基于话题的作文指导

课件34张PPT。Let's enjoy writing !Enjoy life every day!Endangered
animalsNatural
disastersPollutionThe world's problemstsunami(海啸)
earthquake(地震)What should we do to save the earth?turn off the lights when you leave a roomplant treesTree Planting DayMarch 12save waterturn off the showers
while you are washing your hairtake your own bags when you are shoppingstop driving cars instead of walkingrecycle books and paper don’t use paper towels or napkinssave our environmentStop driving cars
Recycle books and paper
Turn off the lights when you leave a room
Turn off the shower while you are washing your hair
Don’t use paper towels or napkins
… … 假如你是校报小记者，请你以 “Lower Carbon(低碳), Happier Life” 为主题写一篇英语短文向校英语报投稿。
短文要点如下：
1.在6月5日，自己骑自行车或走路上学，父母骑车上班；
2.在家使用节能灯(energy-saving lamp), 减少洗澡时间；
3.将用过的（used）课本留给下届（lower grades）学生；
4.请你就此话题补充1-2条个人做法。
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
It’s our duty to save the environment.__________________________________________________________________________________
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
How do we write a composition?
sentences（句子）conjunctions
(连词)Task1phrases(短语)connective
sentences (过渡句) tense(时态)topic(主题) persons（人称）假如你是校报小记者，请你以“Lower Carbon（低碳）, Happier Life” 为主题写一篇英语短文向校英语广播台投稿。
短文要点如下：
1.在6月5日，自己骑自行车或走路上学，父母骑车上班；
2.在家使用节能灯（energy-saving lamp),减少洗澡时间；
3.将用过的（used）课本留给下届（lower grades）学生；
4.请你就此话题补充1-2条个人做法。
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
It’s our duty to save the environment.__________________________________________________________________________________
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
used booksgo to schoolgive awaytake a showerby bike go to workthe students
of the lower gradesKey phrases Lower Carbon,
Happier LifeKey sentences 自己骑自行车或走路上学。
go to school by bike or on foot.
ride my bike or walk to school.
在家使用节能灯（energy-saving lamp）。
Use energy-saving lamps at home
减少洗澡时间。
Take a quick shower.
Spend less time taking a shower.
Take the shower as quickly as I can.
将用过的（used）课本留给下届（lower grades）学生。
Give away my used books to the students in lower grades.
Leave… Useful Conjunctions(常用连词 , 连接句 )and ,so , but, however, if , when, such as, because, since, even though, so…that, firstly, then, secondly, thirdly, finally… …
What’s more,
For example
On one hand, on the other hand It’s our duty to save the environment.
For example, we can get to school by bike or on foot on that day. And our parents can ride to work. And we can also use energy saving lamps at home. We can take a quick shower to save water or we can turn off the shower while we are washing our hair. We can recycle books and give them to other students. When we go shopping, we can take our own bags. And we should turn off the lights when we leave a room. Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
Passage1:Are they correct ?
Are they fluent (流利) ?
Is it beautiful ?connective sentences(过渡句 ) It’s our duty to save the environment.
For example, we can get to school by bike or on foot on that day. And our parents can ride to work. And we can also use energy saving lamps at home. We can take a quick shower to save water or we can turn off the shower while we are washing our hair. we can recycle books and give them to other students. When we go shopping, we can take our own bags. And we should turn off the lights when we leave a room. Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
Passage2:What do you do on June 5? How do you save the environment? I think different people have different ideas.How about saving water?As for our books,Check:
spelling（拼写） tense (时态) handwriting（书写）
punctuation marks(标点符号)After writing《2014年浙江省初中毕业生学业考试说明》作文按5个档次给分第五档：（13～15分）包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。
第四档：（10～12分）基本包含要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档：（7～9分）包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。
第二档：（3～6分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。
第一档：（0～2分）白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。 请你写一篇文章参加学校将举行的以“Volunteering Makes the World Wonderful ”为主题的英语演讲比赛。
提示:1.帮助同学 2.帮助老人 3.帮助病人 4. … …
5. 帮助别人体会…… 要求：80词左右Volunteering means that you work to help people without being paid. As a student, we can do many things to help others.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Volunteering Makes the World WonderfulLearn to write
1.Read your partner’s writing
2.Correct the mistakes
3. Talk about the compositionTask3Learn from each other《2011年浙江省初中毕业生学业考试说明》作文按5个档次给分第五档：（13～15分）包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。
第四档：（10～12分）基本包含要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档：（7～9分）包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。
第二档：（3～6分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。
第一档：（0～2分）白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。 Sharing TimeTask4sentenceconjunction(连词)wordconnective sentences (过渡句)Is it good or not? Why?punctuation marks(标点符号)spelling（拼写）handwriting（书写）Volunteering means that you work to help people without being paid. As a student, we can do many things to help others. At school, we can clean up the playground. Sometimes we also can help our classmates with their study. On weekends, we help the old persons cross the streets, we can work in the Old People’ House. It’s really helpful to be a guide for the tourists. We can meet some wonderful people and enjoy the beautiful sights, too. We can spend every Saturday morning working in the after-school care center. There we can help kids with their schoolwork and so on. I think we can learn a lot by helping others.
Volunteering makes the world wonderful. Do you agree with me? Let’s be volunteers today.One possible versionvolunteering makes the world wonderfulTo help others is to help ourselves!
Don’t be
afraid of
Writing. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班级特意开展了一次以 “Less pressure, better life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。
内容包括：
1. 同学们中普通存在的压力是什么；
2.我的压力是什么；
3.我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
Less pressure, better life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure._______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!2010年台州中考真题HomeworkLevel A:
Level B:Write the correct compositionWrite the composition, make sure it’s correct, fluent and beautiful.Thank you!
Bye!Best wishes and good luck!