牛津上海版（试用本）小升初英语真题-书面表达（含参考范文）

2021-2022 年上海小升初英语真题-书面表达 2021 年
一、命题作文
1．以“Away from fires”为题写话，至少于 6 句话，三种句型。
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2．以“My home”为题写作，要求不少于 6 句话，至少三种句型。
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3．以“Avisit to the museum”为题，简单描述一个你参观过的博物馆。要求三种以上的句型，至少 8 句话。
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4．以“Changes in our school”为题，简单描述学校的变化。要求三种以上的句型，至少 8 句话。 Changes in our school
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5 ．Write at least 6 sentences on the topic “Looking forward to my new school life” .
(以“展望我的新校园生活”为题写话，要求含有 3 种以上不同句型，至少 8 句。 )
Looking forward to my new school life
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6．提示：你的朋友在今天上午给你打了一个电话，约你下午一起去上海博物馆参观，请你就这件事给你
家长写一张便条，说明你将和谁一起去干什么事，什么时候回来，会回家吃晚餐吗等等情况。
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二、提纲作文
7．
(1) Please write about “A Fire”
(2)请在文章中涉及以下的问题：
Where does the fire start
Why is the fire dangerous
What must we do for fire safety (请写出两条)
What should we do if we meet a fire (请写出两条)
(3) 行文流畅, 用词语法正确。注意句子间的衔接，避免句子的罗列。不少于 40 词。
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8 ．写作训练。 根据提示，写一写 Peter 的度假计划，不少于 5 句。
Where to go When Go there by How long Stay in
Hangzhou tomorrow train three days a hotel
参考答案：
1 ．范文：
Away from fires
Fire can burn down a lot of trees. It can hurt people too. We must be careful with fire. We mustn’t smoke in the forest. We mustn’t play near fires at home. We mustn’t play with matches at home. We must keep away from fires. When we are caught in a fire, don't be nervous. We should run away from fires quickly.
【详解】 1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍一下怎样远离火。然后再阐述在森林和在家不能做的事情。注意文 章用 can ，must ，mustn’t 等情态动词并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：fire 火；can 可以；must 必须；careful 小心；smoke 吸烟；play 玩耍；play with matches 玩火柴； keep away from 远离； don't 不要； should 应该；
参考句型： Fire can... ； It can... ； We must ... ；We mustn’t... ；When we are...don't... ；We should...；
【点睛】
2 ．范文：
My home
I have a beautiful home. It is big and clean. In my home, there are two bedrooms, a living room, a study, a bathroom and a kitchen. My father often stays in the living room. He likes to watch TV there. My mother often cooks in the kitchen. She cooks very well. I often do my homework in the study. There are many books in my study. I like reading very much.
This is my home. I feel so warm at home. I love my home.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用 there be 句型来介绍自己的家。然后再阐述家人在家经常做的事情。 注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：home 家；beautiful 美丽的；big and clean 又大又干净；bedroom 卧室；study 书房；bathroom 浴 室； kitchen 厨房； watch TV 看电视； cook 烹饪； do homework 做家庭作业； warm 温暖的；
参考句型：I have... ； It is... ；In my home, there are ... ；My father often ... ；He likes... ；My mother often... ；I often... ；This is...；
【点睛】
3 ．例文：
Last weekend our teacher led our class to visit a museum. We gathered in front of the school gate and left our
school at 8.30 a.m. by bus. It took about twenty minutes for us to reach the museum. Once we reached the
museum we bought the entrance ticket and entered the museum. We saw a lot of old thing and get more information by listening to the guide and watching the videos. We left the museum around 5.00 p.m. We felt so
tired but we were so happy and excited to learn more thing in the museum.
【详解】题干解读：这是个命题作文， 应该说明出发地时间， 交通方式， 做了哪些活动， 返回时间及感受， 注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考单词： led 带领， gathered 集合， reached 到达， bought 买， excited 兴奋的
参考句型： We saw... ；We felt ...；
【点睛】【点睛】
4 ．范文：
Changes in our school
I have been in this school for five years. In the past five years, quite a few changes have taken place here. On one side of the road, there is a new classroom building. On the other side, there was a playground three years ago, but now stands another new building-our library. The playground is now in the front of the school. We have also planted many trees in and around our school. I think our school is much more beautiful than before.
