Unit 1 A New Start
单元话题满分范文必背
1.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jack 刚刚升入高一,但他一时无法适应新的校园生活,写信向你征求建 议。请你就此问题给他回一封信,内容主要包括:
1. 表示理解:实际上很多新生都会对高中生活感到不安,因此不必过多担心。
2. 提出建议:
(1)报名参加课外活动,结交新朋友;
(2)做好日程安排,关注学习;
(3)......
3. 表达希望和祝愿。
要求: 80 词左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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【
答案】参考范文
D
ear
Jack
,
I
am
sorry
to
hear
that
you’re
having
trouble
adjusting
to
your
high
school
life.
Actually,
many
freshmen
are
confused
about
high
school
life
,
so
don’t
worry
about
it
too
much.
I’m
writing
to
offer
you
some
useful
advice.
First
,
I
recommend
that
you
sign
up
for
extra-curricular
activities
which
can
help
you
make
more
new
friends
.
In
this
way
you
will
feel
less
lonely
and
your
school
life
will
become
more
colorful
and
interesting.
Second
,
you
should
make
a
good
schedule
and
focus
on
your
studies.
As
a
teenager,
studying
hard
is
our
responsibility
.
Finally
,
it
is
a
good
idea
to
read
some
good
novels,
which
can
make
you
feel
happy.
I
hope
my
suggestions
will
be
helpful
for
you
and
you
will
have
a
good
time
every
day.
Y
ours
,
Li
H
ua
)
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【导语】本篇书面表达属
于应用文。要求考生写一份信给英国朋友
Jack
,因为他刚刚升入高一,
无法适应
新的校园生活,由此写信对他进行
安慰并提出建议。
【
详解】
1.
词汇积累
伤
心
:
sorry→
sad
提供:
offer
→
provide
建议:
advice→
suggestion/tip
有益处
的
:
helpful→
beneficial
2.
句式拓
展
简
单句变复合句:
原句:
I’m
writing
to
offer
you
some
useful
advice.
拓展句:
I’m
wr
iting
to
offer
you
some
useful
advice
,
which
is
listed
as
follows
.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
First
,
I
recommend
that
you
sign
up
for
extra-curricular
activities
which
can
help
you
make
more
new
friends.
(运用了
that
引导宾语从句,同时使用
which
引导的定语从句
)
【
高分句型
2
】
As
a
teenager
,
studying
hard
is
our
responsibility
.
(运用了
动名词作主语的结构)
)
2.如果你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom ,想了解你在高中的学习生活,请根据下列要求写一封信告知他。 1.对高中学校的第一印象。(老师、同学)
2.你最喜欢的学科及其原因。
3.学习上存在的困难和应对策略。
4.你在高中想取得的目标和期待。
注意: 1.按提示写,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
2.字数 100 字左右。
Dear Tom,
_________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you are curious about my life and study in senior high school. Here I’m writing to tell you some details.
On my first day in school, I found myself in a friendly and academic atmosphere. The teachers are very knowledgeable and ready to pour all they know into our mind, and the students are very kind to each other. My favorite subject is English because it makes me able to understand different cultures. However, I have trouble in remembering words. After talking with my teacher, I decide to learn to make up an interesting story using the new words, hoping it will be helpful. As for the future, I’m aimed at going into top 10 in my class.
Best wishes.
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文写作, 要求考生给英国笔友 Tom 写封信, 告诉他你高中的学习和生活情况。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
收到…… 的来信: hear from→ receive the letter from
对……好奇: be curious about→ wonder
准备好做…… :be ready to do…→ be prepared to do…
在……上有困难: have trouble in→ have difficulty in
有帮助的: helpful→ of help/beneficial
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句: I’m glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you are curious about my life and study in senior high school.
