(共21张PPT)
Unit 4 Growing up
Task
The person who has influenced me most
Spud Webb influences me most
Name: Spud Webb
Year of birth:
Place of birth:
Height:
Team:
Dream:
1963
Texas
170 cm
Atlanta Hawks
To play in the NBA
be refused when ... tryd for the school team
... not lose heart and finally got a chance ...
... score 20 points in his first game and became the star ...
junior high
Spud Webb influences me most
... have to sit in the stands
... practise even harder and got the coach to change his mind
... become leader of the team and was named Player of the Year
senior high
No university would invite ... play basketball
... decide to play ...,led his team to ... and caught the attention of ...
... succeed in getting a scholarship
university
The NBA was not interested in ...
be forced to ... after graduation for about a year.
... joined the Atlanta Hawks in 1985 and he won the Slam Dunk Contest in 1986
NBA
What is special about him
What has he done
What do you think of him
... be born in Shanghai
in 1980
Yao Ming influences me most
... get his first basketball,but ... not become serious about it
at four
... join the Houston Rockets,and become ...
in 2002
... score 41 points in a game against the Atlanta Hawks
in 2004
... take part in the Olympics as one of the Chinese athletes
in 2008
... take part in the Olympics as one of the Chinese athletes
Before ...,... know little English,but
... quickly learn the language
... do more charity work,especially for poor Chinses teenagers
end his basketball career
What is special about him
What has he done
What do you think of him
Anne Frank influences me most
Name: Anne Frank
Year of birth:
Year of death:
Race(种族):
Place of death:
Her book:
1929
1945
a Jew
a Nazi camp
The Diary of a Young Girl
Reason of death:
illness
Place of birth:
Germany
Family members:
her father,mother and elder sister
... be born in Germany,a Jew
in 1929
Anne Frank influences me most
... go into hiding in a secret place in ...
in July 1942
... be discovered by the Nazis
in August 1944
her mother died
a few month later
in 1945
she and her sister died of illness before the war ended
... be caught and sent to a Nazi camp
her father collected ... and had it ...
in 1947
... keep writing in her diary
What is special about her
What has she done
What do you think of her
1.How old is my father
3.What does my father look like How do you know that
4.What has my father done
2.Where does he work
My father influences me most(a model from Mr Wu)
5.What do I think of him
Para 1
1.How old is my father
2.Where does he work
To attract the readers’ attention.
Learn about the structure and content.
3.Why does the writer say that
Para 2
from the central sentence to the examples
Order:
1.What is my father like
2.How does the writer tell us his/her father’s personality
3.What is the person who influences your most like Can you give some examples
By giving examples.
Para 3
from blood to blood cells to his body(逐层深入) to show his greatness
Order:
1.What has my father done
2.Why does the writer say “The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives”
3.Pay attention to the circled words or phrases.What’s the order of the sentences
To help the readers understand how much blood my father has donated.
Para 4
1.When I was a little girl,what do I think of my father
2.How about “now”
3.What’s the relationship(关系) between the two sentences
The changes in my attitude show his influence on me.
Adjectives make the language vivid (生动的).
Language
other adjectives about moods and feelings(when talking about your problems,how will you feel ):
Adjectives about __________________
generous
modest
creative
curious
energetic
organized
patient
careful
active
...
personalities
Language
other attributive clauses making the sentences more concise
the children who have lost their parents(Line 5)
the blood he has donated(Line 7)
... ...
We can use attributive clause to _________.
Complex sentences (复合句) make the language varied (多样化的).
make the sentence more concise
Language
make some adverbial clauses to show sb’s personality
curious
We can use adverbial clause to express_________.
Complex sentences (复合句) make the language varied (多样化的).
my father’s kindness
Whenever he meet some new problems,he will ask many questions.
energetic
... ...
Language
opinions
other object clauses expressing opinions
I don't think (that)...
I believe (that)...
I'm sure (that)...
...
We can use object clauses to express_________.
Complex sentences (复合句) make the language varied (多样化的).
What can we learn from Mr Wu’s model
A clear & complete structure
Vivid & varied language
Related ideas
Summary
Who is the person who influences you most in your life
Focus on the central sentence and try to give some examples.
Discussion
Requirements (要求):
Share your ideas in groups
Your ideas should have an order(层层深入).
from the central sentence to examples
have an order(层层深入)
The structure of your report
age,work ... (some basic information)
the things he/she has done that influenced you most
your feelings about him/her
personality
Writing Time
Evaluation (评价)
Checklist Points
1 Is the structure of the report clear and complete 2
2 Are the ideas related to the topic and unique (独特的) 3
3 Is the language vivid (生动的) and varied (多样的) 3
4 Are there any spelling, punctuation (标点符号) and grammatical mistakes 1
5 Is the handwriting clear and beautiful 1
Self-evaluation Total score _____/10
Teacher’s evaluation Total score _____/10
The person who influences you most can be a great man or an odinary person.But no matter who he is,I hope you can really learn from him.Any maybe sometime in the future be a man like him!
Homework
1. Polish your email.
2. Preview the next unit.