是向你寻求帮助。请给John写一封回信，向他提出合理的建议，以帮助他尽快适应新校园生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
因此：therefore→hence/as a result
建议：advice→suggestion/proposal/recommendation
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have interest in/be enthusiastic about/be fascinated by
机会：chance/opportunity
2.句式拓展：
合并简单句
原句：Firstly, join a club that you’re interested in. You can meet a lot of people there and having a common hobby will make it easier for you to make friends with them.
拓展句：Firstly, join a club that you’re interested in, where you can meet a lot of people and having a common hobby will make it easier for you to make friends with them.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you felt very lonely in the new school, I am more than willing to give you some advice.（运用了现在分词作原因状语）
【高分句型2】Firstly, join a club that you’re interested in.（运用了that引导定语从句）
8．Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you are upset about the coming choice of Arts or Science.
Actually, many senior 1 students have the same anxiety and problem as you. But if we can deal with them rationally, there is nothing to worry about. When it comes to choosing between Arts and Science, the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interests and strengths. Never follow others blindly. Besides, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or senior 3 students. They have previous experience and lesson. Finally, whichever we choose, please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expectation and choice.
I hope my ideas can be of great help. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇建议信。要求考生以李华的身份给交换生Mike就选科时选物理还是历史提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
处理：deal with→handle
理性地：rationally→reasonably
寻找：seek→look for
记住：keep...in mind→bear...in mind
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or senior 3 students. They have previous experience and lesson.
拓展句：Besides, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or senior 3 students who have previous experience and lesson.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you are upset about the coming choice of Arts or Science. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] When it comes to choosing between Arts and Science, the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interests and strengths. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
9．Dear Tony,
Hearing that you are often misunderstood by your classmates, I quite understand your feeling. It is such a terrible feeling that can influence the whole day’s good mood. Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice on how to solve the problem.
About the question you have mentioned, I suggest that you spend more time studying and don’t put your heart into it. After all, out of sight, out of mind. However, if someone that means a lot to you misunderstands you, such as, your parents, your best friends, I believe it necessary to explain clearly with patience. All in all, you should remember that kindness and honesty are very important to get along well with classmates. I believe that so long as you are kind to them, you will be able to make friends with them and they won’t misunderstand you.
I hope that my advice is of help to you and that everything will be OK. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tony回信，就他因经常被同学误解而烦恼这件事表示理解并给予安慰，同时提出建议并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
给某人提供某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sth. for sb.
解决：solve→settle
重要的：important→significant
与某人相处得好：get along well with sb.→be on good terms with sb.
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：All in all, you should remember that kindness and honesty are very important to get along well with classmates.
强调句：All in all, you should remember that it is kindness and honesty that are very important to get along well with classmates.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice on how to solve the problem. (运用了“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
[高分句型2]However, if someone that means a lot to you misunderstands you, such as, your parents, your best friends, I believe it necessary to explain clearly with patience. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
10．Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to learn that you’re sick from going on a diet at home. Here I’m writing to share with you my opinions.
Firstly, it’s common for girls to love beauty and keep slim, but it is important to love and accept yourself as you are. A balanced diet will also work better, which provides you with necessary nutrition to keep healthy and energetic. Lastly, regular exercise is a must so that you can have a healthy state of body and mind.
I hope the suggestions above will be of help to you. Looking forward to your return soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因节食生病在家的朋友Alice写一封建议信，帮助她走出困境。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：opinion→view
重要的：important→vital
为某人提供某物：provide sb with sth→offer sb sth
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Firstly, it’s common for girls to love beauty and keep slim, but it is important to love and accept yourself as you are.
拓展句：Firstly, though it’s common for girls to love beauty and keep slim, it is important to love and accept yourself as you are.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to learn that you’re sick from going on a diet at home.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】A balanced diet will also work better, which provides you with necessary nutrition to keep healthy and energetic.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】Lastly, regular exercise is a must so that you can have a healthy state of body and mind.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）