【详解】 1.题干解读：题目要求以Changes in our school，介绍学校的变化。时态应用一般过去时和一般现 在时，进行变化对比。注意不要少于 8 句号。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇： in the past 在过去； change 变化； classroom building 教学楼； playground 操场； in front of 在前 面； plant 种植。
参考句型： In the past, … . but now … ；There was … ；There is …
5．例文
Looking forward to my new school life
I'm looking forward to my middle school life. Then I will be independent because I will be away from my parents. I'm also looking forward to making new friends. We will play basketball on our new playground. We will eat together in school dining hall. At that time, I can make some decisions by myself. So I will be excited and happy. I’m also looking forward to seeing my new teachers. I will study harder in my new life.
【详解】 1.题干解读：题目要求以 Looking forward to my new school life 为题写一篇作文，该题是一个命题 作文。时态要用一般将来时，写写对新的校园生活的展望，要求含有 3 种以上不同句型，至少 8 句。 2.参考词汇及句型：
参考词汇：new school life 新的学校生活， look forward to 期望， independent 自立的， make new friends 交新
朋友
参考句型： I'm looking forward to… ；I will be… ；I can…
【点睛】
6 ．范文：
A note to my parents
Dear mum and dad, I am going to visit the museum with my friend Mike this afternoon. So I will come home later than that on usual. Then I won’t eat dinner at home, we will eat outside. Don’t worry! I can take care of myself. I will come back as soon as possible.
your daughter 【详解】 1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称给家长写一张便条，说明你将和谁一起去干什么事，什么时
候回来，会回家吃晚餐吗等等情况。用一般将来时，注意人称、时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词： museum 博物馆， usual 通常的， dinner 晚餐， myself 我自己。
参考句型： I am going to... ； I will... ； I can...。
【点睛】
7 ．范文：
Fire started in Shangqiu. Fire is very dangerous. It can make a big disaster. It may destroy our home. We mustn’t play with fire. We must use fire correctly. When we meet a fire, first we should keep calm. Then call 119. We should escape from the fire orderly.
【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称和第三人称写火的起源，火的危险以及我们面对大火应该做 的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词： dangerous 危险的； disaster 灾难； correctly 正确的； calm 冷静的； escape 逃跑； orderly 有序的 参考句型： Fire started... ；Fire is... ；It may... ；We mustn’t... ；We should...
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8 ．范文：
Peter is going to Hangzhou tomorrow. He is going there by train. He will stay in Hangzhou or three days. He will stay in a small but clean hotel. He will walk around the West Lake. He will go shopping too.
【详解】 1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格写一写 Peter 的度假计划。由于是计划，因此文章需要用一般 将来时表述，注意表格中内容都需要提及。
2. 参考单词与句型：
参考单词： be going to 将要， tomorrow 明天， stay in 待在， train 火车， hotel 旅馆， the West Lake 西湖
参考句型： Peter is going to … ；He will … ；He … . by train.
2022 年
一、命题作文
1．写话，至少 6 句话， 3 种句型。
A visit to the ______________________
参考答案：
1 ．例文：
A visit to the Car Museum
Last weekend, I visited the Car Museum with my parents. The Car Museum is far from my home, so we went there by car. There were a lot of cars there. Some were very old, and some were very new. I learnt a lot of about cars. My parents bought a toy car for me. How happy I was.
【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目要求先把题目补充完整，写一篇关于参观某地的文章。写作时要用三 种句型， 不少于 6 句话。可以先写去参观了哪里， 怎么去的， 在那里看到了什么、学到了什么， 最
后总结一下心情。只要言之有理即可。注意文章时态是一般过去时。
2.参考词汇和句型：参考单词：the Car Museum 汽车博物馆， visit 参观， by car 乘汽车， learnt 学到 参考句型： I visited the ... with . … ；There were a lot of . … ；How happy…