2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写写作素材
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读后续写-magic trainers
试题呈现：
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack couldn’t believe it when he saw them. The trainers (运动鞋) were on top of a cardboard box, next to a pile of rubbish bins. And they look really good and brand new. He peered inside the trainers and found they were just his size. Jack cried out, “Why would anyone throw them away ” Anna shrugged. Anna was his best friend, but Jack didn’t expect her to understand. She knew that he liked running and she even helped by timing him when he ran around the park. But Jack didn’t just like running - he was crazy about it.
He unzipped his school bag and put the trainers into his bag. “It’s the Area Cross-Country Championships in two weeks,” he said. “I’ll never do well in my worn old trainers. These will give me a chance.”
Anna nodded. She knew how important the Championships were to Jack. Five runners were selected from each school in the area. Jack hadn’t been chosen, but then one of the runners had gone to hospital. So they picked Jack to be his replacement in the race. Jack knew he had no chance of beating Beadle, the best runner in the school. However, he would be happy if he just did okay in the race - he didn’t want to let himself down.
Much to their surprise, something unusual happened when Jack put on the trainers. Usually Jack set out at a light jog at first when he practised running. But this time he reached top speed straight away. He didn’t plan it---it just happened. It felt as if he was running on air. He zoomed round the park and kept picking up speed. In fact he just had to relax and the trainers did the running. However, Anna felt really upset. She knew no pair of normal trainers could make such a difference. Anna shook her head, “You shouldn’t wear them in the race. It won’t be YOU who wins, will it Anyone could win if they wore those trainers.” But Jack wouldn’t listen. “I won’t give them up. These trainers are my only chance to win that Championship. I don’t need your help!” he shouted. With that he turned and ran off like a speeding train.
注意：
1、读写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He was even faster with each practice, but he didn’t feel happy.
It was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line.
文本分析
1.这双鞋有magic,或者有supernatural functions，主要人物Jack,次要人物Anna 事件：a running race
2.故事情节和情感分析
Jack这次比赛机会来之不易，非常想赢得比赛，所以情绪一波三折surprised, eager to win the race, thrilled by the magical shoes, discouraged by Anna, determined to continue, unhappy 因为赢得比赛靠实力不应该靠歪门邪道，proud of himself because of honesty and hard work
3.矛盾冲突：要不要穿这双鞋参加比赛？
4.主题：用正确的方法获取成功，是值得尊敬的。
5.考虑如何借鉴原文风格和语言？
下水作文：112+115
He was ever faster with each practice, but he didn't feel happy.How badly he wanted to beat Beadle, win the Championship and live up to the school’s expectations! And the trainers just came at the right time. He even imagined himself standing on the podium, holding the trophy high above his head. But Anna’s words kept circling in his mind: “It won’t be YOU who wins, will it ”. “What should I do ” he kept asking himself. After rounds of tug-of-war in his heart, Jack finally decided to give up the magic trainers and carry on training with his worn old ones. Day after day he practised, and day by day his progress was noticeably visible, which made Jack confident about the upcoming race.
It was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line.The whistle blown, all the runners darted out. It was not long before Jack was surpassed by others and was left farther and farther behind. He was a little discouraged and his pace slowed down a bit. Just then, into his ears came the thunderous cheers from the audience, especially Anna, which injected great energy into every cell of his body. With every ounce of his strength, he accelerated, catching some runners up and getting ahead of them. The race ended with Jack coming fifth and his school second. Though failing to achieve the desired results, Jack knew what running was about - the joy of honest running and true sportsmanship.
参考范文：150
He was even faster with each practice, but he didn’t feel happy. No doubt he would win the championship with the trainers on. However, a lingering uncertainty made him upset. Anna’s words echoed in his mind, “It won’t prove anything.” He came to realize that it wouldn’t mean anything to win by using the trainers. So he made up his mind to run the race in his old trainers. With great sincerity, he shared his decision with Anna and apologized to her.
It was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line. The moment the whistle blew, all the runners set off at full speed. After the first two laps, Jack’s legs ached and his breath burned in his lungs. Just then he heard a cheer from Anna, which gave him an extra burst of energy. With dogged determination, he passed the finish line and ended up in tenth place. He felt as proud as an Olympic hero. To his understanding, the essence of sports was not winning but finding a better self.
读后续写：Lucky Charm
Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car which his parents and headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike climbed out the pool, smiling. He had just won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
“Congratulations, son,” his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet, Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream flavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe he'd win again.
He’s taken first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets. He began to think of it as his lucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam. Mike was feeling unbeatable, And he wouldn't admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmer s build.
It didn't take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place -and then third and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost its magic.
On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. "Mike, we all love ice cream, but it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Maybe it's time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.”
Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didn’t perform well. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soon disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.
Paragraph 1: It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn't sure what to expect. __________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Finally came the end of the race. _____________________________
参考范文：
It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn't sure what to expect. He’d been training hard with his dad, and staying away from the rich desserts he enjoyed so much. He felt healthy again, but he didn’t know if he still had any speed in the pool. As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. This race was a long exhausting one with several laps, but Mike found the power in his muscles he needed to surge ahead. Finally, his hand touched the edge of the pool. (89)
Finally came the end of the race. He lifted his swim goggles off his head and looked at the times on the electronic board. His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else’s too. Mike had won his race, and also qualified for the national championships. The audience and his teammates cheered loudly, and his parents were grinning from ear to ear. “Let’s go grab some of your favorite ice cream and celebrate!” said his father. “Thanks, Dad, but I’ll skip ice cream; it’s not such a lucky charm after all!”