拓展句: I’m glad to receive the letter from you, in which you said you are curious about my life and study in senior high school.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】My favorite subject is English because it makes me able to understand different cultures.(使用了 because 引导原因状语从句和“make+宾语+宾补”结构)
【高分句型 2】After talking with my teacher, I decide to learn to make up an interesting story using the new words, hoping it will be helpful. (使用了动名词短语作介词宾语、不定式短语作宾语、现在分词短语分别作 方式状语和伴随状语、省略引导词 that 的宾语从句)
3.假设你是高一新生李华,进入高中阶段,面对全新的校园生活有很多感想。请你给你的英国笔友 John
写一封邮件分享你的新生活,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 介绍高中校园生活:学校环境、学习情况、你的感受……;
3. 你的期待和展望。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________
【答案】 Dear John,
How is everything going with you I just entered the senior secondary school and became a freshman last month. It is the start of a new chapter in my life and my heart is filled with so many strong feelings that I can’t wait to tell you. And therefore I’m writing in order to share my new school life with you.
My new school differs in many ways from my previous one. The campus is big and beautiful with a lot of fields for us to take exercise. Our teaching buildings are surrounded by green trees so that we can relax our minds during the breaks. In my new school, although students still sit in rows as we did in the past, we depend more on each other instead of teachers to solve problems and thus learn more by having group discussions and sharing our ideas or checking our work together, which makes me feel challenged and yet excited.
In the next three years, I hope I will develop competence in a variety of new skills and have a happier, more fruitful and satisfying life. What about you Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给碧悠 John 写信,分享自己的高中生活。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
开始: start→beginning
充满: be filled with→be full of
从前的: previous→former
各种各样的: a variety of→varieties of/various
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2.
句型拓
展
合并句
子
原句:
The
campus
is
big
and
beautiful
with
a
lot
of
fields
for
us
to
take
exercise.
Our
teaching
buildings
are
surrounded
by
green
trees
so
that
we
can
relax
our
minds
during
the
breaks.
拓展句
:
Not
only
is
the
compus
big
and
beautiful
with
a
lot
of
fields
for
us
to
take
exercise,
but
also
our
teaching
buildings
are
surrounded
by
green
trees
so
that
we
can
relax
our
minds
during
the
breaks.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]Our
teaching
buildings
are
surrounded
by
green
tree
s
so
that
we
can
relax
our
minds
during
the
breaks.
(运用了
so
t
h
at
引导的目的状语从句)
[
高分句型
2]In
my
new
school,
although
students
still
sit
in
r
ows
as
we
did
in
the
past
,
we
depend
more
on
each
other
instead
of
teachers
to
solve
problems
and
thus
learn
more
by
having
group
discussions
and
sharing
our
ideas
or
checking
our
work
together,
whi
ch
makes
me
feel
challenged
and
yet
excited
.
(运用了
although
引导的让步
状
语从句和
which
引导的非限制性定语从句)
)
4.假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友 Peter 刚到广州学习, 他来信说, 很难适应在广州的学习和生活, 十分沮 丧,请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议,内容包括:
1 .表示安慰;
2 .针对问题提出建议;
3 .表达希望。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3 .开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Learning that you are feeling it hard to adapt to the study and life in Guangzhou, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.
____________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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【
答
案】
Dear
Peter,
Learning
that
you
are
feeling
it
hard
to
a
dapt
to
the
study
and
life
in
Guangzhou
,
I
’
m
writing
to
offer
you
some
suggestions
.
In
fact
,
it
’
s
normal
for
a
new
comer
to
feel
uncomfortable
in
a
new
environment.
Don’t
worry.
Firstly,
try
to
join
your
classmates
in
various
activities
,
which
can
help
you
further
understand
the
local
culture
and
customs.
Besides
,
listen
to
your
teacher
’
s
lectures
carefully
and
often
discuss
the
relevant
topic
with
your
classmates.
Last
but
not
least
,
smile
to
the
people
around
you
and
they
may
return
you
a
happy
day
.
I
hope
my
advice
will
be
helpful
for
you
.
Y
ours
,
Li
Hu
a
【
导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友
Peter
刚到广州学习,他来信说,很难
适应在广
州
的学习和生活,十分沮丧,请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议,内容包括:
1.
表示安慰;
2.
针
对
问
题提出建议;
3.
表达希望。
【
详解】
1.
词汇积累
各种各样
的
:
various→a
variety
of
有关的:
relevant→concerne
d
建议
:
advice→suggestion
此外:
Besides=In
addition
2.
