2024届高考英语二轮复习Continuation writing 教学设计

英语学科组集体备课教学设计
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大单元话题：Continuation writing
大单元教学目标 Teaching aims: After learning this lesson, students will be able to 1.Understand the plot through analyzing and discussing the structure of the passage 2.Learn that man should live in harmony with animals 3.Evaluate the ending to better understand the six ending types and how to write a meaningful ending. Teaching important and difficult points: 1.Students learn to predict the logic of the story based on reading and the given sentences 2.Students learn to use different types of ending to make the writing more logical and attractive. Teaching methods: Activity -based Teaching Approach Teaching aid: Multimedia
课题 Continuation writing 课型：writing 课时：1 使用人：
教 学 设 计 Teaching procedures: Activity1 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear，I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner，a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified，Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear，hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way，but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)，I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence，sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫)，the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ Activity2 Match ending examples with different ending types： 对话收尾(Dialogue Ending) B. 融情于景(Surrounding Ending ) C. 画面定格(Scene Ending) D. 自然结尾 (Natural Ending) E、首尾呼应式结尾(Echo Ending) F. 主题升华(Theme Sublimation Ending) 1、At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ... Several persons jumped out of the helicopter with specialized clothes which were able to defend against the bear in case of being hunted. The helicopter went across the fence, running to the bear. The bear was put into a cage. With the assistance of them, Elli and I were saved. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ...It dawns on me that animals are to us what water is to fish. To protect the environment is to protect ourselves. It is time for us to take measures to protect our surroundings and give the bear a safe home. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ... Eventually, we were saved. A ripple of joy swept over me. Looking around, I felt I had never seen such white snow and breathed such fresh air. 4、At that very moment, the helicopter ... I lay on the plane with my heart pounding violently, eyes fixed on drifting cloud out of the window. Had it not been for the prompt rescue, I would have been a ghost, drifting in the air like the cloud. What a narrow escape! 5、At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ... I embraced my wife tightly, saying “Honey, don’t worry, and we are safe now.” Elli answered with tears welling up in her eyes, “Yes, but the animals are losing their homes. Returning home, we should post the pictures of the bears on the Moments to appeal to more people to protect our surroundings to give the animals safe homes ” 6、Beginning: One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal：to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada. Ending1：Eventually, we achieved our goal with such an exciting and dangerous experience! Ending2：Though we lost our camp, we got the most valuable things: lots of close photographs of the polar bear! Activity3 （2021泉州质检读后续写）Mama and I spend mornings cleaning up the dirt that blows into our house. Mama says all the dust is due to the drought（干旱）. The dirt is everywhere. It covers our clothes. We have to wash the dishes before each meal. We rarely drive the truck because Papa fears the dust from the road will ruin the motor. So it became our amusement park, where we flashed the lights and sounded the horn（喇叭）, pretending to be real drivers. When my sister, Faye, and I walk to school, we wear scarfs over our mouths so we don't breathe in the dirt. On days when the air is so bad that they close the school, we stay home and help Mama put wet sheets over the windows. But the dirt always finds a way in. Last Sunday, there was no dirt in the air, only bright spring sunshine and a clear blue sky. After church, Papa headed out to the field to check on the cattle while Mama started dinner. Faye and I played in the yard. The temperature suddenly dropped-it felt good. The heat had been dropping since dawn. Then Mama shouted from the house. "Iris, you and Faye get inside, real quickly now!" I looked to the west and saw a huge black cloud of dust, like thick smoke from a railway engine's stack（排气管）. All the birds flew away. "Faye, go with Mama!" I shouted. "I'll warn Papa." Faye ran toward the house. The storm hit so fast I barely saw her climb the steps. Fine sand beat against my face and in an instant the day turned into night. I tripped over our bicycles left carelessly in the yard. I screamed for Papa, hoping my voice would lead him back. The dirt and sand stung my skin like a thousand bees. I needed to get to shelter. Covering my face with one hand, I felt my way towards the truck and opened the door. Dirt flew in with me as I pulled the door closed. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Papa was still out there and I needed to help him find the way to the truck. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ Suddenly, Papa s face appeared at the window. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ Activity4 Micro-writing Rewrite a meaningful ending for the story. Activity5 Discussion Appreciate & Identify ending types 二次备课 备注