试题呈现：
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack couldn’t believe it when he saw them. The trainers (运动鞋) were on top of a cardboard box, next to a pile of rubbish bins. And they look really good and brand new. He peered inside the trainers and found they were just his size. Jack cried out, “Why would anyone throw them away ” Anna shrugged. Anna was his best friend, but Jack didn’t expect her to understand. She knew that he liked running and she even helped by timing him when he ran around the park. But Jack didn’t just like running - he was crazy about it.
He unzipped his school bag and put the trainers into his bag. “It’s the Area Cross-Country Championships in two weeks,” he said. “I’ll never do well in my worn old trainers. These will give me a chance.”
Anna nodded. She knew how important the Championships were to Jack. Five runners were selected from each school in the area. Jack hadn’t been chosen, but then one of the runners had gone to hospital. So they picked Jack to be his replacement in the race. Jack knew he had no chance of beating Beadle, the best runner in the school. However, he would be happy if he just did okay in the race - he didn’t want to let himself down.
Much to their surprise, something unusual happened when Jack put on the trainers. Usually Jack set out at a light jog at first when he practised running. But this time he reached top speed straight away. He didn’t plan it---it just happened. It felt as if he was running on air. He zoomed round the park and kept picking up speed. In fact he just had to relax and the trainers did the running. However, Anna felt really upset. She knew no pair of normal trainers could make such a difference. Anna shook her head, “You shouldn’t wear them in the race. It won’t be YOU who wins, will it Anyone could win if they wore those trainers.” But Jack wouldn’t listen. “I won’t give them up. These trainers are my only chance to win that Championship. I don’t need your help!” he shouted. With that he turned and ran off like a speeding train.
注意：
1、读写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He was even faster with each practice, but he didn’t feel happy.
It was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line.
文本分析
1.这双鞋有magic,或者有supernatural functions，主要人物Jack,次要人物Anna 事件：a running race
2.故事情节和情感分析
Jack这次比赛机会来之不易，非常想赢得比赛，所以情绪一波三折surprised, eager to win the race, thrilled by the magical shoes, discouraged by Anna, determined to continue, unhappy 因为赢得比赛靠实力不应该靠歪门邪道，proud of himself because of honesty and hard work
3.矛盾冲突：要不要穿这双鞋参加比赛？
4.主题：用正确的方法获取成功，是值得尊敬的。
5.考虑如何借鉴原文风格和语言？
下水作文：112+115
He was ever faster with each practice, but he didn't feel happy.How badly he wanted to beat Beadle, win the Championship and live up to the school’s expectations! And the trainers just came at the right time. He even imagined himself standing on the podium, holding the trophy high above his head. But Anna’s words kept circling in his mind: “It won’t be YOU who wins, will it ”. “What should I do ” he kept asking himself. After rounds of tug-of-war in his heart, Jack finally decided to give up the magic trainers and carry on training with his worn old ones. Day after day he practised, and day by day his progress was noticeably visible, which made Jack confident about the upcoming race.
It was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line.The whistle blown, all the runners darted out. It was not long before Jack was surpassed by others and was left farther and farther behind. He was a little discouraged and his pace slowed down a bit. Just then, into his ears came the thunderous cheers from the audience, especially Anna, which injected great energy into every cell of his body. With every ounce of his strength, he accelerated, catching some runners up and getting ahead of them. The race ended with Jack coming fifth and his school second. Though failing to achieve the desired results, Jack knew what running was about - the joy of honest running and true sportsmanship.
参考范文：150
He was even faster with each practice, but he didn’t feel happy. No doubt he would win the championship with the trainers on. However, a lingering uncertainty made him upset. Anna’s words echoed in his mind, “It won’t prove anything.” He came to realize that it wouldn’t mean anything to win by using the trainers. So he made up his mind to run the race in his old trainers. With great sincerity, he shared his decision with Anna and apologized to her.
It was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line. The moment the whistle blew, all the runners set off at full speed. After the first two laps, Jack’s legs ached and his breath burned in his lungs. Just then he heard a cheer from Anna, which gave him an extra burst of energy. With dogged determination, he passed the finish line and ended up in tenth place. He felt as proud as an Olympic hero. To his understanding, the essence of sports was not winning but finding a better self.
读后续写：Lucky Charm
Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car which his parents and headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike climbed out the pool, smiling. He had just won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
“Congratulations, son,” his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet, Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream flavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe he'd win again.
He’s taken first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets. He began to think of it as his lucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam. Mike was feeling unbeatable, And he wouldn't admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmer s build.
It didn't take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place -and then third and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost its magic.
On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. "Mike, we all love ice cream, but it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Maybe it's time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.”
Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didn’t perform well. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soon disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.
Paragraph 1: It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn't sure what to expect. __________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Finally came the end of the race. _____________________________
参考范文：
It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn't sure what to expect. He’d been training hard with his dad, and staying away from the rich desserts he enjoyed so much. He felt healthy again, but he didn’t know if he still had any speed in the pool. As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. This race was a long exhausting one with several laps, but Mike found the power in his muscles he needed to surge ahead. Finally, his hand touched the edge of the pool. (89)
Finally came the end of the race. He lifted his swim goggles off his head and looked at the times on the electronic board. His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else’s too. Mike had won his race, and also qualified for the national championships. The audience and his teammates cheered loudly, and his parents were grinning from ear to ear. “Let’s go grab some of your favorite ice cream and celebrate!” said his father. “Thanks, Dad, but I’ll skip ice cream; it’s not such a lucky charm after all!”