句式拓
展
合并简
单句
原句:
In
fact
,
it
’
s
normal
for
a
new
comer
to
feel
uncomfortable
in
a
new
environment
.
Don’t
worry.
拓展句:
Don
’
t
worry
,
because
it
’
s
normal
for
a
new
comer
to
feel
uncomfortable
in
a
new
environment.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
Firstly,
try
to
join
your
classm
ates
in
various
activities
,
which
can
help
you
further
understand
the
local
culture
and
c
ustoms
.(
运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2]
I
hope
my
advice
will
be
helpful
for
you.(
运用了省略连接词的宾语从句
)
)
5.假设你是新星中学的学生李华。最近,新来的国际交流生 David 想加入学校的俱乐部,写邮件询问你 的意见,请你给他回一封信, 内容如下:
1. 推荐一个俱乐部;
2. 介绍俱乐部的活动;
3. 告知报名方式。
注意: 1. 词数 100 字左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】 Dear David,
Learning that you are interested in our school’s clubs and wonder which one to choose, I am more than willing to give you some advice.
I recommend Chinese Chess Club, the most popular club in our school. Twice a week, members of the club gather to have classes, practising in groups to improve their skills. Besides, every month, masters in this field are invited to give lectures on various topics about Chinese chess, such as its history and development, from which the members get to know the cultural value behind this game. I think you will have a chance to train your thinking, make more friends and learn about Chinese culture through these activities in the club.
If you would like to join it, you may sign up by filling out the information at www. before next Sunday. I hope my suggestion is of help to you.
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。新来的国际交流生 David 想加入学校的俱乐部, 写邮件询问意见, 要 求考生给他回信并给出建议。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
建议: advice → suggestion
聚集: gather → get together/assemble
另外 :besides → in addition/moreover
机会: chance → opportunity
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
(
原句:
I
hope
my
suggestion
is
of
help
to
you.
拓展句:
I
hope
my
suggestion
is
helpful
to
you
.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]Besides,
every
month,
masters
in
this
field
are
invited
to
give
lectures
on
various
topics
about
Chinese
chess,
such
as
its
history
and
development,
from
which
the
members
get
to
know
the
cultural
value
behind
this
game.
(
运用了
“
介词
+which”
引导非限制性定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2]
If
you
would
like
to
join
it,
you
may
sign
up
by
filling
out
the
information
at
www.
before
next
Sunday
.
(
运用了
if
引导条件状语从句
)
)
6.假定你是李华,你的英国好友 Angela 写信告诉你她很不适应高中生活,感到很孤独。请你根据以下要 点,用英语给她回一封电子邮件。
1.注意学习方法,培养良好的学习习惯。
2.多交一些朋友,友情会使人忘记孤独。
3.积极参加各种活动,使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意: 1.词数 80 左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(
___
_________________________________________
【
答案】
Dear
Angela,
I
’
m
sorry
to
hear
that
you
are
having
trouble
adapting
to
your
high
school
life,
but
this
situation
can
be
easily
changed
if
you
take
my
advice
.
First
,
you
should
try
to
adjust
your
approaches
to
studies
and
form
good
learning
habits.
Secondly,
why
not
make
some
friends
They
can
help
you
to
forget
your
loneliness.
Thirdly,
it
would
be
a
good
idea
if
you
take
an
active
part
in
all
kinds
of
activities,
which
will
help
you
to
make
life
more
interesting.
By
doing
so,
you
will
be
happier
with
your
new
life
soon
.
I
hope
you
will
find
these
ideas
useful
.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友
Angel
a
回一封电子邮件,
帮助她解决不适应高中
生
活
,感到孤独的问题。
【
详解】
1.
词汇积累
得
知:
hear→learn
)
(
困难:
trouble→difficulty
建
议:
advice→tip
希
望
:
hope→wish
2.
句式拓
展
简单句变
复合句
原句:
By
doing
so,
you
will
be
happier
w
ith
your
new
life
soon
.
拓展句:
If
you
do
so,
you
will
be
happier
with
your
new
lif
e
soon
.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Thirdly,
it
would
be
a
go
od
idea
if
you
take
an
active
part
in
all
kinds
of
activities
,
which
will
help
you
to
make
life
mor
e
interesting
.
(
运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
【高分句型
2
】
By
doing
so,
you
w
ill
be
happier
with
your
new
life
soon
.
(
运用了非谓语动词动名词作介词宾
语
)
)
7.假如你是李华,你的朋友小东给你写了一封邮件,说他进入高中以来,感觉学习压很大,不适应新的 生活和学习环境。请你给他会封邮件,给他提一些建议。
要点: 1.向你的老师和同学求助;
2.多做运动,放松大脑,释放压力;
3.保持自信 ,坚持探索。
要求: 1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【
答案】
Dear
Xiao
Dong,
Knowing
that
you
have
trouble
with
high
school
life,
I
am
really
concerned.
Therefore,
I
am
writing
to
offer
you
some
advice
.
First
,
why
not
turn
to
your
teachers
and
classmates
If
you
do
this,
I
am
sure
you
will
soon
improve
yourself.
Second
,
taking
more
exercise
can
not
only
rest
your
brain
but
also
help
you
concentrate
on
study.
Last
but
no
least
,
it
is
a
good
way
to
believe
in
yourself
and
keep
exploring.
That
way
you
will
gain
more
confidence.
I
hope
you
find
these
tips
helpful
to
you
.
Y
ous
,
)
(
Li
H
ua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用
文
。要求考生给朋友小东回信,
就如何适应新的生活和学习环境提出建
议
。
【
详解】
1.
词汇积累
担
心的:
concerned→worried
提供某人某物
:
offer
sb.
sth.→provide
sb.
with
sth.
首
先:
first→to
begin
with
帮助:
help→assis
t
2.
句式拓
展
合并句
子
原句:
Last
but
no
least
,
it
is
a
good
way
to
believe
in
yourself
and
keep
exploring.
That
way
you
will
gain
more
confidence
.
拓展句:
Last
but
no
least,
it
is
a
good
way
to
believe
in
yourself
and
keep
exploring,
which
will
help
you
gain
more
confidence
.
【
点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
Knowing
that
you
have
trouble
wit
h
high
school
life
,
I
am
really
concerned
.
(运用了现在分词作状语,
that
引导
宾
语从句)
[
高分句型
2]
If
you
do
this,
I
am
sure
you
will
soon
improve
your
self
.
(运用了
if
引导条件状语从句)
)
8.假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友 Tom 来信告诉你,在新学期他要来中国当交换生,想让你给他一些建议, 帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括如下:
1.收信的感受;
2.学习方面的建议(课堂、课后);
3.期待他的到来。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: exchange student
Dear Tom,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Tom,
Delighted to learn that you are going to China to be an exchange student next term, I’m writing to offer you some advice in order to help you adapt to the new life here as fast as possible.
To begin with, it’s important to pay full attention to what teachers say and take notes in time. Besides, you may find it difficult to understand Chinese as an exchange student, but feel free to ask your teachers and classmates for help after class. What’s more, make friends with them, which will make your life here easier.
I hope my suggestions work and I am looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友 Tom 写一封电子邮件, 对于新学期他要来中国当 交换生给他一些建议,帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的: delighted→glad
为某人提供某物: offer sb sth→provide sth for sb
此外: besides→additionally
向某人求助: ask sb for help→turn to sb for help
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: Besides, you may find it difficult to understand Chinese as an exchange student, but feel free to ask your teachers and classmates for help after class.
拓展句: Besides, you may find it’s difficult for an exchange student to understand Chinese, but feel free to ask your teachers and classmates for help after class.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To begin with, it’s important to pay full attention to what teachers say and take notes in time. (运用了 what 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】What’s more, make friends with them, which will make your life here easier. (运用了 which 引
(
导的
非
限制性定语从句)
)
9.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 刚刚升入高中,但是他一时无法适应新的校园生活,写信向你征求 建议。请你给他回复一封建议信。内容包括: 1)你写信给我说对刚成为高中新生而感到焦虑和不安,我理解你的感受。
2)以下是我的一些建议: ①我建议你报名参加一些活动,比如... (活动/俱乐部),这样可以认识更多新朋友。 ②我认为上课应努力学习,这样可以尽快适应高中的学习。 ③我建议多与老师和同学交流,分享自己的感受,这样可以更好地体会高中的生活。 3)我希望这些建议能够帮助到你,期待你的回信。
要求:
词数应为 80 字左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
开头已经给出,不计入总字数。
Dear Jack,
____________________
Yours
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear
Jac
k
,
I
understand
how
you
feel
when
you
write
to
me
that
you
are
anxious
and
upset
about
being
a
freshman
in
new
high
school
.
I
have
some
suggestions
for
you
.
Firstly,
I
suggest
you
sign
up
for
some
activities,
such
as
basketball
club
where
you
can
make
more
friends.
Secondly,
I
think
you
should
study
hard
in
class,
so
that
you
can
adapt
to
senior
high
school
as
soon
as
possible.
Thirdly,
I
advice
that
you
should
communicate
with
your
teachers
and
classmates
,
share
you
true
feelings
,
so
that
you
can
better
experience
the
life
of
high
school.
Finally
,
I
hope
these
suggestions
will
help
you
and
look
forward
to
hearing
from
you
soon.
)
(
Y
ours
,
Li
H
ua
【导语】
本
篇书面表达是一篇应用文,
要求考生给英国笔友
Jack
写信,
提出一些关于适应新的校园生活的
建
议。
【
详解】
1.
词汇积累
建议
:
suggestion→advice
首先:
firstly
→
to
begin
with
应该:
should→be
supposed
to
帮助:
help→assis
t
2.
句式拓
展
简单句变
复合句
原句:
I
have
some
suggestions
for
y
o
u
.
拓展句:
I
have
some
sugges
tions
for
you
,
which
I
think
will
be
helpful
.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]Firstly,
I
suggest
you
sign
up
for
some
activities
,
such
as
basketball
club
where
you
can
mak
e
more
friends
.(
运用了
where
引导定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2]Thirdly,
I
advice
that
you
should
communicate
with
your
teachers
and
classmates
,
share
you
true
feelings
,
so
that
you
can
better
experience
the
life
of
high
school
.(
运用了
that
引导宾语从句
,
so
that
引导状语从
句
)
)
10.假设你是新华中学的学生李华, 班里从外地转来一名同学李明, 他一时无法融入到新的班集体中, 感 到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
1. 帮他分析原因; 2. 给他提建议; 3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不算入总字数;
3. 请按照如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Li Ming,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】 One possible version:
Dear Li Ming,
Understandably, it can be hard to adjust to a new school and class. Some possible reasons could be that you haven’t had enough time to get to know the classmates, or that you’re having trouble connecting with them.
One suggestion could be to join a club or activity that interests you. This can be a great way to meet new people who share your interests. Another idea is to try to initiate conversations with the classmates. Ask them about their hobbies or what they like to do outside of school. This can help break the ice and build connections.
Don’t be afraid to ask for help. I am always willing to listen to your feelings and give you a hand whenever you need it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给一时无法融入到新的班集体中的转学生李明写信, 帮 他分析原因,为他提供建议,并分享帮助他的具体打算。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
可以理解地: understandably→naturally, comprehensibly
适应: adjust to→adapt to, get used to, be accustomed to
做某事有困难: having trouble (in) doing sth.→have difficulties (in) doing sth., have problems (in) doing sth. 使……感兴趣: interest→attract, intrigue, fascinate
加强: build→strengthen, enhance, augment
愿意: be willing to→be glad to, be ready to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Understandably, it can be hard to adjust to a new school and class.
拓展句: What is understandable is that it can be hard to adjust to a new school and class.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Some possible reasons could be that you haven’t had enough time to get to know the classmates, or that you’re having trouble connecting with them. (运用了两次that 引导名词性从句作be 的表语)
【高分句型 2】This can be a great way to meet new people who share your interests. (运用了 who 引导限制性 定语从句修饰先行词 new people)
【高分句型 3】Ask them about their hobbies or what they like to do outside of school. (运用了 what 引导名词
(
性从句
作
about
的宾语)
【高分句型
4
】
I
am
always
willing
to
listen
to
your
feelings
and
give
you
a
hand
wheneve
r
you
need
it
.
(运用了
whe
never
引导让步状语从句)
)